I have loved every book by this talented author. However I’m 2/3 if the way through and getting a little tired of the plot. Military reports firing around amongst everyone, the romance is so repetitive, even the conversations between the two main characters. Wondering if I’ll finish it, up to now, I’m finding this a disappointing read and can’t wait to get to the end so I can start the second book in this two book series. Bought the two together as I get so into her books, but sorry to say…… I don’t find the passion in it and the war is boring me, do hope the follow o is an improvement on this one. Was looking forward to being lost in this novel especially I’d it’s location, but I don’t like not to finish a book, but I’m now starting to skip a few paragraphs to get to next chapter, never thought this would happen in Siobhan’s novels. It’s just missing something, what happened? The war was a shamble mess, like it was run by untrained officials, and so much use of crazy names through out, and all the abbreviations used if the utilities used, it was like reading some sort of code, obviously done research in types of boats used but to most readers I would think they, like me probably wanted to stop reading and google up so to know what military craft was being used in the mission being carried out. I certainly didn’t know what type of boats were being used….. I felt there was a Lack of description on the missions carried out, some felt like they were carried out by Laurel And Hardy, if you get my understanding. And for everyone to actually wash and change most evenings for a social get together or meal just didn’t seem fitting, then the next day to go on another mission, again with minor details about it, it was like off to work in the morning see you tonight scenario, like a day at the office. Sorry Siobhan, I was looking forward to starting this series…. But it’s the first of your novels I’m just not connected to, all your other novels I couldn’t turn the pages quick enough to follow the characters, desperate to read the outcome, filled with feelings, but this one, I’m turning the pages at the moment as it’s boring and repetitive, I really expected to escape to this part of the world, be transported there as I’ve never been there. a little exotic input based on its location would have been wonderful, but When you did describe a few locations, I was there briefly, just for a moment taking in the aromas, the sights that were either if beauty or slums, wish there’d been more of this
In the story. I May come back when or if I finish the book to close up my review.
The books you wrote on the war based in Italy have remained with me long after, fantastic reading, powerful storyline and characters, written with great passion so descriptive, brought me to tears I couldn’t put any of them down. This one…. Don’t know what happened, like a totally different author had written it.