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His Family Objects: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
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AFTER THEIR UNEXPECTED MEETING AT PEMBERLEY, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet's elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr. Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns.
DARCY FINDS HIMSELF UNABLE TO RETURN to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley's wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union—and that he now agrees with them.
ONLY ONE PERSON could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr. Wickham's name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love.
ELIZABETH STRUGGLES TO SET ASIDE HER LOVE for Mr. Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister's health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring.
AFTER THEIR UNEXPECTED MEETING AT PEMBERLEY, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet's elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr. Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns.
DARCY FINDS HIMSELF UNABLE TO RETURN to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley's wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union—and that he now agrees with them.
ONLY ONE PERSON could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr. Wickham's name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love.
ELIZABETH STRUGGLES TO SET ASIDE HER LOVE for Mr. Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister's health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring.
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Lucy Marin
25 books93 followersLucy Marin developed a love for reading at a young age and whiled away many hours imagining how stories might continue or what would happen if there was a change in the circumstances faced by the protagonists. After reading her first Austen novel, a life-long ardent admiration was borne. Lucy was introduced to the world of Austen variations after stumbling across one at a used bookstore while on holiday in London. This led to the discovery of the online world of Jane Austen Fan Fiction and, soon after, she picked up her pen and began to transfer the stories in her head to paper.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
Lucy lives in Toronto, Canada surrounded by hundreds of books and a loving family. She teaches environmental studies, loves animals and trees and exploring the world around her.
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June 7, 2024
Darcy family pressures leave ODC lovelorn.
With Darcy’s help, the Bennet family has avoided ruin following Lydia’s elopement. Leaving Elizabeth at Longbourn, he promises to return to her, fully expecting to propose, but their happiness is threatened by unforeseen circumstances awaiting him in London, no thanks to Lady Catherine’s interference, and her malicious manipulation on matters which will undermine his plans.
Georgiana’s well-being remains fragile, deeply scarred emotionally following the Ramsgate affair. In this variation, the Fitzwilliam family is aware of her failed elopement with Wickham, and the mental health issues that plague her. While she likes Elizabeth, she fears that a marriage to her brother would place her in company with the man who abused her. Despite his deep love for Elizabeth, for the sake of his sister’s health, Darcy gives in to the overwhelming pressure placed upon him by his family.
“And so, for his sister’s sake, Darcy gave up Elizabeth.”—quote from book
Elizabeth and Darcy are tragically torn apart by his family’s disapproval. Despite everything they feel for each other, each face their private torment—Elizabeth with her shattered hopes and Darcy in his duty-bound sacrifice. The story leaves our dear couple lovelorn, with the stark realization that sometimes love is not enough to overcome all obstacles.
“Part of Elizabeth’s anger was because she felt as though she was being punished for Lydia’s reckless actions. It was not a new sentiment, but it returned stronger than ever. She suffered for her sister’s thoughtless deeds and would in one fashion or another for the rest of her life because, distressingly, knowing how much Mr Darcy had given up for his sister, how far he would go to protect her well-being, Elizabeth loved him more than ever.”—quote from book
A couple of character portrayals provide a surprising contrast—Colonel Fitzwilliam disappoints with an unusual lack of support, while his older brother Viscount Bramwell becomes the only supportive family member—at least for a time. As to Bingley, while ignorant of some of the events taking place, his character is improved and faithfully exhibits a strong brotherly portrayal for his new and ‘favourite’ sister, Elizabeth.
Framed within a love story of broken promises, Lucy Marin has presented an emotional and well-written narrative that gently brings to light the challenges of non-suicidal self-injury (NSSI) within the conservative bounds of Regency society. While this retelling reaches into the more somber aspects of mental health, I love that she beautifully preserves the all-important romance that lies at the heart of ‘Pride and Prejudice’.
Highly recommend. Have some tissues handy.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
June 6, 2024 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman gives her listeners yet another outstanding performance with His Family Objects. She and Lucy Marin made my eyes leak multiple times. Definitely recommend the audiobook version of this book.
With Darcy’s help, the Bennet family has avoided ruin following Lydia’s elopement. Leaving Elizabeth at Longbourn, he promises to return to her, fully expecting to propose, but their happiness is threatened by unforeseen circumstances awaiting him in London, no thanks to Lady Catherine’s interference, and her malicious manipulation on matters which will undermine his plans.
Georgiana’s well-being remains fragile, deeply scarred emotionally following the Ramsgate affair. In this variation, the Fitzwilliam family is aware of her failed elopement with Wickham, and the mental health issues that plague her. While she likes Elizabeth, she fears that a marriage to her brother would place her in company with the man who abused her. Despite his deep love for Elizabeth, for the sake of his sister’s health, Darcy gives in to the overwhelming pressure placed upon him by his family.
“And so, for his sister’s sake, Darcy gave up Elizabeth.”—quote from book
Elizabeth and Darcy are tragically torn apart by his family’s disapproval. Despite everything they feel for each other, each face their private torment—Elizabeth with her shattered hopes and Darcy in his duty-bound sacrifice. The story leaves our dear couple lovelorn, with the stark realization that sometimes love is not enough to overcome all obstacles.
“Part of Elizabeth’s anger was because she felt as though she was being punished for Lydia’s reckless actions. It was not a new sentiment, but it returned stronger than ever. She suffered for her sister’s thoughtless deeds and would in one fashion or another for the rest of her life because, distressingly, knowing how much Mr Darcy had given up for his sister, how far he would go to protect her well-being, Elizabeth loved him more than ever.”—quote from book
A couple of character portrayals provide a surprising contrast—Colonel Fitzwilliam disappoints with an unusual lack of support, while his older brother Viscount Bramwell becomes the only supportive family member—at least for a time. As to Bingley, while ignorant of some of the events taking place, his character is improved and faithfully exhibits a strong brotherly portrayal for his new and ‘favourite’ sister, Elizabeth.
Framed within a love story of broken promises, Lucy Marin has presented an emotional and well-written narrative that gently brings to light the challenges of non-suicidal self-injury (NSSI) within the conservative bounds of Regency society. While this retelling reaches into the more somber aspects of mental health, I love that she beautifully preserves the all-important romance that lies at the heart of ‘Pride and Prejudice’.
Highly recommend. Have some tissues handy.
Kisses only.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review. I also purchased the published version for my Kindle library.
June 6, 2024 - Audiobook
Stevie Zimmerman gives her listeners yet another outstanding performance with His Family Objects. She and Lucy Marin made my eyes leak multiple times. Definitely recommend the audiobook version of this book.
May 21, 2024
A story with no easy answers, presents an emotionally charged read.
Lucy Marin offers us a tale rife with complex characters. The only ones I think who are what they seem is Jane, (even she has her moments) and the ever amiable Bingley.
Elizabeth leaves Lambton with an understanding in place between her and Darcy. However, by the time Jane and Bingley's wedding comes weeks later, she has a feeling her happiness was short lived.
What follows, is a year fraught with emotions for our dear couple and several supporting characters. I found myself both loving and hating, pitying and despising, each one, depending on the scenario. (Perhaps pitying Elizabeth more and despising Col. Fitzwilliam more).
