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First Contract: A JJ Stoner short story
FIRST CONTRACT: A decade ago, JJ Stoner was a soldier. He killed people for a living and made no bones about it. On a scorching day in the Iraqi desert, when British blood stained the sand, he over-stepped the mark. Men died in compromising circumstances; too many men for an easy explanation. Faced with a dishonourable discharge and accusations of murder, Stoner accepted an offer from a stranger who represented an intelligence agency. Suddenly, Stoner found himself half a world away and about to execute his first private contract…
FIRST CONTRACT, a quick thriller, introduces the central character from the JJ Stoner / Killing Sisters series. As well as a complete, stand-alone story, First Contract includes an excerpt from ‘A Last Act of Charity’ and a sneak preview of the sequel, ‘The Corruption of Chastity.’
‘A Last Act of Charity’, is available in paperback and ebook.
Please note that FIRST CONTRACT is intended for an adult audience and contains explicit scenes of a sexual and/or violent nature.
Feedback for the Killing Sisters / JJ Stoner stories:
‘It launches you straight into the mayhem and, like its protagonist, JJ Stoner, takes no prisoners.’
‘A fast-paced, high-powered thriller… Terse and stiletto streamlined and sharp as the blade of a knife.’
‘Sharp. Staccato. Smart. Lovers of long, luxurious, lyrical prose should read this to see how the other half writes.’
‘Gritty story-telling at its best, with graphic (but well-written) sex and a plot that fires from the hip.’
‘The tightly-written prose has more than a touch of the Elmore Leonard about it – sparse, sharp and often witty as well.’
‘There is hardly time to draw breath in this fast-moving adventure introducing a frighteningly capable executioner.’
‘Serial killings and strange sisters, hard as nails hit men and shady superiors, sleazy blues and sometimes seedy sex.’
‘A punchy and compelling tale of an ice-cold assassin, more nuanced than your average hired killer. The writing is sparse and crisp, the dialogue frequently laced with sardonic British edge.’
‘Clever dialogue and plenty of descriptive narrative providing context for the violence, depth to the characters and shape to the story.’
‘Westworth's fiction does not judge JJ Stoner. It simply, fluidly, outlines him, states what he does, in stark, vivid language that draws you inexorably deeper.’
‘The writing is clever and inventive, paying few dues to existing genres or styles... There is a hint of Derek Raymond; we are looking at a dark and dystopian oil painting.’
‘A brilliant read, along the lines of Jack Reacher. I look forward to the full novel.’
‘The dialogue is snappy, the characters are sharply developed, and the plot moves effortlessly forward.’
‘Intelligently written, with excellent characterisation, sharp wit and punchy back-n-forth dialogue.’
‘The author makes no apologies for Stoner's pragmatic attitude towards the elimination of his targets, and the result is a solid, well thought through action thriller, intelligently handled.’
‘Rich and ambitious, this violent tale plays out with memorable scenes interspersed with writing to savour. A feast of poetic prose wrapped in noir.’
‘Sophisticated story-telling, written in a mature style, and targeted at a mature audience.
FIRST CONTRACT, a quick thriller, introduces the central character from the JJ Stoner / Killing Sisters series. As well as a complete, stand-alone story, First Contract includes an excerpt from ‘A Last Act of Charity’ and a sneak preview of the sequel, ‘The Corruption of Chastity.’
‘A Last Act of Charity’, is available in paperback and ebook.
Please note that FIRST CONTRACT is intended for an adult audience and contains explicit scenes of a sexual and/or violent nature.
Feedback for the Killing Sisters / JJ Stoner stories:
‘It launches you straight into the mayhem and, like its protagonist, JJ Stoner, takes no prisoners.’
‘A fast-paced, high-powered thriller… Terse and stiletto streamlined and sharp as the blade of a knife.’
‘Sharp. Staccato. Smart. Lovers of long, luxurious, lyrical prose should read this to see how the other half writes.’
‘Gritty story-telling at its best, with graphic (but well-written) sex and a plot that fires from the hip.’
‘The tightly-written prose has more than a touch of the Elmore Leonard about it – sparse, sharp and often witty as well.’
‘There is hardly time to draw breath in this fast-moving adventure introducing a frighteningly capable executioner.’
‘Serial killings and strange sisters, hard as nails hit men and shady superiors, sleazy blues and sometimes seedy sex.’
‘A punchy and compelling tale of an ice-cold assassin, more nuanced than your average hired killer. The writing is sparse and crisp, the dialogue frequently laced with sardonic British edge.’
