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Razor Wire
Two women. One terrible crime. Zero allies.
After being raped by a superior officer, MA3 Kim Lockhoff wants to leave the whole thing in the past. A cop herself, she knows all too well that it’s her word—and slutty reputation—against that of a respected Navy officer.
MA2 Reese Marion, a tough cop hiding her own trauma behind a hard-as-nails exterior, has no patience for pretty little princesses who use their cleavage to win favor with the guys. But when Reese is partnered with Kim, she slowly realizes that reputations can lie. Kim is whip-smart, ambitious—and scared. The man who attacked her won’t let anything damage his career, least of all Kim . . . or the baby she’s carrying as a result.
Isolated on Okinawa, thousands of miles away from home, the two women lean hard on each other. But when Kim confides in Reese, she unwittingly puts her new lover—and both of their careers—in the line of fire. Now her attacker just might have the leverage he needs to keep her quiet for good.
After being raped by a superior officer, MA3 Kim Lockhoff wants to leave the whole thing in the past. A cop herself, she knows all too well that it’s her word—and slutty reputation—against that of a respected Navy officer.
MA2 Reese Marion, a tough cop hiding her own trauma behind a hard-as-nails exterior, has no patience for pretty little princesses who use their cleavage to win favor with the guys. But when Reese is partnered with Kim, she slowly realizes that reputations can lie. Kim is whip-smart, ambitious—and scared. The man who attacked her won’t let anything damage his career, least of all Kim . . . or the baby she’s carrying as a result.
Isolated on Okinawa, thousands of miles away from home, the two women lean hard on each other. But when Kim confides in Reese, she unwittingly puts her new lover—and both of their careers—in the line of fire. Now her attacker just might have the leverage he needs to keep her quiet for good.
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First published December 22, 2014
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June 2, 2017
2 1/2 stars. This was a quick read only took a few hours. The subject is not an easy one so I had mixed feeling about reading this book. I really wasn't into the book in the beginning. I thought the romance came on quicker than plausible considering the subject the characters were dealing with. But I guess how people act after such a horrid situation will differ. Sometimes it almost seemed like the author was a male writing about what he thought a f/f scene was. I'm guessing Lauren is a female so I apologize to her, but some of the wording she used just threw me. Anyway, I did think the book got better and I liked about the last 1/3 of it. I don't want to give spoilers but I thought the author gave a decent ending.
In summary it's an OK book. I got Razor Wire from my library for my kindle and I am glad to have read it. However, I will not be purchasing it for my collection.
In summary it's an OK book. I got Razor Wire from my library for my kindle and I am glad to have read it. However, I will not be purchasing it for my collection.
January 24, 2015
This is the first time I've picked up a book where rape is the main subject, not something in the distant past that the protagonist was recovering from. And it occurred in one of the most oppressive environments it can possibly happen in, perpetrated by someone currently in a position of power over the victim.
Kim is a Navy cop stationed in far away Okinawa in an isolated base, where her only family is the military command she's in. After a night of drinking and partying with the boys, she leaves with a senior officer, and her world is never the same again. In a few weeks, the evidence of that night manifests in dizziness and vomiting. Not only has Kim cemented her reputation as a slut, the incident has set off an atmosphere of intense oppression, sexual innuendos and outright abuse--all of it directed at her, by her own military unit.
To his credit, her immediate superior appears more sympathetic towards her plight than the rest, and puts her in touch with the only other female who is currently on duty at the base, Reese. Once upon a time, Kim had looked on Reese with admiration--a perfect role model of a successful, well-adjusted military woman with two war tours under her belt. But Reese is cold and aloof, and seemed to have a particular distaste for women with her 'reputation'. Will she lend an ear? or will she get that 'this is what happens when you act like that' lecture?
The book is written in the first person, featuring the two protagonists point of view in alternate chapters. I thought this was very effective as we got two different viewpoints on a very personal, intimate and sensitive subject--one from the victim and one from a skeptical and cynical observer. I was pleasantly surprised that the portrayals are more sensitive and nuanced than I expected in a $5 book, from an author who seems to have previously only written m/f and menage erotica. The author treats the subject with the seriousness, care and respect that it deserves. It is interesting that she chose to portray a kind of rape that is most insiduous and that often goes unreported--
The protagonists' respective viewpoints, feelings, experiences and changing emotions are portrayed well in the inner monologues and dialogue. Her portrayal of Kim is exceptional. If this were a movie, her role would be the kind that an actress can get awards for. She goes through guilt, depression, desperation, fear, doubt, anger, defiance, and finally . I also like the little interludes where Kim (and the reader) get a little reprieve from the hopelessness of her situation and she can be her real self. Reese is also very well done. Her story is in fact, I believe,
The tension was palpable throughout the book. The romance was also well done, despite the brevity of the book. I must mention that this book contains almost no bloat. Nothing overdone or underdone. I do think that the ending was a little too I've seen the documentary 'An Invisible War' and while most of this book feels very realistic, the ending was . In an ideal, perfect world it would be just right. But the real world out there is anything but.
4.75 stars
P.S. I forgot to mention that there are no graphic descriptions, although the recollection may still be somewhat disturbing.
Kim is a Navy cop stationed in far away Okinawa in an isolated base, where her only family is the military command she's in. After a night of drinking and partying with the boys, she leaves with a senior officer, and her world is never the same again. In a few weeks, the evidence of that night manifests in dizziness and vomiting. Not only has Kim cemented her reputation as a slut, the incident has set off an atmosphere of intense oppression, sexual innuendos and outright abuse--all of it directed at her, by her own military unit.
To his credit, her immediate superior appears more sympathetic towards her plight than the rest, and puts her in touch with the only other female who is currently on duty at the base, Reese. Once upon a time, Kim had looked on Reese with admiration--a perfect role model of a successful, well-adjusted military woman with two war tours under her belt. But Reese is cold and aloof, and seemed to have a particular distaste for women with her 'reputation'. Will she lend an ear? or will she get that 'this is what happens when you act like that' lecture?
The book is written in the first person, featuring the two protagonists point of view in alternate chapters. I thought this was very effective as we got two different viewpoints on a very personal, intimate and sensitive subject--one from the victim and one from a skeptical and cynical observer. I was pleasantly surprised that the portrayals are more sensitive and nuanced than I expected in a $5 book, from an author who seems to have previously only written m/f and menage erotica. The author treats the subject with the seriousness, care and respect that it deserves. It is interesting that she chose to portray a kind of rape that is most insiduous and that often goes unreported--
The protagonists' respective viewpoints, feelings, experiences and changing emotions are portrayed well in the inner monologues and dialogue. Her portrayal of Kim is exceptional. If this were a movie, her role would be the kind that an actress can get awards for. She goes through guilt, depression, desperation, fear, doubt, anger, defiance, and finally . I also like the little interludes where Kim (and the reader) get a little reprieve from the hopelessness of her situation and she can be her real self. Reese is also very well done. Her story is in fact, I believe,
The tension was palpable throughout the book. The romance was also well done, despite the brevity of the book. I must mention that this book contains almost no bloat. Nothing overdone or underdone. I do think that the ending was a little too I've seen the documentary 'An Invisible War' and while most of this book feels very realistic, the ending was . In an ideal, perfect world it would be just right. But the real world out there is anything but.
