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YFG Series #2
His Favorite Girl
With her new discovery at her fingertips, Melissa now has more access to the company than she's ever had before, but soon a shocking discovery sets off a series of events that might lead to her downfall.
When Mr. Shriver leaves the country on business and appoints Sean as temporary boss, things get messy really fast.
Only Melissa can hold everything together--that is, if she can stop herself from tearing everything apart.
When Mr. Shriver leaves the country on business and appoints Sean as temporary boss, things get messy really fast.
Only Melissa can hold everything together--that is, if she can stop herself from tearing everything apart.
197 pages, Kindle Edition
First published September 11, 2013
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About the author
Steph Sweeney
10 books172 followersHi! I'm Steph, a new erotica author. My debut novel, Your Favorite Girl, an erotic romance thriller, hit the Amazon Erotica Bestseller list in its first week, and now I'm at work on the next installment in the three book series, His Favorite Girl.
I write with an emphasis on realism and aesthetics. I want it to feel real. Sometimes this calls for explicit descriptions and language. I urge you to pass my work by if you are offended by open sexuality.
If you're up for anything, take a peek at Your Favorite Girl. =)
Steph <3
I write with an emphasis on realism and aesthetics. I want it to feel real. Sometimes this calls for explicit descriptions and language. I urge you to pass my work by if you are offended by open sexuality.
If you're up for anything, take a peek at Your Favorite Girl. =)
Steph <3
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July 10, 2020
Well this is still a little screwed up but I can't stop reading. I can't believe that all that happened and she's still alive. It'll be really interesting to see why she's still alive. Plus how much money does she have to have Flora for so long? It's hard to remember she still so young I always think of her as a middle aged woman, she's grumpy enough to be one. I can't quite tell who to trust but it adds to the story. We ae down 2 brothers I know she's going to pay for that.
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October 4, 2013
Steph Sweeney...why are you not my personal book writer? I love the YFG series. These books are dark and get to the underbelly of evil in people. I still don't know how I feel about Melissa. I love her one page and hate her the next. This story could end a thousand different ways and I feel pretty certain I'll be left guessing until the last second, just like I like it.
Steph Sweeney is rare in an author these days; she's a great writer and a great story-teller, which are two different things at times. I'm reminded of Jack Ketchum. He's the same way; spin you on your head with crazy shit and then BAM, right in the gut with emotions.
Steph Sweeney is rare in an author these days; she's a great writer and a great story-teller, which are two different things at times. I'm reminded of Jack Ketchum. He's the same way; spin you on your head with crazy shit and then BAM, right in the gut with emotions.
September 12, 2013
Wow! I liked the first book but I loved this book! It took so many twists and turns that I never expected. I couldn't stop once I started. I never knew what to expect out of Melissa. I highly recommend this book and look forward to the next installment.
September 20, 2013
Uff.. I loved it!! I really really loved it. Thank you for your amazing book, Steph!!
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January 25, 2014
Didn't really like where this book went. I really liked Patton
July 9, 2014
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Rating: Top Shelf; a disturbing journey to escape the terrors of Your Favorite Girl, Inc.
Agh, these books are both intriguing and terrifying. It has taken me so long to just sit down and put into words how crazy-incredible the writing is in these two books (all three actually). In Your Favorite Girl, I was shocked by the really descriptive sexual acts used to establish the mental and physical aspects of each character (I have read CJ Robert's The Dark Duet, and it is slightly less "erotic" than the YFG series). Although they are still "erotic", His Favorite Girl & Everyone's Favorite Girl ease back just a bit on the sex; so that we can get a clearer understanding of Melissa's journey to escape and just who is trust worthy enough to help her.
In His Favorite Girl, Melissa tries to gain the upper hand by exploring the various floors of Your Favorite Girl, Inc. to find a way out. Each brother has his own level, and like the seven deadly sins, each brother has their own distinct characteristics; greed/pride (Mr. Shrivers), wrath (Sean), envy (Brian), sloth/gluttony (Clifton) and they all share lust; it's their business to know lust. Melissa's affections for Patton, however, begin to fall apart as she starts to question his motives and refusal to stop his brothers from their insane attempts at domination.