‘Clever dialogue and plenty of descriptive narrative providing context for the violence, depth to the characters and shape to the story.’
‘Westworth's fiction does not judge JJ Stoner. It simply, fluidly, outlines him, states what he does, in stark, vivid language that draws you inexorably deeper.’
‘The writing is clever and inventive, paying few dues to existing genres or styles... There is a hint of Derek Raymond; we are looking at a dark and dystopian oil painting.’
‘A brilliant read, along the lines of Jack Reacher. I look forward to the full novel.’
‘The dialogue is snappy, the characters are sharply developed, and the plot moves effortlessly forward.’
‘Intelligently written, with excellent characterisation, sharp wit and punchy back-n-forth dialogue.’
‘The author makes no apologies for Stoner's pragmatic attitude towards the elimination of his targets, and the result is a solid, well thought through action thriller, intelligently handled.’
‘Rich and ambitious, this violent tale plays out with memorable scenes interspersed with writing to savour. A feast of poetic prose wrapped in noir.’
‘Sophisticated story-telling, written in a mature style, and targeted at a mature audience.
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First published June 22, 2014
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About the author
Frank Westworth
18 books31 followersFrank Westworth shares several characteristics with his literary anti-hero, JJ Stoner: they both play mean blues guitar and ride Harley-Davidson motorcycles. Unlike Stoner, Frank hasn't deliberately killed anyone. Instead, Frank edits a monthly classic motorcycle magazine (see RealClassic.co.uk) and has written extensively for the UK motoring press.
Frank's ‘Killing Sisters’ series starts with 'A Last Act Of Charity', continues in 'The Corruption Of Chastity' and wraps up in 'The Redemption Of Charm'.
However, you can start with any of the books in the series; they're written to be enjoyed if you come in halfway through.
You can also meet key characters from the Killing Sisters series in the JJ Stoner short stories, which begin with First Contract.
Please note; the Stoner stories and Killing Sisters series are intended for an adult audience. They're violent and explicit and contain the occasional intellectual challenge.
If you'd like to know more - feel free to ask!
Frank's ‘Killing Sisters’ series starts with 'A Last Act Of Charity', continues in 'The Corruption Of Chastity' and wraps up in 'The Redemption Of Charm'.
However, you can start with any of the books in the series; they're written to be enjoyed if you come in halfway through.
You can also meet key characters from the Killing Sisters series in the JJ Stoner short stories, which begin with First Contract.
Please note; the Stoner stories and Killing Sisters series are intended for an adult audience. They're violent and explicit and contain the occasional intellectual challenge.
If you'd like to know more - feel free to ask!
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February 7, 2017
I have to admit I am not a big fan of short stories but this book was an excellent introduction to the character JJ Stoner and I would certainly be interested in reading a full length novel featuring him. JJ Stoner used to kill people for a living, he was a soldier. One day in the Iraqi desert he over-stepped the mark. Men died in compromising circumstances; too many men for an easy explanation. Faced with a dishonourable discharge and accusations of murder, Stoner accepted an offer from a stranger who represented an intelligence agency. Suddenly, Stoner found himself half a world away and about to execute his first private contract. This short story set the scene for future books but too short to fully satisfy this reader.
I would like to thank the author for supplying a copy of this novel in exchange for an honest review.
I would like to thank the author for supplying a copy of this novel in exchange for an honest review.
September 11, 2014
Jean-Jacques Stoner is fresh off the battlefields in Iraq where as a soldier he took out the enemy without batting an eyelid and anyone else was just collateral damage. A man who is comfortable with killing, perhaps too comfortable.
Stoner ends up back in the UK taking on a new civilian role as a hit man of sorts, awaiting orders on who is target is and efficiently making sure the target it taken out, forever. His first job is to go to Dublin, Ireland. Stoner himself hails from Northern Ireland, there is many a mention of his strong NI accent, it's an unmistakeable accent as far as accents around the world go. I lived in Ireland for years and many times heard a strong Belfast/NI accent which would capture my attention and make me go weak at the knees, I digress! Back to the review!
Sing along! When Irish eyes are smiling......
I had grown to like Stoner a lot at this point. He's a well written character, elements of light and shade, I suspect a softness somewhere underneath the hardened exterior, but maybe I am wrong. At this point in the book he is riding a Harley Davidson motorbike and looking more like a Biker Club Member than an ex-soldier, which is no doubt the point.
It's a short story but the plot was well paced with lots going on to hold the readers interest, I am certainly intrigued enough to go on to the second short story that follows up from this one to see what Stoner is getting up to next.