4.75 stars
P.S. I forgot to mention that there are no graphic descriptions, although the recollection may still be somewhat disturbing.
February 10, 2015
Razor Wire is a quick read that packs an emotional punch.
This story deals with the sexual assault of Kim, a Navy cop serving in Okinawa. I was impressed with how much tension the author was able to build into the scenes surrounding the rape as well as the confrontation between Kim and the despicable senior officer in question. Told in first person, the anguish, fear and guilt felt by the sailor are effectively conveyed to the reader. When her immediate supervisor struggles to deal with the situation he calls upon another female officer, Reese, to talk to the junior sailor and get her sorted out.
Reese, like her fellow sailors, has a preconceived opinion of Kim’s character. It was interesting watching Reese begin to set aside her negative view of the young sailor and recognize that a truth they both share would soften her opinion and bond the two protagonists together. The romance which blooms between them is made sweeter when set against the challenges each have faced.
I did have issues with the book. As a civilian, a bit more explanation of ranks like MA1, 2 and 3 would have been nice. I figured out for myself that the term “cover” meant hat, I think. Those minor details dragged this civilian out of the story initially but once the tension began to build I just accepted the various ranks of officers as they appeared in the novel.
I’m not the biggest fan of first person POV. Alternating chapters between Reese and Kim gave the reader a bird’s eye view of events as they unfolded but I sometimes had to work at remembering which woman was speaking.
After an impressive well paced story, I found the ending too Hollywood predictable. The ending was more fantasy than reality but was uplifting for the reader. While it is nice to have a lovely romance and a positive outcome in any storyline,in Razor Wire the author has gone to great lengths to emphasize the isolation female military personnel feel when faced with physical and verbal abuse by their male counterparts. The ending did not have to be quite so rosy.
I enjoyed this fast paced and well written book touching on the challenges faced by women in the military. I would be interested to know if the attitudes described by the author match the experiences of those who served.
This story deals with the sexual assault of Kim, a Navy cop serving in Okinawa. I was impressed with how much tension the author was able to build into the scenes surrounding the rape as well as the confrontation between Kim and the despicable senior officer in question. Told in first person, the anguish, fear and guilt felt by the sailor are effectively conveyed to the reader. When her immediate supervisor struggles to deal with the situation he calls upon another female officer, Reese, to talk to the junior sailor and get her sorted out.
Reese, like her fellow sailors, has a preconceived opinion of Kim’s character. It was interesting watching Reese begin to set aside her negative view of the young sailor and recognize that a truth they both share would soften her opinion and bond the two protagonists together. The romance which blooms between them is made sweeter when set against the challenges each have faced.
I did have issues with the book. As a civilian, a bit more explanation of ranks like MA1, 2 and 3 would have been nice. I figured out for myself that the term “cover” meant hat, I think. Those minor details dragged this civilian out of the story initially but once the tension began to build I just accepted the various ranks of officers as they appeared in the novel.
I’m not the biggest fan of first person POV. Alternating chapters between Reese and Kim gave the reader a bird’s eye view of events as they unfolded but I sometimes had to work at remembering which woman was speaking.
After an impressive well paced story, I found the ending too Hollywood predictable. The ending was more fantasy than reality but was uplifting for the reader. While it is nice to have a lovely romance and a positive outcome in any storyline,in Razor Wire the author has gone to great lengths to emphasize the isolation female military personnel feel when faced with physical and verbal abuse by their male counterparts. The ending did not have to be quite so rosy.
I enjoyed this fast paced and well written book touching on the challenges faced by women in the military. I would be interested to know if the attitudes described by the author match the experiences of those who served.
December 29, 2014
This is a poignant tale of the difficulties women in the military face when they have been a victim of a sexual assault, specifically by a senior officer. Kim has a reputation on the American base in Okinawa of being a slut, always flirting with her male counterparts, dressing provocatively and wearing just a little too much makeup. When she is sexually assaulted by her commanding officer, she has no one to turn to and no one to talk to. Reese is asked as a personal favor to her buddy Alejandro to talk to Kim because something doesn't seem right. Kim's been acting a little differently. At first Reese is put off and begrudgingly agrees to talk to Kim. It doesn't take Reese long, though, to figure out that maybe there is more to the situation and maybe Kim isn't the person everyone thinks she is.
The story starts out quickly with a confrontation between Kim and her attacker. I immediately felt my stomach in knots and spent most of the book with an anxious feeling. This is not any easy read even though it is not graphic about the rape. The author does a good job of portraying the emotional toll and mental anguish that victims of sexual assault experience. It's not necessarily a book one would say they enjoy reading due to the subject matter but there is a good story and the relationship that develops between Kim and Reese is touching. I guarantee you will spend most of the book hoping that the aggressor gets what he deserves.
I was surprised when I researched the author, Lauren Gallagher, that she is known for writing erotica. Whereas this book did have some sex scenes, this is definitely not a book that falls into that genre. This is more about the story, the experiences of these two women, and the courage it takes to reach out for help as the victim of rape. It's not a long book, but that might be a good thing because once I started reading, I was not able to put it down until I was finished.
The story starts out quickly with a confrontation between Kim and her attacker. I immediately felt my stomach in knots and spent most of the book with an anxious feeling. This is not any easy read even though it is not graphic about the rape. The author does a good job of portraying the emotional toll and mental anguish that victims of sexual assault experience. It's not necessarily a book one would say they enjoy reading due to the subject matter but there is a good story and the relationship that develops between Kim and Reese is touching. I guarantee you will spend most of the book hoping that the aggressor gets what he deserves.
I was surprised when I researched the author, Lauren Gallagher, that she is known for writing erotica. Whereas this book did have some sex scenes, this is definitely not a book that falls into that genre. This is more about the story, the experiences of these two women, and the courage it takes to reach out for help as the victim of rape. It's not a long book, but that might be a good thing because once I started reading, I was not able to put it down until I was finished.
December 20, 2014
Corrective rape is an abhorrent concept yet apparently live and well. In Razor Wire, Ms. Gallagher takes a dark look into the military. Are all military like this no? I would argue that this situation is prevalent in male dominated industries where a woman is not welcome. Kim Lockhoff is the sexy navy officer whose wanted to be in the Navy since she was a kid. Unfortunately her good looks make her prey to men who want to fuck her. In this world, most of the men either want to fuck or kill the woman. That's their mentality and it's sickening.
Ms. Gallagher shows the world of the "old boys" club and how they terrorize females and believe they are above the law. What's worse, even the women turn on each other in this book. The characters here exhibit some of the worst flaws in humanity. It's a sad look on how a woman who doesn't put out is called a bitch and one who does flirt will be called a slut. To make it worse, when a woman finds other women attractive, males in this world believe the women need to go through "corrective rape" so that they are no longer lesbians. Ms. Gallagher pulls no punches as she vilifies essentially every male in this story.
