This is a fun fast read with two great MC's who will have you shaking your head at their stubborn self-defeating silliness, even as you are reveling in their irresistible attraction. I am super appreciative that Theresa Ragan made this available for free last Friday, thank you! I'm honestly feeling kind of guilty about taking advantage of that, that's how good this is!
MC Jill is pregnant (see cover for clue alert) as our story opens. Her ex-boyfriend, Thomas the Weasel, left her standing at the altar, humiliated and angry. Her belittling, emotionally unavailable snooty-snob family sure didn't help her get over that (why the hell are they taking his side?), so she's come to LA, as far away from them all as she can get, to start over. She hasn't given up her life long dream of being a mom, though, and with the help of some frozen sperm from dear old CryoCorp, she's found the perfect solution to achieve it, while still preserving her hard won independence.
Derrick Baylor is a super romance-novel dream guy. The 30 yo qb of the California Condors is dreamy handsome, smart, hardworking, has a great sense of humor and is from a huge, loving and down to earth family. The extensive and characterific Baylor clan is realistically and often hilariously portrayed - they are not without their problems, but a shortage of mutual affection and support isn't one of them. Too bad Derrick's still gaga after all these years over his childhood crush, now his brother's fiance. That one is definitely throwing a monkey wrench into his, hers and the whole family's emotional gears (hey there's gotta be some reason he's still single, right?). He's pretty shocked when he gets a letter from CryoCorp letting him know that his sperm's finally been donated and that its "recipient" is now carrying his child. He'd long since believed that his youthful "donation," made way back when he was financially struggling (oh yeah, did I forget to mention that he's rich now?), had been withdrawn from circulation per his request. Derrick, endearingly if not perhaps terribly realistically for most sports figures we see nowadays who seem to flee paternity like a plague, isn't the kind of guy to let a child of his loins float around unsupported (sorry for the weird imagery there), and he sets out to find aforesaid recipient with the intent of being a part of his child-to-be's life.
So that is where our players stand as the curtain rises. The scene where Derrick stalks Jill down and makes himself and his intentions known is absolutely the cutest meet-cute you'll ever want to read. Theresa very cleverly puts an excerpt from this as the intro to her synopsis, and it's really what pulled me into reading this. Excellent choice, I must say, it's funny, slightly bittersweet, and fraught with all the tension, humor and poignancy this novel delivers (pun slightly intended). Of course there are misunderstandings, miscontrued or inadvertantly overheard conversations that are taken the wrong way. Of course there are stupendously misguided attempts at achieving one's goals in precisely the most wrong-headed way possible. Of course those schemes backfire and yet somehow succeed at the same time. And of course, above all, there is really enormous fun, and some sweetly tender emotional closure as the action twists, turns and ultimately draws to an end. Really this book has so many great elements: snappy and clever dialogue, extremely charming main characters (especially Jill, so real feeling with her doubts and hopes and resolve), side characters who not only move the plot along, but contribute their own flavor and richness to the mix, and a plot that keeps on delivering the story, the suspense and ultimately, the sweet resolution we (and Derrick and Jill) so richly deserve. I don't read that many romances, so maybe I could be more familiar with its conventions, tropes and standards, but to me this felt like a fresh, frothy confection with lots of sugar, some undertones of spice and enough emotional substance to make it a satisfyingly rich and rewarding read. Bravo to Theresa Ragan for sharing these fun characters and their story! Now, please go buy it so I don't feel so doggone guilty for taking advantage of her authorial generosity!