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Bad Boys Gone Good #1
Making the First Move
Big promotion, complete with $300 pen? Check.
A hot man who cuddles, spends the night and makes breakfast? Check.
Waiting for the other shoe to fall? Check.
"If it feels too good to be true, it probably is."
Five years of obsessing over her career pays off when Melanie Gordon gets a promotion that could make or break her. But the new job takes her back to her hometown to face the family she's distanced herself from, and forces her to leave behind sexy, mysterious philanthropist Raine Mason, who just might be the man of her dreams.
By the time Raine makes his move with Melanie, her one-way ticket to Cleveland is booked. He convinces her to take a chance on him long-distance, but can't yet trust her with the whole truth about himself.
Raine and Melanie slowly peel back each other's layers (starting with his bicep-hugging sweater). She is finally ready to give her heart to him…until she learns the dark secret of his past. He'll have to prove to her that love is worth the risk.
A hot man who cuddles, spends the night and makes breakfast? Check.
Waiting for the other shoe to fall? Check.
"If it feels too good to be true, it probably is."
Five years of obsessing over her career pays off when Melanie Gordon gets a promotion that could make or break her. But the new job takes her back to her hometown to face the family she's distanced herself from, and forces her to leave behind sexy, mysterious philanthropist Raine Mason, who just might be the man of her dreams.
By the time Raine makes his move with Melanie, her one-way ticket to Cleveland is booked. He convinces her to take a chance on him long-distance, but can't yet trust her with the whole truth about himself.
Raine and Melanie slowly peel back each other's layers (starting with his bicep-hugging sweater). She is finally ready to give her heart to him…until she learns the dark secret of his past. He'll have to prove to her that love is worth the risk.
384 pages, Kindle Edition
First published July 22, 2013
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Reese Ryan
172 books601 followersVivian Award-winning author Reese Ryan writes sexy, emotional, “grown folks” romantic fiction set in small Southern towns. Her characters find love while navigating career crises and family drama.
Reese's books have been featured on Entertainment Weekly, BuzzFeed, and BookRiot. She is the host of Story Behind the Story—her YouTube show where readers and authors connect.
Reese's books have been featured on Entertainment Weekly, BuzzFeed, and BookRiot. She is the host of Story Behind the Story—her YouTube show where readers and authors connect.
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September 9, 2013
The set up
Melanie Gordon finally gets the promotion she's worked so hard for and it comes with a few hitches. She's going to have to move back to Cleveland, her hometown, and make a decision about whether she's up for a long distance relationship. Her "best friend" Raine Mason finally makes a move (after two years!) and now Melanie is gun shy about starting up and maintaining a romance with 2,000 miles between them. Oh, and she's returning to the city where her heart was broken by her first and only love.
The issues
Both Raine and Melanie haven't been completely honest with each other about their pasts and he's keeping some huge secrets. She's designed her entire life to achieve the goals and ideals her deceased father wanted for her and every decision she makes is under the lens of what he would want her to do. Melanie hasn't stayed in communication with her family and now she's going to have to face all those insecurities that only mothers can evoke and a sister who seems to be the ideal wife and mother. She's not ready to let them know about Raine as she's still on the fence as to whether it can work or not.
What worked well
Raine, Raine and more Raine! He's gorgeous, considerate, and works hard to prove to Melanie their relationship deserves a chance. There were times I wanted to throttle her as this guy was a dream but she was afraid he was too good to be true (well, maybe she was a little bit right). Her ex-love, Jaxson, becomes part of the story in a very authentic way and Melanie's reactions create a lot of tension. The family dynamics and job pressures made the situation even more complex but in an intriguing way. There are no caricatures here as each person was well developed and behaved true to nature, even when you wanted them to be different.
What was a teeny bit irritating
Melanie constantly drew lines in the sand and they kept moving. She seemed really judgmental and I came close to not liking her...until I learned why later and completely forgave her.
The bottom line
I loved this story, the romance, the family, the heartache...well I just loved this very well written book. I have a book boyfriend list that will forever include Raine. Everything works in this story and it had me experience just about every emotion I can think of. I hated seeing it end but then I found out there's another book coming soon!! Trust me, I'm a sure thing. Rated 4.5 stars
(I received an ARC from the publisher)
Melanie Gordon finally gets the promotion she's worked so hard for and it comes with a few hitches. She's going to have to move back to Cleveland, her hometown, and make a decision about whether she's up for a long distance relationship. Her "best friend" Raine Mason finally makes a move (after two years!) and now Melanie is gun shy about starting up and maintaining a romance with 2,000 miles between them. Oh, and she's returning to the city where her heart was broken by her first and only love.
The issues
Both Raine and Melanie haven't been completely honest with each other about their pasts and he's keeping some huge secrets. She's designed her entire life to achieve the goals and ideals her deceased father wanted for her and every decision she makes is under the lens of what he would want her to do. Melanie hasn't stayed in communication with her family and now she's going to have to face all those insecurities that only mothers can evoke and a sister who seems to be the ideal wife and mother. She's not ready to let them know about Raine as she's still on the fence as to whether it can work or not.
What worked well
Raine, Raine and more Raine! He's gorgeous, considerate, and works hard to prove to Melanie their relationship deserves a chance. There were times I wanted to throttle her as this guy was a dream but she was afraid he was too good to be true (well, maybe she was a little bit right). Her ex-love, Jaxson, becomes part of the story in a very authentic way and Melanie's reactions create a lot of tension. The family dynamics and job pressures made the situation even more complex but in an intriguing way. There are no caricatures here as each person was well developed and behaved true to nature, even when you wanted them to be different.
What was a teeny bit irritating
Melanie constantly drew lines in the sand and they kept moving. She seemed really judgmental and I came close to not liking her...until I learned why later and completely forgave her.
