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A Wild Night's Encounter

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Careful what you do in the dark - someone may be watching!

A WILD NIGHT TO REMEMBER

Beautiful young Laila is dragged to one of those hormone-crazed frat parties by her friend Ashley. When Ashley disappears into the alcohol-induced, half naked throng, Laila is forced to find somewhere to disappear herself.

Laila tries to hide, which would have worked out brilliantly if it did not give her a front row seat to an orgy. The heated atmosphere tempts Laila to privately join in. But by doing so, she puts on a show of her own. And who has a front row seat to her display?

When the handsome yet arrogant daredevil Eric invades her solitude, things go from steamy to downright embarrassing. Could the night get any worse? Will it haunt Laila forever? Eric has a proposition that might change her perspective, but is she willing to accept?

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This story contains content that some readers may find objectionable, including sex and erotic themes.

87 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 15, 2013

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About the author

C.J. McLane

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C.J. McLane was born in Albuquerque, New Mexico, to a family that runs a business in the music industry.

He grew up listening to demos of aspiring musicians which molded him into a man with a great passion for art. It was a different kind of art, however, that C.J. wanted to pursue academically.

C.J. fell in love with photography because he was constantly amazed by the fact that one picture could tell a lifetime's story. He did an excellent story-telling job behind the lens. But when he purposefully acquainted himself with photo descriptions, he found a new love - words.

He always dreaded writing, mostly because his cursive was so incomprehensible that his essays in middle school received low grades. But he's got a keyboard now, and a pool of writing ideas backed by his journeys and experiences - which he likes to call the rocking party life of a college guy.

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56 reviews120 followers
January 29, 2014
Sex:1 When trying to write erotica I hear the good authors tell me you need to show your audience not tell them. Use all your senses to make the reader want to keep reading. Well that did not happen here. There were to many pages of non-dialogue and telling of a story. I didn't feel any need or flush, that I normally get when reading erotica. The point of erotica is to titillate. This made me annoyed.

Plot:1 What Plot. The teaser book behind this one had more plot and I don't read horror or suspense. Yes I know erotica doesn't have plot sometimes. Its like a porn movies with a script. But sometimes you get one that has both and it rocks. Just not this one.

Overall Enjoyment: 1 No enjoyment what so ever. I think this is a perfect example of what not to do when writing. Use the interactions between character or even the environment to move the story along. I want my 30 minutes back.
33 reviews
February 5, 2023
Mega, super raunchy 😂😂😂 But I honestly must say, I want to know where their relationship goes. Lightweight on the verge of giving this quick and free read a 5 ⭐️ rating tbh! Now to finish the series or no???? So far, not at the local library so this road with Laila may end here.
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822 reviews69 followers
June 21, 2013
3.5?

What the hey. So I read it and why I like this so much is because of the hero.... WHAT THE FUCK IS WRONG WITH ME that I'm attracted to guys who annoy the shit out of me? Damn it's like all the freakin time I'm pulled by their annoying irresistible charms. They're annoying but I see them as annoying, witty, cute.. I refuse to compliment them! And here I thought I was a sadist. I must be a masochist for liking this kind of self-torture.. That just makes me sad.

Anyhoo, I'm not in love with
What caught my attention and made me stamp this book with 3.5? stars is because Eric and Laila's interactions caught me and held me. I think Laila matches him well. It's rare for me to find an annoying hero. He's refreshing, intriguing, juvenile (I appear to have a thing for juvenile men, ex. Gwenvael from G.A. Aiken, the way they craft their words appeals), witty, wily, annoying.. interesting. I'm amused and charmed. I want more.
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112 reviews16 followers
August 14, 2013
Sex:1 When trying to write erotica I hear the good authors tell me you need to show your audience not tell them. Use all your senses to make the reader want to keep reading. Well that did not happen here. There were to many pages of non-dialogue and telling of a story. I didn't feel any need or flush, that I normally get when reading erotica. The point of erotica is to titillate. This made me annoyed.

Plot:1 What Plot. The teaser book behind this one had more plot and I don't read horror or suspense. Yes I know erotica doesn't have plot sometimes. Its like a porn movies with a script. But sometimes you get one that has both and it rocks. Just not this one.

Overall Enjoyment: 1 No enjoyment what so ever. I think this is a perfect example of what not to do when writing. Use the interactions between character or even the environment to move the story along. I want my 30 minutes back.
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4,557 reviews326 followers
April 8, 2014
Laila is dragged to an infamous frat party by her good friend Ashley. And like always, Ashley disappears in the crowd and Laila is left alone, well not really alone, but you get the point. So, like all the frat parties, there are drunk people a plenty, so Laila decides to make herself scare from the drunk cavemen. Sounds like a good idea until she ends up having a VIP seat with a great view of. This was the whole concept of this book and it was too short.
Profile Image for Big Dee.
858 reviews3 followers
March 23, 2016
Blah! Vanilla ice cream has more spice. This story reads like a teenage boy's wet dream. The best part is when the guy jumps in the pool at the beginning of the book. After that it's all down hill. The characters are unremarkable as are the sex scenes. The storyline had no substance. You know the story is in trouble when there are several orgies and they all come off as boring.

I would have been better off trying to read the bubbles in a bucket of paint.
Profile Image for Shelly Wainwright.
11 reviews
March 4, 2014
Not sure on what I think about this book. I went into this hyperactive story and got excited and then....nothing. Then I continue reading and get excited again and then nothing again. It was a good short read but still unsure about this one. I would suggest this book as a quickie...but there is more to the series. This is NOT a standalone read.
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122 reviews8 followers
June 23, 2013
What can i say?? I liked the characters, even the obnoxious ones. It was a fun,short read. Definitely will bring me back to see where it goes from here. I'm the curious sort so i will have to read the next one.
Profile Image for Deborah.
1,841 reviews
March 27, 2016
This is a quick funny read about a young lady who meets a young man at a frat party . After seeing and possibly taping what she was doing, blackmailed her into having breakfast with him. Enjoy I did.
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118 reviews
August 21, 2013
Not bad for a short book about a college frat party. Has the potential for more or to be left where it is.
8 reviews
June 9, 2013
this book really leaves you hanging for the next one
Profile Image for Jenny  Zimmerman.
1,669 reviews71 followers
November 29, 2013
Wild is exactly what this book was too. It is addicting and is sure to arrouse your libido as it did mine. A great and recommended read for erotica lovers.
***CAUTION: READER DISCRETION ADVISED***
Profile Image for Kathryn Crawford.
32 reviews
September 10, 2016
Meh

I know it's free... and its not what I expected or was looking for... more like a miss download... but yeah...
3 reviews1 follower
March 9, 2014
A wild night

A wild night

it was a very quick book. I didn't really like the book but I'm one book closer to finishing my goal.
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65 reviews
July 19, 2014
Wild Read

Wild Read

A Wild Night's Encounter is not what you expect, it literally leaves you hanging, in a good way. I CAN'T wait to read the next one!! :)
Profile Image for Deirdre.
454 reviews12 followers
July 23, 2014
1.5 stars.
every stupid euphemism is used here. tool. tunnel. ugh.
434 reviews6 followers
April 1, 2015
It was OK. The set up was quite ridiculous even for an erotica. I wasn't all that impressed by the writing and editing either.
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65 reviews1 follower
July 10, 2014
Average storyline, typical character but I still enjoy it!
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