I have only one minor criticism of the writing in this short story and that is that at times there is too much detail used on minor events, over descriptive sentences. I believe sometimes less is more or the reader can lose focus slightly. But apart from that I really enjoyed this story.
It's not my usual genre of book but when approached to read and review it I did so with an open mind and I liked it. I like Stoner as a character and found it an interesting read. I am moving straight on to the next book in this series as I want to see what's next, so that's a good thing right? 4 stars from me for this one.
I received a copy of this book thanks to the author and his agent in exchange for a fair and honest review, my thanks for the opportunity.
Stoner ends up back in the UK taking on a new civilian role as a hit man of sorts, awaiting orders on who is target is and efficiently making sure the target it taken out, forever. His first job is to go to Dublin, Ireland. Stoner himself hails from Northern Ireland, there is many a mention of his strong NI accent, it's an unmistakeable accent as far as accents around the world go. I lived in Ireland for years and many times heard a strong Belfast/NI accent which would capture my attention and make me go weak at the knees, I digress! Back to the review!
Sing along! When Irish eyes are smiling......
I had grown to like Stoner a lot at this point. He's a well written character, elements of light and shade, I suspect a softness somewhere underneath the hardened exterior, but maybe I am wrong. At this point in the book he is riding a Harley Davidson motorbike and looking more like a Biker Club Member than an ex-soldier, which is no doubt the point.
It's a short story but the plot was well paced with lots going on to hold the readers interest, I am certainly intrigued enough to go on to the second short story that follows up from this one to see what Stoner is getting up to next.
I have only one minor criticism of the writing in this short story and that is that at times there is too much detail used on minor events, over descriptive sentences. I believe sometimes less is more or the reader can lose focus slightly. But apart from that I really enjoyed this story.
It's not my usual genre of book but when approached to read and review it I did so with an open mind and I liked it. I like Stoner as a character and found it an interesting read. I am moving straight on to the next book in this series as I want to see what's next, so that's a good thing right? 4 stars from me for this one.
I received a copy of this book thanks to the author and his agent in exchange for a fair and honest review, my thanks for the opportunity.
April 9, 2015
A short literary type of story about a highly trained soldier, JJ Stoner who is requested to be an independent civilian assassin. Where he comes from and where he was located was lost to me as I read the account of the Iraqis bloodbath and then on to his conversation with someone called ‘Hard Man’. The writing style is clearly that of someone with a sophisticated British dialect which can be confusing to me in a story. I am a simple reader and struggle with elaborate or convoluted sentences.
“Killing strangers isn't a problem so long as your queen and country tell you to do it, or even grinning American President as you put it”.
When I read this sentence, I was then able to follow or get the gist of the conversation between Stoner and the Hard Man and general location(s) became clearer. I would have liked to see more of a description in the immediate surroundings. An office of, the desert of, a city of; without having to assume or guess. Less conversation pieces, more background on characters and descriptive locations helps me visualize the story in detail.
As Stoner is assigned to his ‘first contract’, I enjoyed the the process with which he was to become just your normal average ‘Joe’ and under disguise, a Harley motorcycle riding killer. He blends into a bar in Ireland (no name, no city) and the chaos begins.
This is a good story. I would have enjoyed it more if it wasn't lacking in the few things I mentioned above. I like how the writer created JJ Stoner and other supporting characters in the dialogue. Definitely different When I think of a contracted assassin, I think clandestine, stealthy and calculating. JJ Stoner is not any of these. His game plan was on-the-go, thinking on his feet and his actions were in front of an audience. Some of his actions believable, but not all. For a trained soldier his thinking was impulsive, amateurish, childlike and was very dissimilar to other assassin type books I've read but it was quite entertaining!
A special thanks to Frank Westworth and his wife Rowena, for a free copy of this book for an honest review.
“Killing strangers isn't a problem so long as your queen and country tell you to do it, or even grinning American President as you put it”.
When I read this sentence, I was then able to follow or get the gist of the conversation between Stoner and the Hard Man and general location(s) became clearer. I would have liked to see more of a description in the immediate surroundings. An office of, the desert of, a city of; without having to assume or guess. Less conversation pieces, more background on characters and descriptive locations helps me visualize the story in detail.
As Stoner is assigned to his ‘first contract’, I enjoyed the the process with which he was to become just your normal average ‘Joe’ and under disguise, a Harley motorcycle riding killer. He blends into a bar in Ireland (no name, no city) and the chaos begins.