The crux of the issue is what really happened to Georgiana at Ramsgate and the far reaching effect it has on her emotional and mental well being. I loved how the family surrounded her with their love and support. Putting her first above all things. Sadly, this causes the worst of angst for our loving couple, who instinctively have their own opinion on how the situation should be handled. But no one listens to them. Half the time they do not listen to each other.
It takes a desperate act by one, to finally reach a breakthrough, which then opens better communication. The whole ending was lovely and it was the perfect balm after such an emotional roller coaster.
I applaud Ms. Marin for addressing 2 very serious issues in regency era, when there were no real answers. And even to this day do not necessarily get the full compassion and support victims require.
A well written, and thought provoking read.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Lucy Marin offers us a tale rife with complex characters. The only ones I think who are what they seem is Jane, (even she has her moments) and the ever amiable Bingley.
Elizabeth leaves Lambton with an understanding in place between her and Darcy. However, by the time Jane and Bingley's wedding comes weeks later, she has a feeling her happiness was short lived.
What follows, is a year fraught with emotions for our dear couple and several supporting characters. I found myself both loving and hating, pitying and despising, each one, depending on the scenario. (Perhaps pitying Elizabeth more and despising Col. Fitzwilliam more).
The crux of the issue is what really happened to Georgiana at Ramsgate and the far reaching effect it has on her emotional and mental well being. I loved how the family surrounded her with their love and support. Putting her first above all things. Sadly, this causes the worst of angst for our loving couple, who instinctively have their own opinion on how the situation should be handled. But no one listens to them. Half the time they do not listen to each other.
It takes a desperate act by one, to finally reach a breakthrough, which then opens better communication. The whole ending was lovely and it was the perfect balm after such an emotional roller coaster.
I applaud Ms. Marin for addressing 2 very serious issues in regency era, when there were no real answers. And even to this day do not necessarily get the full compassion and support victims require.
A well written, and thought provoking read.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
April 24, 2024
“If I loved you less, I might be able to talk about it more.” (Emma – Jane Austen)
I loved this book but Ms. Marin takes your heart, Elizabeth’s heart, Mr. Darcy’s heart and Georgiana’s heart and squeezes them so tight it hurts. This is an emotional, poignant read so have tissues handy and settle in with a big cup of tea. I had a very hard time putting this book down but one must eat, sleep and deal with daily life. I also feel my review will not do this novel justice.
“When it comes to the point, your family objects, and I am rejected. Goodbye, Mr. Darcy.” (quote from the book)
You can feel Elizabeth’s heart shatter when Mr. Darcy tells her they cannot marry as he hoped. I wanted to rail at him for breaking her heart. But all is not what it seems, and the story unfolds from there. My emotions ran the gamut against certain beloved characters (Colonel Fitzwilliam/Georgiana)
“There was something in her air that hinted at a brittleness, as though one misstep – real or perceived – or one piece of bad news would shatter her.” (quote from the book)
Georgiana’s pain is at the heart of this story and the love Mr. Darcy has for his troubled sister could only endear him more to me. What happened at Ramsgate has greatly impacted her mental state.
“He had loved her for so long and he knew to the core of his being that they were meant to be man and wife.” (quote from the book)
For me, this was a well-executed, beautifully written, emotionally charged variation with great depth. Some may think it is too long, however, I feel the length and seriousness of the story deepens the impact. I highly recommend it!
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my review.
September 21, 2025
Angst is not the human condition; it’s the purgatory between what we have and what we want but cannot get. ~ Miguel Syjugo
I will say this right at the beginning: This is a High-Angst story.
You have been warned.
You can’t be angsty all day, or else it becomes a sort of pale angst. ~ Jim Broadbent
Fitzwilliam Darcy loves Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet loves Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The story begins after Darcy has restored the Bennets to polite society by arranging the marriage of the youngest Bennet to his enemy, George Wickham.
He intends to marry his beloved, but does not propose because of objections from his closest family member, his sister, Georgiana who is plagued by fears which can be brought on just by hearing Wickham’s name. How can she recover if her brother is married to Wickham’s sister-in-law? Mental health issues have few cures, emotional or medical, in Regency England. She needs her brother’s support and he must provide it.
Elizabeth suffers from Darcy’s rejection, especially since she does not listen to his explanation.
Colonel Fitzwilliam, Darcy’s closest friend in most of JAFF, takes a position of support to Georgiana. His brother, the Viscount, is more willing to support Darcy.
Happy Ending Music will play eventually. Wait for it.
The most dangerous lover is one who greets pain with a smile. ~ R. M. Drake
I will say this right at the beginning: This is a High-Angst story.
You have been warned.
You can’t be angsty all day, or else it becomes a sort of pale angst. ~ Jim Broadbent
Fitzwilliam Darcy loves Elizabeth Bennet.
Elizabeth Bennet loves Fitzwilliam Darcy.
The story begins after Darcy has restored the Bennets to polite society by arranging the marriage of the youngest Bennet to his enemy, George Wickham.
He intends to marry his beloved, but does not propose because of objections from his closest family member, his sister, Georgiana who is plagued by fears which can be brought on just by hearing Wickham’s name. How can she recover if her brother is married to Wickham’s sister-in-law? Mental health issues have few cures, emotional or medical, in Regency England. She needs her brother’s support and he must provide it.
Elizabeth suffers from Darcy’s rejection, especially since she does not listen to his explanation.
Colonel Fitzwilliam, Darcy’s closest friend in most of JAFF, takes a position of support to Georgiana. His brother, the Viscount, is more willing to support Darcy.
Happy Ending Music will play eventually. Wait for it.
The most dangerous lover is one who greets pain with a smile. ~ R. M. Drake
May 21, 2024
“Not all battles are visible and neither are the victories.” –Brittany Burgunder
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: themes presented were of an adult nature; there were discussions of the seduction of a minor and the emotional aftermath
>>Angst Level: Ya, think? It’s a Marin novel, after all. Medical preparedness: Have Oxygen on hand, a defib [should your heart stop], smelling salts, a fan, and a medical team on standby as anything could happen. Whew! I survived… barely. They can now start reducing my meds and hopefully release me from the padded… erm… from isolation. Remember my warning about screaming out in shock? Yeah, that didn’t go over well. My neighbors still won’t look me in the eye.
>>Source: Free copy via Booksprout [4-21-24]: I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. Since I am still experiencing shell shock, my thoughts may ramble… sorry. Prologue + 49 Chapters + Epilogue. [4.5 Stars]
>>Trope: [1] NSN [Not-So-Nice] Colonel Fitzwilliam, his parents, and Lady Catherine (of course) [2] Mental Illness of a character:
I knew going in that Marin would tear up my peace. Man, this was brutal. My thoughts were all over the place. My emotions were running high, as was my blood pressure. I needed that oxygen several times as I simply forgot to breathe. I had read an excerpt of the prologue and knew it was going to be bad. It was worse. I tried to not yell out when something shocked me to the core.
