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The Princess Problem: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
He doesn’t believe in fairy tales. She’s living one she can’t escape.
Elizabeth Bennet has always known her father was a prince, she simply never expected it to matter. Living quietly in Hertfordshire with her mother’s family, her royal blood seems irrelevant. But just after her eighteenth birthday, an envoy from the Thurnian court arrives with an her grandfather the king wishes to welcome her into the royal family.
Miles away in Derbyshire, Fitzwilliam Darcy faces pressure of his own. His uncle the earl wants him to reclaim a title stripped from his family hundreds of years ago. Having both family and friends who are members of the aristocracy, Darcy knows firsthand that such a life holds no appeal for a man who values his independence.
When a winter storm strands them together at a remote inn, the last thing Darcy expects is to encounter a young woman claiming to be a Thurnian princess. Because he knows Thurnia has no princesses, he is certain she’s lying. Yet as their uneasy journey continues and the behaviour of her chaperone grows increasingly odd, Darcy begins to suspect that the deception hides more than a fanciful tale, and that uncovering the truth may actually be dangerous.
What begins as a chance encounter in a snowbound inn becomes a journey where treachery reveals a nobility no title could ever bestow.
The Princess Problem is the fourth standalone novel in the Darcy & Elizabeth Rom Com Collection.
*This is a full-length novel of approximately 90,000 words
Elizabeth Bennet has always known her father was a prince, she simply never expected it to matter. Living quietly in Hertfordshire with her mother’s family, her royal blood seems irrelevant. But just after her eighteenth birthday, an envoy from the Thurnian court arrives with an her grandfather the king wishes to welcome her into the royal family.
Miles away in Derbyshire, Fitzwilliam Darcy faces pressure of his own. His uncle the earl wants him to reclaim a title stripped from his family hundreds of years ago. Having both family and friends who are members of the aristocracy, Darcy knows firsthand that such a life holds no appeal for a man who values his independence.
When a winter storm strands them together at a remote inn, the last thing Darcy expects is to encounter a young woman claiming to be a Thurnian princess. Because he knows Thurnia has no princesses, he is certain she’s lying. Yet as their uneasy journey continues and the behaviour of her chaperone grows increasingly odd, Darcy begins to suspect that the deception hides more than a fanciful tale, and that uncovering the truth may actually be dangerous.
What begins as a chance encounter in a snowbound inn becomes a journey where treachery reveals a nobility no title could ever bestow.
The Princess Problem is the fourth standalone novel in the Darcy & Elizabeth Rom Com Collection.
*This is a full-length novel of approximately 90,000 words
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Published February 12, 2026
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February 15, 2026
A different kind of Pride and Prejudice where Elizabeth displays grace and Darcy doesn’t quite believe. Together they overcome and learn to respect and depend on each other. The story was face paced and I could not put it down.
January 9, 2026
This story employs the Elizabeth is not a Bennett trope and is thoroughly delightful. Elizabeth’s character is well drawn and one that Austen readers will recognize. She is witty, stubborn, playful, and brave. Austen readers will recognize Mr. Darcy’s character as well. He remains haughty and arrogant throughout much of the book. Elizabeth is a princess who has knowingly been brought up by the Bennetts. Circumstances and a nasty winter storm throw Elizabeth and Darcy together and he does not believe she is truly a princess. In spite of his doubts, he is still inexplicably drawn to Elizabeth. She finds herself warming to him as well, though she resists the feeling because of his assumptions and arrogance.
A number of plot twists and turns will keep readers riveted wondering what will happen next. Several of the usual characters are missing from this story - the Bingleys, Lady Catherine (she is mentioned briefly), Wickham. However their absence will not be missed. Other characters are introduced and villainy is certainly present.
The book is well-edited and will capture P&P fans’ interest and keep them turning the pages.
I was given an ARC in exchange for a review. The book is expected to be published in February.
A number of plot twists and turns will keep readers riveted wondering what will happen next. Several of the usual characters are missing from this story - the Bingleys, Lady Catherine (she is mentioned briefly), Wickham. However their absence will not be missed. Other characters are introduced and villainy is certainly present.
The book is well-edited and will capture P&P fans’ interest and keep them turning the pages.
I was given an ARC in exchange for a review. The book is expected to be published in February.
March 6, 2026
Wonderful
Mr Bennett has a sister who married a prince of Thurnia, an island nation off the coast of Scotland. Because she's from England their marriage is not immediately sanctioned by the king and queen of Thurnia. A baby girl, Elizabeth, is born to them, but both parents die when she's still an infant. The Bennetts take her in and raise her as their own in a loving family, but she knows that she's a Thurnian princess, and that she has a fortune left to her by her parents. When Elizabeth turns eighteen the King of Thurnia, her grandfather, wants to meet her, but her journey to Thurnia is fraught with danger. Elizabeth and Darcy meet at an inn on her journey.
I enjoyed the cute, fairy tale like premise of the book, and the original way in which Darcy becomes involved. We have a smart and courageous Elizabeth, and a strong and protective Darcy. The book is very well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an engaging story with villains (although none of the usual ones), intrigue, clever banter, and lovely romance.