This is a good story. I would have enjoyed it more if it wasn't lacking in the few things I mentioned above. I like how the writer created JJ Stoner and other supporting characters in the dialogue. Definitely different When I think of a contracted assassin, I think clandestine, stealthy and calculating. JJ Stoner is not any of these. His game plan was on-the-go, thinking on his feet and his actions were in front of an audience. Some of his actions believable, but not all. For a trained soldier his thinking was impulsive, amateurish, childlike and was very dissimilar to other assassin type books I've read but it was quite entertaining!
A special thanks to Frank Westworth and his wife Rowena, for a free copy of this book for an honest review.
October 27, 2015
I contacted the author because I was interested in reading A Last Act of Charity and The Corruption of Chastity.. otherwise known as the Killing Sisters series. The author very kindly furnished me with a digital copy of this short story suggesting that this would be the place to start. And I am so glad I started at the beginning .....
J.J. Stoner is a soldier, a man who had to kill during his service. What sets him apart is that killing does not seem to bother him. Facing a dishonorable discharge and possibly murder charges, he winds up being interviewed by a man who represents an unnamed intelligence agency.
Finding himself in Ireland and waiting for his first target, he is confronted by a woman who turns out not to be who he was expecting and an innocent man is killed.
For a very short story, it is packed full of movement and energy. At this first glance of Stoner, he doesn't seem like a particularly likable man. He comes across as callous, non-caring. The violence is in-your-face graphic.
There are several other short stories featuring J J Stoner, as well as the Killing Sisters series. I am going to assume they are as well-written as this one, and I may take a gander at the next one or two of this particular series, just to make sure.
March 29, 2019
Frank Westworth’s ‘First Contract’ is the reader’s introduction to his sardonic government assassin, J. T. Stoner. This is the first of author Westworth’s books I have read, and it certainly won’t be the last. Although the book is a short story, Westworth gives it the full treatment by delivering in-depth characters you can believe in, together with a solid plot, all in the framework of a fast-paced thriller read you will not want to end.
The tale moves forward with the unyielding authority of the Harley the protagonist rides. It’s a statement of intention, in many ways, both of the way killer Stoner operates, and the punchy style the author uses to keep readers glued to the page. You might think the storyline has little to offer in the way of originality – the black ops, ex-soldier becoming a hitman for a shady branch of government – but you would be wrong. Westworth throws unexpected twists at the readers, leading them down fresh paths, grounded in an exciting and entertaining narrative. He develops the characters, especially the protagonist, throughout the story, though cleverly leaves hints that there is far more we, the readers, should know. As this is the first of, to date, seven short tales, and several full length novels featuring Stoner, I’m sure Westworth has plenty more surprises lined up for us to discover.
This is modern noir writing at its best, and should be included in the reading of anyone who loves a well-written thriller. An author to watch and follow. Highly recommended.
The tale moves forward with the unyielding authority of the Harley the protagonist rides. It’s a statement of intention, in many ways, both of the way killer Stoner operates, and the punchy style the author uses to keep readers glued to the page. You might think the storyline has little to offer in the way of originality – the black ops, ex-soldier becoming a hitman for a shady branch of government – but you would be wrong. Westworth throws unexpected twists at the readers, leading them down fresh paths, grounded in an exciting and entertaining narrative. He develops the characters, especially the protagonist, throughout the story, though cleverly leaves hints that there is far more we, the readers, should know. As this is the first of, to date, seven short tales, and several full length novels featuring Stoner, I’m sure Westworth has plenty more surprises lined up for us to discover.
This is modern noir writing at its best, and should be included in the reading of anyone who loves a well-written thriller. An author to watch and follow. Highly recommended.
July 8, 2017
Meet JJ Stoner. He’s a killer. He’s in the Army. That’s what they do. But Stoner goes beyond… He’s removed from his role and offered another, if he’ll take it. It’s that of a contract killer. Initially things aren’t as straight forward as he might have hoped.
This is a short story but it’s not short on ideas or action. Stoner is a callous killer yet a curiously attractive character. The story is beautifully told and packed with characters and incident. This is the start of a new career for JJ and I enjoyed reading it.
This is a short story but it’s not short on ideas or action. Stoner is a callous killer yet a curiously attractive character. The story is beautifully told and packed with characters and incident. This is the start of a new career for JJ and I enjoyed reading it.
July 17, 2014
First off, I have to say that this is not my genre of choice. I don't particularly care for war stories, espionage, or even mystery. However, I do like good writing, and First Contract has plenty of that. The dialogue is snappy, the characters are sharply developed, and the plot moves effortlessly forward. Once I started reading, the pages turned quickly and willingly.