This is an interesting look at what women go through and why some women don't report rape. Sexual harassment is alive and well in this day and age. Whilst readers could argue this is just a story and exaggerated into something impalpable to normal human beings, I wonder if that is really true. This story may be a bit extreme in some senses, but it does contain a kernel of truth. This is what makes the story feel real and more distressing. Ms. Gallagher does a nice job of showing character growth. She also does a good job in the conflict. What is surprising is how this story ends up because it really looked like a no win situation.
The F/f piece to this story is really why I read it. It's difficult to find good f/f tales. Usually it's just porn mind candy. This one is a well written story where two women find they have common experiences and bond over it. Hope is not lost. This story is recommended to f/f readers looking for strength and loyalty among women.
Ms. Gallagher shows the world of the "old boys" club and how they terrorize females and believe they are above the law. What's worse, even the women turn on each other in this book. The characters here exhibit some of the worst flaws in humanity. It's a sad look on how a woman who doesn't put out is called a bitch and one who does flirt will be called a slut. To make it worse, when a woman finds other women attractive, males in this world believe the women need to go through "corrective rape" so that they are no longer lesbians. Ms. Gallagher pulls no punches as she vilifies essentially every male in this story.
This is an interesting look at what women go through and why some women don't report rape. Sexual harassment is alive and well in this day and age. Whilst readers could argue this is just a story and exaggerated into something impalpable to normal human beings, I wonder if that is really true. This story may be a bit extreme in some senses, but it does contain a kernel of truth. This is what makes the story feel real and more distressing. Ms. Gallagher does a nice job of showing character growth. She also does a good job in the conflict. What is surprising is how this story ends up because it really looked like a no win situation.
The F/f piece to this story is really why I read it. It's difficult to find good f/f tales. Usually it's just porn mind candy. This one is a well written story where two women find they have common experiences and bond over it. Hope is not lost. This story is recommended to f/f readers looking for strength and loyalty among women.
June 22, 2019
Bookclub. Do you have one? I am lucky enough to be part of well, the best EVER, and though we are much more than buddy readers now, we still have a blast when we crack open a book together. We are a group of ten and some of our tastes are pretty different.
This bookclub buddy read was a more intimate group because it...well, it was different than usual. What was different? To start with, girly bits. And tough topics made the pages.
I brought a few of my girls along today to chat....
Sheri: We’ve been reading together for what? 3 years now?
Deirdre: Yep, can’t believe it.
Sheri: So when you said, ‘Do you want to read LA’s new book? it’s f/f. Anybody game?’ I didn’t hesitate. You know me, my ears perk up when I hear those two initials and I’m always up for something different. AND lo and behold, I never read the blurb! If I would have, then I would have been better prepared for the third word listed….rape. Ugh, something I typically avoid in my books.
Deirdre: Rape. Abortion. Male privilege. All themes/topics here . . .Well done, no rose colored glasses. These characters felt like real women, people we all know and love .
Jessica: I loved the parts of the book dealing with the rape, pregnancy, almost abortion, her C.O. It’s so rarely nowadays that I read a book that causes an emotional reaction with me. I’ve become very desensitized I think. But with this one, my heart was pounding in places; I felt anxiety and anger and sadness due to all the things that Kim had to deal with. She felt powerless and I felt powerless too.
Deirdre: The meat of this book is dealing with the rape and the unintended pregnancy. The power of male privilege and how it impacts every more these MCs make. the military aspects are fascinating, something the author writings about frequently. Okinawa is the setting of a couple of her m/m books. it was nice to visit again with another couple.
Sheri: Yes! Conduct Unbecoming was one of my favorite of Witt’s. She certainly knows her military bases. Things felt very…factual.
Deirdre: The main couple …you can’t help but cheer for them …I hope they make it. I hope what they have is real. The author did not convince me about the romance. sure, the sex was fun and HOT. this author writes a great sex scene! but the romance???? didn’t feel it . . . I would not care either way if they broke up. The big scene near the end …. Found myself texting a buddy reader channeling Jack Nicholson ‘you can’t handle the truth’ !!!! Good tension building, great descriptions.
Sheri: Completely agree. I wasn’t exactly sold on their love affair turned relationship. Extremely heavy circumstances brought them together initially, but was that enough to keep them together? I can’t say for sure.
Jessica: I agree. The romance never inspired much though. I liked the transitioning of the relationship from acquaintances to friends to lovers, but I wasn’t ever sold on the HEA. The author did a good job of developing it organically I think, especially with so many of the stories I read nowadays being instalust or instalove, but I felt like the two of them had just gotten to the point by the end of the book where the author could start to convince me they were going to make it forever… Except then it was over. Very abruptly and neatly I might add. I would have loved if the book was at least 50 pages longer. It lost something for me for it to be tied up at the end a quickly as it was. It felt anticlimactic after I spent so much of the book emotionally keyed up.
Sheri: I always enjoy alternating POV’s and this time it fit perfectly!
I believe it was crucial to know both of their thoughts. What did you think about the sex? Holy hotness! The first f/f book I read *grumbles* had horrendous intimacy. This one was quite smexy, especially considering the challenges they both were facing during those intimate moments (poor darlings) not to mention the situation they were in.
Deirdre: L a Witt writes damn good sex, lol!! The alternately POVs were great for this…I did need to be in both of their heads. I needed to see what what happens between them as they both came to terms with some awful shit.
Jessica: The sex scenes fell really flat for me.
Deirdre: I gave this 4 stars, but it should be a 3. it is a fine read. kinda flat as far as romance. this feels like a relationship of convenience and a HFN. these two never have that destined feeling, more like…gee, another lesbian is standing here. ok. have at it! I gave it an Extra STAR for tackling tough topics. This author has some guts and I applaud her for that….she has hit other tough topics in other books too, so hats off. I am a fan for that alone.
Sheri: A strong 3.5 from me. Not my favorite from Witt’s bookshelf, but as usual, I’m thankful for this story…and it’s always better with my girls.
Jessica: I thought she actually got right were the emotional aspects of being raped, the almost abortion, and the impotence Kim felt about not being able to do anything about any of it. (I spent the entire book wanting to scoop out Stanton’s balls with a spoon and feed them to him. And his wife-WHAT. A. BITCH.) I thought she wrote all that stuff REALLY well… The rest of it: meh. I’m giving it a 3.
Sheri: Well, there you have it. Three different perspectives with three different ratings. Thanks ladies for swinging by. Can’t wait for our next adventure together. *hugs*
This bookclub buddy read was a more intimate group because it...well, it was different than usual. What was different? To start with, girly bits. And tough topics made the pages.
I brought a few of my girls along today to chat....
Sheri: We’ve been reading together for what? 3 years now?
Deirdre: Yep, can’t believe it.
Sheri: So when you said, ‘Do you want to read LA’s new book? it’s f/f. Anybody game?’ I didn’t hesitate. You know me, my ears perk up when I hear those two initials and I’m always up for something different. AND lo and behold, I never read the blurb! If I would have, then I would have been better prepared for the third word listed….rape. Ugh, something I typically avoid in my books.
Deirdre: Rape. Abortion. Male privilege. All themes/topics here . . .Well done, no rose colored glasses. These characters felt like real women, people we all know and love .