The bottom line
I loved this story, the romance, the family, the heartache...well I just loved this very well written book. I have a book boyfriend list that will forever include Raine. Everything works in this story and it had me experience just about every emotion I can think of. I hated seeing it end but then I found out there's another book coming soon!! Trust me, I'm a sure thing. Rated 4.5 stars
(I received an ARC from the publisher)
September 12, 2013
Originally posted at Love in the Margins.
Over the past five years, Melanie Gordon has worked hard to make a name for herself in her field of business. Dating, her social life, family relationships – everything in her life has taken a backseat to her career. When she’s offered a major promotion and named the branch manager of a brand new regional office, it appears that all of her work and sacrifice has finally paid off. There’s a hitch, of course, in that the office is in Cleveland – where she had fled from with her tail between her legs five years ago.
As if that’s not enough, Melanie’s friend and sort-of colleague Raine Mason tosses a spanner into the works by acting on a simmering, unspoken attraction between them on the night she gets promoted. Although she’s notoriously demanding when it comes to men, Mel’s pretty sure he’s the perfect man. He’s smart, handsome, and the dedicated head of a non-profit that finds employment for disadvantaged populations. But he’s in San Francisco, so what’s a girl to do?
I freely admit that I grabbed this debut novel from author Reese Ryan because I was browsing through Carina’s contemporary romances and the black couple on the cover stood out. (I’m easy, what can I say?) While I enjoyed the book, and will try another by this author, I didn’t love it. It felt like a debut novel. I wanted to be transported by her story, but the writing kept getting in my way. It was dry and prescriptive with an overabundance of fiddly little details that bogged down the narrative. Characterization was flat; the good characters were perfect, the bad characters downright villainous.
What kept me reading was the story’s freshness. It transcended a number of tried and true romance conventions without crossing too far over into chick lit territory. I enjoyed reading about a grown-up woman with a serious career, a full life and a history of past relationships. Melanie was this capable, confident woman that you don’t often get in romance. She’s not perfect, and she grows as a person over the course of the book, but she’s complete. Raine doesn’t swoop in and solve her problems or gift her with a sexual awakening, he enhances and supports her. Theirs is a true partnership of equals and, clumsy writing aside, I’m always here for that.
Another element that jumped out at me was the emphasis on the markers of middle-class life. Like a lot of chick lit, the book frequently name dropped brands and specified the food they ate in restaurants. Unlike chick lit, though, they weren’t exclusive brands. They were Sevens jeans and Stella McCartney purses and plates of beef osso bucco. They were the sorts of things you can find at your average suburban shopping mall. I’ve always read brand name dropping as a sort of aspirational escapism, so I found the brands in this book an unusual detail. I’m still not entirely sure how to read it.
Final Assessment: An entertaining read with a strong focus on the heroine’s journey, but it does occasionally bog down in unnecessary detail and bland telling. C+
Over the past five years, Melanie Gordon has worked hard to make a name for herself in her field of business. Dating, her social life, family relationships – everything in her life has taken a backseat to her career. When she’s offered a major promotion and named the branch manager of a brand new regional office, it appears that all of her work and sacrifice has finally paid off. There’s a hitch, of course, in that the office is in Cleveland – where she had fled from with her tail between her legs five years ago.
As if that’s not enough, Melanie’s friend and sort-of colleague Raine Mason tosses a spanner into the works by acting on a simmering, unspoken attraction between them on the night she gets promoted. Although she’s notoriously demanding when it comes to men, Mel’s pretty sure he’s the perfect man. He’s smart, handsome, and the dedicated head of a non-profit that finds employment for disadvantaged populations. But he’s in San Francisco, so what’s a girl to do?
I freely admit that I grabbed this debut novel from author Reese Ryan because I was browsing through Carina’s contemporary romances and the black couple on the cover stood out. (I’m easy, what can I say?) While I enjoyed the book, and will try another by this author, I didn’t love it. It felt like a debut novel. I wanted to be transported by her story, but the writing kept getting in my way. It was dry and prescriptive with an overabundance of fiddly little details that bogged down the narrative. Characterization was flat; the good characters were perfect, the bad characters downright villainous.
What kept me reading was the story’s freshness. It transcended a number of tried and true romance conventions without crossing too far over into chick lit territory. I enjoyed reading about a grown-up woman with a serious career, a full life and a history of past relationships. Melanie was this capable, confident woman that you don’t often get in romance. She’s not perfect, and she grows as a person over the course of the book, but she’s complete. Raine doesn’t swoop in and solve her problems or gift her with a sexual awakening, he enhances and supports her. Theirs is a true partnership of equals and, clumsy writing aside, I’m always here for that.
Another element that jumped out at me was the emphasis on the markers of middle-class life. Like a lot of chick lit, the book frequently name dropped brands and specified the food they ate in restaurants. Unlike chick lit, though, they weren’t exclusive brands. They were Sevens jeans and Stella McCartney purses and plates of beef osso bucco. They were the sorts of things you can find at your average suburban shopping mall. I’ve always read brand name dropping as a sort of aspirational escapism, so I found the brands in this book an unusual detail. I’m still not entirely sure how to read it.
Final Assessment: An entertaining read with a strong focus on the heroine’s journey, but it does occasionally bog down in unnecessary detail and bland telling. C+
August 4, 2013
For a change of pace from my paranormals, historicals and sci-fis, now and then I'll pick up a contemporary romance that is almost solely about the romance. In this case, I found the story doubly appealing because the focus was set amongst the heroine's down to earth family. I enjoy a good cozy romance and this did the trick.