I know nothing about military operations, but the details certainly felt authentic. Westworth didn't cram every paragraph with soldierly lingo like some writers in this genre do. There was just enough to let you know that Westworth has done his research but not so much that it disrupted the flow of the narrative.
The plot was fun but also gritty. One could easily see this being adapted into a screenplay. I wasn't completely sure about JJ Stoner's motivations, but this appears to be just a taste of a much longer series, and I expect Westworth will tell the reader everything in due time.
Altogether a surprisingly enjoyable read.
I know nothing about military operations, but the details certainly felt authentic. Westworth didn't cram every paragraph with soldierly lingo like some writers in this genre do. There was just enough to let you know that Westworth has done his research but not so much that it disrupted the flow of the narrative.
The plot was fun but also gritty. One could easily see this being adapted into a screenplay. I wasn't completely sure about JJ Stoner's motivations, but this appears to be just a taste of a much longer series, and I expect Westworth will tell the reader everything in due time.
Altogether a surprisingly enjoyable read.
May 27, 2015
This is an amazing, well researched trip into the world of John Stoner, former military man turned mercenary by the powers that be in the chain of command. It takes us from the depths of Hell during the Iraqi conflict to back streets in a city as far removed from traditional war as Dublin. Here the wars are fought more secretly with death being dealt by mercenaries who care only that they walk away unscathed to get paid. Enter John Stoner, hired killer employed by an agent higher up the chain of command known only as The Hard Man - a spook.
There is an awful lot of action packed into this short story, all of it relevant, well researched and extremely riveting to the reader. I'm now looking forward to delving further into the world of John Stoner!
I received an ecopy of the short story First Contract from the author in exchange for an honest review
There is an awful lot of action packed into this short story, all of it relevant, well researched and extremely riveting to the reader. I'm now looking forward to delving further into the world of John Stoner!
I received an ecopy of the short story First Contract from the author in exchange for an honest review
September 22, 2015
"I honestly feel like I have read a six hundred page novel and not just a short story. Frank Westworth has an undeniable talent for writing thrillers and packing a story full of all the punches it needs. You get dragged in from the first paragraph. It has all the qualities you need in a thriller. It has intrigue. It has beautiful women. It has guns. It has murder. It has mystery. It has a hero (make your own mind up as to whether he is a hero or not) and it has the power to make you want to come back for more."
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First Contract and Four Cornered
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First Contract and Four Cornered
September 14, 2016
Jean-Jacques Stoner is a soon to be ex soldier who isn't afraid of a bit of dirty work. This short story perfectly introduces us to him and his new job...a man for hire.. no job too messy.
This was an interesting one which i enjoyed, well written and leaves you wanting to know more.
I really like The Hard Man also, who added intrigue to the story.
A great short story to get you interested in the author's work
This was an interesting one which i enjoyed, well written and leaves you wanting to know more.
I really like The Hard Man also, who added intrigue to the story.
A great short story to get you interested in the author's work
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August 12, 2015I recieved a copy of this book from the author in exchange for a fair and honest review.
This book introduced the character JJ Stonor a highly trained military operative who has been approached by the Hard Man to undertake an assignment. The story is fast paced and very quirky.
The dialogue between the characters was one of my favourite parts of the book was the conversations between Stonor and Bernadette was the dark humour was superb.
Stonor as a character in this short introduction is presented as a professional and we don't get to know too much about him other than former military and a love of motorcycles. I am sure this will be expanded in the full length novels which there is an excellent chance I will now read.
All in all a very enjoyable short story
This book introduced the character JJ Stonor a highly trained military operative who has been approached by the Hard Man to undertake an assignment. The story is fast paced and very quirky.
The dialogue between the characters was one of my favourite parts of the book was the conversations between Stonor and Bernadette was the dark humour was superb.
Stonor as a character in this short introduction is presented as a professional and we don't get to know too much about him other than former military and a love of motorcycles. I am sure this will be expanded in the full length novels which there is an excellent chance I will now read.
All in all a very enjoyable short story
July 27, 2014
A standalone short story that introduces the JJ Stoner, the anti-hero of a series of novels yet to come. It's intelligently written, with excellent characterisation, sharp wit and punchy back-n-forth dialogue. The author makes no apologies for Stoner's pragmatic attitude towards the elimination of his targets, and the result is an solid well thought through action thriller, intelligently handled. A good taster for what is to come. Looking forward to the full-length novels.
