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Winner of the 18th Annual National Indie Excellence Awards for Best Science Fiction Book, Reader Views Literary Award Silver Medal for Best Science Fiction Book of 2023, and the Gold Medal for Best Book of any genre set in the US Mountain West region.
Lewis is a rookie astronaut for SpaceFirst, a company headed for the stars. They race against rival corporation Deep Sky to be the first in history to send a person from Earth to another star system and bring them home safely.
Along with four teammates and his new AI, Lewis prepares for humanity's first push into the galaxy. The journey from SpaceFirst headquarters to Proxima Centauri includes triumph, loss, competition, and a friendship with the promise of more.
But then it all goes wrong.
Lewis is the first human to travel to another star system. Unless he can find a way home, it might end up being a one-way trip.
"The novel that's going to be a break-out hit this year...a mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book...truly a novel not to be missed." - Reader Views
Lewis is a rookie astronaut for SpaceFirst, a company headed for the stars. They race against rival corporation Deep Sky to be the first in history to send a person from Earth to another star system and bring them home safely.
Along with four teammates and his new AI, Lewis prepares for humanity's first push into the galaxy. The journey from SpaceFirst headquarters to Proxima Centauri includes triumph, loss, competition, and a friendship with the promise of more.
But then it all goes wrong.
Lewis is the first human to travel to another star system. Unless he can find a way home, it might end up being a one-way trip.
"The novel that's going to be a break-out hit this year...a mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book...truly a novel not to be missed." - Reader Views
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448 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 10, 2023
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About the author
Randy Brown
7 books9 followersAward-winning author of FIRST and NEXT TIME along with the Desert Sun series, which includes SUNSET, SUNDOWN, and SUNBURST.
NEXT TIME is the winner of the Literary Titan Gold Book Award for Fiction, 1st Place in the 8th Annual PenCraft Book Awards for Romance-Fantasy/Sci-Fi, and highlighted as a Must-Read Book for 2024 by Independent Book Review: "Of the many time-travel novels I've read, this is undeniably among my favorites."
FIRST is the Winner of the 18th Annual National Indie Excellence Award for Best Science Fiction Novel, 1st Place in the 8th Annual PenCraft Book Awards for Science Fiction, as well as winner of the Reader Views Literary Award Silver Medal for Best Science Fiction Book of 2023: "The novel that’s going to be a break-out hit this year...a mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book...truly a novel not to be missed."
NEXT TIME is the winner of the Literary Titan Gold Book Award for Fiction, 1st Place in the 8th Annual PenCraft Book Awards for Romance-Fantasy/Sci-Fi, and highlighted as a Must-Read Book for 2024 by Independent Book Review: "Of the many time-travel novels I've read, this is undeniably among my favorites."
FIRST is the Winner of the 18th Annual National Indie Excellence Award for Best Science Fiction Novel, 1st Place in the 8th Annual PenCraft Book Awards for Science Fiction, as well as winner of the Reader Views Literary Award Silver Medal for Best Science Fiction Book of 2023: "The novel that’s going to be a break-out hit this year...a mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book...truly a novel not to be missed."
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February 13, 2024
This is not your average sci-fi novel, not the normal race to the stars drama. Please give me a couple of minutes to give you some insight into the novel that’s going to be a break-out hit this year. I’m speaking of Randy Brown’s mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book with the understated name, “First.”
If I had read “First” ten or fifteen years ago I would have found it highly implausible, yet fun. But these days, Randy Brown’s concept could have been torn from potential headlines. It’s that spot-on with current society. Two mega-billionaires are each determined to put the first astronaut not only on the outer edges of our solar system, but into the next closest solar system as well. Each billionaire’s private space company has designed a new type of spaceship that utilizes electromagnetic energy (I won’t attempt an explanation), allowing them to travel well beyond the speed of light. This opens the possibility of travel to distant planets. And beyond. Without the need to put astronauts into stasis for years. Since I’m a total space nerd, I was already excited.