The story revolves around thirty-something career woman, Melanie Gordon. She just got the promoted and given a big chance in her firm that will take her back to her home town of Cleveland. Returning home is a divided joy for her, but she still wants to celebrate her promotion so she asks her friend whom she has a crush on, Raine Mason, to go out with her. Raine surprises her by making his move after two years showing he's interested in her. Why did he wait so long she wonders.
After a fabulous three weeks with Raine, Melanie rips herself away and heads out to Cleveland. There is no time to dwell on what could have been as she sets up the firm's Cleveland office and gets things going, adjusts to settling in with her family and just tries to figure things out. As things setttle, she realizes that she can't get Raine out of her mind and those friendly phone chats and texts aren't enough, but what can she do?
Melanie's mom is after her to marry and keeping her own secret, Melanie's sister's life isn't as perfect as she thought and she feels remorse that she hasn't been there for Mimi, and her adopted sister has really made some changes and found a good man. Life gets really complicated when the once love of her life who cheated on her and dumped her for another woman, Jaxton, tries to make his way back into her life. Right about then, Raine makes the proposal that they attempt a long distance relationship and she agrees though she has reservations. Surprisingly, the relationship seems to be working until Raine's secret comes out and it might be too much for Melanie to handle.
As noted, the plot on this one is all about Melanie's romance and life. Its told entirely from her perspective. The plot was well paced for a quiet and mostly character-driven story. The pace of the romance development was believable and well-written. The office politics, family life stuff and Melanie's hero were all wonderful and enjoyable.
Unfortunately, I do have a 'but'. I couldn't stand Melanie for most of the book. Now this is just me and others might be okay with her. It might have been less impactive on me if I could have gotten away from her for a little while, but she's the main focus of the book. To be fair, she needs to grow and she does to a certain extent, but its not until nearly the end that she has her epiphany moment about herself which by then I was nearly out of patience with her. My problem is that for the most part I found her selfish, judgmental and self-centered so that even when she had normal human reactions to things I had to work to cut her some slack. It all stems from how desperately trying to please a father all her life even five years after he died has twisted her into who she is. Everyone knows she has issues except her. She couldn't be more blind and it was hard reading from her perspective. She was unintentionally cruel to her family by shutting them out of her life and then she pops back in accusing everyone of keeping stuff from her. Also, she really never cut Raine slack even when the guy is practically bleeding after a huge confession to her. Maybe because the author made me fall in love with her hero, Rain, is why I couldn't like Melanie. He's a beautiful man and melds perfectly with Melanie and her family, but that's not good enough for her. Raine's a survivor and an inspiration to those who get a second chance to make good.
Okay, enough on that. There was so much that was rich and good in this story that I can say that it was an enjoyable read with a satisfying ending. Those who enjoy spicy Contemporary Romance should give this one a try.
The story revolves around thirty-something career woman, Melanie Gordon. She just got the promoted and given a big chance in her firm that will take her back to her home town of Cleveland. Returning home is a divided joy for her, but she still wants to celebrate her promotion so she asks her friend whom she has a crush on, Raine Mason, to go out with her. Raine surprises her by making his move after two years showing he's interested in her. Why did he wait so long she wonders.
After a fabulous three weeks with Raine, Melanie rips herself away and heads out to Cleveland. There is no time to dwell on what could have been as she sets up the firm's Cleveland office and gets things going, adjusts to settling in with her family and just tries to figure things out. As things setttle, she realizes that she can't get Raine out of her mind and those friendly phone chats and texts aren't enough, but what can she do?
Melanie's mom is after her to marry and keeping her own secret, Melanie's sister's life isn't as perfect as she thought and she feels remorse that she hasn't been there for Mimi, and her adopted sister has really made some changes and found a good man. Life gets really complicated when the once love of her life who cheated on her and dumped her for another woman, Jaxton, tries to make his way back into her life. Right about then, Raine makes the proposal that they attempt a long distance relationship and she agrees though she has reservations. Surprisingly, the relationship seems to be working until Raine's secret comes out and it might be too much for Melanie to handle.
As noted, the plot on this one is all about Melanie's romance and life. Its told entirely from her perspective. The plot was well paced for a quiet and mostly character-driven story. The pace of the romance development was believable and well-written. The office politics, family life stuff and Melanie's hero were all wonderful and enjoyable.
Unfortunately, I do have a 'but'. I couldn't stand Melanie for most of the book. Now this is just me and others might be okay with her. It might have been less impactive on me if I could have gotten away from her for a little while, but she's the main focus of the book. To be fair, she needs to grow and she does to a certain extent, but its not until nearly the end that she has her epiphany moment about herself which by then I was nearly out of patience with her. My problem is that for the most part I found her selfish, judgmental and self-centered so that even when she had normal human reactions to things I had to work to cut her some slack. It all stems from how desperately trying to please a father all her life even five years after he died has twisted her into who she is. Everyone knows she has issues except her. She couldn't be more blind and it was hard reading from her perspective. She was unintentionally cruel to her family by shutting them out of her life and then she pops back in accusing everyone of keeping stuff from her. Also, she really never cut Raine slack even when the guy is practically bleeding after a huge confession to her. Maybe because the author made me fall in love with her hero, Rain, is why I couldn't like Melanie. He's a beautiful man and melds perfectly with Melanie and her family, but that's not good enough for her. Raine's a survivor and an inspiration to those who get a second chance to make good.
Okay, enough on that. There was so much that was rich and good in this story that I can say that it was an enjoyable read with a satisfying ending. Those who enjoy spicy Contemporary Romance should give this one a try.
August 22, 2013
Imagine finding the man of your dreams but then instead of him making the first move you do, only your move is not the standard romance your way into his life move, it is moving away to a complete different town! Talk about getting out of Dodge!