Mr Bennett has a sister who married a prince of Thurnia, an island nation off the coast of Scotland. Because she's from England their marriage is not immediately sanctioned by the king and queen of Thurnia. A baby girl, Elizabeth, is born to them, but both parents die when she's still an infant. The Bennetts take her in and raise her as their own in a loving family, but she knows that she's a Thurnian princess, and that she has a fortune left to her by her parents. When Elizabeth turns eighteen the King of Thurnia, her grandfather, wants to meet her, but her journey to Thurnia is fraught with danger. Elizabeth and Darcy meet at an inn on her journey.
I enjoyed the cute, fairy tale like premise of the book, and the original way in which Darcy becomes involved. We have a smart and courageous Elizabeth, and a strong and protective Darcy. The book is very well written and well edited. I recommend it highly for an engaging story with villains (although none of the usual ones), intrigue, clever banter, and lovely romance.
February 21, 2026
4.75 stars rounded up. This is an extreme revision of Pride and Prejudice that goes off on a kind of tangent from the get-go. Elizabeth's parents in this variation were Mr. Bennet's sister and a foreign prince, whose family didn't altogether approve. Since her parents' deaths, she's been raised by the Bennets at Longbourn, and is a favorite of her uncle's.
Now that she is eighteen and considered of age in the kingdom of Thurnia, where her father was from, that royal family has decided it's time for her to come there and take her place among the royals, as Princess Elizabeth. An envoy is sent, and wants her to leave at once. It's winter, and Mr. Bennet is disappointed that they didn't at least wait for spring and better weather for traveling. But off she goes, and then the weather turns bad.
Meanwhile Mr. Darcy is being pressured by his uncle the earl to take up a barony, a title once stripped from his family but now being offered if he will accept it. He doesn't want a title. He is traveling to London to spend time with his sister when a snowstorm causes travel problems, including a carriage accident, and he's forced to put up at an inn, where another guest is reported to be a princess of Thurnia. He knows Thurnia has no princesses, so he assumes she's a fraud.
Great dialog in certain places, especially a discussion between Elizabeth and Darcy of ladies' accomplishments, which is refreshingly not just a rehash of the Caroline Bingley snobbishness in the original story. This is also quite an adventure, with highwaymen and kidnappers and a mystery to resolve.
There were a couple of glitches, and I felt it went a little long in places, but overall I like this story a lot.
Now that she is eighteen and considered of age in the kingdom of Thurnia, where her father was from, that royal family has decided it's time for her to come there and take her place among the royals, as Princess Elizabeth. An envoy is sent, and wants her to leave at once. It's winter, and Mr. Bennet is disappointed that they didn't at least wait for spring and better weather for traveling. But off she goes, and then the weather turns bad.
Meanwhile Mr. Darcy is being pressured by his uncle the earl to take up a barony, a title once stripped from his family but now being offered if he will accept it. He doesn't want a title. He is traveling to London to spend time with his sister when a snowstorm causes travel problems, including a carriage accident, and he's forced to put up at an inn, where another guest is reported to be a princess of Thurnia. He knows Thurnia has no princesses, so he assumes she's a fraud.
Great dialog in certain places, especially a discussion between Elizabeth and Darcy of ladies' accomplishments, which is refreshingly not just a rehash of the Caroline Bingley snobbishness in the original story. This is also quite an adventure, with highwaymen and kidnappers and a mystery to resolve.
There were a couple of glitches, and I felt it went a little long in places, but overall I like this story a lot.
February 24, 2026
I have loved this author’s RomCom series until this book. The beginning was very slow and the ending was not at all Jane Austen. The middle I did actually find very enjoyable and couldn’t put it down for a couple chapters (hence 3 stars rather than 2), but the ending was over the top, not at all true to the timeless character and quiet romance of Darcy and Eliza.
The scene where Darcy asks Mr. Bennett for Elizabeth’s hand was almost laughable, so not at all what Jane Austen would have imagined (and before I am dragged, I know this is a reimagining ;). The end is painted with Barbie pink and glitter, rounded with a sickly overdone period ship scene approaching Thurnia and tied in the bow of a nice title (begrudgingly bestowed, yet somehow sensible) upon our dear Mr. Darcy.
So disappointing. I LOVED the first three in this series, I really hope Melanie Rachel returns to the original charm and leaves off the grandiose adaptations.
The scene where Darcy asks Mr. Bennett for Elizabeth’s hand was almost laughable, so not at all what Jane Austen would have imagined (and before I am dragged, I know this is a reimagining ;). The end is painted with Barbie pink and glitter, rounded with a sickly overdone period ship scene approaching Thurnia and tied in the bow of a nice title (begrudgingly bestowed, yet somehow sensible) upon our dear Mr. Darcy.
So disappointing. I LOVED the first three in this series, I really hope Melanie Rachel returns to the original charm and leaves off the grandiose adaptations.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
February 25, 2026
Rom Com?
