Two Men For Melanie

The Game of Three #1

by Nicole Stewart

Jordan's more than willing to do whatever Melanie wants to fulfill her fantasies, but he definitely has his reservations about adding another man into the mix.
He's expecting to endure it, but what ends up happening sparks a crisis that he should have had ten years ago. After an electric night with Melanie and Brian, his mind buzzing with sexual confusion, he suspects that he likes men more than he thought.

This 7200 word short story contains explicit descriptions of bisexual encounters, including 2 men with one woman and two men with one another. It is meant for people 18 and over!

Tags: mmf bisexual threesome, mmf menage, gay experimentation

Genres: Menage, Erotica, M M F, Romance, M F M, Erotic Romance, M M Romance

35 pages, Kindle Edition

First published April 23, 2014

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Reviews

[Aղցela W. · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was a short quick read that I wished was longer. Melanie, Brian and Jordan have a hot sexy threesome. This book seems to end in the middle and when I went to get the next book I was unable to find it. Jordan has never been with another man and he is shocked to find himself attracted to another man and when they kiss it was hot. This book did have a few errors in grammar.

[Unapologetic_Bookaholic · Rating 4 out of 5]

Quick and hot!

I'd like to see how much further Jordan pushes his exploration. It's fun to see he doesn't do everything like a pro on the first time.

[Neyra ♦ · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fun start to what looks to be a sexy serial, it lacks some character development but perhaps it'll improve during the next few books.

[Becca Reads · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was a super quick read and not what I expected from the title. It seemed to not be about two for Melanie but more about Jordan exploring a new bi side with Brian.

[Gem · Rating 1 out of 5]

ew

[Bonnie Henry · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is not a book. It's a poorly written short story.

[Erika wickwire · Rating 2 out of 5]

Two for mel

I was enjoying this quite a bit and then it just ended. Was very disappointed that it just ended that way but it is what it is.

[Iris · Rating 2 out of 5]

Meh. I wasn't aware it was a cliffie.

[Mary L. Cruse · Rating 5 out of 5]

Jordan and Brian

Was kind of shocked that Jordan liked it. Wish I could have read more. Is Jordan really bi or not?

[Michelle · Rating 3 out of 5]

I was able to pick up this story when it was offered free for my Kindle. Jumping in to a new author can always be a little nerve wracking but I couldn’t pass up for the price. I felt that there were some pluses and some minuses to this novella. This was really two smexy scenes written together with a cliffhanger ending leading in to the next in the series. I hadn’t realized that it was not a complete novella (and by complete I mean a HEA) so I felt a little let down that I was left hanging. My fault, though, for not looking in to the story more before I started. I also felt that I had jumped in at the middle of a story. It opens with Jordan being nervous because he is fulfilling one of Melanie’s fantasies, a threesome. It felt like there was a story before the opening that told how Jordan and Melanie first came together as a couple. I guess I was just looking for a little more to the plot. This does explore MMF, MM relationships so if you aren’t comfortable with that, this isn’t the book for you. Good start, just looking for a little more.

[Brandy Jenkins · Rating 2 out of 5]

Not a lot of story to judge, will pick up any sequel just to see where it goes. There was a few dialogue issues and using quotation marks.

I'm not a fan of a book starting on a sex scene, this was wasn't bad, there was build up and anxiety, not sure I felt the realism in the story though. Although I know it's definitely feasible to happen, the story seemed forced, if that makes sense.

I also feel like if a boyfriend consented to having a threesome, knowing who the guy was before he rang the doorbell would be a definite.

[Midniteillusion · Rating 3 out of 5]

I didn't read the description close enough and realized part way in it was, not really my thing. The plot could have been better, deeper. I feel that the one male character got more of a plot than the other two characters and it would have been nice to see the feelings/emotions from their POV. Also I didn't feel like there was any deep connection between the boyfriend and girlfriend which would have been nice and would have added depth to the story.

[Chande · Rating 3 out of 5]

Melanie really should have thought about it a little more before she brought someone else into her bedroom. Now her boyfriend thinks he may be gay. I find it hard to believe that a straight man would want to mess with another man in a sexual way unless he already liked men. This book was ok but it was to short and really left you wonder what was going to happen in the end. I can tell you I will not buy the next book to find out it didn't make me want to know that much.

[Ines Johnson]

The book explores Jordan's exploration of his late-in-life evolving sexuality. Pronouns are hard when you have more than one gender, so is sexual choreography. I wasn't clear on Brian's sexuality and I wish there had been more development of Melanie, who was super cool about her live-in boyfriend going off to explore his sexuality. I really wanted to understand her motivations.

[Kylie Griffin]

This was a DNF for me.

The opening chapter where the hero and heroine invited a mutual male friend straight into a menage because she wanted to experiment just didn't connect or engage me. I like to get to know the characters before they jump into bed.

Too quick, too soon, not my thing, so it's going on my DNF shelf.

[Rachel · Rating 4 out of 5]

Very hot

Very sexy and hot, Melanie, Jacob and Brian are fun and sexy. The story flowed smoothly with no cheesy dialogue ( which I loved). It does end on a cliffhanger which was a bummer, so I'll be looking for the box set so I can finish the story.

[Tabatha · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was a saucy little short, but the way the author executed the alternating points of view gave me whiplash. I also had several moments where it was unclear to me exactly who's point of view we were in. Sadly, I was disappointed that this made it very difficult to enjoy.

[Dorel · Rating 1 out of 5]

This is the 1st book I read by Nicole Stewart. I think the story needed more of a story line. I didn't feel the chemistry between none of the characters. Without no chemistry between the characters I think the hot & steamy scenes were flat. I think this story not developed enough.

[Wendy · Rating 2 out of 5]

this is a very short story. Not much character or plot development.
Jordan wants to fulfill all of Melanie's sexual fantasies including engaging in a 3-some with another man. Short story shorter, Jordan begins to question his sexuality.

[Nicole Baylor · Rating 4 out of 5]

definitely made me interested in reading the entire series..

[Bebe Four · Rating 2 out of 5]

2+

[Nakeesha]

Wanted more character development, but the plot had me reading all the way through.

[Dawn Barber · Rating 3 out of 5]

Quick and to the point. He/he pronouns got confusing. Needed more character development to better understand everyone's issues.

[Alexa Rowan]

Made it to 21%.

[Shirley Anderson · Rating 3 out of 5]

Nice quick read

[Sinister_reader · Rating 2 out of 5]

I thought there was going to be some kind of story line. .... boy was I wrong.

[Micah · Rating 4 out of 5]

Good, except for the Cliffhanger Ending.

[Maria · Rating 3 out of 5]

augh another serial. I shouldn't have even started it!

[Deborah · Rating 4 out of 5]

Could Be A Change

Helping fulfill a fantasy for his girlfriend may end up being a life changing circumstance for him. Enjoy I did. This is a re-read.

[Shell Swinscoe · Rating 4 out of 5]

a great nawty short story x