“A person with a victim complex loses on constant complaints and objections.” –Sunday Adelaja
I have never hated Wickham [that SBRB] as I did in this story. He was awful. He took advantage of a young girl’s innocence and nearly destroyed the Darcy family and all their relatives together. His actions created such a chasm that they would never be the same. I wanted to pull my hair. I wanted to throw something. I wanted to run screaming through the house. Don’t… for the love of, just don’t. Did you know… the SWAT team doesn’t always knock before entering? And, a Taser hurts like heck – just saying.
“I kept looking for my old self but then, I realized [...] I have not lost myself in the journey. I am still ME… just REDEFINED.” ---Mystqx Skye
SPOILER ALERT: This review may contain *** SPOILERS ***
>>Rating: mature teen: themes presented were of an adult nature; there were discussions of the seduction of a minor and the emotional aftermath
>>Angst Level: Ya, think? It’s a Marin novel, after all. Medical preparedness: Have Oxygen on hand, a defib [should your heart stop], smelling salts, a fan, and a medical team on standby as anything could happen. Whew! I survived… barely. They can now start reducing my meds and hopefully release me from the padded… erm… from isolation. Remember my warning about screaming out in shock? Yeah, that didn’t go over well. My neighbors still won’t look me in the eye.
>>Source: Free copy via Booksprout [4-21-24]: I volunteered to leave a review of my thoughts and opinions. Since I am still experiencing shell shock, my thoughts may ramble… sorry. Prologue + 49 Chapters + Epilogue. [4.5 Stars]
>>Trope: [1] NSN [Not-So-Nice] Colonel Fitzwilliam, his parents, and Lady Catherine (of course) [2] Mental Illness of a character:
I knew going in that Marin would tear up my peace. Man, this was brutal. My thoughts were all over the place. My emotions were running high, as was my blood pressure. I needed that oxygen several times as I simply forgot to breathe. I had read an excerpt of the prologue and knew it was going to be bad. It was worse. I tried to not yell out when something shocked me to the core.
“A person with a victim complex loses on constant complaints and objections.” –Sunday Adelaja
I have never hated Wickham [that SBRB] as I did in this story. He was awful. He took advantage of a young girl’s innocence and nearly destroyed the Darcy family and all their relatives together. His actions created such a chasm that they would never be the same. I wanted to pull my hair. I wanted to throw something. I wanted to run screaming through the house. Don’t… for the love of, just don’t. Did you know… the SWAT team doesn’t always knock before entering? And, a Taser hurts like heck – just saying.
“I kept looking for my old self but then, I realized [...] I have not lost myself in the journey. I am still ME… just REDEFINED.” ---Mystqx Skye
June 3, 2024
This story is not only an angst-fest, but an illogical, nonsensical, dumb version of a Darcy who will always pick Georgiana, and give in to the manipulations of a mentally unbalanced teenager and his sadistic cousin Fitzwilliam.
This means Darcy is NOT honor bound to fulfill his promises to Elizabeth, because his family decided Lizzy is unsuitable, and since he is NOT the Master of his household anymore, he is careless to hurt and wound Elizabeth time and time again over months and years, just so Georgiana won’t feel threatened.
Cnel Fitzwilliam polices Darcy’s actions and feelings, and he gives in to the Cnel’s seniority and authority every time, as a meek subservient puppy — interesting, not!
Also, the plot is not historically sound in the sense that IN ABSOLUTELY NO WAY the “mental health” of an unbalanced, self harming, fragile-seeming teenage girl would be a determining factor for a whole family to dance to her tune, and for 2 ADULTS to renounce their plans, promises, future hopes and overall hapiness.
Realistically, Georgiana would have been sent to a secluded cottage, or to Bedlam, and in view of this specific story, everyone would have been much happier and less tormented for it! It would have saved the characters two years of convoluted suffering, and Georgiana would then maybe be in the hands of responsible adults, and not self-flagelating, whingey, cowardly wimps!
This means Darcy is NOT honor bound to fulfill his promises to Elizabeth, because his family decided Lizzy is unsuitable, and since he is NOT the Master of his household anymore, he is careless to hurt and wound Elizabeth time and time again over months and years, just so Georgiana won’t feel threatened.
Cnel Fitzwilliam polices Darcy’s actions and feelings, and he gives in to the Cnel’s seniority and authority every time, as a meek subservient puppy — interesting, not!
Also, the plot is not historically sound in the sense that IN ABSOLUTELY NO WAY the “mental health” of an unbalanced, self harming, fragile-seeming teenage girl would be a determining factor for a whole family to dance to her tune, and for 2 ADULTS to renounce their plans, promises, future hopes and overall hapiness.
Realistically, Georgiana would have been sent to a secluded cottage, or to Bedlam, and in view of this specific story, everyone would have been much happier and less tormented for it! It would have saved the characters two years of convoluted suffering, and Georgiana would then maybe be in the hands of responsible adults, and not self-flagelating, whingey, cowardly wimps!
May 23, 2024
thin plot
It’s hard to find sympathy for Georgiana, in large part because the reader is kept in the dark too long. Thus, she comes across as a manipulator. Darcy also has nothing going for him except his lack of courage. This is sadly one of those books revolving around the need for A Big Conversation; sadly, that conversation doesn’t happen until the second third of the tale. By then, I knew I didn’t care if Elizabeth and Darcy found their way back to each other.
The plot itself is slow, but I can’t specify which parts could be cut. Finally, why does Jane call her husband “Bingley?”
It’s hard to find sympathy for Georgiana, in large part because the reader is kept in the dark too long. Thus, she comes across as a manipulator. Darcy also has nothing going for him except his lack of courage. This is sadly one of those books revolving around the need for A Big Conversation; sadly, that conversation doesn’t happen until the second third of the tale. By then, I knew I didn’t care if Elizabeth and Darcy found their way back to each other.
The plot itself is slow, but I can’t specify which parts could be cut. Finally, why does Jane call her husband “Bingley?”
November 21, 2024
Review also posted on my blog
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet have a second chance at love.
After being reunited at Pemberley, they forge a loving relationship.
Even the scandal of Lydia Bennet's elopement with George Wickham, doesn't put Darcy off.
Fitzwilliam returns to Meryton with Charles Bingley. Very soon Charles and Jane are betrothed. Both Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth are delighted to be together again.
Darcy doesn't want to steal the limelight from Jane and Bingley, so plans to postpone his proposal until he returns from a two week trip to London.
To Elizabeth's dismay, Darcy doesn't return as promised. Bingley expected him back, but only received vague excuses.
After six long weeks he arrives to act as bestman for Bingley
Darcy takes Elizabeth aside to explain that his family objects to their marriage and he agrees! His explanation is poorly done and only partly finished when Elizabeth walks away, refusing to listen to further excuses.
Georgiana Darcy is mentally, very fragile following her traumatic experience with George Wickham. She finds the thought of being related to him by marriage unbearable.
All the family are adamantly against the marriage for her sake and bring pressure to bear on Darcy. Colonel Fitzwilliam is bordering on irrational in his determination to keep Darcy from Elizabeth.
Fate and the oblivious Charles Bingley, bring things to a head by arriving at Pemberley with Jane and Elizabeth whilst on a house hunting trip.
