What a fantastic debut by Kit Jade! Well-written, voicey and just on the edge of gritty, Shut Up and Score hits all the right MM sports romance notes. The story hits the ground running—the conflict, the angst, the emotion, the secrets; I was instantly hooked. There were a couple issues that held it back from a 5 star rating for me, but overall, my advice is to shut up and score this one (heh) when it releases October 3rd.
Micah Blackman is back in town—tatted and set on revenge after a betrayal by best friend Colton Taylor two years ago cost him his scholarship and his place on the football team. His return makes life complicated for the still-closeted Golden Boy Colton, who is still playing the part of the straight quarterback while quietly trying to come to terms with his sexuality. And when football forces them together, Micah and Colton are also forced to confront their feelings, and their past mistakes.
Kit Jade’s sharp, punchy prose goes hand in hand with an angsty sports romance. The emotions of both characters were palpable—Colton’s disillusionment and guilt, Micah’s anger and cynicism. At no point did it feel like I was reading a debut. After such a strong start, it was a shame that the second half of the story went a bit too hard (no pun intended) on the sex scenes. Without breaks in between to allow the sexual tension to build, the spice did become a bit repetitive. (For the curious—chapters 23, 25-28, 30-31, 33-34 are all sex.)
At the start of the book, the Content Warning includes: “Explicit sexual content between consenting adult men”. It’s an MM romance, sex between men is to be expected. What wasn’t expected—and also not in the CW—was the explicit MF sex scene between Colton and his girlfriend. I thought it odd that there’s a warning about gay sex in a gay romance, instead of one about explicit hetero sex. In MM, sex between a man and a woman is the outlier, not the standard, and I think it should always be included in the CW.
The other issue for me was the misogyny. (Also not in the CW.) There were times I didn’t like how narrative and the MMC’s treat Jasmine, Colton’s girlfriend. Her character lacks depth, and is only ever referred to in superficial terms—her pink dress, her glossy lips, her perfect, practised smile. As though she’s not a real person, but a prop. And to a certain extent, I got it—for Colton, she was a prop: the Golden Boy quarterback’s perfect girlfriend. But in the story, the line between metaphor and misogyny is sometimes blurred.
A lot of emphasis is on Jasmine’s physical appearance and presentation, rather than her personality. Colton refers to her as a “walking Instagram filter”, and treats everything she says as vacuous.
“I’m sitting next to Jasmine (…) as she rattles on and on. Something about dinner plans. (…) Or whatever the hell I’m supposed to care about this week.”
(Your bi-panic is not Jasmine’s fault, Colton!)
Micah is also guilty of it:
“Long legs. Sorority tank. Fresh lip gloss. Perched on the bleachers like a goddamn recruiter, clapping slowly, as if she’s proud of her prize-winning racehorse. ‘Babe,’ she calls, all breathy and performative.”
I get it, Micah is jealous, and to him, Jasmine is just a reflection of Colton’s carefully constructed closet… but the poor woman is just living her life. She’s not doing anything wrong, but she’s copping the collateral damage.
Thankfully, her treatment does get better. She’s not demonised or painted as the bitter, jealous ex, and she even has a happy ending of her own. I just wish she’d had more depth, and wasn’t objectified.
Overall, I am very excited to see what else Kit Jade comes out with, because if this is her debut, I think we can expect great things in the future.
I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.