But would you feel as if life is not fair or would you try to find a way to make it work and somehow get the guy's attention? Or how about if the guy comes after you to show you he is ready to make any move you want him to, would you consider taking the plunge and tell yourself a long distance relationship can indeed work?
These are only some of the endless questions that Melanie has to face when she finally has the job of her dreams and the man of her dreams in her sight, only when she discovers the deep, dark secret her dream man stripping-you-naked-is-all-I-need Raine carries she needs him to prove that he is worth the risk , the only and most important question left is will he,or will she be left with a broken heart?
The main characters of both Melanie and Raine we very well written by the author. Melanie was a lot like some woman today very focused on her work and I adored that she pushes so hard to make her career a success, but I also felt that she was pushing a little too hard. As in real life today many woman tend to forget about that life has other elements to it, and keep going after the "my job is almost done just one more push and I will be there and able to relax" thus marriages end, relationships are destroyed beyond repair, parent child emotions are affected, the list goes on, but it made the character of Melanie very real to me and that I simply adored. I loved that the author used her work as a backdrop to not only take her back to her hometown and have a change at repairing her family ties but that she also used it as a buffer between Melanie and Raine, it showed that we can all do well in remembering that all work and no play indeed makes us very dull.
The character of Raine was simply delicious and the author gave him so many yummy layers it left me breathless. I adored that he was mysterious it kept me on the edge of my seat wanting to find out what he was hiding. He was the kind of hero that when you start the read and he makes his move you think "awh how sweet and so incredibly romantic" then as the read continues you start thinking " okay that is still sexy but what is he hiding and just how bad it is?" I adored how the author peeled back his layers to reveal the real man but not by giving too much or too little of the mystery at a time rather letting it unfold in such a manner that you know you need to keep going the best is going to come any minute now!
I am taking away a message of life is not always all about work, if that is the only thing you focus on you will for sure end up alone and with only the memory that once you could have had it all. And most importantly never hold someone's past or current situations against them, rather let go and step up to the plate with the knowing of taking a risk once in a while could lead you to the kind of happiness you never imagined.
I highly recommend this read for all fans of romance with a different approach. The author has a fun and fresh writing style and intertwines the lives of her main and secondary character with vivid detail. The read does start off a little slow but do not let that discourage you from going on, trust me it gets better and the more the various elements start to take life and the more characters are introduced into the read the better it gets.
A sweet,sensual and emotional read!
4.5 star review
" He opens up her eyes to love but will she risk her heart for it?"
July 3, 2013
A mere few DAYS after starting my blog, Reese Ryan took a chance on me and allowed me to author a guest post for Contemporary Romance Cafe. So I was so completely thrilled to get a chance to review her debut book Making the First Move.
Simply put, this book makes me smile. I love a strong-willed heroine, and that is exactly what you get with Melanie Gordon. The girl is determined. She is successful, has a good head on her shoulders, and isn't afraid to make tough decisions like moving across the country when it is in her best interest. Or back home again for the same reason.
BUT...she also isn't perfect. And that makes me love her even more.
Now...lets talk about Raine Mason. Did I tell you that this was a friends to lovers story? FAVORITE!!! Raine is the best. He is swoony, and put together and works for a non-profit because he believes in the cause. HELLO -- I love him.
BUT...you knew there had to be one :) He, too, has his flaws.
Ms. Ryan writes a story that is about discovery -- both of one's self and one's emotions. That maybe what we think we know best about ourselves isn't necessarily the truth and that it takes a little turbulence to make us appreciate the blue skies ahead.
Thank you to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book. And to Ms. Ryan -- YAY!!!!!!!!!!
Simply put, this book makes me smile. I love a strong-willed heroine, and that is exactly what you get with Melanie Gordon. The girl is determined. She is successful, has a good head on her shoulders, and isn't afraid to make tough decisions like moving across the country when it is in her best interest. Or back home again for the same reason.
BUT...she also isn't perfect. And that makes me love her even more.
Now...lets talk about Raine Mason. Did I tell you that this was a friends to lovers story? FAVORITE!!! Raine is the best. He is swoony, and put together and works for a non-profit because he believes in the cause. HELLO -- I love him.
BUT...you knew there had to be one :) He, too, has his flaws.
Ms. Ryan writes a story that is about discovery -- both of one's self and one's emotions. That maybe what we think we know best about ourselves isn't necessarily the truth and that it takes a little turbulence to make us appreciate the blue skies ahead.
Thank you to Netgalley for the opportunity to read this book. And to Ms. Ryan -- YAY!!!!!!!!!!
October 17, 2018
Raine and Mel, right on time redemption
Reese girl you wrote the mess out of Mel and Raine's story. You definitely took us there emotionally. I mean we all must carve out our own paths or get stuck living out someone's dream. That and reinventing oneself were keep elements to Making the First Move.
I love the second chance at love for Mel's mother. I love the dynamic of the family and the accountability. I appreciate the inner discovery of what it takes to move on. Raine's past was the most touching and how he changed his life around.
Reese girl you wrote the mess out of Mel and Raine's story. You definitely took us there emotionally. I mean we all must carve out our own paths or get stuck living out someone's dream. That and reinventing oneself were keep elements to Making the First Move.
I love the second chance at love for Mel's mother. I love the dynamic of the family and the accountability. I appreciate the inner discovery of what it takes to move on. Raine's past was the most touching and how he changed his life around.
July 26, 2013
Review written for Chocolicious Reviews
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Awww!
Yes, I know, it’s absurd when it comes from me, but every once in a while there are these books that hit that special spot in me and turn me to puddle. Normally such books belong to the most violent genres. Action, Mystery, Historicals with a cruel side and I’m sold. But sometimes there comes that surprise from the romantic genre and makes me rediscover that deeply hidden romantic side of mine.