Jessica: I loved the parts of the book dealing with the rape, pregnancy, almost abortion, her C.O. It’s so rarely nowadays that I read a book that causes an emotional reaction with me. I’ve become very desensitized I think. But with this one, my heart was pounding in places; I felt anxiety and anger and sadness due to all the things that Kim had to deal with. She felt powerless and I felt powerless too.
Deirdre: The meat of this book is dealing with the rape and the unintended pregnancy. The power of male privilege and how it impacts every more these MCs make. the military aspects are fascinating, something the author writings about frequently. Okinawa is the setting of a couple of her m/m books. it was nice to visit again with another couple.
Sheri: Yes! Conduct Unbecoming was one of my favorite of Witt’s. She certainly knows her military bases. Things felt very…factual.
Deirdre: The main couple …you can’t help but cheer for them …I hope they make it. I hope what they have is real. The author did not convince me about the romance. sure, the sex was fun and HOT. this author writes a great sex scene! but the romance???? didn’t feel it . . . I would not care either way if they broke up. The big scene near the end …. Found myself texting a buddy reader channeling Jack Nicholson ‘you can’t handle the truth’ !!!! Good tension building, great descriptions.
Sheri: Completely agree. I wasn’t exactly sold on their love affair turned relationship. Extremely heavy circumstances brought them together initially, but was that enough to keep them together? I can’t say for sure.
Jessica: I agree. The romance never inspired much though. I liked the transitioning of the relationship from acquaintances to friends to lovers, but I wasn’t ever sold on the HEA. The author did a good job of developing it organically I think, especially with so many of the stories I read nowadays being instalust or instalove, but I felt like the two of them had just gotten to the point by the end of the book where the author could start to convince me they were going to make it forever… Except then it was over. Very abruptly and neatly I might add. I would have loved if the book was at least 50 pages longer. It lost something for me for it to be tied up at the end a quickly as it was. It felt anticlimactic after I spent so much of the book emotionally keyed up.
Sheri: I always enjoy alternating POV’s and this time it fit perfectly!
I believe it was crucial to know both of their thoughts. What did you think about the sex? Holy hotness! The first f/f book I read *grumbles* had horrendous intimacy. This one was quite smexy, especially considering the challenges they both were facing during those intimate moments (poor darlings) not to mention the situation they were in.
Deirdre: L a Witt writes damn good sex, lol!! The alternately POVs were great for this…I did need to be in both of their heads. I needed to see what what happens between them as they both came to terms with some awful shit.
Jessica: The sex scenes fell really flat for me.
Deirdre: I gave this 4 stars, but it should be a 3. it is a fine read. kinda flat as far as romance. this feels like a relationship of convenience and a HFN. these two never have that destined feeling, more like…gee, another lesbian is standing here. ok. have at it! I gave it an Extra STAR for tackling tough topics. This author has some guts and I applaud her for that….she has hit other tough topics in other books too, so hats off. I am a fan for that alone.
Sheri: A strong 3.5 from me. Not my favorite from Witt’s bookshelf, but as usual, I’m thankful for this story…and it’s always better with my girls.
Jessica: I thought she actually got right were the emotional aspects of being raped, the almost abortion, and the impotence Kim felt about not being able to do anything about any of it. (I spent the entire book wanting to scoop out Stanton’s balls with a spoon and feed them to him. And his wife-WHAT. A. BITCH.) I thought she wrote all that stuff REALLY well… The rest of it: meh. I’m giving it a 3.
Sheri: Well, there you have it. Three different perspectives with three different ratings. Thanks ladies for swinging by. Can’t wait for our next adventure together. *hugs*
February 6, 2015
A solid read. 4.5 stars
June 28, 2022
“I can’t keep carrying this by myself.”
3.5 stars. After a bit of a rough start, I ended up really liking this military romance. I was in the mood for something a bit heavier, and this was definitely that. Naval officer Kim was recently raped by a superior officer, and has just found out that she's pregnant. Reese is another officer with her own trauma who's always disliked Kim for her flirty and flighty reputation. Circumstances throw them together, and they grow closer as the situation escalates and their trauma is explored. This would have been a much better book if it had been longer, imo. Especially with such a tough subject, and especially with the attitude that Reese starts off with. I did feel like her apologies and change of heart were genuine, but they were so abrupt, they carried little to no weight for me. And some of the things Reese says and thinks are so harsh... I just needed more. It was, though, an interesting and all too real commentary on the pervasiveness of rape culture and victim blaming, and how even other victims can perpetuate it.
The romance was actually really good. I thought it would feel rushed, with the relative shortness of the book and the heavy subject matter, but it progressed carefully and meaningfully, if not slowly. They both have to deal with some really ugly stuff in this book, and animosity from a bunch of different sides, and seeing how they leaned on each other and were each other's confidantes was really heartening. This provided a lot of realistic (I think) insight into military misogyny, that typical kind of boys' club mentality, and it made my skin crawl, but I think it was good that the book was so frank and upfront about how bad it can get. But not everything about it was heavy; there were moments of lightness and tenderness between the women that I really loved. Not everything worked for me (no matter the context or how appropriate it is, I have a knee jerk hatred for any compliment along the lines of 'you're prettier without makeup') but I ended up really loving them together. And after how hard they had it... I really like how the ending turned out.
Not something that I'd usually pick up, but I'm glad I gave it a chance, despite my reservations.
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She might’ve whispered a curse into the otherwise silent room, but for all I knew, it was my own heartbeat spelling out my desire for her.
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May 2, 2019Available in December. My first lesbian novel. :) Excerpt available on Riptide's website.
May 1, 2020
This was a fast read. This is definitely a book that has some trigger warnings for people. Sad that it’s a reality of what goes on. Also, you can’t just a book by its cover or rumors you may hear.
February 15, 2021
Overall, I really liked it. I was in need of a femslash romance set in a military environment, and I mostly got what I was hoping for.
Being non American, I don't know much about the power dinamics in the Navy and such, but I got the impression the author really did her research.
At times it felt a little rushed, but I still think it approached heavy themes with respect, and I'm also happy there was at least one male character that wasn't totally shitty. Also, women supporting women!
Being non American, I don't know much about the power dinamics in the Navy and such, but I got the impression the author really did her research.
At times it felt a little rushed, but I still think it approached heavy themes with respect, and I'm also happy there was at least one male character that wasn't totally shitty. Also, women supporting women!
February 19, 2017
Audio book. Good narration. Good story. Not all happy, sappy and nice. A rape, talk of abortion and threats of bodily harm. However, there is a sweet love story in the mix and a real survivors determination.
February 23, 2020
A hard read but worth it. Somehow didn't reach the peak of 5* but impressed (given the subject) that I finished it.
April 26, 2015
Amazing depth to the characters, their emotions and the plot! I felt this one long after I finished the book. This author is not new to me though this is the first time I read her books under this pen name. It's her first f/f and I find that so difficult to believe because this was a solid story any angle you look at it. It's set on a small naval base in Japan and focuses on characters that are all military police. I read a lot of military romance and this was my first military cop read.
It also has the distinction of having rather difficult theme matter too. I guess this will serve as a warning for those with triggers and sensitivities, but this story tackles the subjects of rape, abortion and sexual harassment and intimidation in the workplace.