The pressure of difficult interactions with Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam is hard for Elizabeth to bear, while spending time with Darcy, who she still loves.
The explosion, when it comes shocks everyone involved!
Lucy Marin has produced another five star variation, with angst, longing and a deft handling of the after effects of trauma.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
https://myjaffobsession.blogspot.com/...
Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet have a second chance at love.
After being reunited at Pemberley, they forge a loving relationship.
Even the scandal of Lydia Bennet's elopement with George Wickham, doesn't put Darcy off.
Fitzwilliam returns to Meryton with Charles Bingley. Very soon Charles and Jane are betrothed. Both Fitzwilliam and Elizabeth are delighted to be together again.
Darcy doesn't want to steal the limelight from Jane and Bingley, so plans to postpone his proposal until he returns from a two week trip to London.
To Elizabeth's dismay, Darcy doesn't return as promised. Bingley expected him back, but only received vague excuses.
After six long weeks he arrives to act as bestman for Bingley
Darcy takes Elizabeth aside to explain that his family objects to their marriage and he agrees! His explanation is poorly done and only partly finished when Elizabeth walks away, refusing to listen to further excuses.
Georgiana Darcy is mentally, very fragile following her traumatic experience with George Wickham. She finds the thought of being related to him by marriage unbearable.
All the family are adamantly against the marriage for her sake and bring pressure to bear on Darcy. Colonel Fitzwilliam is bordering on irrational in his determination to keep Darcy from Elizabeth.
Fate and the oblivious Charles Bingley, bring things to a head by arriving at Pemberley with Jane and Elizabeth whilst on a house hunting trip.
The pressure of difficult interactions with Georgiana and Colonel Fitzwilliam is hard for Elizabeth to bear, while spending time with Darcy, who she still loves.
The explosion, when it comes shocks everyone involved!
Lucy Marin has produced another five star variation, with angst, longing and a deft handling of the after effects of trauma.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
September 14, 2024
Angst with a capital A.
The story starts with Bingley and Darcy back in Meryton to propose, but Elizabeth and Darcy decide to let the Bingley’s go first. Darcy has to run to town, but then doesn’t return like he is supposed to until the wedding. The rest is a long list of misunderstandings, not enough information, pining, crying, new friends, some mental illness, forgiveness, and finally happily ever after.
The story starts with Bingley and Darcy back in Meryton to propose, but Elizabeth and Darcy decide to let the Bingley’s go first. Darcy has to run to town, but then doesn’t return like he is supposed to until the wedding. The rest is a long list of misunderstandings, not enough information, pining, crying, new friends, some mental illness, forgiveness, and finally happily ever after.
June 3, 2024
Status: Read May 13-17, 2024
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Review:
4 Heartbreaking & Hopeful Goodreads Stars
“What cannot be cured must be endured.”
Lucy Marin's His Family Objects is a beautifully written story that is both heartbreaking and hopeful.
Mr. Darcy leaves Elizabeth in Hertfordshire with expectations and a promise to return soon from London, but familial duty to his beloved sister leads to Elizabeth being abandoned and feeling betrayed. Elizabeth, being ill-informed of the particulars, struggles with anger, loss, and acceptance. Darcy is heartbroken having to give up the only woman he could ever love and cannot set aside the tiniest sliver of hope for a different future.
The narrative leaves the reader deeply invested in our favorite couple’s emotional journey to happiness. I would recommend to any Pride and Prejudice lover who does not mind a higher level of angst in a variation.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
My Library Notes:
His Family Objects: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
by Lucy Marin
ebook, Advance Review Copy, 361 pages
Expected publication May 20, 2024 by Quills & Quartos Publishing
[ kindle doc ] [ edition not in GR database ]
You will find me here, patiently awaiting you.
AFTER THEIR UNEXPECTED MEETING AT PEMBERLEY, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet’s elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns.
DARCY FINDS HIMSELF UNABLE TO RETURN to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley’s wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union…and that he now agrees with them.
ONLY ONE PERSON could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his wife: his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr Wickham’s name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love.
ELIZABETH STRUGGLES TO SET ASIDE HER LOVE for Mr Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister’s health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring.
Rating: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Review:
4 Heartbreaking & Hopeful Goodreads Stars
“What cannot be cured must be endured.”
Lucy Marin's His Family Objects is a beautifully written story that is both heartbreaking and hopeful.
Mr. Darcy leaves Elizabeth in Hertfordshire with expectations and a promise to return soon from London, but familial duty to his beloved sister leads to Elizabeth being abandoned and feeling betrayed. Elizabeth, being ill-informed of the particulars, struggles with anger, loss, and acceptance. Darcy is heartbroken having to give up the only woman he could ever love and cannot set aside the tiniest sliver of hope for a different future.
The narrative leaves the reader deeply invested in our favorite couple’s emotional journey to happiness. I would recommend to any Pride and Prejudice lover who does not mind a higher level of angst in a variation.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
My Library Notes:
His Family Objects: A Pride and Prejudice Variation
by Lucy Marin
ebook, Advance Review Copy, 361 pages
Expected publication May 20, 2024 by Quills & Quartos Publishing
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AFTER THEIR UNEXPECTED MEETING AT PEMBERLEY, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet’s elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns.
DARCY FINDS HIMSELF UNABLE TO RETURN to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley’s wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union…and that he now agrees with them.
ONLY ONE PERSON could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his wife: his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr Wickham’s name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love.
ELIZABETH STRUGGLES TO SET ASIDE HER LOVE for Mr Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister’s health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring.
December 9, 2024
A beautifully written, angsty story. The emotions were so tangible and raw that they will tear your heart and make you reach for your tissue box. The resolution was beautiful and so warm.
July 9, 2024
Seeing each other again at Pemberley brings Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet a second chance at love. Not even Lydia's elopement is able to draw them apart, they are determined to see each other again at Longbourn. Darcy returns but can only briefly stay because he has matters in town he needs to settle. He promises to return in a fortnight. Elizabeth, sure that she will be an engaged woman after his return, waits patiently for him but he only returns much later for Jane's and Bingley's wedding. Darcy is heartbroken but making Elizabeth an offer is impossible for him. Since the events of Ramsgate his sister is of a fragile health and the shire possibility to be in a room with, let alone be related to, the sister-in-law of THAT man worsens her condition, thus Darcy's family violently objects and Darcy has no chance but, for the sake of his sister, to abandon Elizabeth.
Will they both be able to set aside their love and continue with their lives? Or is there a slime chance of a future together? And, given there is a chance, will they be able to trust each other again?
The story is very well written by the author Lucy Marin. A sad but wonderful story.
The story is a very emotional ride, I experienced so many different feelings while reading.
I was sad together with Darcy and Elizabeth because they are heartbroken. I often cried and grieved with them. And I felt so much regret. They want to be together and cannot, and Georgina blames herself for her brother's suffering but is not able to allow Elizabeth as a part of her life because of her health issues.
