Rosalind & Griffith.
This was a missed opportunity. All the growth was shown in the epilogue. As it was structured, this didn’t do it for me.
MMC was all “woe is me”, and “I’ve been self-destructing since losing my first parent.” Not my favorite, kind of boring and repetitive, but fine, roll with it. Until the FMC came in and, after a spark of sexual attraction, suddenly was willing to make all sorts of allowances for him, to see his “hidden depths” that no one else saw. (Yes, that boilerplate phrase appeared.) To be supportive and to push him at the same time…after barely meeting him.
Meanwhile, the FMC was a pushover with regards to her family, her boss, etc. But somehow, in this situation, with this sexy, hyper-attractive, billionaire client, she’s feisty and gutsy? And she’s been saving herself for marriage, but now suddenly she’ll give up her virginity for a fling? It felt like she was one person before the story started, and then did a 180 with the MMC.
I found the dialog really stilted and cringy. It took me almost 2 weeks to wade through. I found the problems not compelling (due to the presentation, not because they weren’t serious.) I found the “I love you’s” and life long commitment coming after week of barely doing anything but avoiding each other, arguing, and a few days having sex even cringier. (It felt like it should be the start of a dating relationship, not the culmination.) I felt like the FMC was giving the MMC extra favoritism because he was sexy, which happens in the real world, but is not romantic.
Just not my cup of tea. Epilogue was surprising. If this was what the author intended to highlight, it should have been incorporated into the main story.