The story is unique, the beginning has its funny moments, but the entire middle is so full of confusion and intrigue there is no room for RomCom. As we get to the heart of the story and we find out what this intrigue is all about, then the fun starts to return until the end. Not quite a proper Rom Com 😏
The story is unique, the beginning has its funny moments, but the entire middle is so full of confusion and intrigue there is no room for RomCom. As we get to the heart of the story and we find out what this intrigue is all about, then the fun starts to return until the end. Not quite a proper Rom Com 😏
February 15, 2026
3.5 Stars
- A charming story
- Darcy and Elizabeth are the main characters, with their traveling companions in supporting roles.
- Elizabeth's companion, Mrs. Hobart, was a mix between Mrs. Bennet and Lady Catherine.
- A charming story
- Darcy and Elizabeth are the main characters, with their traveling companions in supporting roles.
- Elizabeth's companion, Mrs. Hobart, was a mix between Mrs. Bennet and Lady Catherine.
March 5, 2026
I loved it!
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘The Rom Com Collection’ series. All books are standalone reads and can be read in any order. He doesn’t believe in fairy tales, and she’s living one she can’t escape.
Elizabeth Bennet has always known her father was a prince, she simply never expected it to matter. Living quietly in Hertfordshire with her mother’s family, her royal blood seems irrelevant, but just after her eighteenth birthday, an envoy from the Thurnian court arrives with an invitation, her grandfather the king wishes to welcome her into the royal family. Miles away in Derbyshire, Fitzwilliam Darcy faces pressure of his own. His uncle the earl wants him to reclaim a title stripped from his family hundreds of years ago. Having both family and friends who are members of the aristocracy, Darcy knows firsthand that such a life holds no appeal for a man who values his independence.
When a winter storm strands them together at a remote inn, the last thing Darcy expects is to encounter a young woman claiming to be a Thurnian princess, because he knows Thurnia has no princesses, he is certain she’s lying. Yet as their uneasy journey continues and the behaviour of her chaperone grows increasingly odd, Darcy begins to suspect that the deception hides more than a fanciful tale, and that uncovering the truth may actually be dangerous. What begins as a chance encounter in a snowbound inn becomes a journey where treachery reveals a nobility no title could ever bestow. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
P.S. Don’t forget to download the bonus epilogue at the end. You won’t be disappointed.
Warning: Meant for mature audiences. Contains scenes that would scandalize the ton. Readers of a delicate constitution are advised to keep their fans and vinaigrettes close at hand.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. This is part of the ‘The Rom Com Collection’ series. All books are standalone reads and can be read in any order. He doesn’t believe in fairy tales, and she’s living one she can’t escape.
Elizabeth Bennet has always known her father was a prince, she simply never expected it to matter. Living quietly in Hertfordshire with her mother’s family, her royal blood seems irrelevant, but just after her eighteenth birthday, an envoy from the Thurnian court arrives with an invitation, her grandfather the king wishes to welcome her into the royal family. Miles away in Derbyshire, Fitzwilliam Darcy faces pressure of his own. His uncle the earl wants him to reclaim a title stripped from his family hundreds of years ago. Having both family and friends who are members of the aristocracy, Darcy knows firsthand that such a life holds no appeal for a man who values his independence.
When a winter storm strands them together at a remote inn, the last thing Darcy expects is to encounter a young woman claiming to be a Thurnian princess, because he knows Thurnia has no princesses, he is certain she’s lying. Yet as their uneasy journey continues and the behaviour of her chaperone grows increasingly odd, Darcy begins to suspect that the deception hides more than a fanciful tale, and that uncovering the truth may actually be dangerous. What begins as a chance encounter in a snowbound inn becomes a journey where treachery reveals a nobility no title could ever bestow. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. It’s a must read. I highly recommend to everyone.
P.S. Don’t forget to download the bonus epilogue at the end. You won’t be disappointed.
February 12, 2026
Another Gem for My Re‑Read Collection
The Princess Problem takes place a couple of years before canon, and what a delightful twist it offers. Elizabeth Bennet has always known she was a princess — someday her family would call for her — but she never expected it to happen so suddenly, or come when she turned eighteen. A royal summons turns her world upside down, shaking it up like a bad martini. As she’s swept into her new role, Elizabeth struggles to maintain her footing while constantly being reminded that a Princess of Thurnia and a Miss Bennet are expected to behave very differently. How does she embrace her new identity without losing the kind, generous, approachable Lizzy we love?
Meanwhile, nothing is going right for Darcy. His uncle is pressuring him into accepting something no one in the family has ever wanted. Georgiana’s melancholy weighs heavily on him. And now a snowstorm has stranded him at an unfamiliar inn — one where the amenities he’s accustomed to have already been claimed by someone else. Supposedly, a princess is staying there. That wouldn’t bother him… except he knows for certain that Thurnia has a plethora of princes, there's not a single princess.
So our story begins with a doubtful, petulant Darcy and an Elizabeth trying to find her balance while deflecting his pointed attacks on her character. Despite the turbulence tossing them about, an undercurrent of respect begins to grow into admiration. They share plenty of page time, with the narrative alternating between their perspectives, allowing their connection to develop in a wonderfully satisfying way.
I won’t say more about the plot, but I will say this: Melanie Rachel does not disappoint. Her humor — especially Darcy’s dry wit — had me snickering, laughing out loud, and even nearly choking on my popcorn at one point.
