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[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling #3
[Psychokinetic] Eyeball Pulling 3: A LitRPG Adventure
Astrid continues her battle with the Corruption and betrayal that is engulfing Rebirth.
Monsters, the Order, and invaders from the vast space above threaten the destruction of the world. Left without options, Astrid's only remaining method is to destroy everything in her path if she wants her family to make it to the end.
Astrid will power-up, gain mighty upgrades to her current abilities, and put a stop to the evil that plagues Ruitera--or die trying.
The end is nigh, but for Astrid, it is merely just the beginning of her otherworldly supremacy.
Book 3 of an action-packed and often hilarious LitRPG Apocalypse series about a young survivor with a craving for adventure and fighting. Perfect for fans of Azarinth Healer and Eight.
About the Astrid wasn't expecting to awaken as a mage class, but that won't stop her from having fun. In fact, she'll no longer need to resort to laborious activities, including, but not limited to; picking up stuff, carrying stuff, or even throwing stuff. Everything can be done with her mind!
Monsters, the Order, and invaders from the vast space above threaten the destruction of the world. Left without options, Astrid's only remaining method is to destroy everything in her path if she wants her family to make it to the end.
Astrid will power-up, gain mighty upgrades to her current abilities, and put a stop to the evil that plagues Ruitera--or die trying.
The end is nigh, but for Astrid, it is merely just the beginning of her otherworldly supremacy.
Book 3 of an action-packed and often hilarious LitRPG Apocalypse series about a young survivor with a craving for adventure and fighting. Perfect for fans of Azarinth Healer and Eight.
About the Astrid wasn't expecting to awaken as a mage class, but that won't stop her from having fun. In fact, she'll no longer need to resort to laborious activities, including, but not limited to; picking up stuff, carrying stuff, or even throwing stuff. Everything can be done with her mind!
- GenresFantasy
426 pages, Kindle Edition
Published May 15, 2024
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May 18, 2024
Excellent Story...
...but holy crap is an editor required! It was a rough read for me this time due to all of the spelling errors and sections where the book repeats the exact same sentence in multiple ways. It was as if the author couldn't make up their minds on how they wanted to structure the paragraph and just left every version in. Interrupted the flow of the story and made it very difficult to understand what was going on. Still looking forward to the sequel, but please get an editor!
...but holy crap is an editor required! It was a rough read for me this time due to all of the spelling errors and sections where the book repeats the exact same sentence in multiple ways. It was as if the author couldn't make up their minds on how they wanted to structure the paragraph and just left every version in. Interrupted the flow of the story and made it very difficult to understand what was going on. Still looking forward to the sequel, but please get an editor!
May 23, 2024
Book three
I read this one over on Royalroad.
Just wanted to show my support for an author that has let me and countless others tag along as he creates this wonderful weird world.
7/10
I read this one over on Royalroad.
Just wanted to show my support for an author that has let me and countless others tag along as he creates this wonderful weird world.
7/10
May 26, 2024
Cannot Give 5 Stars
This has been one of the worst-edited books by an otherwise excellent author I have read in recent years. Don't get me wrong, the story is GREAT! I've been a fan for 3 books and do not regret one moment spent reading them.
But this book was OBVIOUSLY hastily edited, with many glaring examples of using Replace All editing of certain words, copying and pasting sentences and parts of sentences without deleting old bits or properly hooking up the pasted bits to their new locations...
If FreeID is editing their own work, they need to take a breather, then re-read and re-edit. If they're using editors... friend, those editors are LETTING YOU DOWN! Find new ones!
This has been one of the worst-edited books by an otherwise excellent author I have read in recent years. Don't get me wrong, the story is GREAT! I've been a fan for 3 books and do not regret one moment spent reading them.
But this book was OBVIOUSLY hastily edited, with many glaring examples of using Replace All editing of certain words, copying and pasting sentences and parts of sentences without deleting old bits or properly hooking up the pasted bits to their new locations...