As readers on this astounding space race, we’ll be following a group of five people who have been chosen by SpaceFirst to train as the astronauts who will venture to all the planets in our system- including Pluto, because Chris, SpaceFirst’s CEO still considers Pluto a planet. Then one of the lucky five will be given the chance to be the first person to travel beyond, to Alpha Centauri. The possibilities are nearly limitless.
As if the basic premise isn’t enough to get a reader totally engrossed, the characters Mr. Brown has created will certainly do the trick. They are genuine characters with all the quirks and flaws. The story’s POV is from one of the five space travelers, Lewis. He is so warm and witty, so… ordinary (almost) that he seems like someone you’d want to sit down and have a beer with. He’s a brilliant engineer whose self-deprecating “aww-shucks” nature keeps him from being overrun by pride and ego. My favorite thing about Lewis, though, is his razor-sharp inner monologue that berates him regularly. Even his shipboard AI computer piles on the deprecating humor to Lewis’ chagrin, providing laugh out loud moments that provide balance for the more weighty moments.
Joining Lewis are the others chosen for the space program. Colt is pure testosterone and charisma, and reminiscent of the Mercury/Gemini astronauts; full of the right stuff and bearing the swagger to prove it. Eve is smart and awesome, even if she is super-competitive and shows her feelings easily. Sandra’s got this amazing ability to lead the others without even trying- they just naturally trust her judgment. Then there’s Peter. He’s very volatile, complains about everything, and is largely oppositional to the rest. He can be hard to like. If that sounded like an understatement, well, it was. All five of our intrepid heroes are excited to be part of the program, but they all want to be the first person to Alpha Centauri. Period.
“First” is about more than a space race. It’s about the human spirit and its drive to succeed before others. It’s about the breaking of societal norms to accomplish that goal no matter what the cost. It’s about the personal price tag we’d like to pretend has no control over us- the price we would allow others to pay so that we may be first instead of them. Some of us, as it turns out, have no problem allowing others to pay the price for our ticket to success. “First” is also about the unexpected and unintended consequences of being first.
I want to write thousands more words about this novel and its impact. This story is written with an easy style, like one friend talking to another. In fact, the words seemed to flow over the pages like quicksilver, and with equal fascination. Chock full of “holy cow” moments that don’t give any hint they’re coming, this read is spellbinding. Readers will also experience a full range of emotions from pride to gloom, elation to fear, anger to pain, and the complete spectrum within. As if this weren’t enough to keep you turning those pages, readers just KNOW who the antagonist is by the halfway point in the book.
Or do they?
Of all the elements Randy Brown has brought together to create a story that is greater than the sum of its parts, the best might just be his use of various creative elements without detracting from the storyline, characters, or pace. Be sure to catch the author’s comments after the epilogue because I’m going to leave those devices like little nuggets to be discovered by readers, just as the author did. Since I read, on average, more than 300 books a year, I am completely confident declaring that “First” is truly a novel not to be missed. Sci-fi fans will find a slice of heaven here, so to speak. But so will those who enjoy thrillers, mysteries, character-driven stories, and even romantic suspense. I loved all the flavors of genres that were floating around like water droplets in zero g. It made the entire read that much richer. This wonderful work negotiates the genres much the same way these characters traverse the stars. With ease, strength, intelligence, wit, and grace.
Do not wait to find out what gives Randy Brown’s “First” that true it factor, making it unforgettable.
If I had read “First” ten or fifteen years ago I would have found it highly implausible, yet fun. But these days, Randy Brown’s concept could have been torn from potential headlines. It’s that spot-on with current society. Two mega-billionaires are each determined to put the first astronaut not only on the outer edges of our solar system, but into the next closest solar system as well. Each billionaire’s private space company has designed a new type of spaceship that utilizes electromagnetic energy (I won’t attempt an explanation), allowing them to travel well beyond the speed of light. This opens the possibility of travel to distant planets. And beyond. Without the need to put astronauts into stasis for years. Since I’m a total space nerd, I was already excited.
