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Gill Man's Girl
One bad choice for undergraduate Lita Lawrence crash lands her alone in the middle of the Amazon rain forest! Finding herself in the safe haven of a lagoon during amphibian mating season may reduce those choices even further, until another species decides she is worth saving. Will she discover a way out of this labyrinth of sensation, or will she stake her own claim in the middle of this primeval land as the Gill Man’s Girl?
51 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 12, 2014
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September 10, 2015
What the fuck was that? This book is complete shit. If this was my first foray into the monster smut genre, it would've died a tragic death with this "story." Luckily, it is not and I'm knee deep in alien smut with the Aussies. This is another BR with the MacHalos.
Let's start: Girl, whose name I don't remember because she's worthless, is a doctoral candidate in the Amazon rain forest. She went on this trip only because the prof wasn't the type you can bribe with a blowjob (yes, it says this in the book) and it was only to be a week long trip. Girl wakes up covered in slime in a grotto, after having been in a plane crash with the prof and a fellow student. Her first thoughts are what's this slime and ooh, pretty grotto, lastly, hmmm, wonder where those people I came with are, well no matter. She goes off to explore the grotto and what happens? She starts feeling sexy times and comes upon a "mating frenzy" in the grotto pool. Now most half wits would run the opposite way from fish/frog people in a mating frenzy, cuz no one wants to be slimed. Nope, they do! Fooled ya! Girl keeps watching this sexual frenzy while getting her hand in her pants voyeur frenzy on. Someone did not watch Bear Grylls on how to survive in the jungle.
After that afternoon delight, she strolls off out of the caves to the lagoon for a swim. Ahh, how refreshing, vacations are so nice....did I come here with other people? Meh, back to swimming and de-gooing. While swimming, something grabs her leg and what is it...A Gill Man! Now I picture these creatures more frog like, hence my gifs are all frog related, but it does say he has gills and fins on the side of his head. She's not into his advances right now, so she runs back into the caves and back to the mating frenzy room for another viewing. The fish-frog pheromones hit her special place again and she and her gill man get their hand action on, no greetings or dinner required.
Seems gill man loving is a lot to handle, because idiot girl passed out and wakes up again covered in itchy slime. This time however, gill man is around with a geode full of fish oil to rub into her skin.(ok, how the fuck does she know it's fish oil? I wasn't aware that fish oil looked super different from other oils. And what's with the geode?). The massage session turns into some full on mouth to mouth, fins on limbs action. After he saves her body from the ravagings of other gill men that are trying to join the party.
This is her do-me-from-behind look.
After the latest "mating frenzy" and learning fishman's name is "Myyne" (brilliant, no?) she passes out yet again and wakes up with a new skin hue - light blue-green scales and webbed feet. Attractive, non? I would cut someone and bash their skull in if I woke up with webbed feet and it wasn't removable. Yet, idiot girl is A-OK with this all and just feels horny again. THE fucking END.
This story was fucking horrible and never should've seen the light of day. I am not amused, like this frog.
This would've been a better ending:
Let's start: Girl, whose name I don't remember because she's worthless, is a doctoral candidate in the Amazon rain forest. She went on this trip only because the prof wasn't the type you can bribe with a blowjob (yes, it says this in the book) and it was only to be a week long trip. Girl wakes up covered in slime in a grotto, after having been in a plane crash with the prof and a fellow student. Her first thoughts are what's this slime and ooh, pretty grotto, lastly, hmmm, wonder where those people I came with are, well no matter. She goes off to explore the grotto and what happens? She starts feeling sexy times and comes upon a "mating frenzy" in the grotto pool. Now most half wits would run the opposite way from fish/frog people in a mating frenzy, cuz no one wants to be slimed. Nope, they do! Fooled ya! Girl keeps watching this sexual frenzy while getting her hand in her pants voyeur frenzy on. Someone did not watch Bear Grylls on how to survive in the jungle.
After that afternoon delight, she strolls off out of the caves to the lagoon for a swim. Ahh, how refreshing, vacations are so nice....did I come here with other people? Meh, back to swimming and de-gooing. While swimming, something grabs her leg and what is it...A Gill Man! Now I picture these creatures more frog like, hence my gifs are all frog related, but it does say he has gills and fins on the side of his head. She's not into his advances right now, so she runs back into the caves and back to the mating frenzy room for another viewing. The fish-frog pheromones hit her special place again and she and her gill man get their hand action on, no greetings or dinner required.
Seems gill man loving is a lot to handle, because idiot girl passed out and wakes up again covered in itchy slime. This time however, gill man is around with a geode full of fish oil to rub into her skin.(ok, how the fuck does she know it's fish oil? I wasn't aware that fish oil looked super different from other oils. And what's with the geode?). The massage session turns into some full on mouth to mouth, fins on limbs action. After he saves her body from the ravagings of other gill men that are trying to join the party.
This is her do-me-from-behind look.