Making The First Move is a greatly written and quite acceptable romantic book that will make the hearts of every woman and perhaps some men too melt. The theme is one that has been written many times, but – even though I’m not familiar with this author – when a story has been written with a golden pen, then you love reading it no matter how much the theme has been exhausted.
Melanie is a woman who is running from her past by dipping her head deeply into her work. Crushed from a relationship gone horribly bad she leaves her home town Cleveland and moves to San Francisco, where after years of hard work she’s finally made it up the ranks. She earns a huge promotion, but that comes with a price. First she has to go back home, to Cleveland, where the new branch is located and secondly her friend and for over a year “plus one” has just now made up his mind to tell her he has feelings for him. Feelings which Melanie also shares. Can things get more complicated?
Yes they apparently can because this author has a very solid and creative imagination. I loved the plot. It was exquisite. The events that follow are credible and come close to believable. Reality often hits this way and it made for a very accessible romance, one that made you feel like the heroine. Its twists and turns were fascinating without creating too much angst or drama. There were many parts that made you gasp and “awww” involuntarily, lacking though the sappy touch. I loved it, absolutely adored the plot.
The characters were also pretty damn fantastic. Melanie is that solid person one can find every day just by turning his/her head. She is a career woman, strong and confident, and full of her own inner issues and insecurities. She is a several layers character with unique depth and that makes you feel quite close to her. Yes she’s also frustrating many times, but for the most part she’s a woman one can easily identify with.
Mason is also an amazing character. Charming and very appealing he makes you melt even more when all his flaws get out in the open. Truth be told for half the book I had my doubts about him as he was indeed too good to be true. But then the author made the leap and with just a turn of her pen made him human and very approachable.
The thing I loved the most though was the fact that the couple doesn’t overshadow the story by taking all the spotlight. There are a great number of characters here and each and every one is beautifully portrayed without the overkill of many details. From Melanie’s boss to her ex and from her mother to her brother-in-law each and every character is unique and has a way to drag you into the story, making you want to be a part of it.
Furthermore the romance and intimate scenes were absolutely gorgeous. It is a brilliant work in this aspect too as they are not too much and not too little either. The balance is perfect and the end result is quite alluring and sensual. As I said in the beginning this is a book that made me “awww” almost constantly without making me feel stupid for doing so.
So bottom end, what I’m trying to say is, if you’ve got even a “barely tolerate romance” side, you will love this book. It’s excellent and I definitely recommend it.
Thommie
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Awww!
Yes, I know, it’s absurd when it comes from me, but every once in a while there are these books that hit that special spot in me and turn me to puddle. Normally such books belong to the most violent genres. Action, Mystery, Historicals with a cruel side and I’m sold. But sometimes there comes that surprise from the romantic genre and makes me rediscover that deeply hidden romantic side of mine.
Making The First Move is a greatly written and quite acceptable romantic book that will make the hearts of every woman and perhaps some men too melt. The theme is one that has been written many times, but – even though I’m not familiar with this author – when a story has been written with a golden pen, then you love reading it no matter how much the theme has been exhausted.
Melanie is a woman who is running from her past by dipping her head deeply into her work. Crushed from a relationship gone horribly bad she leaves her home town Cleveland and moves to San Francisco, where after years of hard work she’s finally made it up the ranks. She earns a huge promotion, but that comes with a price. First she has to go back home, to Cleveland, where the new branch is located and secondly her friend and for over a year “plus one” has just now made up his mind to tell her he has feelings for him. Feelings which Melanie also shares. Can things get more complicated?
Yes they apparently can because this author has a very solid and creative imagination. I loved the plot. It was exquisite. The events that follow are credible and come close to believable. Reality often hits this way and it made for a very accessible romance, one that made you feel like the heroine. Its twists and turns were fascinating without creating too much angst or drama. There were many parts that made you gasp and “awww” involuntarily, lacking though the sappy touch. I loved it, absolutely adored the plot.
The characters were also pretty damn fantastic. Melanie is that solid person one can find every day just by turning his/her head. She is a career woman, strong and confident, and full of her own inner issues and insecurities. She is a several layers character with unique depth and that makes you feel quite close to her. Yes she’s also frustrating many times, but for the most part she’s a woman one can easily identify with.
Mason is also an amazing character. Charming and very appealing he makes you melt even more when all his flaws get out in the open. Truth be told for half the book I had my doubts about him as he was indeed too good to be true. But then the author made the leap and with just a turn of her pen made him human and very approachable.
The thing I loved the most though was the fact that the couple doesn’t overshadow the story by taking all the spotlight. There are a great number of characters here and each and every one is beautifully portrayed without the overkill of many details. From Melanie’s boss to her ex and from her mother to her brother-in-law each and every character is unique and has a way to drag you into the story, making you want to be a part of it.
Furthermore the romance and intimate scenes were absolutely gorgeous. It is a brilliant work in this aspect too as they are not too much and not too little either. The balance is perfect and the end result is quite alluring and sensual. As I said in the beginning this is a book that made me “awww” almost constantly without making me feel stupid for doing so.
So bottom end, what I’m trying to say is, if you’ve got even a “barely tolerate romance” side, you will love this book. It’s excellent and I definitely recommend it.
Thommie
July 22, 2013
Wonderful!
I really enjoyed this book. I really find it a nice change to read something so real and satisfying. I found it refreshing and well-written, with characters that quickly come to life and make you immediately interested in their stories.
Melanie is a heroine with a strong voice and real flaws that make sense. Like many people in real life, you tend to like her more as you come to understand her. I really enjoyed seeing a realistic portrayal of someone dealing with grief and trying to be happy in spite of it.