Whewboy yep, it was a rough emotional ride, but managed to convey emotions, difficulties, triumph, fear, loss and hope within balance. And while it is not my first f/f romance (not that I've read many), it is one of the best one that I've read.
The story opens with MA3 Kim Lockhoff stuck between a rock and a hard place. She is the main topic around the water cooler, the butt of raunchy jokes and comments, and rumored to be knocked-up by the boss. Suddenly, she's That Girl- the slutty one that will sleep with anyone to get ahead in the ranks or just to get some. Unfortunately, the rumor regarding the boss are true and her boss is threatening her to get rid of the evidence that he cheated on his wife and fraternized with a jr. ranking sailor. Not one person on the base will back her if she claims the truth- that she was raped because everyone at that party saw her tipsy and leaving with the man plus she has been the party girl since she got there.
MA2 Reese Marion is asked by her friend and immediate superior to throw an arm around Lockhoff and find out what's going on with her since evidence is pointing toward the fact the woman got herself into trouble with Stanton and might decide to fling some accusations around to cover her own butt. And Reese has a real attitude about women like that. But then she gets Kim's story and she believes it. The woman's troubles are nothing like she imagined and strike too close to home. Reese becomes the only support Kim has because there is no one who Stanton hasn't rallied to seeing things his way. For the first time in years, Reese lets another person past her emotional walls and into her heart. They have a hard fight on their hands, but they will fight it together.
This is one of those stories that feels very insular- the settings are small, the cast is small and the plot doesn't have a ton of stuff going on. The author couldn't have set the tone better for a woman feeling fearful, isolated and alone so that I was right there in Kim's world from the start. This is definitely a story that could have been subtitled 'things aren't always what they seem'. The focus is on Kim's problem with Stanton, her initial conflict and then attraction with Reese, and the quietly intense build up to the end.
The romance is tender and cautious because of the past rape situation. They take stuff slow and get up to some sexy times, but I liked that it felt the appropriate time, level and just enough draw-back to work with the context of the story. More time is spent establishing the relationship on platonic level first and then the other, but it works. Not the story to pick if your looking for some scorching heat.
On a side note, I felt the author did her homework. The backdrop and setting felt pretty authentic to me like I really was with a group of Navy MPs on a naval base with their daily routines, situations, regs and protocol- official and non-official.
To wrap it up, this was an emotionally tough read and not one for the fast-paced action/passion lovers, but still not lacking in tension or romance for all that. I would recommend this one to f/f contemporary romance lovers for sure and for those who are dipping their toes into this niche genre for the first time.
My thanks to Riptide Publishing and Net Galley for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
It also has the distinction of having rather difficult theme matter too. I guess this will serve as a warning for those with triggers and sensitivities, but this story tackles the subjects of rape, abortion and sexual harassment and intimidation in the workplace.
Whewboy yep, it was a rough emotional ride, but managed to convey emotions, difficulties, triumph, fear, loss and hope within balance. And while it is not my first f/f romance (not that I've read many), it is one of the best one that I've read.
The story opens with MA3 Kim Lockhoff stuck between a rock and a hard place. She is the main topic around the water cooler, the butt of raunchy jokes and comments, and rumored to be knocked-up by the boss. Suddenly, she's That Girl- the slutty one that will sleep with anyone to get ahead in the ranks or just to get some. Unfortunately, the rumor regarding the boss are true and her boss is threatening her to get rid of the evidence that he cheated on his wife and fraternized with a jr. ranking sailor. Not one person on the base will back her if she claims the truth- that she was raped because everyone at that party saw her tipsy and leaving with the man plus she has been the party girl since she got there.
MA2 Reese Marion is asked by her friend and immediate superior to throw an arm around Lockhoff and find out what's going on with her since evidence is pointing toward the fact the woman got herself into trouble with Stanton and might decide to fling some accusations around to cover her own butt. And Reese has a real attitude about women like that. But then she gets Kim's story and she believes it. The woman's troubles are nothing like she imagined and strike too close to home. Reese becomes the only support Kim has because there is no one who Stanton hasn't rallied to seeing things his way. For the first time in years, Reese lets another person past her emotional walls and into her heart. They have a hard fight on their hands, but they will fight it together.
This is one of those stories that feels very insular- the settings are small, the cast is small and the plot doesn't have a ton of stuff going on. The author couldn't have set the tone better for a woman feeling fearful, isolated and alone so that I was right there in Kim's world from the start. This is definitely a story that could have been subtitled 'things aren't always what they seem'. The focus is on Kim's problem with Stanton, her initial conflict and then attraction with Reese, and the quietly intense build up to the end.
The romance is tender and cautious because of the past rape situation. They take stuff slow and get up to some sexy times, but I liked that it felt the appropriate time, level and just enough draw-back to work with the context of the story. More time is spent establishing the relationship on platonic level first and then the other, but it works. Not the story to pick if your looking for some scorching heat.
On a side note, I felt the author did her homework. The backdrop and setting felt pretty authentic to me like I really was with a group of Navy MPs on a naval base with their daily routines, situations, regs and protocol- official and non-official.
To wrap it up, this was an emotionally tough read and not one for the fast-paced action/passion lovers, but still not lacking in tension or romance for all that. I would recommend this one to f/f contemporary romance lovers for sure and for those who are dipping their toes into this niche genre for the first time.
My thanks to Riptide Publishing and Net Galley for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.
October 5, 2014
This book touches on a difficult subject - sexual assault, and the story took place at a military base in Okinawa.
The story was less about what happened in details, but rather the emotional journey Kim and Reese went through facing a seemingly no win situation. I like that the book is written in both Kim and Reese's perspective, so you can really feel their struggles, see how they gradually find each other, heal and move forward.
This one's on my re-read list, so I'd encourage you to get a copy and experience the book yourself.
P.S. - I got this review copy from NetGalley.
The story was less about what happened in details, but rather the emotional journey Kim and Reese went through facing a seemingly no win situation. I like that the book is written in both Kim and Reese's perspective, so you can really feel their struggles, see how they gradually find each other, heal and move forward.
This one's on my re-read list, so I'd encourage you to get a copy and experience the book yourself.
P.S. - I got this review copy from NetGalley.
January 13, 2015
Love the characters and the story line. Pulled me in and held my attention.
Although a work of fiction, sadly, the abuse the characters suffered is all too real for many of our enlisted women. If only they could receive the same justice as Kim and Reese.
Although a work of fiction, sadly, the abuse the characters suffered is all too real for many of our enlisted women. If only they could receive the same justice as Kim and Reese.
June 8, 2019
I liked it because I liked how it ended. I cringed a lot of what Kim and Reese had to go through because I know it's something that can and does happen both in the military and as a civilian. This was good.
December 28, 2014
4.5 star review by Roberta
This book came up for review and it sounded really good. I wanted to see how this issue was going to be resolved and I wasn’t disappointed.