But I was also furry and annoyed with Darcy's relations because of their interference and because they caused Darcy and Elizabeth so much heartache. I find it tragic that his relatives use Georgiana's fears to further separate Darcy and Elizabeth instead of trying to convince Georgina that it is Wickham she fears and not Elizabeth. They want Darcy to give up everything, even the memory of Elizabeth, but they, on their part, do nothing to help the siblings to deal with the situation and they don't offer any help.
Elizabeth relations, especially Jane and Bingley, are definitely more helpful. I like their support of Elizabeth and that they care deeply for her and would do anything to see her happy.
I definitely like the way the problem was solved at the end - in my opinion the best way.
The only thing I want to criticize a bit: in my opinion Darcy's family was too fast with declaring Elizabeth the person who may prevent Georgiana's healing. There may have been better ways than immediately demanding a separation of Darcy and Elizabeth.
And Elizabeth offers, in my opinion, a bit too soon and to eager her forgiveness concerning Darcy's relatives. They had blamed her out of nothing and they could have probably done so again. I, for my part, would surely not have been so forgiving. But that definitely does not diminish the magic of the story.
There are no real villains in the story that keep ODC apart. You may consider some of Darcy's relatives as villains because they are vehemently against Elizabeth, but in the end they recognize their errors, ask for forgiveness and act differently. Due to that I was not able to consider them as real mean persons.
If you like to know if Darcy and Elizabeth will find a way to love and a future together with his family objecting against their alliance you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Will they both be able to set aside their love and continue with their lives? Or is there a slime chance of a future together? And, given there is a chance, will they be able to trust each other again?
The story is very well written by the author Lucy Marin. A sad but wonderful story.
The story is a very emotional ride, I experienced so many different feelings while reading.
I was sad together with Darcy and Elizabeth because they are heartbroken. I often cried and grieved with them. And I felt so much regret. They want to be together and cannot, and Georgina blames herself for her brother's suffering but is not able to allow Elizabeth as a part of her life because of her health issues.
But I was also furry and annoyed with Darcy's relations because of their interference and because they caused Darcy and Elizabeth so much heartache. I find it tragic that his relatives use Georgiana's fears to further separate Darcy and Elizabeth instead of trying to convince Georgina that it is Wickham she fears and not Elizabeth. They want Darcy to give up everything, even the memory of Elizabeth, but they, on their part, do nothing to help the siblings to deal with the situation and they don't offer any help.
Elizabeth relations, especially Jane and Bingley, are definitely more helpful. I like their support of Elizabeth and that they care deeply for her and would do anything to see her happy.
I definitely like the way the problem was solved at the end - in my opinion the best way.
The only thing I want to criticize a bit: in my opinion Darcy's family was too fast with declaring Elizabeth the person who may prevent Georgiana's healing. There may have been better ways than immediately demanding a separation of Darcy and Elizabeth.
And Elizabeth offers, in my opinion, a bit too soon and to eager her forgiveness concerning Darcy's relatives. They had blamed her out of nothing and they could have probably done so again. I, for my part, would surely not have been so forgiving. But that definitely does not diminish the magic of the story.
There are no real villains in the story that keep ODC apart. You may consider some of Darcy's relatives as villains because they are vehemently against Elizabeth, but in the end they recognize their errors, ask for forgiveness and act differently. Due to that I was not able to consider them as real mean persons.
If you like to know if Darcy and Elizabeth will find a way to love and a future together with his family objecting against their alliance you should definitely read this excellent book.
I highly recommend it.
I received a free copy of this book via booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
July 10, 2024
Georgiana is much too coddled. And most of the family, including the colonel, are completely ridiculous. It just angered me reading this book.
May 21, 2024
RATING: 4.5
I have read and enjoyed many of Lucy Marin's Pride and Prejudice variations, so I was so excited to hear that she was coming out with a new novel.
In His Family Objects, we begin not too long after Darcy helps to discover Lydia and arrange her marriage to George Wickham. Returning to Longbourn with Bingley, Darcy is able to spend time with Elizabeth, whose feelings have certainly changed. Marin weaves some wonderfully tender moments as Darcy and Elizabeth finally seem to be on the same page and begin hoping for a future together. Darcy is called back to town and while there is no formal engagement between them, Elizabeth hopes it will only be a matter of time.
Unfortunately, temporary disappointment and heart ache abound as Darcy pressured by various members of his family is forced to give up his dream of one day marrying the only woman he knows he can love because of his duties as a brother to an emotionally vulnerable Georgiana. Elizabeth soon realizes that Darcy is not returning and she must bear the pain of Darcy's rejection nearly entirely on her own, struggling to get her heart to forget the man she began to fall for during her visit to Pemberley.
Marin takes her readers on one intense roller coaster of emotions. It was painful to watch Darcy sacrifice his future happiness with the woman he loves for the other woman in his life whom he loves dearly and has sworn to protect above all else. While I expected some terrible motivations from Lady Catherine, I will not lie that I was completely at my wit's end watching Colonel Fitzwilliam become so overbearing that he was willing to almost irrevocably damage a closeness to a cousin who is practically like a brother to him. Thank goodness for his older brother the Viscount whose humor and very practical way of looking at things was a much needed breath of fresh air when things got more than a little intense. The way that he stood up for Darcy just made me love him that much more.
Through Georgiana's story, Marin also delivers a very touching, nuanced and poignant representation of what it can mean to suffer with emotional trauma and the effect that can have on one's family, who often feel powerless in trying to support someone who is struggling with this type of pain. Watching Elizabeth demonstrate such empathy and patience with Georgiana after losing so much herself, just made me as a reader fall in love with her character all over again.
This is another beautifully crafted alternate take on the classic, but prepare yourself, as the angst and pain in this one is no joke. I found myself heartbroken so many times over for our main couple because of the challenges they faced and the time they lost. However, without spoiling what happens, have faith that Darcy and Elizabeth will not go down without fighting for that which they cherish the most--a chance to be with the one who has claimed their heart.
I have read and enjoyed many of Lucy Marin's Pride and Prejudice variations, so I was so excited to hear that she was coming out with a new novel.
In His Family Objects, we begin not too long after Darcy helps to discover Lydia and arrange her marriage to George Wickham. Returning to Longbourn with Bingley, Darcy is able to spend time with Elizabeth, whose feelings have certainly changed. Marin weaves some wonderfully tender moments as Darcy and Elizabeth finally seem to be on the same page and begin hoping for a future together. Darcy is called back to town and while there is no formal engagement between them, Elizabeth hopes it will only be a matter of time.
Unfortunately, temporary disappointment and heart ache abound as Darcy pressured by various members of his family is forced to give up his dream of one day marrying the only woman he knows he can love because of his duties as a brother to an emotionally vulnerable Georgiana. Elizabeth soon realizes that Darcy is not returning and she must bear the pain of Darcy's rejection nearly entirely on her own, struggling to get her heart to forget the man she began to fall for during her visit to Pemberley.