If FreeID is editing their own work, they need to take a breather, then re-read and re-edit. If they're using editors... friend, those editors are LETTING YOU DOWN! Find new ones!
May 19, 2024
Atrocious editing
I don't typically give fewer than 5 stars but I had to here. I enjoyed the story though the end felt incredibly rushed. The biggest issue I had was the editing. In particular there were several places where sentences or even entire paragraphs were repeated. It's like when you're tired and end up rereading a section over and over but instead the author rewrote it. It's not as though it was a subtle thing, it just seems that no editing was done for the second half of the book before publishing
I don't typically give fewer than 5 stars but I had to here. I enjoyed the story though the end felt incredibly rushed. The biggest issue I had was the editing. In particular there were several places where sentences or even entire paragraphs were repeated. It's like when you're tired and end up rereading a section over and over but instead the author rewrote it. It's not as though it was a subtle thing, it just seems that no editing was done for the second half of the book before publishing
August 24, 2024
Seems like a good end to the series
Felt a bit rushed though. Like the author really wanted to end the story arc with this book. I think it's good that though, because these types of power power fantasies can get out of hand with the power creep in the end.
There are also a lot of bad grammar errors. It was annoying, but nothing bad enough that I couldn't figure out what it meant.
Felt a bit rushed though. Like the author really wanted to end the story arc with this book. I think it's good that though, because these types of power power fantasies can get out of hand with the power creep in the end.
There are also a lot of bad grammar errors. It was annoying, but nothing bad enough that I couldn't figure out what it meant.
May 22, 2025
This one kind of pissed me off. It reads like a book written by an author sick of his own story. What should've been 3 more books is crammed in the last 200 pages. There's so many mistakes that I don't think anyone - even the author - even skimmed this before publishing.
It would have been better to leave it unfinished at book 2 with a chance of getting continued in the future instead of just completely destroying it like this.
It would have been better to leave it unfinished at book 2 with a chance of getting continued in the future instead of just completely destroying it like this.
May 19, 2024
This is the best book so far because it explains a lot of things that were unclear in previous two books plus Astrid seems to mature into a lovely character. I gave it four stars because it has many spelling errors
October 28, 2024
Poorly edited, fun time
If you're in book 3 you already know that this is a rapid paced action fest series.
I feel like the editing was much worse on this book. So many it often pulled me out of the story to try and puzzle it what it should be, to often.
If you're in book 3 you already know that this is a rapid paced action fest series.
I feel like the editing was much worse on this book. So many it often pulled me out of the story to try and puzzle it what it should be, to often.
November 11, 2024
Another great one
This series keeps getting better and better. I really hope there will be more. Do yourself a favor and pick this book up, but read the first two first.
Highly recommended.
This series keeps getting better and better. I really hope there will be more. Do yourself a favor and pick this book up, but read the first two first.
Highly recommended.
July 21, 2025
Great story unfortunately
You have sentences that have No meaning You have chapters That have no meaning You short stop sentences You leave out words Some of your book is just breaking my brain Please please proofread proofread proofread
You have sentences that have No meaning You have chapters That have no meaning You short stop sentences You leave out words Some of your book is just breaking my brain Please please proofread proofread proofread
May 25, 2024
Man, what a action-fueled rollercoaster. Astrid has done it again;I eagerly await the next book.
May 26, 2025
Last page - not fair
So cruel. The events started moving fast. Astrid was becoming more. Current enemies are small fry? Inconceivable! I must know more.
So cruel. The events started moving fast. Astrid was becoming more. Current enemies are small fry? Inconceivable! I must know more.
May 31, 2024
Started out good and kept picking up pace at an absurd rate. Still fun, but started to get strange towards the end of the book. Like the author got bored and wanted to skip 2-3 books worth of progress to get to the next part. Also the book had tons of errors. Repeat paragraphs/pages. A character commenting after they had died previously. This one could really do with a simple read through to clean it up. Still enjoyed it, but had some problems.
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