Seeing Double promised an intriguing dark romance with twists and drama, but for me it missed the mark in nearly every key area. While a handful of readers enjoyed aspects of the story, many others have pointed out several significant issues that made this a frustrating experience rather than an enjoyable one.
The biggest problem was the quality of the writing itself — the book contains numerous grammatical and spelling errors, as well as awkward dialogue and structural issues that pull you out of the story rather than draw you in. These basic flaws make it feel much more like a rough draft than a polished novel.
Alongside that, the main character’s behaviour often feels poorly developed and inconsistent, jumping unnaturally between moods and actions without clear motivation. This makes it hard to care about her choices or the supposedly serious situations she finds herself in.
Unfortunately, the plot suffers too — while the idea has potential, the execution lacks depth. At times events feel nonsensical, and the narrative jumps around in ways that are distracting rather than suspenseful. Combined with the editorial issues, it often feels like the story is trying to do too much without doing any of it well.
Overall, Seeing Double may have worked better with stronger editing, a more grounded lead, and clearer storytelling. As it stands, I’d honestly advise readers to skip this one — especially if you’re picking it up for quality writing or a genuinely well-crafted romance/thriller experience.