As readers on this astounding space race, we’ll be following a group of five people who have been chosen by SpaceFirst to train as the astronauts who will venture to all the planets in our system- including Pluto, because Chris, SpaceFirst’s CEO still considers Pluto a planet. Then one of the lucky five will be given the chance to be the first person to travel beyond, to Alpha Centauri. The possibilities are nearly limitless.
As if the basic premise isn’t enough to get a reader totally engrossed, the characters Mr. Brown has created will certainly do the trick. They are genuine characters with all the quirks and flaws. The story’s POV is from one of the five space travelers, Lewis. He is so warm and witty, so… ordinary (almost) that he seems like someone you’d want to sit down and have a beer with. He’s a brilliant engineer whose self-deprecating “aww-shucks” nature keeps him from being overrun by pride and ego. My favorite thing about Lewis, though, is his razor-sharp inner monologue that berates him regularly. Even his shipboard AI computer piles on the deprecating humor to Lewis’ chagrin, providing laugh out loud moments that provide balance for the more weighty moments.
Joining Lewis are the others chosen for the space program. Colt is pure testosterone and charisma, and reminiscent of the Mercury/Gemini astronauts; full of the right stuff and bearing the swagger to prove it. Eve is smart and awesome, even if she is super-competitive and shows her feelings easily. Sandra’s got this amazing ability to lead the others without even trying- they just naturally trust her judgment. Then there’s Peter. He’s very volatile, complains about everything, and is largely oppositional to the rest. He can be hard to like. If that sounded like an understatement, well, it was. All five of our intrepid heroes are excited to be part of the program, but they all want to be the first person to Alpha Centauri. Period.
“First” is about more than a space race. It’s about the human spirit and its drive to succeed before others. It’s about the breaking of societal norms to accomplish that goal no matter what the cost. It’s about the personal price tag we’d like to pretend has no control over us- the price we would allow others to pay so that we may be first instead of them. Some of us, as it turns out, have no problem allowing others to pay the price for our ticket to success. “First” is also about the unexpected and unintended consequences of being first.
I want to write thousands more words about this novel and its impact. This story is written with an easy style, like one friend talking to another. In fact, the words seemed to flow over the pages like quicksilver, and with equal fascination. Chock full of “holy cow” moments that don’t give any hint they’re coming, this read is spellbinding. Readers will also experience a full range of emotions from pride to gloom, elation to fear, anger to pain, and the complete spectrum within. As if this weren’t enough to keep you turning those pages, readers just KNOW who the antagonist is by the halfway point in the book.
Or do they?
Of all the elements Randy Brown has brought together to create a story that is greater than the sum of its parts, the best might just be his use of various creative elements without detracting from the storyline, characters, or pace. Be sure to catch the author’s comments after the epilogue because I’m going to leave those devices like little nuggets to be discovered by readers, just as the author did. Since I read, on average, more than 300 books a year, I am completely confident declaring that “First” is truly a novel not to be missed. Sci-fi fans will find a slice of heaven here, so to speak. But so will those who enjoy thrillers, mysteries, character-driven stories, and even romantic suspense. I loved all the flavors of genres that were floating around like water droplets in zero g. It made the entire read that much richer. This wonderful work negotiates the genres much the same way these characters traverse the stars. With ease, strength, intelligence, wit, and grace.
Do not wait to find out what gives Randy Brown’s “First” that true it factor, making it unforgettable.
March 14, 2024
I'm sad this book hasn't gotten more recognition. Well written, imaginative, character driven. Best science fiction I've read in a long time. Hard to put down.
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September 27, 2023I don't do stars, but awesome science fiction about our next new age of space exploration. Character driven, and uplifting tale of people overcoming adversity. See my complete review at Independent Book Reviews!
May 20, 2025
Interesting story, good writing. A worthwhile read.
At last! A well written contemporary science fiction novel. Maybe I've just been unlucky, but I've recently endured a string of SF book that seem to have been written by sixth graders who struggled with both science and English classes. This book by contrast, reads well and employs plausible (though certainly far-fetched — it is science fiction) science. The behavior of the characters near the end stretches credulity but it's a good story nevertheless.