Mr. Shrivers has a plan to take his company world-wide and Brian steps up with a new drug to take down anyone who gets in their way. Melissa is stuck between getting out, dealing with her affection towards Patton, her commitment to Flora, and possibly saving the world from YFG, Inc.'s malicious attempt at world domination. The final paragraph of this book made my jaw drop. Didn't see it coming.
Everyone's Favorite Girl is straight to the point with a plan of attack. Melissa and Patton devise a plan to get everyone out as Mr. Shrivers unveils his use for the remaining brothers and Favorite Girls. I don't want to give too much away, I only have a couple favorite quotes because I was so engrossed in reading this finale. You wonder, how can they go on in a normal world? But the epilogue is perfect; Sweeney does a great job of putting your mind at ease.
Rating: Top Shelf; a disturbing journey to escape the terrors of Your Favorite Girl, Inc.
Agh, these books are both intriguing and terrifying. It has taken me so long to just sit down and put into words how crazy-incredible the writing is in these two books (all three actually). In Your Favorite Girl, I was shocked by the really descriptive sexual acts used to establish the mental and physical aspects of each character (I have read CJ Robert's The Dark Duet, and it is slightly less "erotic" than the YFG series). Although they are still "erotic", His Favorite Girl & Everyone's Favorite Girl ease back just a bit on the sex; so that we can get a clearer understanding of Melissa's journey to escape and just who is trust worthy enough to help her.
This would be suicide by sex. Fuck it. We're dead anyway.
Sweeney, Steph (2014-04-29). Everyone's Favorite Girl (YFG Series) (Kindle Locations 670-671). . Kindle Edition.
In His Favorite Girl, Melissa tries to gain the upper hand by exploring the various floors of Your Favorite Girl, Inc. to find a way out. Each brother has his own level, and like the seven deadly sins, each brother has their own distinct characteristics; greed/pride (Mr. Shrivers), wrath (Sean), envy (Brian), sloth/gluttony (Clifton) and they all share lust; it's their business to know lust. Melissa's affections for Patton, however, begin to fall apart as she starts to question his motives and refusal to stop his brothers from their insane attempts at domination.
The third drug. Brian had confirmed it existed with a nod and a smile. Libido, Love, and what? What could he have invented--or discovered--that was more intriguing than synthetic bliss and synthetic adoration? What could be so worthy of secrecy?
Sweeney, Steph (2013-09-11). His Favorite Girl (YFG Series) (Kindle Locations 997-999). . Kindle Edition.
Mr. Shrivers has a plan to take his company world-wide and Brian steps up with a new drug to take down anyone who gets in their way. Melissa is stuck between getting out, dealing with her affection towards Patton, her commitment to Flora, and possibly saving the world from YFG, Inc.'s malicious attempt at world domination. The final paragraph of this book made my jaw drop. Didn't see it coming.
All those powerful men, business executives, politicians, high-profile religious figures . . . all at the behest of Mr. Shriver , the CEO of a sex slave operation that--I was learning lately--was so much more. These were men who made me more uncomfortable than I'd ever been in my life, and yet Mr. Shriver had captured them all like flies on a sticky strip. With his power and Brian's technological innovations, Your Favorite Girl, Incorporated might actually take over the world.
Sweeney, Steph (2013-09-11). His Favorite Girl (YFG Series) (Kindle Locations 1242-1245). . Kindle Edition.
Everyone's Favorite Girl is straight to the point with a plan of attack. Melissa and Patton devise a plan to get everyone out as Mr. Shrivers unveils his use for the remaining brothers and Favorite Girls. I don't want to give too much away, I only have a couple favorite quotes because I was so engrossed in reading this finale. You wonder, how can they go on in a normal world? But the epilogue is perfect; Sweeney does a great job of putting your mind at ease.
Mr. Shriver began to struggle and Sean responded with two more punches, rendering the old man half-conscious. She plunged in the needle. I stepped forward to watch. It was the most exhilarating penetration I’ve ever known.