September 23, 2014
A very promising debut short story written in sophisticated wry style with plenty of humour amid the body count. JJ Stoner is an anti-hero that fans of tv series Banshee, Breaking Bad, Ray Donovan, Tony Soprano, Boardwalk Empire, and Justified will appreciate. Am very much looking forward to the novel released on Sept 25th 2014 - A Last Act of Charity and the further adventures of Stoner and the Killing Sisters.
February 8, 2015
Loved it - read it in one sitting. I find it hard to believe that that much information can go into so few pages. I am looking forward to more short stories in the JJ Stoner/Killing Sisters series. In the meantime, I highly recommend this short story.
September 23, 2018
This is a tough and gritty introuction to the Stoner character, the kind that leaves you wanting more. If you like your stories fast and brimming with excitement and thrills, then this is definitely a series you want to invest in.
December 9, 2019
I picked up the first Killing Sisters book and noticed this prequel short story alongside it. I have just finished it, hoping to add some context to the full-length novel I will shortly begin.
And, thankfully, it was good. Very good!
Without giving any spoilers, what I really liked about this book was the writing style. Two things really stood out to me, as I find them important in my own writing, and they are:
1. Short sentences when long ones are not necessary.
2. Realistic, well-written dialogue.
This book does both very well, and I assume that will be true for all of the author's work. An interesting story is one thing, but style is something else. A good style can raise everyone's work. I will definitely add more of Westworth's books to my future reading list.
And, thankfully, it was good. Very good!
Without giving any spoilers, what I really liked about this book was the writing style. Two things really stood out to me, as I find them important in my own writing, and they are:
1. Short sentences when long ones are not necessary.
2. Realistic, well-written dialogue.
This book does both very well, and I assume that will be true for all of the author's work. An interesting story is one thing, but style is something else. A good style can raise everyone's work. I will definitely add more of Westworth's books to my future reading list.
July 5, 2016
A good short story to whet the appetite for a series
A decade ago, JJ Stoner was a soldier. On a scorching day in the Iraqi desert, he over-stepped the mark and men died in compromising circumstances, too many men for an easy explanation. Faced with a dishonourable discharge and accusations of murder, Stoner accepted an offer from a stranger who represented a clandestine intelligence agency. Suddenly, Stoner found himself half a world away and about to execute his first private contract…
This is a short story which introduces the central character from the JJ Stoner/Killing Sisters series. I have been given the second full length book in the series, "The Corruption Of Chastity" to read and I am looking forward to doing so. Killing people is something that does not bother Stoner and yet I grew to like him as a character and am interested to read what he gets up to next. The character development of Stoner as a hired killer employed by an agent higher up the chain of command known only as The Hard Man is very well done by the author.
This book has all the qualities you need in a thriller - intrigue, beautiful women, weapons, murder, mystery and a leading character who the reader needs to make their mind up about as to whether he is a hero or villain. The dialogue is snappy, the characters are sharply developed, and the plot moves effortlessly forward at a good pace but not too quick. I do like my thrillers laced with dark humour and this story has just the right amount of that facet. The author cleverly leaves you wanting to learn more about Stoner with this 44-page novelette.
The amount of action packed into so few pages is quite amazing really, I would hope for not quite such full on action in the longer books in the series! The author makes no apologies for Stoner's somewhat flippant attitude towards the elimination of his targets, and the result is a solid and well thought through action thriller, which I thoroughly enjoyed.
Digger95
Breakaway Reviewers received a copy of the book to review.
A decade ago, JJ Stoner was a soldier. On a scorching day in the Iraqi desert, he over-stepped the mark and men died in compromising circumstances, too many men for an easy explanation. Faced with a dishonourable discharge and accusations of murder, Stoner accepted an offer from a stranger who represented a clandestine intelligence agency. Suddenly, Stoner found himself half a world away and about to execute his first private contract…
This is a short story which introduces the central character from the JJ Stoner/Killing Sisters series. I have been given the second full length book in the series, "The Corruption Of Chastity" to read and I am looking forward to doing so. Killing people is something that does not bother Stoner and yet I grew to like him as a character and am interested to read what he gets up to next. The character development of Stoner as a hired killer employed by an agent higher up the chain of command known only as The Hard Man is very well done by the author.
This book has all the qualities you need in a thriller - intrigue, beautiful women, weapons, murder, mystery and a leading character who the reader needs to make their mind up about as to whether he is a hero or villain. The dialogue is snappy, the characters are sharply developed, and the plot moves effortlessly forward at a good pace but not too quick. I do like my thrillers laced with dark humour and this story has just the right amount of that facet. The author cleverly leaves you wanting to learn more about Stoner with this 44-page novelette.