The Princess Problem firmly cements Melanie Rachel among my favorite authors. Her stories are filled with intrigue and energy between our dear couple while remaining sweet and clean. As I mentioned in the headline, this one has gone straight into my re‑read collection. Note: I read this as an Advanced Reader Copy. This is my honest opinion of the story.
The Princess Problem takes place a couple of years before canon, and what a delightful twist it offers. Elizabeth Bennet has always known she was a princess — someday her family would call for her — but she never expected it to happen so suddenly, or come when she turned eighteen. A royal summons turns her world upside down, shaking it up like a bad martini. As she’s swept into her new role, Elizabeth struggles to maintain her footing while constantly being reminded that a Princess of Thurnia and a Miss Bennet are expected to behave very differently. How does she embrace her new identity without losing the kind, generous, approachable Lizzy we love?
Meanwhile, nothing is going right for Darcy. His uncle is pressuring him into accepting something no one in the family has ever wanted. Georgiana’s melancholy weighs heavily on him. And now a snowstorm has stranded him at an unfamiliar inn — one where the amenities he’s accustomed to have already been claimed by someone else. Supposedly, a princess is staying there. That wouldn’t bother him… except he knows for certain that Thurnia has a plethora of princes, there's not a single princess.
So our story begins with a doubtful, petulant Darcy and an Elizabeth trying to find her balance while deflecting his pointed attacks on her character. Despite the turbulence tossing them about, an undercurrent of respect begins to grow into admiration. They share plenty of page time, with the narrative alternating between their perspectives, allowing their connection to develop in a wonderfully satisfying way.
I won’t say more about the plot, but I will say this: Melanie Rachel does not disappoint. Her humor — especially Darcy’s dry wit — had me snickering, laughing out loud, and even nearly choking on my popcorn at one point.
The Princess Problem firmly cements Melanie Rachel among my favorite authors. Her stories are filled with intrigue and energy between our dear couple while remaining sweet and clean. As I mentioned in the headline, this one has gone straight into my re‑read collection. Note: I read this as an Advanced Reader Copy. This is my honest opinion of the story.
March 11, 2026
Well this wasn't it!
Please be aware of spoilers.
This is an almost DNF and what I mean is, that after the chapter of the inn where Darcy meets "princess" Elisabeth I started to skip every 2 chapter, I read a few sentences of the next than skipped it again by two, than tree and so on.
And how glad I'm that I did so!
It was booooring, no mention of real royals. This is the second book where I see this concept of >> if not a british royal, than there is no need the same reference and respect<< type of books. I don't know where these authors get their source is but in the world of the Royals (of any nation) the respect is observed. Even Queen Elisabeth is curtsied to the Spanish King and the King bowed to Her after. So when I see this kind of poor behavior I do wonder of the authors work of mind... or lack of in this case.
Back to this book, so the all book, as much as I read it (remember I skipped a lot) is technically is about Elisabeth "abduction" a looong winter storm when is convenient for the plot and endless internal useless monologue.
Darcy's unrealistic distaste for accepting his rightful baronetcy is ridiculous. Even now if you have a lucrative enterprise, and Pemberley is lucrative 10.000 a year as we heard countlessly from Mrs. Bennett, bless her heart we must love her!!!,than it was in his best interest to be member of the parliament to vote for legislations that benefitted Pemberley and it's tenants. For me this is an other lack of the author understanding of how the actual world, the author lives in, works (big corporates bribing politicians for ex.), and back than it was worse (remember no democracy in Regency era).
So I skipped to the end ( I don't even bother you with the unrealistic situation in a tradesman home, no disrespect to the Gardiners, where Elisabeth cousin, a real life prince meets her) finally hoping to meet the Grandparent Royals. Huh! You would think so.
No such thing happens.
So if you hope for royal environment type of story this isn't it!
1 star is generous rating IMHO.
Please be aware of spoilers.
This is an almost DNF and what I mean is, that after the chapter of the inn where Darcy meets "princess" Elisabeth I started to skip every 2 chapter, I read a few sentences of the next than skipped it again by two, than tree and so on.
And how glad I'm that I did so!
It was booooring, no mention of real royals. This is the second book where I see this concept of >> if not a british royal, than there is no need the same reference and respect<< type of books. I don't know where these authors get their source is but in the world of the Royals (of any nation) the respect is observed. Even Queen Elisabeth is curtsied to the Spanish King and the King bowed to Her after. So when I see this kind of poor behavior I do wonder of the authors work of mind... or lack of in this case.
Back to this book, so the all book, as much as I read it (remember I skipped a lot) is technically is about Elisabeth "abduction" a looong winter storm when is convenient for the plot and endless internal useless monologue.
Darcy's unrealistic distaste for accepting his rightful baronetcy is ridiculous. Even now if you have a lucrative enterprise, and Pemberley is lucrative 10.000 a year as we heard countlessly from Mrs. Bennett, bless her heart we must love her!!!,than it was in his best interest to be member of the parliament to vote for legislations that benefitted Pemberley and it's tenants. For me this is an other lack of the author understanding of how the actual world, the author lives in, works (big corporates bribing politicians for ex.), and back than it was worse (remember no democracy in Regency era).
