Nip It In the Bud

by Becca Vale

After our parents died, the only thing that mattered to me was taking care of my baby brother. He was just a little thing then—still is, I guess—and all I wanted to do was comfort and protect him.

It’s why I used to let him climb into bed with me at night after our grandmother took us in.

It’s where I figured out the best way to soothe him when he was upset.

I never meant to give him an oral fixation, but now I can’t stop my twisted, all-consuming, fucked-up love for him into taking those innocent memories and turning them into something else.

Which I guess makes it a good thing that I’m deployed half a world away from him, even if it kills me to be so far apart. But then our grandmother passes, and Scout needs me.

Guess it’s time for me to finally come home…

Genres: M M Romance, Military Fiction, Novella, Contemporary, Romance

ebook

Published April 12, 2024

Reviews

[Aricka Decker]

Listen I’ve read this. I’m not rating it or telling you when but I’ve read it.

[Peppa · Rating 3 out of 5]

If the book is already about nips, it could have much more scenes about them lol. But I liked it, a quick short hot and sweet read.

[Shelba · Rating 1 out of 5]

DNF @ 73%.

Hmm… I thought there would be a lot more focus on the suckling.. and it’s there but it isn’t all encompassing. I don’t wanna read about a blowjob. I wanna read about sucking on your big brother’s nipples til they are raw. And if the dick had to go in the mouth, why not just some cockwarming?

But also, there was just a bit too much dirty talk. It’s not my fav. It’s often more cheesy than not. And I would rather just read about little bro fucking big bro’s titties than having it told to me through dirty talk. A little less talk, a lot more action please.

I don’t care enough to finish, even though it’s quite short. It’s not awful, just not enjoying it enough.

[Chloe · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nip it in the Bud by Becca Vale

🩵 Taboo (brothers)
🩵 Oral Fixation
🩵 Praise Kink
🔥 Suckling, Nipple Play, Cock Warming, Praise Kink

Overall: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️
Humour: 🤭.5
Intimacy: 🫂🫂🫂🫂
Angst: 🥺.5

First person dual pov 👀

CW: References to off-page death of family members.

[BelleLovesRomance · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.5 ⭐️ I really enjoyed it, I just wish that the nip scenes were a whole lot more. But a good one nonetheless. If you're reading this Becca, maybe you can make some more books with the same theme in the future. 😆🤞🏻

[Freya · Rating 5 out of 5]

4.5⭐️ 5🌶️

📝 REVIEW & THOUGHTS:

Well, d@mn. This. Was. Hot. AF. lol I just wished the book were longer. But I had a lot of fun reading this short erot!c story.

Recommend if you want to read a hot brocest short story.

🏷️ TROPES & TAGS (possible spoilers):

Genre/subgenre: contemporary, erot!ca
Pairing: MM
POV: 1st person, dual
Angst: low
Burn: fast
Vibe/mood: f!lthy hot AF
Pet names: baby boy, sweetheart, baby
HEA: yes

Taboo ‼️🩸
Codependency
V!rgin MC

🌶️ SPICE & K!NKS (possible spoilers):

Strict top/bottom or versatile: top/bottom
Heat: 4 scenes, I think. I may have gotten distracted counting (but really it’s like 70% of the book), high heat
D!rty talk
Mild degr@dation/Praise
Dom!nation
Mild D/s dynamic
Or@l fixation
Frott!ng
R!mming
An@l

⚠️ CONTENT WARNINGS (possible spoilers):

Dubcon: no
Noncon: no
Inc€st (brothers)
MC is deployed in the military at the beginning, but no military action (US army)
References to off-page de@th of family members (parent/grandparent)


* Fyi about 🌶️ levels: I rate spice on a combination of quantity, quality, length, intensity and explicitness of the scenes. K!nks are listed separately and generally do not directly affect the steam level to keep it fair for non k!nky books.