At last! A well written contemporary science fiction novel. Maybe I've just been unlucky, but I've recently endured a string of SF book that seem to have been written by sixth graders who struggled with both science and English classes. This book by contrast, reads well and employs plausible (though certainly far-fetched — it is science fiction) science. The behavior of the characters near the end stretches credulity but it's a good story nevertheless.
April 8, 2025
This is why SciFi is fun to read.
Fun read with an inventive plot and blow by blow action.
If the author finds a physics partner, award winning SciFi is in his future.
Fun read with an inventive plot and blow by blow action.
If the author finds a physics partner, award winning SciFi is in his future.
March 14, 2024
A book of paradoxes, both profound and fun.
Originally reviewed for Reader Views, the full review can be found here: https://readerviewsarchives.wordpress...
This is not your average sci-fi novel, not the normal race-to-the-stars drama. My friends, give me a couple of minutes to give you some insight into the novel that’s going to be a break-out hit this year. I’m speaking of Randy Brown’s mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book with the understated name, “First.”
If I had read “First” ten or fifteen years ago I would have found it highly implausible, yet fun. But these days, Randy Brown’s concept could have been torn from potential headlines. It’s that spot-on with current society. Two mega-billionaires are each determined to put the first astronaut not only on the outer edges of our solar system, but into the next closest solar system as well. Each billionaire’s private space company has designed a new type of spaceship that utilizes electromagnetic energy (I won’t attempt an explanation), allowing them to travel well beyond the speed of light. This opens the possibility of travel to distant planets. And beyond. Without the need to put astronauts into stasis for years. Since I’m a total space nerd, I was already excited.
As readers on this astounding space race, we’ll be following a group of five people who have been chosen by SpaceFirst to train as the astronauts who will venture to all the planets in our system- including Pluto, because Chris, SpaceFirst’s CEO still considers Pluto a planet. Then one of the lucky five will be given the chance to be the first person to travel beyond, to Alpha Centauri. The possibilities are nearly limitless.
As if the basic premise isn’t enough to get a reader totally engrossed, the characters Mr. Brown has created will certainly do the trick. They are genuine characters with all the quirks and flaws. The story’s POV is from one of the five space travelers, Lewis. He is so warm and witty, so… ordinary (almost) that he seems like someone you’d want to sit down and have a beer with. He’s a brilliant engineer whose self-deprecating “aww-shucks” nature keeps him from being overrun by pride and ego. My favorite thing about Lewis, though, is his razor-sharp inner monologue that berates him regularly. Even his shipboard AI piles on the deprecating humor to Lewis’ chagrin, providing laugh-out-loud moments that are greatly appreciated.
I want to write thousands more words about this novel and its impact. This story is written with an easy style, like one friend talking to another. In fact, the words seemed to flow over the pages like quicksilver, and with equal fascination. Chock full of “holy cow” moments that don’t give any hint they’re coming, this read is spellbinding. Readers will also experience a full range of emotions from pride to gloom, elation to fear, anger to pain, and the complete spectrum within. As if this weren’t enough to keep you turning those pages, readers just KNOW who the antagonist is by the halfway point in the book. Or do they?
Of all the elements Randy Brown has brought together to create a story that is greater than the sum of its parts, the best might just be his use of various creative elements without detracting from the storyline, characters, or pace. Be sure to catch the author’s comments after the epilogue because I’m going to leave those devices like little nuggets to be discovered by readers, just as the author did. Since I read, on average, more than 300 books a year, I am completely confident declaring that “First” is truly a novel not to be missed. Sci-fi fans will find a slice of heaven here, so to speak. But so will those who enjoy thrillers, mysteries, character-driven stories, and even romantic suspense. I loved all the flavors of genres that were floating around like water droplets in zero g. It made the entire read that much richer. This wonderful work negotiates the genres much the same way these characters traverse the stars. With ease, strength, intelligence, wit, and grace.
Do not wait to find out what gives Randy Brown’s “First” that true IT factor, making it unforgettable.
Originally reviewed for Reader Views, the full review can be found here: https://readerviewsarchives.wordpress...
