This might actually be more of a 2.5 for me, but I'm feeling generous because it includes one of my favorite romance things: the fighter hero. I don't know what's going on there, really. I don't like boxing. I don't like MMA. I suspect that real-life fighters are more macho, aggressive, and overconfident than I could actually enjoy. But give me a fighting romance hero and I am one happy camper.
The problem with this particular book, I think, is that it's not only a novella, but also a prequel. Novellas are challenging because of the compressed timeline. The author needs to jam an entire relationship into 100-150ish pages, making the whole thing believable. It's not easy to do well, and I've only read a handful of romance novellas that I not only enjoyed but also found memorable. (Now that I think about it, this might be a general issue with all short-form fiction. Jamming meaning into such a small space is challenging and takes a lot of skill. It might also be why I have such a problem with short stories...) Lori Foster manages to sidestep some of the most problematic aspects in a romance novella by giving her couple a history together. This makes it easier to believe that they would leap so quickly into "I Love Yous," but doesn't really help with the conflict resolution - which is where this book fell down for me. The heroine was angry and hurt, but she never really expressed that. I find it hard to believe that months of hurt feelings and uncertainty could just be stuffed out of sight and then just dissipate like that.
I think I might have been able to get past even that, though, if I already had some connection to the characters. If this were a between-the-books novella rather than a prequel, a lot of my problems could be resolved through my understanding of the characters and their relationships in the full novels. As it was, I had to not only get invested in the hero and heroine, but learn about their friendships and work and ...just everything. It's asking a lot of such a short story, and a connection to an existing series could only have strengthened it.
Anyhow. I'm still a fan of fighter romances, and plan on trying out this new series when the first full-length book is released. If it's as fun as Foster's SBC series, I'm sure I'll really enjoy it.
**A copy of this book was provided by the publisher via NetGalley
Merged review:
This might actually be more of a 2.5 for me, but I'm feeling generous because it includes one of my favorite romance things: the fighter hero. I don't know what's going on there, really. I don't like boxing. I don't like MMA. I suspect that real-life fighters are more macho, aggressive, and overconfident than I could actually enjoy. But give me a fighting romance hero and I am one happy camper.
The problem with this particular book, I think, is that it's not only a novella, but also a prequel. Novellas are challenging because of the compressed timeline. The author needs to jam an entire relationship into 100-150ish pages, making the whole thing believable. It's not easy to do well, and I've only read a handful of romance novellas that I not only enjoyed but also found memorable. (Now that I think about it, this might be a general issue with all short-form fiction. Jamming meaning into such a small space is challenging and takes a lot of skill. It might also be why I have such a problem with short stories...) Lori Foster manages to sidestep some of the most problematic aspects in a romance novella by giving her couple a history together. This makes it easier to believe that they would leap so quickly into "I Love Yous," but doesn't really help with the conflict resolution - which is where this book fell down for me. The heroine was angry and hurt, but she never really expressed that. I find it hard to believe that months of hurt feelings and uncertainty could just be stuffed out of sight and then just dissipate like that.
I think I might have been able to get past even that, though, if I already had some connection to the characters. If this were a between-the-books novella rather than a prequel, a lot of my problems could be resolved through my understanding of the characters and their relationships in the full novels. As it was, I had to not only get invested in the hero and heroine, but learn about their friendships and work and ...just everything. It's asking a lot of such a short story, and a connection to an existing series could only have strengthened it.
Anyhow. I'm still a fan of fighter romances, and plan on trying out this new series when the first full-length book is released. If it's as fun as Foster's SBC series, I'm sure I'll really enjoy it.
**A copy of this book was provided by the publisher via NetGalley