Kim Lockhoff is a young woman who is in trouble. She was assaulted/raped by a superior officer and she’s now pregnant with is child. Kim is confused, scared and unsure what to do. She knows that her reputation around the base isn’t good, that she’s the base whore, but she’s really not. Kim is this woman who has had something that most women fear in the back of our minds, rape. She’s trying to deal with this fact as well as the fact that she’s now pregnant by her attacker. Kim has ALWAYS wanted to be in the Navy and to find that her career is in jeopardy…what’s a girl to do? Kim is a wonderful character. She’s tougher than she thinks. Stronger than she’s ever thought herself to be and she’s going to need that strength. To be threatened at every turn…who do you trust and how far is she willing to go?
Reese Marion is the kind of woman that hates the women who joins the Navy and sleep their way to promotions and give women in the military a bad name. Reese only wants to do her job and be left alone, however, her boss seems to keep throwing her into situations in order to put these women on the straight and narrow. Reese is this really powerful character who is hiding a secret of her own. Reese is now thrown into this situation where she has her mind changed and is involved in the life a scared woman who doesn’t have anywhere to turn. Reese is this wonderful character who shows such caring and kindness. She’s not only physically strong, but her heart is really what makes her this great character. To see through the outer shell, the persona that a person throws out and into their heart and soul…what a great person.
This book was so hard to read, if only to read about the way women in the military are viewed…and believe me, it’s not that great. To either be an Ice Queen or The Whore…it’s not fair in the least. You want to join the military as your career and then find out that you can’t just do your job…you’ve not only have to play a political game, but that you also have to find a balance between being one of the guys and still keeping yourself whole and safe. You read about rape in this story. You don’t see it happening on screen but in the retelling…I am putting the caution on this book if this is a trigger for you, as even reading about it afterwards, it hurt my heart. To see how these women were struggling to deal with it…was hard. To hear the comments that were made…made me ABSOLUTLEY FURIOUS!!! I wanted to jump in and rip those bastard’s heads off.
The secondary characters in this book…wow. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to tell you about them. Alejandro Gutierrez is Reese and Kim’s immediate supervisor and believe me…I wondered about this guy. I wasn’t sure how I felt about him. I liked him and then was confused about where he stood and then…just WOW!! Lieutenant Joel Stanton…what a FUCKING JACKASS!! I hated him from the moment he stepped on my kindle page until the end. There was Absolutely Fucking NOTHING about this man that was redeemable. Trust me….I hated him. The way he used his position to bully and try to get his way…I wanted to junk punch that creature!! Stanton’s wife made a brief appearance and I hated her too. I get where she was coming from…I do. She was married to this man and had his children and put up with ALL of his shit throughout their marriage but she liked her position as a military wife and the perks that went with it. However, she came off as just as much of a horrible person as her husband. I can’t get behind that.
There was only a few scenes of intimacy between the characters and I’m glad that is was towards the end of the story. You got to see them become friends first and then lovers. That was really nice to see. That it wasn’t lust first, even if they were both attracted to each other, but to see them bond first…that was really nice. The few scenes that they were intimate….HOLY HANNAH…It Was HOT!!!
This book captured my interest from the beginning. I was so caught up in the lives of these two women and how this was going to be resolved. It was hard watching these two women go through such bullshit and still be able to hold their heads high. I really liked these two women together and the way that they found not only common ground, but that they could lean on each other. What a great story and I fell for the characters. I was along for the ride and was sorry when it ended, but really happy with the results.
Lauren Gallagher…aka…L.A. Witt did a FABULOUS Job with this story. She took something that was really true in life and made it a really great story. Taking down the bad guy….finding your own strength…coming out of an assault and the aftereffects. This story had it all and it was told so very well. The complex story with so many layers and so…just laying it bare. I was so enthralled and captivated…a really great read.
Again…I’d like to repeat my warning about the rape(s) that were described in this book. If assault is a trigger for you or one of your no-no’s…this isn’t the book for you…however, I will say that this book gives so much hope. I really can’t say enough about how wonderful I found this book and I hope that the author comes out with further books.
This is F/F book and that was really nice to read. I hope that you take the chance and read it. I’m really applauding Riptide Publishing for getting into Lesbian books and I can’t wait to read more from them!!
A copy of this book was provided in exchange for an honest review. Please visit www.lovebytesreviews.com to see this and many more reviews, author interviews, guestposts and giveaways!
This book came up for review and it sounded really good. I wanted to see how this issue was going to be resolved and I wasn’t disappointed.
Kim Lockhoff is a young woman who is in trouble. She was assaulted/raped by a superior officer and she’s now pregnant with is child. Kim is confused, scared and unsure what to do. She knows that her reputation around the base isn’t good, that she’s the base whore, but she’s really not. Kim is this woman who has had something that most women fear in the back of our minds, rape. She’s trying to deal with this fact as well as the fact that she’s now pregnant by her attacker. Kim has ALWAYS wanted to be in the Navy and to find that her career is in jeopardy…what’s a girl to do? Kim is a wonderful character. She’s tougher than she thinks. Stronger than she’s ever thought herself to be and she’s going to need that strength. To be threatened at every turn…who do you trust and how far is she willing to go?
Reese Marion is the kind of woman that hates the women who joins the Navy and sleep their way to promotions and give women in the military a bad name. Reese only wants to do her job and be left alone, however, her boss seems to keep throwing her into situations in order to put these women on the straight and narrow. Reese is this really powerful character who is hiding a secret of her own. Reese is now thrown into this situation where she has her mind changed and is involved in the life a scared woman who doesn’t have anywhere to turn. Reese is this wonderful character who shows such caring and kindness. She’s not only physically strong, but her heart is really what makes her this great character. To see through the outer shell, the persona that a person throws out and into their heart and soul…what a great person.
This book was so hard to read, if only to read about the way women in the military are viewed…and believe me, it’s not that great. To either be an Ice Queen or The Whore…it’s not fair in the least. You want to join the military as your career and then find out that you can’t just do your job…you’ve not only have to play a political game, but that you also have to find a balance between being one of the guys and still keeping yourself whole and safe. You read about rape in this story. You don’t see it happening on screen but in the retelling…I am putting the caution on this book if this is a trigger for you, as even reading about it afterwards, it hurt my heart. To see how these women were struggling to deal with it…was hard. To hear the comments that were made…made me ABSOLUTLEY FURIOUS!!! I wanted to jump in and rip those bastard’s heads off.
The secondary characters in this book…wow. I wasn’t sure if I wanted to tell you about them. Alejandro Gutierrez is Reese and Kim’s immediate supervisor and believe me…I wondered about this guy. I wasn’t sure how I felt about him. I liked him and then was confused about where he stood and then…just WOW!! Lieutenant Joel Stanton…what a FUCKING JACKASS!! I hated him from the moment he stepped on my kindle page until the end. There was Absolutely Fucking NOTHING about this man that was redeemable. Trust me….I hated him. The way he used his position to bully and try to get his way…I wanted to junk punch that creature!! Stanton’s wife made a brief appearance and I hated her too. I get where she was coming from…I do. She was married to this man and had his children and put up with ALL of his shit throughout their marriage but she liked her position as a military wife and the perks that went with it. However, she came off as just as much of a horrible person as her husband. I can’t get behind that.