This is not your average sci-fi novel, not the normal race-to-the-stars drama. My friends, give me a couple of minutes to give you some insight into the novel that’s going to be a break-out hit this year. I’m speaking of Randy Brown’s mind-blowing, perception-altering, unputdownable book with the understated name, “First.”
If I had read “First” ten or fifteen years ago I would have found it highly implausible, yet fun. But these days, Randy Brown’s concept could have been torn from potential headlines. It’s that spot-on with current society. Two mega-billionaires are each determined to put the first astronaut not only on the outer edges of our solar system, but into the next closest solar system as well. Each billionaire’s private space company has designed a new type of spaceship that utilizes electromagnetic energy (I won’t attempt an explanation), allowing them to travel well beyond the speed of light. This opens the possibility of travel to distant planets. And beyond. Without the need to put astronauts into stasis for years. Since I’m a total space nerd, I was already excited.
As readers on this astounding space race, we’ll be following a group of five people who have been chosen by SpaceFirst to train as the astronauts who will venture to all the planets in our system- including Pluto, because Chris, SpaceFirst’s CEO still considers Pluto a planet. Then one of the lucky five will be given the chance to be the first person to travel beyond, to Alpha Centauri. The possibilities are nearly limitless.
As if the basic premise isn’t enough to get a reader totally engrossed, the characters Mr. Brown has created will certainly do the trick. They are genuine characters with all the quirks and flaws. The story’s POV is from one of the five space travelers, Lewis. He is so warm and witty, so… ordinary (almost) that he seems like someone you’d want to sit down and have a beer with. He’s a brilliant engineer whose self-deprecating “aww-shucks” nature keeps him from being overrun by pride and ego. My favorite thing about Lewis, though, is his razor-sharp inner monologue that berates him regularly. Even his shipboard AI piles on the deprecating humor to Lewis’ chagrin, providing laugh-out-loud moments that are greatly appreciated.
I want to write thousands more words about this novel and its impact. This story is written with an easy style, like one friend talking to another. In fact, the words seemed to flow over the pages like quicksilver, and with equal fascination. Chock full of “holy cow” moments that don’t give any hint they’re coming, this read is spellbinding. Readers will also experience a full range of emotions from pride to gloom, elation to fear, anger to pain, and the complete spectrum within. As if this weren’t enough to keep you turning those pages, readers just KNOW who the antagonist is by the halfway point in the book. Or do they?
Of all the elements Randy Brown has brought together to create a story that is greater than the sum of its parts, the best might just be his use of various creative elements without detracting from the storyline, characters, or pace. Be sure to catch the author’s comments after the epilogue because I’m going to leave those devices like little nuggets to be discovered by readers, just as the author did. Since I read, on average, more than 300 books a year, I am completely confident declaring that “First” is truly a novel not to be missed. Sci-fi fans will find a slice of heaven here, so to speak. But so will those who enjoy thrillers, mysteries, character-driven stories, and even romantic suspense. I loved all the flavors of genres that were floating around like water droplets in zero g. It made the entire read that much richer. This wonderful work negotiates the genres much the same way these characters traverse the stars. With ease, strength, intelligence, wit, and grace.
Do not wait to find out what gives Randy Brown’s “First” that true IT factor, making it unforgettable.
October 22, 2025
This is a near perfect blend of SF, who-done-it and soap opera. I would have preferred more of the SF part, but given the overall feeling of the story it's hard to fault these choices made by the author.
I would have given this book a 5 star rating except for one problem which seems endemic to many SF authors -- I am referring to WHEN the story of the book takes place. For some reason, many SF authors have their story beginning way too close to the present calendar date, in most cases laughably before the scientific advancements used in the book could realistically occur. If the time when this story takes place were 50 - 100 years in the future it would be far more plausible. But as with "Blade Runner" (and, yes, I know that is only a Hollywood movie adaptation of Dick's "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep"), the time line of this book is way too close to the present date, and this book will seem foolishly optimistic very soon.