So I skipped to the end ( I don't even bother you with the unrealistic situation in a tradesman home, no disrespect to the Gardiners, where Elisabeth cousin, a real life prince meets her) finally hoping to meet the Grandparent Royals. Huh! You would think so.
No such thing happens.
So if you hope for royal environment type of story this isn't it!
1 star is generous rating IMHO.
Review of advance copy received from Author
This story is loosely inspired by the Princess and the pea, and peas play a small role in the story :-)
Elizabeth is a Thurian princess. Daughter of the King of Thurnia’s youngest son. Thurnia is a small fictional country and a island between Scotland and the Fareo Islands. Her mother was Mr Bennets sister. Both her parents passed away, when she was very young. Their marriage was controversial because her mother wasn’t from a noble family and for this reason she couldn’t wasn’t raised by the royal family, but she was taken in by the Bennets. She was loved by the Bennets like she was one of their own. Due to Elizabeth joining the family, her fortune paid for master and tutors, which benefited all the Bennet girls. Her fortune is big enough, that she can provide for herself, Mrs Bennet and the girls. So Mrs Bennet isn’t afraid of the hedgerows and the Bennets has a happy marriage.
The story starts when Elizabeth is 18. This the age of majority in Thurnia, and the political situation has changed, so the king wants Elizabeth to return to Thurnia.
So she decides to travel to Thurnia with a Thurian companion, they should meet up on the way with the envoy, who requested her return to Thurnia.
Mr Darcy on the other hand is worried about Georgiana, because he got a message from her school, that she is not thriving. So he is traveling from Pemberley to London to meet with Georgiana, while Elizabeth is travelling north. They get snowed in at the same Inn. Darcy doesn’t believe she is a real princess. He was in school with a prince from Thuria, who had told there were only princes there. So sparks are flying and there are a lot of arguing.
I will not reveal much more, but when Elizabeth finds herself in danger, he will do anything in his power to help her.
Dive in to this very well written story and enjoy :-)
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review
Elizabeth is a Thurian princess. Daughter of the King of Thurnia’s youngest son. Thurnia is a small fictional country and a island between Scotland and the Fareo Islands. Her mother was Mr Bennets sister. Both her parents passed away, when she was very young. Their marriage was controversial because her mother wasn’t from a noble family and for this reason she couldn’t wasn’t raised by the royal family, but she was taken in by the Bennets. She was loved by the Bennets like she was one of their own. Due to Elizabeth joining the family, her fortune paid for master and tutors, which benefited all the Bennet girls. Her fortune is big enough, that she can provide for herself, Mrs Bennet and the girls. So Mrs Bennet isn’t afraid of the hedgerows and the Bennets has a happy marriage.
The story starts when Elizabeth is 18. This the age of majority in Thurnia, and the political situation has changed, so the king wants Elizabeth to return to Thurnia.
So she decides to travel to Thurnia with a Thurian companion, they should meet up on the way with the envoy, who requested her return to Thurnia.
Mr Darcy on the other hand is worried about Georgiana, because he got a message from her school, that she is not thriving. So he is traveling from Pemberley to London to meet with Georgiana, while Elizabeth is travelling north. They get snowed in at the same Inn. Darcy doesn’t believe she is a real princess. He was in school with a prince from Thuria, who had told there were only princes there. So sparks are flying and there are a lot of arguing.
I will not reveal much more, but when Elizabeth finds herself in danger, he will do anything in his power to help her.
Dive in to this very well written story and enjoy :-)
I received a free copy and am voluntarily leaving a review
February 12, 2026
“Elizabeth Bennet had always known she was born a princess, but until recently, had considered it a harmless peculiarity.”
Thus begins Melanie Rachel’s wonderful new Pride and Prejudice variation… The Princess Problem, a twist on the classic fairytale, The Princess and the Pea. This story brings us all the things we love about Melanie’s writing: well-drawn characters, sparkling dialogue, and crisp pacing of the storyline. This newest addition to her Rom-Com line surprises with a significant change in characters. There are none of the familiar villains – Mr. Wickham, William Collins, or Caroline Bingley, but we do not miss them at all as the newest additions are so easy to love, or love to hate. We also see very different aspects of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy’s characters – Lizzy is vulnerable and confused, while Mr. Darcy is so difficult at first that I wished I could kick him in the shins more than once. Oh, but when the story (and the danger) heats up, it’s their true characters that shine through once again.
What I loved about this story:
- Elizabeth is kind, patient with her sisters, generous, humble and romantic.
- Darcy is suspicious, cautious, snide, sarcastic, but when he begins to understand the danger Elizabeth is in, it is totally sigh-worthy. “Darcy lowered his pistol slowly, his hand remarkably steady considering the turmoil still crawling in his chest. He should be thinking strategically, but his mind circled one inescapable fact: he had been willing to die for her.” Yes, Mr. Darcy is back and better than ever!
- Elizabeth’s royal cousin, Adrian, is warm, laughing, and had the subtlety of fireworks.
- Oh, and there’s even a shout out to Princess Bride!
So curl up with a glass of wine and enjoy a sweet, grown-up take on the classic fairytale, as only Melanie Rachel can tell it.