After the latest "mating frenzy" and learning fishman's name is "Myyne" (brilliant, no?) she passes out yet again and wakes up with a new skin hue - light blue-green scales and webbed feet. Attractive, non? I would cut someone and bash their skull in if I woke up with webbed feet and it wasn't removable. Yet, idiot girl is A-OK with this all and just feels horny again. THE fucking END.
This story was fucking horrible and never should've seen the light of day. I am not amused, like this frog.
This would've been a better ending:
December 10, 2015
Guys, what the hell?
I think I forgot to put my fun loving smut enthusiast hat on when I read this.
Check out Samantha's review for the best run down of this fishy tale.
This was ridiculous. There was insta-love, there was a pool with giant mating fish creatures, a territory dispute over our lone Raahoshing female, and then Gill Man somehow turned her into a gill creature at the end, and she was okay with this?
I DON'T UNDERSTAND.
This story makes no sense. There is unnecessary description about The Amazon, piranha's and jaguars and she keeps talking about her two other companions who we never even see. And all of a sudden she is in love with Gill Man and thinks she will be loved and cherished and to top all this off his name is Myyne.
WHAT?
The writing in this was not my favorite, but the sexy scenes, when I wasn't wincing, were kind of hot? I don't know anymore. I'm so confused.
This one didn't work for me.
1.5 why-do-i-do-this Stars
Thanks for the buddy read you Machalo Smut Freaks !
I think I forgot to put my fun loving smut enthusiast hat on when I read this.
Check out Samantha's review for the best run down of this fishy tale.
This was ridiculous. There was insta-love, there was a pool with giant mating fish creatures, a territory dispute over our lone Raahoshing female, and then Gill Man somehow turned her into a gill creature at the end, and she was okay with this?
I DON'T UNDERSTAND.
This story makes no sense. There is unnecessary description about The Amazon, piranha's and jaguars and she keeps talking about her two other companions who we never even see. And all of a sudden she is in love with Gill Man and thinks she will be loved and cherished and to top all this off his name is Myyne.
WHAT?
The writing in this was not my favorite, but the sexy scenes, when I wasn't wincing, were kind of hot? I don't know anymore. I'm so confused.
This one didn't work for me.
1.5 why-do-i-do-this Stars
Thanks for the buddy read you Machalo Smut Freaks !
September 9, 2015
With this story, I have come to several conclusions.
1. I'm a lot easier on alien smut than monster smut.
2. All monster smut involves women who have, or are working towards, their doctorate.
3. This makes me glad I didn't go to graduate school.
The underwater sexy times were better in this one than
. But I still found myself wanting more. There were a few inconsistencies. And all of my anatomical concerns were not explained.
This being said, it is the best Monster Smut we have read so far. And I have to use the Royal We for all the freaks over at MacHalo. I need to mention them so that all of my real life friends on here don't continue to think that I have lost my mind.
1. I'm a lot easier on alien smut than monster smut.
2. All monster smut involves women who have, or are working towards, their doctorate.
3. This makes me glad I didn't go to graduate school.
The underwater sexy times were better in this one than
. But I still found myself wanting more. There were a few inconsistencies. And all of my anatomical concerns were not explained. This being said, it is the best Monster Smut we have read so far. And I have to use the Royal We for all the freaks over at MacHalo. I need to mention them so that all of my real life friends on here don't continue to think that I have lost my mind.
September 11, 2015
Well, at least I'm not the only one who is completely turned on when I wake up covered in blue-green scales, itching and covered in goo. Fun MacHalo buddy read.
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September 14, 2015MacHalo buddy read. Because we care.
June 14, 2015
I'm sort of predisposed to like books where the heroine makes the best of a bad situation and ends up getting some hard lovin' out of it. I mean, who wouldn't jump at the chance to have some quality one-on-one time with a never before seen creature in the wilds of the Amazonian rain forest? NO ONE, that's who.
We have a monstrous love cavern (I'm not speaking euphemistically here, either. It was a LITERAL cavern of love. With lots of monster lovin'. Lots and lots of lovin'.), a gentle monster who's VERY well-endowed, and a girl who just can't turn away when the pheromones start pumping out. There's also a large amount of slime, but that's to be expected when you're dealing with partially amphibious monsters. Isn't it?
Hard lovin' and a more-than-willing couple. *slow thumbs up*
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
We have a monstrous love cavern (I'm not speaking euphemistically here, either. It was a LITERAL cavern of love. With lots of monster lovin'. Lots and lots of lovin'.), a gentle monster who's VERY well-endowed, and a girl who just can't turn away when the pheromones start pumping out. There's also a large amount of slime, but that's to be expected when you're dealing with partially amphibious monsters. Isn't it?
Hard lovin' and a more-than-willing couple. *slow thumbs up*
-Kelly @ Reading the Paranormal
December 26, 2014
I bought this book because the cover looked interesting. I was also curious as how the author had made this work. I was pleasantly surprised. It worked alright! The story was very well written, and extremely hot! I read it in one sitting. I would buy from this author again.
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