Sweeney, Steph (2014-04-29). Everyone's Favorite Girl (YFG Series) (Kindle Locations 3090-3093). . Kindle Edition.
October 21, 2013
Words cannot express how much i loved this book... this is the best series that i have read
this story continues where book one (MFG) left off. Melissa took over her old roommates job. She is now suppose to drug, and seduce clients into buying their product. she is now dating one of the boss's so she is safe from being killed. she found the vent tunnels where clifton used to come into her room. she is now using this to spy on the company.
she finds out brian is abusing his assistant Judy. He let his soldier the one who she assaulted last book come in her room and seek revenge. She know wants to kill Brian. Melissa did the next best thing. She took just and placed we in the vent. She now seeks up tenor numerous times a day and feeds her.
Meanwhile since no one can find her Melissa and her new boyfriend are set out on a owl trip to hire Brian a new assistant. When they get back they are planning to kill mr. Shivers and take over the company. Melissa is also dead set on buying another girl. He found out that they are going to kill the girls because they are going to focus on the drugs and not women.
Judy over hears a plan to take down shivers. She could not let Brian win so she ruined his plan. Now the whole world is now dealing with the Libdo drug and no one knows how to fix it
During this story you will also hear the boss's back story which is pretty interesting. Character development is very exciting in this book!!
this story continues where book one (MFG) left off. Melissa took over her old roommates job. She is now suppose to drug, and seduce clients into buying their product. she is now dating one of the boss's so she is safe from being killed. she found the vent tunnels where clifton used to come into her room. she is now using this to spy on the company.
she finds out brian is abusing his assistant Judy. He let his soldier the one who she assaulted last book come in her room and seek revenge. She know wants to kill Brian. Melissa did the next best thing. She took just and placed we in the vent. She now seeks up tenor numerous times a day and feeds her.
Meanwhile since no one can find her Melissa and her new boyfriend are set out on a owl trip to hire Brian a new assistant. When they get back they are planning to kill mr. Shivers and take over the company. Melissa is also dead set on buying another girl. He found out that they are going to kill the girls because they are going to focus on the drugs and not women.
Judy over hears a plan to take down shivers. She could not let Brian win so she ruined his plan. Now the whole world is now dealing with the Libdo drug and no one knows how to fix it
During this story you will also hear the boss's back story which is pretty interesting. Character development is very exciting in this book!!
March 12, 2014
His Favorite Girl (YFG Series #2)
By: Steph Sweeney
5/5 stars
The second book in the Your Favorite Girl series is even better than the first book! I really hate giving spoilers… and the synopsis doesn’t give much away…so I’ll try my best!
In this book, Melissa finds her strength & learns more about the YFG, Inc. company. Patton is one of the executives & of course a brother to the other executives. He gave Melissa the strength & stability to make the moves that she does. However, she becomes more sneaky & conniving within the bowels of the company.
I do feel sorry for Patton, because he truly cares for the girls, in a fatherly way, but cannot do anything about it because of the blackmail that the oldest brother holds over all their heads. Even though his other brothers do atrocious things, he still doesn’t want harm to come to them. I feel that he truly loves Melissa and so this makes things a little difficult for him, since he essentially saved Melissa’s life.
I really can’t wait until the next book to see where the author goes with this series. This book’s twists and turns were crazy and unexpected.
By: Steph Sweeney
5/5 stars
The second book in the Your Favorite Girl series is even better than the first book! I really hate giving spoilers… and the synopsis doesn’t give much away…so I’ll try my best!
In this book, Melissa finds her strength & learns more about the YFG, Inc. company. Patton is one of the executives & of course a brother to the other executives. He gave Melissa the strength & stability to make the moves that she does. However, she becomes more sneaky & conniving within the bowels of the company.
I do feel sorry for Patton, because he truly cares for the girls, in a fatherly way, but cannot do anything about it because of the blackmail that the oldest brother holds over all their heads. Even though his other brothers do atrocious things, he still doesn’t want harm to come to them. I feel that he truly loves Melissa and so this makes things a little difficult for him, since he essentially saved Melissa’s life.