The amount of action packed into so few pages is quite amazing really, I would hope for not quite such full on action in the longer books in the series! The author makes no apologies for Stoner's somewhat flippant attitude towards the elimination of his targets, and the result is a solid and well thought through action thriller, which I thoroughly enjoyed.
Digger95
Breakaway Reviewers received a copy of the book to review.
September 30, 2018
This is so not my cup of tea!
Almost from the very beginning I was struggling with the author's style and more and more with the characters. The style appeared confusing to me and if it were not for a challenge I'm not sure I'd read more than a few pages.
Almost from the very beginning I was struggling with the author's style and more and more with the characters. The style appeared confusing to me and if it were not for a challenge I'm not sure I'd read more than a few pages.
August 15, 2017
First Contract is a short story centering on the main character in the book A Last Act of Charity. The short story is set before the events of the book and show how J.J. Stoner got into the hitman business.
As a short story, it wasn't bad. It was fairly easy to get into and was filled with action. I understood why J.J. didn't want to know what the circumstances were for the hit, but I feel as a reader, it would have been interesting to know. Honestly, I didn't feel much for J.J. as a character or person.
He seemed too complacent and you don't really get to see him at his worse or his best. Though a mistake is made in the story, he pulls through it and suceeds in his mission. This is a story about his first hit, but he didn't seem to have any of the mental or emotional moments you would think a person would have. Though you do find a bit of his history, I felt he lacked personality.
That said, this is a prequel short story. I would believe the full length novel has J.J.'s personality. Really, the short story shows how he became a hitman, not how he is as a person. I am interested enough to see his personality in future works. He does seem like a character that it would take time to understand.
As a short story, it wasn't bad. It was fairly easy to get into and was filled with action. I understood why J.J. didn't want to know what the circumstances were for the hit, but I feel as a reader, it would have been interesting to know. Honestly, I didn't feel much for J.J. as a character or person.
He seemed too complacent and you don't really get to see him at his worse or his best. Though a mistake is made in the story, he pulls through it and suceeds in his mission. This is a story about his first hit, but he didn't seem to have any of the mental or emotional moments you would think a person would have. Though you do find a bit of his history, I felt he lacked personality.
That said, this is a prequel short story. I would believe the full length novel has J.J.'s personality. Really, the short story shows how he became a hitman, not how he is as a person. I am interested enough to see his personality in future works. He does seem like a character that it would take time to understand.
October 27, 2015
First Contract (JJ Stoner short story #1) was given to me by the author in exchange for an honest review.
This is a short story, yet the author manages to bring so much into the few pages here that it still somehow feels like a much longer novel. This is a fast paced story where things keep happening and I didn’t find myself getting bored a single moment.
The main character is very interesting and I think that the author has manages to use every page of this short story to develop his character very well.
There are just enough twists and turns in the plot to keep it interesting. The characters faces quite a few obstacles on the way and things doesn’t always turnout the way they planned, which also makes this even more interesting.
The author writes very well and this thriller is packed with action and it hooks you from the first few pages, just the way I like it.
I can recommend any fan of action filled thrillers to read this short story.
This is a short story, yet the author manages to bring so much into the few pages here that it still somehow feels like a much longer novel. This is a fast paced story where things keep happening and I didn’t find myself getting bored a single moment.
The main character is very interesting and I think that the author has manages to use every page of this short story to develop his character very well.
There are just enough twists and turns in the plot to keep it interesting. The characters faces quite a few obstacles on the way and things doesn’t always turnout the way they planned, which also makes this even more interesting.
The author writes very well and this thriller is packed with action and it hooks you from the first few pages, just the way I like it.
I can recommend any fan of action filled thrillers to read this short story.
May 19, 2015
Breathless!
A fast paced, brutal but enjoyable short story. More action packed into its forty odd pages than most novels. The JJ Stoner character has mileage; I have no doubt we shall see more of this Harley-riding, guitar-playing ex soldier with a penchant for violent altercations with the bad guys. Just let me get my breath back before the next story please!
A fast paced, brutal but enjoyable short story. More action packed into its forty odd pages than most novels. The JJ Stoner character has mileage; I have no doubt we shall see more of this Harley-riding, guitar-playing ex soldier with a penchant for violent altercations with the bad guys. Just let me get my breath back before the next story please!