There was only a few scenes of intimacy between the characters and I’m glad that is was towards the end of the story. You got to see them become friends first and then lovers. That was really nice to see. That it wasn’t lust first, even if they were both attracted to each other, but to see them bond first…that was really nice. The few scenes that they were intimate….HOLY HANNAH…It Was HOT!!!
This book captured my interest from the beginning. I was so caught up in the lives of these two women and how this was going to be resolved. It was hard watching these two women go through such bullshit and still be able to hold their heads high. I really liked these two women together and the way that they found not only common ground, but that they could lean on each other. What a great story and I fell for the characters. I was along for the ride and was sorry when it ended, but really happy with the results.
Lauren Gallagher…aka…L.A. Witt did a FABULOUS Job with this story. She took something that was really true in life and made it a really great story. Taking down the bad guy….finding your own strength…coming out of an assault and the aftereffects. This story had it all and it was told so very well. The complex story with so many layers and so…just laying it bare. I was so enthralled and captivated…a really great read.
Again…I’d like to repeat my warning about the rape(s) that were described in this book. If assault is a trigger for you or one of your no-no’s…this isn’t the book for you…however, I will say that this book gives so much hope. I really can’t say enough about how wonderful I found this book and I hope that the author comes out with further books.
This is F/F book and that was really nice to read. I hope that you take the chance and read it. I’m really applauding Riptide Publishing for getting into Lesbian books and I can’t wait to read more from them!!
A copy of this book was provided in exchange for an honest review. Please visit www.lovebytesreviews.com to see this and many more reviews, author interviews, guestposts and giveaways!
December 28, 2017
I've read The Princess and the Porn Star by the same author and I found it a much more romantic and infinitely gentler read. The problem, however, may be the subject matter rather than the fact that Razor Wire is an f/f pairing. Kim is raped by a superior officer and discovers she is pregnant. Her own superior gets another woman, Reese, to talk to her. Reese has heard all the rumours about Kim being the base slut and is reluctant to have anything to do with her.
There is a lot about this that really didn't work for me. Both women were fairly course in there behaviour and language and I couldn't figure out if the characterisation was because they're lesbians or sailors. My rating is more like a two and a half rounded up rather than down.
There is a lot about this that really didn't work for me. Both women were fairly course in there behaviour and language and I couldn't figure out if the characterisation was because they're lesbians or sailors. My rating is more like a two and a half rounded up rather than down.
April 29, 2020
The cover drew me in. The title had me wondering what it could mean. Then I read the story. Even though Razor Wire was fiction, it still held an unbelievable amount of truth which saddens and enrages me.
I am incredibly sorry to the ones who've had to endure such pain and misery during their time in the Military. Thank you for your service.
I do not recommend this book to anyone who may have sensitive triggers or who suffer from PTSD.
I have never been in the Military, but it didn't stop the raw, devastating emotions I felt for MA3 Kim Lockhoff. Even with all the darkness surrounding this story there was a bright light that filtered through, and that bright light was MA2 Reese Marion. She became Kim's strength and voice of reason. Together they were able to fight for justice while facing an exponential amount of backlash from the men who worked side by side with these women.
Razor Wire was one of those stories that filled your heart with rage while simultaneously uplifting it.
I am incredibly sorry to the ones who've had to endure such pain and misery during their time in the Military. Thank you for your service.
I do not recommend this book to anyone who may have sensitive triggers or who suffer from PTSD.
I have never been in the Military, but it didn't stop the raw, devastating emotions I felt for MA3 Kim Lockhoff. Even with all the darkness surrounding this story there was a bright light that filtered through, and that bright light was MA2 Reese Marion. She became Kim's strength and voice of reason. Together they were able to fight for justice while facing an exponential amount of backlash from the men who worked side by side with these women.
Razor Wire was one of those stories that filled your heart with rage while simultaneously uplifting it.
February 5, 2015
And now for something different! I'm trying to expand my horizons :)
I liked this quite a lot, despite the lack of stand-up men. It was a very different reading experience for me—I spent a good chunk of the story enraged in sympathy for Kim and Reese. I hate that this kind of stuff happens in the military, and I hate that women still have to play games just to be accepted—and that's not just in the military and law enforcement. Maybe that's why I prefer M/M; it's a bit more about escapism. But maybe I should pick another F/F, one not focused around such a tough topic.
Anyway, solidly written, as I knew something from LA Witt would be. No regrets about trying something new :)
I liked this quite a lot, despite the lack of stand-up men. It was a very different reading experience for me—I spent a good chunk of the story enraged in sympathy for Kim and Reese. I hate that this kind of stuff happens in the military, and I hate that women still have to play games just to be accepted—and that's not just in the military and law enforcement. Maybe that's why I prefer M/M; it's a bit more about escapism. But maybe I should pick another F/F, one not focused around such a tough topic.
Anyway, solidly written, as I knew something from LA Witt would be. No regrets about trying something new :)
February 3, 2021
Intense and gritty this book is not particularly an easy read but it is gripping. It’s been republished after five years and is still a very strong story with issues issues that remain current.
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July 15, 2019
Razor Wire [Kindle Unlimited] — Em Stevens (24 chapters + Epilogue) July 6-7, 2019
Note: The story follows a sexual assault military case. This may result in trigger episodes for victims of such crimes. This is a story of two consenting female adults in a sexual relationship. Though skipping the sexy bits, which occur later in the book, will not harm the plot, if these kind of circumstances are a concern, skip and red something else.
I really liked this story. It involved two military women and had the feeling of a real situation. The lingo and reactions felt real. The plot progressed naturally. I have very little experience with military life, but I appreciated the writers approach to this story. Kim was assaulted before the story begin and Reese is hiding a terrible secret from her past; the two women come together when Kim requests Reese’s support for her assault and their relationship proceeds from there.
There was too many sexy bits (that happened near the end.) I don’t read stories for that part. Skipping them does not damage the plot in any way. However, there was too much and the plot got stuck in that gear fora little while before it finally emerged on the other side. The chapters rotate between Kim and Reese.
I kind of hesitated to read this as I was worried it might become too suspenseful or scary. But the plot was written appropriately.
A few typos and grammatical errors as it typical for an indie writer. Got this on Kindle Unlimited. Worth the quick read.
Three stars.
Note: The story follows a sexual assault military case. This may result in trigger episodes for victims of such crimes. This is a story of two consenting female adults in a sexual relationship. Though skipping the sexy bits, which occur later in the book, will not harm the plot, if these kind of circumstances are a concern, skip and red something else.
I really liked this story. It involved two military women and had the feeling of a real situation. The lingo and reactions felt real. The plot progressed naturally. I have very little experience with military life, but I appreciated the writers approach to this story. Kim was assaulted before the story begin and Reese is hiding a terrible secret from her past; the two women come together when Kim requests Reese’s support for her assault and their relationship proceeds from there.
There was too many sexy bits (that happened near the end.) I don’t read stories for that part. Skipping them does not damage the plot in any way. However, there was too much and the plot got stuck in that gear fora little while before it finally emerged on the other side. The chapters rotate between Kim and Reese.
I kind of hesitated to read this as I was worried it might become too suspenseful or scary. But the plot was written appropriately.