I would have given this book a 5 star rating except for one problem which seems endemic to many SF authors -- I am referring to WHEN the story of the book takes place. For some reason, many SF authors have their story beginning way too close to the present calendar date, in most cases laughably before the scientific advancements used in the book could realistically occur. If the time when this story takes place were 50 - 100 years in the future it would be far more plausible. But as with "Blade Runner" (and, yes, I know that is only a Hollywood movie adaptation of Dick's "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep"), the time line of this book is way too close to the present date, and this book will seem foolishly optimistic very soon.
November 26, 2025
thoroughly enjoyable and exciting
I took a chance on this unknown author and was not disappointed. Randy Brown weaves a fascinating tale with a strong focus on the human element of space exploration. This is not what I would call hard science fiction but has many of the classic elements, such as, space travel, artificial intelligence, astronomy, as well as some more basic themes like intrigue, sabotage, and jealousy, a sprinkling of humor and even a touch of romance. It does take some suspension of belief for the technology of how the spacecraft gets from point A to point B, but once you get beyond that, the rest of the story is quite believable. Well written with only a few errors like missing words and missing/misplaced quotation marks.
I took a chance on this unknown author and was not disappointed. Randy Brown weaves a fascinating tale with a strong focus on the human element of space exploration. This is not what I would call hard science fiction but has many of the classic elements, such as, space travel, artificial intelligence, astronomy, as well as some more basic themes like intrigue, sabotage, and jealousy, a sprinkling of humor and even a touch of romance. It does take some suspension of belief for the technology of how the spacecraft gets from point A to point B, but once you get beyond that, the rest of the story is quite believable. Well written with only a few errors like missing words and missing/misplaced quotation marks.
August 25, 2025
Great storyline!
I enjoyed this book very much, but then I was raised by a Mom who got us 4 kids out of bed at 3am for the 4am (West Coast time) launches at Cape Canaveral.
This feels like it was written by an engineer (lots of those in our family, thanks to my Auntie Mom’s 2nd husband, a nuclear physicist w a family tree dominated by engineers of all sorts.
I love hard sci-fi, near future with tech we are trying to develop now.
It’s enjoyable as a detective novel, too, as the team must figure out why a series of life-threatening events occurred.
I’ll read the next in this series!
I enjoyed this book very much, but then I was raised by a Mom who got us 4 kids out of bed at 3am for the 4am (West Coast time) launches at Cape Canaveral.
This feels like it was written by an engineer (lots of those in our family, thanks to my Auntie Mom’s 2nd husband, a nuclear physicist w a family tree dominated by engineers of all sorts.
I love hard sci-fi, near future with tech we are trying to develop now.
It’s enjoyable as a detective novel, too, as the team must figure out why a series of life-threatening events occurred.
I’ll read the next in this series!
October 9, 2025
It's been a minute since I've read a book that I stayed up late reading, but FIRST is that kind of book. It takes a concept like instantaneous travel (think Star Trek teleportation) and replaces it with another idea. Hard science fans should stay away because there are holes in this idea. But I was there for the story. There's not much new in the story; you have all your typical tropes and characters. But somehow, Brown makes it work. Yes, it drags a little in a few places but not for long. The characters are likeable, and the "special" characters are enjoyable, too. The bonus is that the Kindle edition is very affordable.
June 3, 2025
A science fiction work with action, real drama, mystery and heart.
As a lifelong lover of science fiction, my tastes tend to favor colonizers on alien places and challenges, especially other life forms. But this story drew me immediately with engaging characters, intriguing science (but not too hard) and dramatic situations. The drama and mystery are brilliantly timed, problem solving and execution felt realistic and fraught with crisis. I loved every minute, even without a single monstrous alien.
As a lifelong lover of science fiction, my tastes tend to favor colonizers on alien places and challenges, especially other life forms. But this story drew me immediately with engaging characters, intriguing science (but not too hard) and dramatic situations. The drama and mystery are brilliantly timed, problem solving and execution felt realistic and fraught with crisis. I loved every minute, even without a single monstrous alien.
dnf
October 18, 2025I tried to suppress my disbelief and criticism, but gave up at approximately 20%. The story is so freaking idiotic at times, I just couldn't. It felt more like a fanfic of somewhat scientific tv-show than a real sci-fi novel. From fantastical technology with zero explanations to absolutely brainless management and safety of the facility (like when MC took apart his spaceship with a screwdriver for funzies). I also have to say that romantic subplot felt strange and unnatural. But I don't ship 99% of pairs in books, so it's not unusual for me.