Thus begins Melanie Rachel’s wonderful new Pride and Prejudice variation… The Princess Problem, a twist on the classic fairytale, The Princess and the Pea. This story brings us all the things we love about Melanie’s writing: well-drawn characters, sparkling dialogue, and crisp pacing of the storyline. This newest addition to her Rom-Com line surprises with a significant change in characters. There are none of the familiar villains – Mr. Wickham, William Collins, or Caroline Bingley, but we do not miss them at all as the newest additions are so easy to love, or love to hate. We also see very different aspects of Elizabeth and Mr. Darcy’s characters – Lizzy is vulnerable and confused, while Mr. Darcy is so difficult at first that I wished I could kick him in the shins more than once. Oh, but when the story (and the danger) heats up, it’s their true characters that shine through once again.
What I loved about this story:
- Elizabeth is kind, patient with her sisters, generous, humble and romantic.
- Darcy is suspicious, cautious, snide, sarcastic, but when he begins to understand the danger Elizabeth is in, it is totally sigh-worthy. “Darcy lowered his pistol slowly, his hand remarkably steady considering the turmoil still crawling in his chest. He should be thinking strategically, but his mind circled one inescapable fact: he had been willing to die for her.” Yes, Mr. Darcy is back and better than ever!
- Elizabeth’s royal cousin, Adrian, is warm, laughing, and had the subtlety of fireworks.
- Oh, and there’s even a shout out to Princess Bride!
So curl up with a glass of wine and enjoy a sweet, grown-up take on the classic fairytale, as only Melanie Rachel can tell it.
February 21, 2026
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars.
We have Elizabeth as a Princess from Thurnia who is placed with her uncle, Mr. Bennet, as she becomes an orphan. Years later Elizabeth is summoned to her home nation with a companion, Mrs. Hobarth, to accompany her. As Elizabeth wants to travel anonymously we find it strange that her companion is determined to have all they meet know she is a princess.
When snow traps them at an inn Darcy is also there and he does not believe the claims that Elizabeth is a princess and takes the companion pushing that recognition as a ploy for benefits from the inn keeper. But we also see Elizabeth sharing all with other travelers at the inn.
This story focuses much on their travels. It also has drama as their carriage (Darcy has offered to take them to London when their carriage is disabled.) is attacked with threats of taking E. and ransoming her.
Yes, there is a happy ending but Darcy and Elizabeth have to sort out just who she really is and why she is being recalled. It also seems Darcy knows one of Elizabeth's relatives (from school). Adrian never mentioned a princess from his home land.
There is an epilogue and then a free second epilogue which is set in Thurnia and the Darcys have three children at this point. (Darcy goes by "Keldhavn" there.) There are some sweet moments when Elizabeth promises "tonight" in response to a disruption to their attentions to each other.
We have Elizabeth as a Princess from Thurnia who is placed with her uncle, Mr. Bennet, as she becomes an orphan. Years later Elizabeth is summoned to her home nation with a companion, Mrs. Hobarth, to accompany her. As Elizabeth wants to travel anonymously we find it strange that her companion is determined to have all they meet know she is a princess.
When snow traps them at an inn Darcy is also there and he does not believe the claims that Elizabeth is a princess and takes the companion pushing that recognition as a ploy for benefits from the inn keeper. But we also see Elizabeth sharing all with other travelers at the inn.
This story focuses much on their travels. It also has drama as their carriage (Darcy has offered to take them to London when their carriage is disabled.) is attacked with threats of taking E. and ransoming her.
Yes, there is a happy ending but Darcy and Elizabeth have to sort out just who she really is and why she is being recalled. It also seems Darcy knows one of Elizabeth's relatives (from school). Adrian never mentioned a princess from his home land.
There is an epilogue and then a free second epilogue which is set in Thurnia and the Darcys have three children at this point. (Darcy goes by "Keldhavn" there.) There are some sweet moments when Elizabeth promises "tonight" in response to a disruption to their attentions to each other.
Review of advance copy received from Author
The Princess Problem by Melanie Rachel was an engrossing adventure featuring a strong Darcy and witty Elizabeth. Elizabeth Bennet is a princess that has been called back to her grandparents’ court in Thurnia from Longbourn where she has lived with her Bennet uncle, aunt and cousins. Darcy is on his way from Derbyshire to London to see his sister, Georgiana, when he is thrown into Elizabeth’s company. He doesn’t believe she is a princess, and she is just trying to get to Thurnia.
As usual with this author, the banter is amusing and filled with heartfelt moments. Once Darcy and Elizabeth met, I found the book difficult to put down. The original characters added nicely to the story, as very few other characters from canon appear in the book. I especially enjoyed meeting Elizabeth’s cousin, Adrian. I have a lot that I really enjoyed, but I don’t wish to spoil anything. There is a little swoony reminder of The Princess Bride that made me (almost) squeal.
I highly recommend this book to others that enjoy witty banter, a nicely growing attraction between the two main characters, and a little adventure to get us to the climax.
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving an unbiased review.