I really can’t wait until the next book to see where the author goes with this series. This book’s twists and turns were crazy and unexpected.
October 5, 2013
loved Patton, and still do. thought some things Melissa did and said was hurtful and really wanted her to show him the same feelings he was showing to her.
this is the first time ive ever read a book like this.well the 1st part yesterday and now this 2nd one today.
no matter how sick I felt reading some things I just had to find out what was next.
is it sad that im still hoping for her and patton to be together.?
this book has me gripped in a way, and im interested to see the downfall of a lot of the main characters. which is weird for me. but a life without 4nof the 5 brothers would be good.
poor judy :(
this is the first time ive ever read a book like this.well the 1st part yesterday and now this 2nd one today.
no matter how sick I felt reading some things I just had to find out what was next.
is it sad that im still hoping for her and patton to be together.?
this book has me gripped in a way, and im interested to see the downfall of a lot of the main characters. which is weird for me. but a life without 4nof the 5 brothers would be good.
poor judy :(
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September 15, 2013I loved this book. it is the second in the Your Favorite Girl series. I couldn't put it down. I read 90% of it right away. Steph is a very talented writer and very creative with the storyline. I love her skills and hope she continues this series. It's exciting all the way and she comes up with some amazing mind blowing stuff that keeps you locked into it, all of it, right until the end. I love the way she writes and hope to read a lot more in the future. Read it, you'll get hooked. Good Job to you, Steph Sweeney. You always have me wanting more. :-)
September 29, 2013
I gave this one a 5 because we got to find out more about the brothers and Melissa falls in love with a senior citizen unbeknownst to her lol also, Judy is as smart as of the people in her department, she messed up in the end but had to do what she had to do. I asked myself is a horny world worst than a world where people are so in love they'd do anything if asked?sick which is worse.
I can't wait for book three I want to know if they bring down the evil corporation or change it completely! oh yea I don't think I would have went back for a clone risk though lol
I can't wait for book three I want to know if they bring down the evil corporation or change it completely! oh yea I don't think I would have went back for a clone risk though lol
January 22, 2014
Steph Sweeney does it yet again!!!!!! HFG had me sitting on the edge of my seat!!! You think one thing will happen and then BAM! What you never expected happens! Her YFG series is 5 stars all around! Her writing is adventurous, descriptive, and alluring! I have never read a book like this and I would recommend it to anyone who has an open mind. I cant wait to see where here third book in this series takes us!!!! My mind is blown!!!!!!!
January 4, 2014
So freaking good! Pretty sure I'm in love with Flora myself! I literally finished this book in less than 24 hours... I just couldn't put it down. I need the third book ASAP! I didn't like Patton's reaction at the end.. I didn't care for him not wanting Brian to die. Too much emotion for me. Other than that the story kept me intrigued from beginning to end. Well written minus some grammatical errors but I really enjoyed it. Give me more!
September 28, 2014
I liked the book very much. Sweeney is a great storyteller, grabbed my interest from the very first sentence of YFG and kept up even better on HFG. I look forward to the third part of the series and will definitely be reading every other book of Steph Sweeney!
April 30, 2014
3.5 Stars.
I felt like this look lacked in comparison to the first book, like it was missing some of the things which initially drew me in. Don't get me wrong, it was still a good book but I enjoyed the first one much better and I look forward to book three to see how things play out.
I felt like this look lacked in comparison to the first book, like it was missing some of the things which initially drew me in. Don't get me wrong, it was still a good book but I enjoyed the first one much better and I look forward to book three to see how things play out.
October 22, 2013
Wasn't as good as the first one. Very fast read and once again in middle of sentence just.... To b continued please at least finish the sentence. But can't wait for next part to find out what happened
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June 6, 2014
How is it that this woman can make me blush and feel like I am the naughty one!!! Again I could not put this down and could not stop myself from going strait to book three, Everyone's Favorite Girl!!
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