OMG RAINE! What a beta hero for the ages. I was so worried when Jax came on the scene. I was like, no no no no, not the stereotypical "he's so bad to me but I think he's sexy so I can't resist".
I was cheering for Raine the whole time. :)
I like guys like Raine because they don't buy into the myth that a guy has to be a player or aggressive in order to be attractive. Men like Raine know what it means to be in full control of their own lives and emotions, rather than trying to control other people. His ability to trust, be loving, and to be deliciously dominant when Melanie wanted him to made him really attractive.
This isn't a whirlwind book. It's not about the angst and conflict and drama, though there is a crazy twist I never saw coming. It's about real people you want to know better. The author has a way of barely showing a side character and yet fleshing them out so well that they stand out for the entire book. It's like watching a black and white drawing come alive in full color in seconds. I wanted a book for all of them. None of them were stereotypes or cardboard cut-outs.
The ending was deeply satisfying. Not just for the HEA, but because the heroine experiences real growth along with the rest of her family and friends. I really loved the people in this book. I'll definitely be re-reading it and spending another afternoon with them. Especially Jamie and Mimi. Loved those girls.
I received an ARC for my honest review.
I really enjoyed this book. I really find it a nice change to read something so real and satisfying. I found it refreshing and well-written, with characters that quickly come to life and make you immediately interested in their stories.
Melanie is a heroine with a strong voice and real flaws that make sense. Like many people in real life, you tend to like her more as you come to understand her. I really enjoyed seeing a realistic portrayal of someone dealing with grief and trying to be happy in spite of it.
OMG RAINE! What a beta hero for the ages. I was so worried when Jax came on the scene. I was like, no no no no, not the stereotypical "he's so bad to me but I think he's sexy so I can't resist".
I was cheering for Raine the whole time. :)
I like guys like Raine because they don't buy into the myth that a guy has to be a player or aggressive in order to be attractive. Men like Raine know what it means to be in full control of their own lives and emotions, rather than trying to control other people. His ability to trust, be loving, and to be deliciously dominant when Melanie wanted him to made him really attractive.
This isn't a whirlwind book. It's not about the angst and conflict and drama, though there is a crazy twist I never saw coming. It's about real people you want to know better. The author has a way of barely showing a side character and yet fleshing them out so well that they stand out for the entire book. It's like watching a black and white drawing come alive in full color in seconds. I wanted a book for all of them. None of them were stereotypes or cardboard cut-outs.
The ending was deeply satisfying. Not just for the HEA, but because the heroine experiences real growth along with the rest of her family and friends. I really loved the people in this book. I'll definitely be re-reading it and spending another afternoon with them. Especially Jamie and Mimi. Loved those girls.
I received an ARC for my honest review.
August 3, 2021
Imperfect people
A magnificent story of love and the crooked way everyone got there to their own places. The romance, the families, the untold truths and the ending of where passion lies. Overcoming infidelity, half truths and sabotage. I thought that the "Bourbon Bothers" series had a lot of themes. This first book deals with them all very well. I enjoy the art that this author puts in my life.
A magnificent story of love and the crooked way everyone got there to their own places. The romance, the families, the untold truths and the ending of where passion lies. Overcoming infidelity, half truths and sabotage. I thought that the "Bourbon Bothers" series had a lot of themes. This first book deals with them all very well. I enjoy the art that this author puts in my life.
February 17, 2019
Great read
I like the plot of the story. Friends to lovers to confusion to true love. Melanie and Raine were awesome together, it took him 2 years to do after what he wanted and was hell bent on keeping Melanie. So glad Mel finally so Jax so the ass that he really was.
I like the plot of the story. Friends to lovers to confusion to true love. Melanie and Raine were awesome together, it took him 2 years to do after what he wanted and was hell bent on keeping Melanie. So glad Mel finally so Jax so the ass that he really was.
December 4, 2018
Lovely Romance
Really enjoyed slow pace of this read romance took my time reading because I really wanted to enjoy every detail.
Really enjoyed slow pace of this read romance took my time reading because I really wanted to enjoy every detail.
September 21, 2020
Good story with an ending that really came through for the reader! Narration was good!
August 7, 2014
Reese Ryan had me at the first line, “Damien Jasper is brilliant and asshole in equal amounts, wrapped in one stunningly handsome, well-dressed package.” There’s something to be said about a great opening line, one that makes you want to turn the page. I couldn’t wait to read. And I wasn’t disappointed.
Melanie Gordon has worked very hard in her field, giving it her all and putting work above all else. And it pays off. She is offered the job of her dreams, more money and more responsibility. The only caveat? It’s in her hometown, Cleveland. Initially, it seems that she’s apprehensive about heading “home”, but she happily accepts the challenge and prepares to move.
Then, her friend, Raine drops a bombshell on her. He wants her, even though their timing sucks and she’s moving. Let me just say right now that Raine is one of those heroes that walks into a room and commands attention. Not only did he make the first move, but he did it in a way that had me glued to the page.
What’s a girl to do with a new job and a new man who actually wants to make a relationship work, even a long distance one? Making the First Move takes us on a wonderful journey. Ms. Ryan has a way of getting the reader right inside the head of the heroine. Melanie is so relatable. Her struggles are no different than many of the women I’ve known in my life and that was great.
As Melanie and Raine turn up the heat, it becomes clear that Raine is holding on to a dark secret. I absolutely loved that aspect though because it made me want to know more about him. Where did he get those scars, and why the tattoos? Of course, the secret does come out, but it’s not rushed. He has many layers and Ms. Ryan peels them back slowly. Once everything is revealed, will Melanie be able to move forward with Raine? Then there’s the question: should people with a less-than-perfect past be condemned forever because of it?