As usual with this author, the banter is amusing and filled with heartfelt moments. Once Darcy and Elizabeth met, I found the book difficult to put down. The original characters added nicely to the story, as very few other characters from canon appear in the book. I especially enjoyed meeting Elizabeth’s cousin, Adrian. I have a lot that I really enjoyed, but I don’t wish to spoil anything. There is a little swoony reminder of The Princess Bride that made me (almost) squeal.
I highly recommend this book to others that enjoy witty banter, a nicely growing attraction between the two main characters, and a little adventure to get us to the climax.
I received an ARC of this book, and I am voluntarily leaving an unbiased review.
March 17, 2026
disappointed
Disappointed. I usually enjoy books from this author. It is Not what I expected. Everything I like about “Elizabeth is not a Bennett” stories was ruined in this story. There was extreme frustration felt during the first third of the book. I nearly had to set it down and almost went to another variation entirely.
Nearly everything concerning Elizabeth’s true identity was initially presented as a negative. Nothing was positive or exciting. It was all dreary for more than half the story. And this includes the story surrounding ODC. Darcy was not likable and other than an “unspoken magnetism”, there was no reason for her to look toward him, except for sheer survival after things FINALLY got interesting. The best part of this book is the Bonus epilogue, which is not even attached to the book itself!
I gave it three stars because it wasn’t a complete waste of time, but unlike this author’s other books I am less likely to read it again.
Disappointed. I usually enjoy books from this author. It is Not what I expected. Everything I like about “Elizabeth is not a Bennett” stories was ruined in this story. There was extreme frustration felt during the first third of the book. I nearly had to set it down and almost went to another variation entirely.
Nearly everything concerning Elizabeth’s true identity was initially presented as a negative. Nothing was positive or exciting. It was all dreary for more than half the story. And this includes the story surrounding ODC. Darcy was not likable and other than an “unspoken magnetism”, there was no reason for her to look toward him, except for sheer survival after things FINALLY got interesting. The best part of this book is the Bonus epilogue, which is not even attached to the book itself!
I gave it three stars because it wasn’t a complete waste of time, but unlike this author’s other books I am less likely to read it again.
February 17, 2026
Elizabeth a princess?
This story takes place prior to canon when Elizabeth is 18 years old. Elizabeth is Mr. Bennet‘s niece, but has grown up in his loving home as he and Mrs. Bennet consider her another daughter. A journey north in winter is never easy but add a storm, carriage issues, shortage of supplies at the Inn, grumpy Mr Darcy, a nagging companion and highway men to add some adventure. In this fun story that blends Pride and Prejudice with a little bit of a fairytale, you will enjoy this story. Now to throw in Harry Frost narrating the audiobook absolutely brings this story to a five star.
This story takes place prior to canon when Elizabeth is 18 years old. Elizabeth is Mr. Bennet‘s niece, but has grown up in his loving home as he and Mrs. Bennet consider her another daughter. A journey north in winter is never easy but add a storm, carriage issues, shortage of supplies at the Inn, grumpy Mr Darcy, a nagging companion and highway men to add some adventure. In this fun story that blends Pride and Prejudice with a little bit of a fairytale, you will enjoy this story. Now to throw in Harry Frost narrating the audiobook absolutely brings this story to a five star.
February 13, 2026
Very entertaining read
This story has a particularly stubborn set in his ways Darcy..but he does have some charm. Elizabeth has been raised by the Bennets in Meryton, always knowing of her true parentage, a Princess of nearby kingdom. Kidnapping, untruths, blockheaded blindness ensue on her adventure. Wasn't sure how Darcy was going to get himself out of some of his idiocy, but he managed. Surprisingly I did not miss Bingley & co., very small bits of the Bennet family, and very little of the Fitzwilliam side as well. Thoroughly enjoyed all the new characters al9ng the way.
This story has a particularly stubborn set in his ways Darcy..but he does have some charm. Elizabeth has been raised by the Bennets in Meryton, always knowing of her true parentage, a Princess of nearby kingdom. Kidnapping, untruths, blockheaded blindness ensue on her adventure. Wasn't sure how Darcy was going to get himself out of some of his idiocy, but he managed. Surprisingly I did not miss Bingley & co., very small bits of the Bennet family, and very little of the Fitzwilliam side as well. Thoroughly enjoyed all the new characters al9ng the way.
March 12, 2026
A real page turner. Darcy is as pigheaded here as in ODC but at the same time still acts with honor and heroics. Elizabeth of this story is the most balanced i have read in long time.
The usual characters of Bingleys, wickham are not at all in the story(u wont miss them) and the bennets are mentioned at the initial chapters. This story is exclusively D & E
I loved their interactions and I loved how Darcy keeps putting his feet in mouth but still cant help himself for falling for E
A definite read
The usual characters of Bingleys, wickham are not at all in the story(u wont miss them) and the bennets are mentioned at the initial chapters. This story is exclusively D & E
I loved their interactions and I loved how Darcy keeps putting his feet in mouth but still cant help himself for falling for E
A definite read
February 13, 2026
always a pleasure
Melanie Rachel is one of my favorite authors. Her stories are always imaginative and interesting. The banter is romantic and funny. The secondary characters are deserving of books of their own (hint,hint). The only complaint I have it that the ending feels rushed. I wanted to know what happened next with all the characters. This story has great potential for an entire original series that I would happily buy! More please!