A few typos and grammatical errors as it typical for an indie writer. Got this on Kindle Unlimited. Worth the quick read.
Three stars.
January 12, 2020
Absolutely disappointing
The story line had so much potential and it started off strong but after five chapters of going in circles about should we no we shouldn't it got tiresome. I won't pretend to understand the rules of military and I know this is a reality most women face scared to death and threatened not to report their assault which is why I expected the book to dive into this I expected from chapter fifteen so they would've made the plunged and made the report not the last chapter, I expected to get court scenes and women coming forward bonding and facing their fears instead we got two lines in an epilogue, I expected her command unit to apologize for their misgivings nothing it's thoroughly disappointing the delivery of this book when it had room for so many things to be discussed.
I know it was a slim chance Reese getting some justice herself but this could've been a stepping stone of protecting fellow women in the Army give them a chance to come forward with their own stories make some changes we could've gotten a side note in the epilogue there's so much this Author could've done with this book. Also a side note would've been useful to reader who are unfamiliar with Military jargon because I have no idea what a MA1 - MA2 means
The story line had so much potential and it started off strong but after five chapters of going in circles about should we no we shouldn't it got tiresome. I won't pretend to understand the rules of military and I know this is a reality most women face scared to death and threatened not to report their assault which is why I expected the book to dive into this I expected from chapter fifteen so they would've made the plunged and made the report not the last chapter, I expected to get court scenes and women coming forward bonding and facing their fears instead we got two lines in an epilogue, I expected her command unit to apologize for their misgivings nothing it's thoroughly disappointing the delivery of this book when it had room for so many things to be discussed.
I know it was a slim chance Reese getting some justice herself but this could've been a stepping stone of protecting fellow women in the Army give them a chance to come forward with their own stories make some changes we could've gotten a side note in the epilogue there's so much this Author could've done with this book. Also a side note would've been useful to reader who are unfamiliar with Military jargon because I have no idea what a MA1 - MA2 means
April 25, 2021
Power and authenticity
This story is so much more than just an F/F romance. I mean, yes it is a lesbian romance, and a very good one at that. But it's so much more.
Razor Wire lays bare the kind of harrassment, humiliation, and assault that women are often subjected to in the military. The book does this with power and authenticity. The abuse that both protagonists are subjected to feels real, as does their fear as the perpetrators skillfully intimidate and abuse them.
And yet the women, traumatized and terrified, connect and bond. Together they struggle to find their strength...
Well, I won't spoil the story. Suffice to say that, while I found some scenes in this book challenging--and all too familiar--I am very glad I read it.
Thank you, Ms. Gallagher, for this amazing and important work.
This story is so much more than just an F/F romance. I mean, yes it is a lesbian romance, and a very good one at that. But it's so much more.
Razor Wire lays bare the kind of harrassment, humiliation, and assault that women are often subjected to in the military. The book does this with power and authenticity. The abuse that both protagonists are subjected to feels real, as does their fear as the perpetrators skillfully intimidate and abuse them.
And yet the women, traumatized and terrified, connect and bond. Together they struggle to find their strength...
Well, I won't spoil the story. Suffice to say that, while I found some scenes in this book challenging--and all too familiar--I am very glad I read it.
Thank you, Ms. Gallagher, for this amazing and important work.
May 11, 2021
Lauren Gallagher has done a splendid job of describing the military culture of rape that endangers so many women in uniform. I encourage every woman, lesbian or straight, to read this so they can become educated in the challenges of the women that have taken an Oath to protect and die for this country.
As a Veteran I would guess at least 60% of women face some type of sexual assault during their careers and I know all of us have had to live with innuendos and verbal discrimination. The biggest insult is putting a statute of limitations on a violent crime, I have always wondered if that would apply to castration? In civilian life my worst issues have been with women who say "you chose to wear a uniform" like that is reason enough to be raped.
The story is beautiful, challenging, uplifting and definitely worth reading.
As a Veteran I would guess at least 60% of women face some type of sexual assault during their careers and I know all of us have had to live with innuendos and verbal discrimination. The biggest insult is putting a statute of limitations on a violent crime, I have always wondered if that would apply to castration? In civilian life my worst issues have been with women who say "you chose to wear a uniform" like that is reason enough to be raped.
The story is beautiful, challenging, uplifting and definitely worth reading.
April 23, 2020
When no doesn’t matter
“There was no solving this. No matter what happened at that clinic on Friday morning, this situation still existed. I’d still been raped by a man with too much power and influence to be afraid of repercussions. I still had to answer to that man.”
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This is an emotional & entertaining story with characters that are so authentic they truly become like real people that live in your world & a compelling, riveting & (unfortunately too common!) believable plot lines that draws you in so effortlessly & subtly without you even noticing. This story is just one example of everything #metoo is alleging, acknowledging, attacking & we are all responsible for actions that allow or against it.
“There was no solving this. No matter what happened at that clinic on Friday morning, this situation still existed. I’d still been raped by a man with too much power and influence to be afraid of repercussions. I still had to answer to that man.”
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This is an emotional & entertaining story with characters that are so authentic they truly become like real people that live in your world & a compelling, riveting & (unfortunately too common!) believable plot lines that draws you in so effortlessly & subtly without you even noticing. This story is just one example of everything #metoo is alleging, acknowledging, attacking & we are all responsible for actions that allow or against it.
June 6, 2019
Pretty accurate
I was in the Army and not the Navy, but some things are always along the same lines. Thank you Ms. Gallagher for getting so much accuracy from so many MAs. This was written with compassion and conviction and I appreciate it. I wish soldiers, sailers, airmen, and Marines did not have to experience nightmares such as these. Thank you for bringing awareness of it while also providing an outcome that is hopeful.
Btw, it never does go away. But finding safe outlets to talk about it, does help. A LOT!
I was in the Army and not the Navy, but some things are always along the same lines. Thank you Ms. Gallagher for getting so much accuracy from so many MAs. This was written with compassion and conviction and I appreciate it. I wish soldiers, sailers, airmen, and Marines did not have to experience nightmares such as these. Thank you for bringing awareness of it while also providing an outcome that is hopeful.
Btw, it never does go away. But finding safe outlets to talk about it, does help. A LOT!
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September 23, 2019Razor Wire
This was a story about how the Navy once treated women years ago. A young woman is sexually assaulted by her Captain following a retirement party on base. She finds out she is pregnant and is told to get rid of she knows what good for her. Her help comes from a source who at first doesn't believe her. This is an excellent story as hopefully this does not happen now. It's also a love story ,but also how sailors thought women were easy targets.
The author Lauren Gallagher wrote an interesting story and it's worth a read. Look forward to reading more by her.
This was a story about how the Navy once treated women years ago. A young woman is sexually assaulted by her Captain following a retirement party on base. She finds out she is pregnant and is told to get rid of she knows what good for her. Her help comes from a source who at first doesn't believe her. This is an excellent story as hopefully this does not happen now. It's also a love story ,but also how sailors thought women were easy targets.
The author Lauren Gallagher wrote an interesting story and it's worth a read. Look forward to reading more by her.
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