February 12, 2019
I notice that I’m becoming a fan of Frank Westworth’s series about hitman JJ Stoner without really being able to put my finger on the exact cause of my affection. Maybe that is precisely the cause. Frank Westworth has a style that seems a bit macho and sarcastic at first glance, but that with attentive reading reveals a treasure of hidden meanings and suggestive emotional baggage underneath. The plots, the characters, and the research for JJ Stoner stories and novels are clearly professional first class material, but there are more stories and novels like that on the market.
The mystery that gives Westworth’s work that extra cachet for me lies in sentences as I’ve read in "First Contract": “Some things do bother you then? You’re not the unfeeling man with steel emotions you say you are?”
“Many things bother me, Bernadette. Killing assholes with no value to me isn’t one of them. Not yet. Maybe it comes with maturity, like a fat gut and arthritis. Something to look forward to.”
I could give a lot more examples, not only in this novella but in all the JJ Stoner books I’ve read: half-sarcastic half-sad gems, making JJ Stoner an unforgettable character, someone who’s hiding behind the mask of the cool, professional hit-man. Who is that someone? Maybe we’ll learn more with the growing number of JJ Stoner books…
The mystery that gives Westworth’s work that extra cachet for me lies in sentences as I’ve read in "First Contract": “Some things do bother you then? You’re not the unfeeling man with steel emotions you say you are?”
“Many things bother me, Bernadette. Killing assholes with no value to me isn’t one of them. Not yet. Maybe it comes with maturity, like a fat gut and arthritis. Something to look forward to.”
I could give a lot more examples, not only in this novella but in all the JJ Stoner books I’ve read: half-sarcastic half-sad gems, making JJ Stoner an unforgettable character, someone who’s hiding behind the mask of the cool, professional hit-man. Who is that someone? Maybe we’ll learn more with the growing number of JJ Stoner books…
March 1, 2016
Sergeant J.J. Stoner has just brutally executed five Iraquis in retaliation for an attack on one of his men. His punishment? He becomes a civilian black ops assassin under the direction of an urbane but totally ruthless handler called, simply, The Hard Man.
In this excellent short story by standout author Frank Wentworth, human life is cheap and the principal player waxes philosophically about the killing for which he's just been recruited:
‘I don’t care.’ Stoner appeared to be looking at himself. He inspected his fingernails with some care. ‘Should it help? Should it matter more to me whether I’m drilling holes through a patriotic Arab with sunburn and an impossible language in a hot country, or a paleskin patriotic Paddy who prefers eating sheep to goats and worships his own gods in his own ways in Latin?’
The action matches the dialogue in this brief piece of fiction -- wildly witty and effortlessly accomplished. Stoner is a virtuoso with both his hands and with silenced firearms. When he meets the enigmatic character named Blesses, his initial reaction is quiet attraction. In a later liaison, less so.
This is fine writing wrapped cunningly around a totally credible character. J.J. Stoner is a man you'll hope to meet again. Just not in a dark alley.
Five stars to First Contract. The author is a professional with poise and we look forward to reading his next piece.
In this excellent short story by standout author Frank Wentworth, human life is cheap and the principal player waxes philosophically about the killing for which he's just been recruited:
‘I don’t care.’ Stoner appeared to be looking at himself. He inspected his fingernails with some care. ‘Should it help? Should it matter more to me whether I’m drilling holes through a patriotic Arab with sunburn and an impossible language in a hot country, or a paleskin patriotic Paddy who prefers eating sheep to goats and worships his own gods in his own ways in Latin?’
The action matches the dialogue in this brief piece of fiction -- wildly witty and effortlessly accomplished. Stoner is a virtuoso with both his hands and with silenced firearms. When he meets the enigmatic character named Blesses, his initial reaction is quiet attraction. In a later liaison, less so.
This is fine writing wrapped cunningly around a totally credible character. J.J. Stoner is a man you'll hope to meet again. Just not in a dark alley.
Five stars to First Contract. The author is a professional with poise and we look forward to reading his next piece.
January 31, 2017
Having read Westworth's latest Stoner story, I decided to delve into the origins of his interesting protagonist, and I was certainly not disappointed. This title introduces the reader to JJ Stoner, the remorseless killer for hire. The best aspect of the writing is the dialogue, sharp and fast-paced, delivered like machine gun fire. Thoroughly enjoyable.
August 7, 2016
Fast paced short story about a soldier doing his job, killing. Stoner is a strong-minded and efficient but lacks the depth of a lead character. It was a good introduction to a new series.
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