November 11, 2025
A SIMPLE MAN'S REVIEW:
Better than I thought! You've got a few sci-fi tropes throughout the story, but it takes a strong turn once you think the book should be over.
The character is the typical "humble yet can do anything" man who is tasked with just about everything in the story. Throw in a bit of a love interest and some mysteries about the technical problems that keep arising and you've got a pretty entertaining read. The epilogue was far too cheesy for my taste, but at least it's not a setup for a sequel!
Your call!
Better than I thought! You've got a few sci-fi tropes throughout the story, but it takes a strong turn once you think the book should be over.
The character is the typical "humble yet can do anything" man who is tasked with just about everything in the story. Throw in a bit of a love interest and some mysteries about the technical problems that keep arising and you've got a pretty entertaining read. The epilogue was far too cheesy for my taste, but at least it's not a setup for a sequel!
Your call!
April 7, 2025
Very good, but flawed.
I enjoyed this book lot — at least most of it. A lot of sci-fi books by lesser-known authors are embarrassingly bad, yet still rate 4 or 4.5 stars on Amazon. As I was reading this, I felt that this genuinely deserved its high ratings. Until I got to the last 20 pages or so. A well-written, adult, intelligent story (albeit one that owes a lot to “Hail Mary”) was wrapped up in a ridiculously cliche fashion, which kinda ruined it for me.
I enjoyed this book lot — at least most of it. A lot of sci-fi books by lesser-known authors are embarrassingly bad, yet still rate 4 or 4.5 stars on Amazon. As I was reading this, I felt that this genuinely deserved its high ratings. Until I got to the last 20 pages or so. A well-written, adult, intelligent story (albeit one that owes a lot to “Hail Mary”) was wrapped up in a ridiculously cliche fashion, which kinda ruined it for me.
June 14, 2024
4.5 stars, really well done. Believable characters who interact well, and a plot driven by a realistic assessment of how humans really behave.
Only weak spots are the science of how to travel instantaneously across the galaxy, and the ending. Ending seemed contrived and hastily written with a deus ex machina feel to it.
A few drinking scenes, one risque scene, but nothing too bad.
Only weak spots are the science of how to travel instantaneously across the galaxy, and the ending. Ending seemed contrived and hastily written with a deus ex machina feel to it.
A few drinking scenes, one risque scene, but nothing too bad.
June 2, 2025
A descent story but reads like a trashy dime store novel
If you are a serious sci- fi reader you most likely won’t enjoy reading this. I had to skip a lot of lame filler to finish this. The characters were not very interesting and it just felt like the same characters you’d find in any modern day kindle thriller.
If you are a serious sci- fi reader you most likely won’t enjoy reading this. I had to skip a lot of lame filler to finish this. The characters were not very interesting and it just felt like the same characters you’d find in any modern day kindle thriller.
June 2, 2025
Suddenly we're exploring the solar system and beyond
The EMD technology enabled a private venture to do what only NASA had done before (and I'm a NASA retiree). The development of the technology then using it for exploration was well written and the course of history was believable and engaging. The main character was down to Earth and relatable. Good hard science fiction!
The EMD technology enabled a private venture to do what only NASA had done before (and I'm a NASA retiree). The development of the technology then using it for exploration was well written and the course of history was believable and engaging. The main character was down to Earth and relatable. Good hard science fiction!
August 31, 2025
Excellent!!!
This is an excellent story, full of gripping drama and humanity at its best and worst. I read it almost without stopping, and could barely put it down. The technological descriptions are very credible. As an engineer myself, I can truly relate to Lewis on many levels. Thank you, Randy!