All in all, this is a great read. The characters are well developed and the romance is HOT. I loved the supporting characters and the author did an excellent job weaving them into the tale. Family is family and I love complicated families in fiction. It just tends to take the drama up a notch, which I like. The author has a great voice and a fun sense of humor. I found myself laughing out loud many times while reading and I found that to be refreshing. I normally don’t gravitate toward novels written in first person, present tense, but I had no problem getting into the story. I’m looking forward to reading more from the author. I would definitely recommend this novel to lovers of romantic fiction.
-Reviewed by Leslie
Melanie Gordon has worked very hard in her field, giving it her all and putting work above all else. And it pays off. She is offered the job of her dreams, more money and more responsibility. The only caveat? It’s in her hometown, Cleveland. Initially, it seems that she’s apprehensive about heading “home”, but she happily accepts the challenge and prepares to move.
Then, her friend, Raine drops a bombshell on her. He wants her, even though their timing sucks and she’s moving. Let me just say right now that Raine is one of those heroes that walks into a room and commands attention. Not only did he make the first move, but he did it in a way that had me glued to the page.
What’s a girl to do with a new job and a new man who actually wants to make a relationship work, even a long distance one? Making the First Move takes us on a wonderful journey. Ms. Ryan has a way of getting the reader right inside the head of the heroine. Melanie is so relatable. Her struggles are no different than many of the women I’ve known in my life and that was great.
As Melanie and Raine turn up the heat, it becomes clear that Raine is holding on to a dark secret. I absolutely loved that aspect though because it made me want to know more about him. Where did he get those scars, and why the tattoos? Of course, the secret does come out, but it’s not rushed. He has many layers and Ms. Ryan peels them back slowly. Once everything is revealed, will Melanie be able to move forward with Raine? Then there’s the question: should people with a less-than-perfect past be condemned forever because of it?
All in all, this is a great read. The characters are well developed and the romance is HOT. I loved the supporting characters and the author did an excellent job weaving them into the tale. Family is family and I love complicated families in fiction. It just tends to take the drama up a notch, which I like. The author has a great voice and a fun sense of humor. I found myself laughing out loud many times while reading and I found that to be refreshing. I normally don’t gravitate toward novels written in first person, present tense, but I had no problem getting into the story. I’m looking forward to reading more from the author. I would definitely recommend this novel to lovers of romantic fiction.
-Reviewed by Leslie
February 26, 2018
This book was so gooooood :-). But I gotta say though, this book had me scratching my head halfway through, I almost put it down. THANK GOD I DIDN'T! But come on, who does something that radical anyway? :-)
It started our snatching my interest & holding it, I was surprised. Usually, it takes a minute, a bit more push/pull until sparks fly. I appreciate it showing up early.
But then the middle happened, & after grinding my teeth for it to hurry up to get back to the action, a funny thing happened. I realized how well Reese was weaving the development of the characters. & she did a fine job.
Melanie and Raine's story, is deep, sweet, complex, and fun as f*ck :). It is quite simply, a roller coaster ride that will have you sitting on the edge of your seat, screaming in your head & out loud at the players in the scenes.
It's a great book about run away emotions and lust, and how real life really ain't all that easy.
This is a great book, & you won't be disappointed, 'I promise' :-)
It started our snatching my interest & holding it, I was surprised. Usually, it takes a minute, a bit more push/pull until sparks fly. I appreciate it showing up early.
But then the middle happened, & after grinding my teeth for it to hurry up to get back to the action, a funny thing happened. I realized how well Reese was weaving the development of the characters. & she did a fine job.
Melanie and Raine's story, is deep, sweet, complex, and fun as f*ck :). It is quite simply, a roller coaster ride that will have you sitting on the edge of your seat, screaming in your head & out loud at the players in the scenes.
It's a great book about run away emotions and lust, and how real life really ain't all that easy.
This is a great book, & you won't be disappointed, 'I promise' :-)
October 9, 2013
Making the First Move Reese Ryan
Let me be one of the first to say Making the First Move by Reese Ryan is an engrossing fast read of first love, growth, reluctance and release and resilience . The characters developed by Ms. Ryan are so realistic that you see family and friends embedded in the personas of her characters. The story elements of Making the First Move have well blended components that places you on the stage with her characters.
Ms. Ryan brings a refreshing breath of freshness in the environments for the settings, conflicts and resolutions that stimulate as well as titillate in her delightful narrative Making the First Move.
It seems we sometimes lose the game before we know the rules. Ms. Ryan shares a number of them so aptly within the pages of Making the First Move. I was drawn into the book light a moth to the flame and aching with desire of seeing what will occur as the narrative unfolds. Making the First Move captured me in that way.
Ms Ryan makes her leading lady to just that a true “LADY”. Melanie Gordon is a woman of substance super efficient, intelligent has it going on professionally, highly regarded, with a loving family and friends.
Damien Jasper is an outstanding, trailblazer of sorts when it relates to business deals but is in need of some common decencies when it comes to communicating on a personal level with women. Although Damien is delectable eye candy and he knows it however,
Raine a strong man that could make a woman's so called fantasies of Mr. Right and fantasies that roll around in the minds and souls of many independent, self-sufficient, women of the 21st century.
The secondary members of the cast are very important to the development and consistency of the Making the First Move.
Making the First Move encourages me to release and silence the daily steady drumbeat that plays to the melody of being safe and quiet and not taking a risk reaching for what may make me happier, stronger and wiser.
Making the First Move is a book of sizzling temptations, fear and becoming an over-comer. I enjoyed this book and highly recommend it for its message of sweetness, compassion and recovery.
