🌶️ Huh, the story I wanted to read the most wasn’t quite what I had hoped for…. We’ve seen bits and pieces of August and Rowan’s romance tucked here and there in the last few books, but I was hoping for something more in-depth. The book starts with the love story having turned sour long before and the two barely working as friends.
Yes, the story of these two reconnecting is a bit boring really. Most of the drama is dealing with August’s worsening autoimmune disease (which read surprisingly real- something non-sufferers often struggle to portray properly). Matteo Rossi is a direct threat again but this is getting to be a bit much as the guy seems to be more impenetrable terminator than a wolf shifter with a seriously fraying scope of reality.
I say direct threat, but Rossi is hardly in the book at all, and, as always, we still have a President who is the worst caricature of a manipulative politician (who makes some serious off-page promises and threats that they are not at all able to make… our government isn’t based on one person having all the power like that and it lacks all weight as she comes across as more of a mustache-twirling villainous joke than a real threat.
Still, Rowan is the most likable so far of the gals to marry into the family, but her past trauma is one heck of a hindrance to have against her as she is overly sensitive to a lot around her and that toxic relationship she has with her mother and Cris. Stacked deck for that poor girl, and with her literally pushing herself so hard…
August, my favorite of the brothers, has a mess all his own. Living with an autoimmune disease his hard enough, and having one go for so much of his life it’s not surprising he made some of the mistakes he did. So much is still up in the air for he and Rowan going forward, but I am happy with where the book leaves them.
However, simple editing issues are still a pain to sit through with a series this far developed. At the end of Taken we read Lacey has a noticeable baby bump… and here we learn it’s been about a year since then… however Lacey is only nine months pregnant? (Shifters gestate ten months rather than nine). August and Rowan both need glasses? Somehow I missed that tidbit before as it’s an infrequent thing. And what was up with August’s 007 gadget moment at the eclipse?
Dallas lost that bet about Kale so why hasn’t he at least rescued a new cat that Lacey can call Godiva, as no one honestly expected to change Fancy’s name now that she has her own song and Luna never really knowing Fancy as anything other than Fancy. Plenty of jokes about the kale failures over the past year but no penalty for taking and losing said bet?
Ben’s PTSD still triggers him to jump to wolf form and stay there, but sure Sofia, have Ethan trot him out a high powered rifle as a just in case. Why not have someone good with a gun just sit and keep watch with the wolf if it’s that serious to keep watch?
And now we have confirmation that Brody’s property is outside of city limits and he has acreage, so why does his bottle-raised Longhorns still live at his parent’s ranch house or statements like Major’s barking from inside Brody’s home can be heard down the block?
And the appearing/disappearing baby? Rowan is holding Lacey’s son at the baby shower but quickly gets up and runs to the ladies room to cry… handy trick to have in the middle of an emotional breakdown where just dashing off without explanation while holding someone’s infant would simply be bad form… better to let us assume she held back her distress long enough to hand the sleeping tyke back to mom without waking him up.
We also now know the Blood Moon pack has over a hundred members, but we still don’t see a single one that isn’t family other than the very few we’ve met previously (adopted members Fallon, her son, Topher and rebel vampires Vlad, Rowan, Jori and her wife). Yet when the vampire/werewolf ballgame goes down it’s just that core group who shows? Nobody shows up to root for the Blood Moon team? I get it, the cast is getting bigger with each new book, but really?
I wish we could get a change of the menu a bit- yes, it is Texas and BBQ and Mexican is like part of the culinary trinity (shocker though that Tex-Mex itself isn’t ever mentioned as it is freaky delicious and iconically Texan). It’s the same menu over and over that gets lovingly detailed, with only the flavor of cupcakes picked up at the bakery changing.
Oh, and with modern-day travel total eclipses are no longer a “once-in-a-lifetime” thing. I’m in my fifties and just given where I’ve managed to be living at the time I’ve witnessed an eclipse (most if not complete totality) five times now. Just imagine how many I could have seen if I enjoyed traveling. Now for Blood Moon, Texas to be in the path of totality… yeah, that’s not once-in-a-lifetime as totality hits the same exact path roughly every 375 years or so- though it’s certainly happened in both shorter and longer cycles than that. I’d say that timeframe is more along the odds of once-every-fifteen generations (given a generation is considered in twenty-five to thirty year spans).
Getting a bit nit-picky now… sorry.
Overly repeated things: every character pinches the bridge of their nose FREQUENTLY in this series- related or not. Two brides (Ellie in the previous story and now Rowan) are so tight their guys can hardly move during sex? Maybe it’s because they were both virgins before meeting their mates? But the fact both brothers consider this as dirty talk towards their significant others during sex and in practically the same words… neither time was it a detail we needed or wanted, so repeating it didn’t win any bonus points.
As always, I could go on, but there’s just Cal’s story left and then I can take a breather and move to an author that won’t have me seesawing back and forth so much. I have to clarify that I don’t hate this author... I wouldn’t have continued the series if that were entirely the case… but yeah, I definitely need a break from my critical self for a book or two.