Melanie Rachel is one of my favorite authors. Her stories are always imaginative and interesting. The banter is romantic and funny. The secondary characters are deserving of books of their own (hint,hint). The only complaint I have it that the ending feels rushed. I wanted to know what happened next with all the characters. This story has great potential for an entire original series that I would happily buy! More please!
February 14, 2026
Lots of fun!
A joyful, witty, romantic adventure for Elizabeth and Darcy, as a very non-canon plot has Elizabeth an actual princess who has been raised by the Bennets. Darcy falls for her even though he doesn't believe she is royal and she falls for him as he saves her several times. Cute recognition of the Princess and the Pea story, as well as the Princess Bride.
A joyful, witty, romantic adventure for Elizabeth and Darcy, as a very non-canon plot has Elizabeth an actual princess who has been raised by the Bennets. Darcy falls for her even though he doesn't believe she is royal and she falls for him as he saves her several times. Cute recognition of the Princess and the Pea story, as well as the Princess Bride.
March 20, 2026
princess and the peas
I love how this story reimagines Darcy and Elizabeth meeting and “figuring out” each other’s character. With similar themes yet mixed and distributed among new and familiar characters, I could not wait to see details unfold. It was entertaining and a complete pleasure to read!
I love how this story reimagines Darcy and Elizabeth meeting and “figuring out” each other’s character. With similar themes yet mixed and distributed among new and familiar characters, I could not wait to see details unfold. It was entertaining and a complete pleasure to read!
Review of advance copy received from Author
An utterly entertaining story!
Darcy was lost before it all began.
There is kind of a slow build up till almost halfway through. We become acquainted with the principal players, mainly Darcy Elizabeth and Mrs Hobarth? while stuck in bad winter weather at an inn.
When they are comandeered to travel together the action picks up as does the direct interaction between ODC. It's difficult to remember at times that they are 2 years younger than Canon because the characters are so close to the original ones.
I did miss a softer side to their falling in love. It was nearly despite themselves, with many of the early scenes being combatant.
The writing was great, setting a fast pace. The ending picked up speed with the entrance of Elizabeth's male family members. Ms. Rachel is talented with her multiple character scenes. They always make me feel I am right there in the middle of the action!
I look forward to rereading this when the paperback or audio book are available.
I received an advanced review copy and voluntarily leave my review.
Darcy was lost before it all began.
There is kind of a slow build up till almost halfway through. We become acquainted with the principal players, mainly Darcy Elizabeth and Mrs Hobarth? while stuck in bad winter weather at an inn.
When they are comandeered to travel together the action picks up as does the direct interaction between ODC. It's difficult to remember at times that they are 2 years younger than Canon because the characters are so close to the original ones.
I did miss a softer side to their falling in love. It was nearly despite themselves, with many of the early scenes being combatant.
The writing was great, setting a fast pace. The ending picked up speed with the entrance of Elizabeth's male family members. Ms. Rachel is talented with her multiple character scenes. They always make me feel I am right there in the middle of the action!
I look forward to rereading this when the paperback or audio book are available.
I received an advanced review copy and voluntarily leave my review.
February 12, 2026
Another lovely story
I really enjoyed this story — the relationship developing between Elizabeth and Darcy was special and engaging. And the underlying story of the Princess was well done.
I really enjoyed this story — the relationship developing between Elizabeth and Darcy was special and engaging. And the underlying story of the Princess was well done.
February 21, 2026
Are All Princesses So Stubborn?
Elizabeth has her usual pertness. She has her usual pride. But her refusal to think ... Well, she usually has that in spades, too. This is a wonderful romantic comedy with mysterious undertones. Very entertaining!
Elizabeth has her usual pertness. She has her usual pride. But her refusal to think ... Well, she usually has that in spades, too. This is a wonderful romantic comedy with mysterious undertones. Very entertaining!
March 4, 2026
EXCELLENT!!
What a wonderfully unique variation. I love this author and this is another winner in my eyes. It’s well written, exciting, funny, romantic and suspenseful. A great combo. I love that for the most part it is just ODC and a few other characters sporadically.
What a wonderfully unique variation. I love this author and this is another winner in my eyes. It’s well written, exciting, funny, romantic and suspenseful. A great combo. I love that for the most part it is just ODC and a few other characters sporadically.
February 14, 2026
Unputdownable.
February 14, 2026
At first I didn’t find it humorous. It was intense. Mrs Hobart drove me crazy. I didn’t feel the comedy came until Elizabeth was safe. But I did enjoy the story.
February 21, 2026
Well written and cute. Ending felt a little rushed though
March 3, 2026
4.25* - A hoot-and-a-half
A fairytale adventure which is lots of fun with humour and adventure plus romance and a dash of intrigue.
A fairytale adventure which is lots of fun with humour and adventure plus romance and a dash of intrigue.
March 6, 2026
Another Winner!
Love this very original story even when I thought I might not. It drew me in and I enjoyed every minute of it!
Love this very original story even when I thought I might not. It drew me in and I enjoyed every minute of it!
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