Marin takes her readers on one intense roller coaster of emotions. It was painful to watch Darcy sacrifice his future happiness with the woman he loves for the other woman in his life whom he loves dearly and has sworn to protect above all else. While I expected some terrible motivations from Lady Catherine, I will not lie that I was completely at my wit's end watching Colonel Fitzwilliam become so overbearing that he was willing to almost irrevocably damage a closeness to a cousin who is practically like a brother to him. Thank goodness for his older brother the Viscount whose humor and very practical way of looking at things was a much needed breath of fresh air when things got more than a little intense. The way that he stood up for Darcy just made me love him that much more.
Through Georgiana's story, Marin also delivers a very touching, nuanced and poignant representation of what it can mean to suffer with emotional trauma and the effect that can have on one's family, who often feel powerless in trying to support someone who is struggling with this type of pain. Watching Elizabeth demonstrate such empathy and patience with Georgiana after losing so much herself, just made me as a reader fall in love with her character all over again.
This is another beautifully crafted alternate take on the classic, but prepare yourself, as the angst and pain in this one is no joke. I found myself heartbroken so many times over for our main couple because of the challenges they faced and the time they lost. However, without spoiling what happens, have faith that Darcy and Elizabeth will not go down without fighting for that which they cherish the most--a chance to be with the one who has claimed their heart.
June 27, 2024
Super interesting
A completely unexplored (at least for me) approach. I found the book gripping and it made me think that we still don't know that much about emotional damage. A very engaging read.
A completely unexplored (at least for me) approach. I found the book gripping and it made me think that we still don't know that much about emotional damage. A very engaging read.
May 21, 2024
Kudos for a plot line that I have often wondered hasn’t been explored more. However it was just too drawn out for me and feel it would have made a better novella than a book of such length. When you know a HEA is coming but it is constantly deferred by variations on one theme then you need a stronger story to flesh out the tale. Some things also didn’t ring true for me - particularly the attitudes and behaviour of Colonel Fitzwilliam and Charles Bingley. I wanted to like this book as the Prologue had me quite excited but unfortunately I quickly found myself skipping pages in an effort to finish it.
May 21, 2024
Angstfest!
Good writing, interesting characterizations, but tons of angst, plenty of secrets and some lies. We move from one confrontation to another as we leave canon shortly after Darcy arranges Lydia's marriage to Wickham. Darcy is irresolute, Colonel Fitzwilliam is a rude and unfriendly opponent, Lady Catherine is her usual nasty self, Bingley is grown up, Lizzy still jumps to conclusions, and Georgiana is a mentally ill disaster. Essentially, a clinically depressed 16-year-old orchestrates the lives of her extended family members during an era when mental illness is barely understood. Last 15-20% gives us an HEA.
Good writing, interesting characterizations, but tons of angst, plenty of secrets and some lies. We move from one confrontation to another as we leave canon shortly after Darcy arranges Lydia's marriage to Wickham. Darcy is irresolute, Colonel Fitzwilliam is a rude and unfriendly opponent, Lady Catherine is her usual nasty self, Bingley is grown up, Lizzy still jumps to conclusions, and Georgiana is a mentally ill disaster. Essentially, a clinically depressed 16-year-old orchestrates the lives of her extended family members during an era when mental illness is barely understood. Last 15-20% gives us an HEA.
May 26, 2024
3.5 rounded up to 4 stars
LOTS of angst here. As if Elizabeth and Darcy haven't already gone through enough to get to the end of Pride and Prejudice happily assured of the other's love, now they'll go through even more between THAT and their wedding, according to this accounting.
Almost immediately upon returning to Herfordshire with Bingley to reunite him with Jane Bennet, Darcy seems ecstatic to come to an understanding with Elizabeth just short of becoming engaged. The two decide to wait, allowing time for the other couple to become reacquainted and Darcy to manage some business in London. He expects to be gone only a week while Bingley remains behind to make amends for his abandonment and woo his lady. Around the time Darcy is expected back, Lady Catherine shows up instead and confronts Elizabeth, as per usual. She's particularly incensed about the idea of him connecting himself in any way with Wickham.
What's less usual is that, despite his promise, Darcy doesn't return. He sends no word to Elizabeth explaining why. By the time he comes back for Bingley's wedding, she has been secretly heartbroken and angry with him for weeks. She unleases her fury at him, refusing to hear his excuse.
It turns out that it's a good one. Darcy is as torn up inside as Elizabeth and, as the title suggests, it does involve his family.
The basic storyline is great, and the dialogue and narrative phrasing are excellent. The book is well edited, so there are no distracting errors.
However, all the torment, the regrets, the recriminations seem belabored. It's a long book, and it feels even longer The author has a tendency to live in her characters' minds too much, repetitively describing thoughts that are obvious rather than moving the plot along more purposefully - and there are plenty of plot developments along the way, so it's not as though nothing is happening. But things tend to come to a standstill as, whether separated or in the same room yearning for each other, Elizabeth and Darcy inwardly moan about how miserable they are.
It's a very good book, but not one that kept my interest throughout.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review..
LOTS of angst here. As if Elizabeth and Darcy haven't already gone through enough to get to the end of Pride and Prejudice happily assured of the other's love, now they'll go through even more between THAT and their wedding, according to this accounting.
Almost immediately upon returning to Herfordshire with Bingley to reunite him with Jane Bennet, Darcy seems ecstatic to come to an understanding with Elizabeth just short of becoming engaged. The two decide to wait, allowing time for the other couple to become reacquainted and Darcy to manage some business in London. He expects to be gone only a week while Bingley remains behind to make amends for his abandonment and woo his lady. Around the time Darcy is expected back, Lady Catherine shows up instead and confronts Elizabeth, as per usual. She's particularly incensed about the idea of him connecting himself in any way with Wickham.
What's less usual is that, despite his promise, Darcy doesn't return. He sends no word to Elizabeth explaining why. By the time he comes back for Bingley's wedding, she has been secretly heartbroken and angry with him for weeks. She unleases her fury at him, refusing to hear his excuse.
It turns out that it's a good one. Darcy is as torn up inside as Elizabeth and, as the title suggests, it does involve his family.
The basic storyline is great, and the dialogue and narrative phrasing are excellent. The book is well edited, so there are no distracting errors.
However, all the torment, the regrets, the recriminations seem belabored. It's a long book, and it feels even longer The author has a tendency to live in her characters' minds too much, repetitively describing thoughts that are obvious rather than moving the plot along more purposefully - and there are plenty of plot developments along the way, so it's not as though nothing is happening. But things tend to come to a standstill as, whether separated or in the same room yearning for each other, Elizabeth and Darcy inwardly moan about how miserable they are.
It's a very good book, but not one that kept my interest throughout.
Content is clean.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review..
October 14, 2024
I loved it!
