These brothers were the epitome of hoes, but when obsession, lust, and love hit them hard, all bets are off, and it's entertaining to see them have a 180 and become a one-woman man. I don't particularly buy the "reformed hoe" trope, but since this is fiction, I could tolerate it (barely). 🤷♀️
Anyway, into the story. I haven't read the second book yet, but it seems that Garett (29) and Maria (25) got introduced there—well, not in person, but through their call correspondence. He buys hotels, flips them, and sells them to the highest bidders. Their latest acquisition was a hotel where Maria has been working since she was 18, and she couldn't accept the fact that she's going to lose her job. But she didn't know that Garett had no intention of firing her, in fact, he was invested in her personally and professionally, which is why he's never gonna let her go (like ever). 😏
Gotta admit, the first 58%-ish of the story was straight-up workplace sexual harassment. Maria hated Garett's guts and everything he represented. She didn't want to do anything with him, and she wants to stay as far away as possible most of the time, unless she really needs to talk to him. But he's not having any of her avoidance, so cornering her or summoning her to his office became his go-to move. Like I said, it's sexual harassment. She was always warning him to stop whatever his plans may be and to stay away from her if he didn't want any lawsuits. But again, he's not hearing any of that; he wants her, so he's going to have her. 🫣😬
It's not that Maria didn't feel any attraction, but she values her work ethics and pride so as not to get entangled with Garett. I actually liked her for standing up to him for the majority of this story. She might come off as prickly in the first half, but I'm actually surprised by her attitude. Props for not being a lust-driven FMC.
But Garett's relentless, and he had it in his mind that she's it for him and no one else would have her, and Maria eventually gave in to him. I guess readers know what will happen next in their story. 😉
While I enjoyed it, my main issue with the MMCs in each book is their bulldozing ways and unwillingness to compromise with the FMC. It has to be their way or the highway at all times.
Like here, Garett told Maria to hire someone and delegate her job to that person instead, so that she could go with him whenever he went and for her to move in with him and leave the only place she has ever known. He knew all along that she loved her job and that place more than anything else in this world, and yet he was still not willing to compromise on how to make their situation work. He never considered what she wanted, and in his head, if she only agreed and went along with his plan, everything would've been smooth sailing for them. 🤦♀️ When she didn't, they got separated for two weeks, and his form of communication was texting her each day with the same message: "Nobody touches", sweet, right? 🙄
Anyway, he had enough of being miserable for the last two weeks, so he went back to the hotel, finally confessed his love for her, and she did the same.
Overall, it was good-ish; if readers wanted to read about an obsessed MMC, Garett would deliver. And if they want a feisty FMC, Maria is definitely one; others might see her attitude in the beginning as bitchy, though, but I don't mind it. And if readers can get past or ignore the blatant workplace harassment happening here
(I brainwashed myself into thinking it was a dubcon)
, I think this is still an okay short read.
Book info:
- Novella (168 pages)
- Workplace romance
- Insta-lust then love
- No cheating, owd
- No real omd (she talks to clients, but he's jealous of every guy 🤷♀️)
- No V (h - no info, H - hoe)
- With separation (2 weeks)
- HEA (7 yrs later, married with kids)