This is an excellent story, full of gripping drama and humanity at its best and worst. I read it almost without stopping, and could barely put it down. The technological descriptions are very credible. As an engineer myself, I can truly relate to Lewis on many levels. Thank you, Randy!
September 7, 2025
Like finding a pearl in an oyster
I read a great deal and I start a lot of books that aren't well written enough to hold my interest until the end. Every now and then I get a surprise by an author that I'm not familiar with - a book that is a great light read and is good all the way to the end. This is one of them. Enjoy.
I read a great deal and I start a lot of books that aren't well written enough to hold my interest until the end. Every now and then I get a surprise by an author that I'm not familiar with - a book that is a great light read and is good all the way to the end. This is one of them. Enjoy.
December 14, 2025
took a minute
I wasn’t that enthralled in the first few chapters, but it was definitely worth the effort of continuing the story as it bloomed into quite a thrilling ride and I enjoyed it all the way to the very end, it also has a really good plot twist.
definitely recommend it’s a good read
I wasn’t that enthralled in the first few chapters, but it was definitely worth the effort of continuing the story as it bloomed into quite a thrilling ride and I enjoyed it all the way to the very end, it also has a really good plot twist.
definitely recommend it’s a good read
April 27, 2024
Tough to put down.
Quirky. Far fetched but fun. the characters are likeable and have some depth. The story is not complicated, few surprises, certainly attention grabbing and a very easy read.
Quirky. Far fetched but fun. the characters are likeable and have some depth. The story is not complicated, few surprises, certainly attention grabbing and a very easy read.
August 23, 2024
Believable science fiction, but the only reason I would call this SF is because it does involve space. It is really a nice mystery and the author knows how to tell a tale. Looking forward to reading more.
November 16, 2024
What a great story. It starts Deceptively simple and draws you into the story before you know what hit you. I couldn't put it down even when I didn't always understand the science. (which doesn't happen too often).
June 5, 2025
I do not read.....
......many one book stories. This was only the second time in probly 15+ years. Mr. Brown filled this book with everything necessary for a one time Novel. Thank you Randy. You just enlarged my horizons. Back to before WOT.
......many one book stories. This was only the second time in probly 15+ years. Mr. Brown filled this book with everything necessary for a one time Novel. Thank you Randy. You just enlarged my horizons. Back to before WOT.
June 21, 2025
Excellent
It's a scanner but it's a good scanner. Gets a little bit booring in places but If you can muddle your way through like I did it's still a worthwhile read... Guess I'll need to read another of his before I comment further. 🙂
It's a scanner but it's a good scanner. Gets a little bit booring in places but If you can muddle your way through like I did it's still a worthwhile read... Guess I'll need to read another of his before I comment further. 🙂
September 11, 2025
This was awful
Sophomoric at best. Many paragraphs could be eliminated without detracting from what is a very trite storyline. I find it hard to believe this won any awards. The Scooby-Doo ending really caps it off.
Sophomoric at best. Many paragraphs could be eliminated without detracting from what is a very trite storyline. I find it hard to believe this won any awards. The Scooby-Doo ending really caps it off.
November 7, 2025
Wonderfully Written and Remarkably Creative
Space travel seemed so poised and real with this amazing story unfolding. I couldn't put it down as each event rolled into the next! The author takes you into all the details. Highly recommended!
Space travel seemed so poised and real with this amazing story unfolding. I couldn't put it down as each event rolled into the next! The author takes you into all the details. Highly recommended!
November 22, 2025
Science fiction and so much more.
This novel is pure science fiction but also encompasses intrigue, detective work and relationships. It will keep you constantly questioning what will happen next. Loved it.
This novel is pure science fiction but also encompasses intrigue, detective work and relationships. It will keep you constantly questioning what will happen next. Loved it.
December 1, 2025
I feel this book is just ok. I appreciate the authors effort but felt the story was a bit dull and slow moving. The romance seemed forced and not believable and the ending of the story was a bit too quickly tied up with explanations that just didn’t work in my mind.
November 10, 2024
For me, this book started too slow. It did improve in the middle. I like science fiction and at the same time I want it to be believable, so this fell a little short for me. It was ok but not great.
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