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. After their unexpected meeting at Pemberley, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet’s elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns. Darcy finds himself unable to return to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley’s wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union, and that he now agrees with them. Only one person could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his wife and this is his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr Wickham’s name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love. Elizabeth struggles to set aside her love for Mr Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister’s health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
It was so enticing that I couldn’t put it down, this book grabbed my interest from the very first page. I couldn’t put it down, I had to know what happened next. The story is well written with a very good storyline. You will see the most beloved characters in a whole new way. This is a Jane Austen's Pride and Prejudice variation. After their unexpected meeting at Pemberley, Elizabeth Bennet believes that she and Mr Fitzwilliam Darcy have been afforded a second chance at love. Even with the news of Lydia Bennet’s elopement with George Wickham could surely only delay their happily ever after. After his visit to Longbourn in the autumn, Mr Darcy must go to London but promises to return within a fortnight. Elizabeth does not doubt an engagement will result then once he returns. Darcy finds himself unable to return to Hertfordshire until his friend Bingley’s wedding to Miss Jane Bennet. Heartbroken, he then knows it is impossible for him to make an offer of marriage to Elizabeth Bennet. Feeling he owes her some explanation, he informs her that his family is against their union, and that he now agrees with them. Only one person could prevent him from begging Elizabeth to be his wife and this is his beloved, fragile sister. Georgiana Darcy cannot bear to even hear Mr Wickham’s name, much less imagine her own brother related to the scoundrel. For his sister, Darcy will give up the only woman he could ever love. Elizabeth struggles to set aside her love for Mr Darcy, while he attempts to find it within himself to wish her happy with another man. After all, he can offer her nothing while his sister’s health remains uncertain. When circumstance brings them together, a shocking crisis occurs, causing both to once again question what their future might bring. So with all that and more this story pulls you in and holds you tight. I highly recommend to everyone.
May 23, 2024
This book challenges the "all you need is love" philosophy, even for a couple as iconic as Fitzwilliam Darcy and Elizabeth Bennet. The couple are already in love and planning their happily ever after as the story begins. The angst here is not them learning to love, but circumstances making their union seem impossible despite that love.
Georgiana is at the heart of the story. Her experience with Wickham was much worse here than in canon. Wickham acted even more despicably and Georgiana's wounds were much deeper. She had her family including Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his parents and brother all rallying around her to protect her and try and aid in her recovery. Unfortunately, the traumatic events changed her and scarred her and she required much effort and support. Georgiana does not dislike Elizabeth and is, in fact, in favor of the marriage until it is discovered that Darcy's intended bride was now sister to the very man who almost destroyed her. This puts Georgiana in a tailspin and the family circle the wagons to protect her, even if it means insisting Darcy give up Elizabeth.
This is a very emotional story and, aside from Wickham, I don't know that there are really any villains. It's more just a very difficult situation with no easy answer or solution that would allow things to fall into place. This story is very well written and complex. I'm not sure I can completely embrace the way Darcy abandons Elizabeth without returning as planned to at least let her know their relationship is not going to work, but for the sake of the plot, I went with it. It's engaging and with an interesting plot. It is a long book and, while I enjoyed it, I did feel that it began to drag in parts. ODC did, of course, eventually find their HEA and it was worth the wait.
Georgiana is at the heart of the story. Her experience with Wickham was much worse here than in canon. Wickham acted even more despicably and Georgiana's wounds were much deeper. She had her family including Darcy, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his parents and brother all rallying around her to protect her and try and aid in her recovery. Unfortunately, the traumatic events changed her and scarred her and she required much effort and support. Georgiana does not dislike Elizabeth and is, in fact, in favor of the marriage until it is discovered that Darcy's intended bride was now sister to the very man who almost destroyed her. This puts Georgiana in a tailspin and the family circle the wagons to protect her, even if it means insisting Darcy give up Elizabeth.
This is a very emotional story and, aside from Wickham, I don't know that there are really any villains. It's more just a very difficult situation with no easy answer or solution that would allow things to fall into place. This story is very well written and complex. I'm not sure I can completely embrace the way Darcy abandons Elizabeth without returning as planned to at least let her know their relationship is not going to work, but for the sake of the plot, I went with it. It's engaging and with an interesting plot. It is a long book and, while I enjoyed it, I did feel that it began to drag in parts. ODC did, of course, eventually find their HEA and it was worth the wait.
May 25, 2024
4.5 rounded up to 5 stars
This long story has a lot of angst which I do enjoy. That angst centers around Darcy, Elizabeth and Georgiana. Yes, in this story, Ramsgate has affected Georgiana's mental health and she has begun to self-injury.
So it is that with that plus the fact that his family is against the engagement, Darcy does not follow through with his intentions to offer for Elizabeth. He has arranged the marriage of Lydia and Wickham. However, that makes Wickham Elizabeth's brother and Georgiana now fears that she will no only hear him spoken of but also the possibility that he might show up at the Darcys' door with Lydia.
Lady Catherine sparks those latter fears of Georgiana's when she confronts Elizabeth about Darcy's intentions and then travels on to London and spills that information to Georgiana...not at all in a gentle manner.
We also have Jane and Bingley marrying and Elizabeth goes to live with them. So it is that she travels with them looking for a property to buy and, of course, stays with them as they show up at Pemberley.
This is a long story so there is much I cannot hint at. A Mr. Grey does show interest in Elizabeth, and she asks him for time, hoping that her feelings for Darcy will fade away.
The Colonel is not supportive of Darcy in this tale as his role as one of Georgiana's guardians has him putting her needs before Darcy's.
I do recommend this story but know going it that it is high in angst.
This long story has a lot of angst which I do enjoy. That angst centers around Darcy, Elizabeth and Georgiana. Yes, in this story, Ramsgate has affected Georgiana's mental health and she has begun to self-injury.
So it is that with that plus the fact that his family is against the engagement, Darcy does not follow through with his intentions to offer for Elizabeth. He has arranged the marriage of Lydia and Wickham. However, that makes Wickham Elizabeth's brother and Georgiana now fears that she will no only hear him spoken of but also the possibility that he might show up at the Darcys' door with Lydia.
Lady Catherine sparks those latter fears of Georgiana's when she confronts Elizabeth about Darcy's intentions and then travels on to London and spills that information to Georgiana...not at all in a gentle manner.
We also have Jane and Bingley marrying and Elizabeth goes to live with them. So it is that she travels with them looking for a property to buy and, of course, stays with them as they show up at Pemberley.
This is a long story so there is much I cannot hint at. A Mr. Grey does show interest in Elizabeth, and she asks him for time, hoping that her feelings for Darcy will fade away.
The Colonel is not supportive of Darcy in this tale as his role as one of Georgiana's guardians has him putting her needs before Darcy's.
I do recommend this story but know going it that it is high in angst.
July 27, 2025
I wanted to like this one more than I did. The entire book was angst filled and with the same problem the whole time. I was more interested in how Bingley acted as a brother in law to Elizabeth than how Darcy and Elizabeth acted to be a couple. This may sound like a tangent, but I convinced my dad who never read fiction to read Pride & Prejudice. I didn't think he would make it through the book but he dutifully trudged along as he sat by my mother's side as her health failed. When he finished the book I asked what he thought about it. His response was only to say, "I thought Lizzy would NEVER get married". I've never felt that way about P&P but that is how I felt in this book. All the angst for way too long. And nothing really new to give the reader hope that it would work out eventually. I began to fear that this would be one of those books where Lizzy would marry someone else and then they'd see each other in their old age and think of what might have been. And I'd hate it. Parts of the story were more interesting but it was just too long. I would have liked it better in a shortened version.
As far as the audio narration goes, I have no complaints about that. Stevie Zimmerman always does a great job.