[Ash · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was honestly sweet for no good reason 😭

[Rozanna's fantasy romance & smut corner · Rating 5 out of 5]

oralFixation! it's my krypronite🤷‍♀️
that and consensual somnophilia.
and becca vale writes super smut each week yeah its always brother uncles twins etc but I'm impressed with the stories/plot because some have more plot and dept then many romance books with 100 pages more. I don't like all I've read just cis certain links and fantasies are just not my jam and I won't reviews those it dienst seem fair.. I like her work and of you sign up to the news letter each Friday you get het new book for 50% off. only that day though so sign up and get some cute fun fluff taboo on sale.

[Jenna · Rating 3 out of 5]

I make no apologies for the shit I read anymore...
So dirty! Love these quick reads.

[M's ☆~HEA~☆ · Rating 4 out of 5]

“Fuck,” he mutters, and then he’s rocking against me, dragging me up and down the length of his hard cock and holding me even tighter, kneading my flesh, slipping his fingers into my crease and thrusting up against me as I whine and latch on so hard to his chest that I’m probably bruising him. “We shouldn’t,” he pants. “Baby, we fucking can’t.”

Spoiler alert...they can and they do. This is another BV book that surprised me by how crazy hot it was. I was in the mood for some man boobs and although this isn't about that it still hit the spot.

And I want… I want you to do bad things to me. All the things.

Well, you're in luck, little Scout...

He grabs my dick, wrapping one hand all the way around it, and guides it to his left pec. “Right here,” he grunts, twisting his body until my wet cockhead bumps the tight bud of his nipple. “Come on, now. Get it dirty. Fuck yourself against it until you nut, little Scout. I want you to come all over my nip, rub it fucking raw, then suck your cream off for me like the good boy you are.”

💙Totally safe. No sharing. Not OTT cringy etc. Hot 'cesty tale.

[Books and Gems · Rating 4 out of 5]

🫣🫣🫣

Lol oh boy.

Blue and Scout

This was a short and spicy novella about Blue and Scout. Blue has been stationed away for the last four years, but after his grandma passes away he comes home to deal with everything since he’s the executor. Scout is struggling with Blue being so far away, and he doesn’t know how to handle everything on his own.

This was spicy. I didn’t know nipple play was something I was so invested in 🤣🤣

[Kim B · Rating 4 out of 5]

Another great spicy brother read from Becca... Two brothers (from the wrong side of the tracks) only have each other after their folks die - and older brother soothes younger by letting him sleep with him and uh...suck his nips. lol... Older bro goes away to the Army and younger bro is in college, but clearly still has an oral fixation. Gma dies so they are reunited and clearly the soothing still happens.....
Older bro taking care of little bro
Oral fixation
Military man

[Bibliophile · Rating 3 out of 5]

Becca truly have a talent of making you feel it 😭😭

I am screaming in hotness damn, at this point i think whatever kink she write will be it for everyone 😭 she have a talent of making you want to even experience it dammit 🔥 the sucking kink is hot!

[Becca Vale]

Looking for taboo gay smut? Find this yummy brocest + nipple play short on Smashwords!

[MunWolfieSNM · Rating 4 out of 5]

4.5⭐

Blue and Scout are 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

And I love nipple play.

[Sara Barney · Rating 5 out of 5]

This was cute and a good story with some nipple play that leads to more in a way I found quite satisfying.

[Kassandra Knight · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great story, especially if you love characters that have an oral fixation.

Highly recommend.

[b00ks_in_nature · Rating 5 out of 5]

I LOVE the relationship between Blue and Scout. I enjoyed the premise and unlocked a new kink. I’d enjoy a follow up of them a couple years down the road.

[Tiffany · Rating 5 out of 5]

I didn't know I needed this story. Def did some searching when I finished.

[Quinn · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5

[laura cabezas · Rating 4 out of 5]

4 stars 💚

[Monique · Rating 5 out of 5]

Nips and oral and suckling oh my! Whew! It’s hot in here! Studly military man and his delicate little bro. Yeah this is a WINNER!

[Anne]

3.5*