As far as the audio narration goes, I have no complaints about that. Stevie Zimmerman always does a great job.
May 25, 2024
Why does his family object? Who do they object to? What does Darcy do? What does Georgiana hold against Elizabeth? Lady Catherine will have her say as she always does. How will Elizabeth respond? How does this play out? Will Elizabeth and Darcy ever be allowed to come together?
Much pain was felt by all. All of the characters will grow and mature. Trust and love are required for our dear couple to have their happily ever after.
This story has angst for the characters and was felt by the reader. I shed tears as the story progressed. Beware there is an inuendo of a sexual nature. The story depends on this event. It was well written.
I read the story over several hours with a cup of hot tea within reach.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Much pain was felt by all. All of the characters will grow and mature. Trust and love are required for our dear couple to have their happily ever after.
This story has angst for the characters and was felt by the reader. I shed tears as the story progressed. Beware there is an inuendo of a sexual nature. The story depends on this event. It was well written.
I read the story over several hours with a cup of hot tea within reach.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 4, 2024
"Not for the world do I want my sister to see how…how difficult this is for me. She suffers enough. She suffers, I suffer, Elizabeth suffers—when does it end? How much more shall I be asked to sacrifice?"
That was heartbreaking. So much heart ache, no real villain (other than the obvious) but still there is much sometimes intentional, sometimes unintentional, sometimes casual and sometimes out-of-ignorance cruelty that your heart bleeds for Darcy, Elizabeth and Georgiana.
I have no words (other than obviously rambling ones); Lucy Marin has words. Poignant words. Tear-jerking words and at last hopeful and love filled words. Go read them. You won't be sorry.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
That was heartbreaking. So much heart ache, no real villain (other than the obvious) but still there is much sometimes intentional, sometimes unintentional, sometimes casual and sometimes out-of-ignorance cruelty that your heart bleeds for Darcy, Elizabeth and Georgiana.
I have no words (other than obviously rambling ones); Lucy Marin has words. Poignant words. Tear-jerking words and at last hopeful and love filled words. Go read them. You won't be sorry.
I received a free copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving a review.
May 22, 2024
Angst fest!
E&D are put through a year and a half of mutual anguish. Elizabeth has not been jilted, but it is nearly so. Throughout the story we find out Darcy’s reason for abandoning Elizabeth which is related to Georgiana’s poor mental health. There are added elements that contribute to Georgiana’s extreme anxiety. Elizabeth is treated with disdain (never Darcy, though). Even Colonel Fitzwilliam who is usually supportive is an opposing force. I cried so many times, especially for Elizabeth, but a few times for Darcy who is put in a difficult position. If there’s any relief during this painful separation, it is the constancy of E&D’s love. The HEA is left for nearly the end. Elizabeth gets the apologies she deserves from the Fitzwilliam clan.
E&D are put through a year and a half of mutual anguish. Elizabeth has not been jilted, but it is nearly so. Throughout the story we find out Darcy’s reason for abandoning Elizabeth which is related to Georgiana’s poor mental health. There are added elements that contribute to Georgiana’s extreme anxiety. Elizabeth is treated with disdain (never Darcy, though). Even Colonel Fitzwilliam who is usually supportive is an opposing force. I cried so many times, especially for Elizabeth, but a few times for Darcy who is put in a difficult position. If there’s any relief during this painful separation, it is the constancy of E&D’s love. The HEA is left for nearly the end. Elizabeth gets the apologies she deserves from the Fitzwilliam clan.
June 4, 2024
Not what I was expecting of this book but enjoyed it.
Tried to think of something that annoyed me or out of place in this book but could find.none. Hence the Five Stars.
I was impressed by her understanding of and the.effects of mental illness on the person and the family around them.
Having suffered Reactive.Depression myself and have close family members who cope.with Mental Health issues I was intrigued how the author would.handle the issue. It was sensitive and did not gloss over the strain and horror that the person and family,friends have dealt with.
Need I say that the road.to the altar is a twisty turny one. Enjoy.
Tried to think of something that annoyed me or out of place in this book but could find.none. Hence the Five Stars.
I was impressed by her understanding of and the.effects of mental illness on the person and the family around them.
Having suffered Reactive.Depression myself and have close family members who cope.with Mental Health issues I was intrigued how the author would.handle the issue. It was sensitive and did not gloss over the strain and horror that the person and family,friends have dealt with.
Need I say that the road.to the altar is a twisty turny one. Enjoy.
January 23, 2025
A lengthy period of angst
Per the reviews & description, it should be understood that this would be a long tale, involving much heartache. After reading some light-hearted JAFF, I embarked on this journey that evoked much sadness, anger & hatred. There were periods of happiness, and the end was as it should be. The family objections were overcome in an interesting twist, as you would probably surmise without me spoiling the whole. This is a strong Elizabeth, Jane & Charles Bingley, and an anguished Georgiana.
Recommend if you are ready for some difficult emotional scenes.
Per the reviews & description, it should be understood that this would be a long tale, involving much heartache. After reading some light-hearted JAFF, I embarked on this journey that evoked much sadness, anger & hatred. There were periods of happiness, and the end was as it should be. The family objections were overcome in an interesting twist, as you would probably surmise without me spoiling the whole. This is a strong Elizabeth, Jane & Charles Bingley, and an anguished Georgiana.
Recommend if you are ready for some difficult emotional scenes.
May 27, 2024
Well written and emotionally intense, and definitely tackles some very difficult subjects. This is one of those variations where a single conversation or letter would have dealt with most of the issues. I appreciated the love and respect for Georgiana's mental health concerns but definitely questioned that intelligent people would allow the clearly delusional imaginings and machinations of a young girl to dictate their entire future. That being said, this is another thoughtful and absorbing variation by this author.
August 13, 2024
Everyone thinks they know what happened at Ramsgate, but do they really know?
Mr. Darcy and Miss Elizabeth Bennet finally have come to care deeply for one another. Georgiana Darcy is safe now. Her brother is ready to offer for the woman he loves . That is until Georgiana snaps. Her irrational behavior results in paranoia, a marked aversion to any mention of Elizabeth, and the severing of many relationships. This story had me wanting to shake everyone, especially Elizabeth and Darcy. I couldn't stop reading. Enjoy!
Mr. Darcy and Miss Elizabeth Bennet finally have come to care deeply for one another. Georgiana Darcy is safe now. Her brother is ready to offer for the woman he loves . That is until Georgiana snaps. Her irrational behavior results in paranoia, a marked aversion to any mention of Elizabeth, and the severing of many relationships. This story had me wanting to shake everyone, especially Elizabeth and Darcy. I couldn't stop reading. Enjoy!
September 1, 2025
Most obnoxious Georgiana storyline I've ever read. While she has experienced significant trauma, it was ridiculous and infuriating that all other characters coddled her as if she were a toddler on the verge of a tantrum. Even in the end, and after everything this very long book takes us through, Elizabeth and Darcy are more concerned with her state than with their relationship and future family. I also found the double standard between to Lydia and Georgiana off putting. One of the least romantic variations I've read.
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