I look forward to reading more of Ms. Ryan's work.
Let me be one of the first to say Making the First Move by Reese Ryan is an engrossing fast read of first love, growth, reluctance and release and resilience . The characters developed by Ms. Ryan are so realistic that you see family and friends embedded in the personas of her characters. The story elements of Making the First Move have well blended components that places you on the stage with her characters.
Ms. Ryan brings a refreshing breath of freshness in the environments for the settings, conflicts and resolutions that stimulate as well as titillate in her delightful narrative Making the First Move.
It seems we sometimes lose the game before we know the rules. Ms. Ryan shares a number of them so aptly within the pages of Making the First Move. I was drawn into the book light a moth to the flame and aching with desire of seeing what will occur as the narrative unfolds. Making the First Move captured me in that way.
Ms Ryan makes her leading lady to just that a true “LADY”. Melanie Gordon is a woman of substance super efficient, intelligent has it going on professionally, highly regarded, with a loving family and friends.
Damien Jasper is an outstanding, trailblazer of sorts when it relates to business deals but is in need of some common decencies when it comes to communicating on a personal level with women. Although Damien is delectable eye candy and he knows it however,
Raine a strong man that could make a woman's so called fantasies of Mr. Right and fantasies that roll around in the minds and souls of many independent, self-sufficient, women of the 21st century.
The secondary members of the cast are very important to the development and consistency of the Making the First Move.
Making the First Move encourages me to release and silence the daily steady drumbeat that plays to the melody of being safe and quiet and not taking a risk reaching for what may make me happier, stronger and wiser.
Making the First Move is a book of sizzling temptations, fear and becoming an over-comer. I enjoyed this book and highly recommend it for its message of sweetness, compassion and recovery.
I look forward to reading more of Ms. Ryan's work.
August 12, 2013
I finished MAKING THE FIRST MOVE a little bit ago and as I reflect back on it, the first thing that comes to my mind is that it felt different than anything I’ve read in the Contemporary Romance recently…or maybe ever. And I mean this in a good way too! Was I absolutely blown away with the story? No, but it was still pretty good in my opinion and the fact that it was different was completely refreshing!
So as always, here’s a quick rundown: Melanie and Raine have been each other’s “plus one” to various events for the past year yet never exclusive. But now that Melanie has been promoted and is moving back to Cleveland from San Francisco, Raine decides to he wants more from her. They will not only have to stand the test of distance but also of secrets and revelations.
Like I said, the story line was very much different than the usual read lately. The long distance relationship was one aspect of it, but I really enjoyed the twist of the secret that Raine has been keeping from Melanie. While not entirely unique, it was well written and had a different feel to it. I also appreciated the array of multi-cultural characters; it added an extra element to the story that I really enjoyed. Another great aspect was that I could really feel the connection between Melanie and her sisters and mom – they were a really close knit group of girls and I appreciated that I got to feel that between them.
The only thing I wanted more of was Raine and Melanie’s communication and contact during their weeks apart. A lot of that time was spent developing the relationships between Melanie and her sisters or her work. I would find myself wanting more of Raine and less of Melanie’s job. But when he was around and visiting, it was certainly worth the wait. Raine is sweet and caring and you can tell just how much he cares for Melanie in every scene he’s in.
Overall, a nice and enjoyable story. If you’re looking for something slightly different, with a close group of characters and an honorable story, MAKING THE FIRST MOVE may be the book for you!
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
So as always, here’s a quick rundown: Melanie and Raine have been each other’s “plus one” to various events for the past year yet never exclusive. But now that Melanie has been promoted and is moving back to Cleveland from San Francisco, Raine decides to he wants more from her. They will not only have to stand the test of distance but also of secrets and revelations.
Like I said, the story line was very much different than the usual read lately. The long distance relationship was one aspect of it, but I really enjoyed the twist of the secret that Raine has been keeping from Melanie. While not entirely unique, it was well written and had a different feel to it. I also appreciated the array of multi-cultural characters; it added an extra element to the story that I really enjoyed. Another great aspect was that I could really feel the connection between Melanie and her sisters and mom – they were a really close knit group of girls and I appreciated that I got to feel that between them.
The only thing I wanted more of was Raine and Melanie’s communication and contact during their weeks apart. A lot of that time was spent developing the relationships between Melanie and her sisters or her work. I would find myself wanting more of Raine and less of Melanie’s job. But when he was around and visiting, it was certainly worth the wait. Raine is sweet and caring and you can tell just how much he cares for Melanie in every scene he’s in.
Overall, a nice and enjoyable story. If you’re looking for something slightly different, with a close group of characters and an honorable story, MAKING THE FIRST MOVE may be the book for you!
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
March 18, 2014
[b] Making the First Move [/b] Reese Ryan
2. 5 stars
This was Ok. Maybe I'm just getting too old for romances...
Mel gets a big promotion, the downside is it means moving back to her hometown, and all the baggage she left there. Family, a mean ex - all the usual stuff. Shortly before she loves, a good friend, Raine admits to having feelings for her. Eventually, they decide to give the long distance thing a shot.
I disliked Mel, found her quite annoying, she seemed to enjoy creating drama for the sake of it, had some utterly stupid motivations for her actions and overall, comes across as judgmental and a bit of hypocrite ...Raine seemed like a nice enough guy, probably a bit too good for the high-maintenance Mel.
Things that occurred to me.... (because I was a little bit bored)
There are non-drowsy anti histamines on the market...
What kind of people eat spinach for breakfast? Gross.
Spelling Jaxson with an 'X' really, really ticked me off. It ticks of my spell checker also.
I do not believe any restaurant would actually have a dish of sea bass, mashed cauliflower and Brussels sprouts...I asked some of my chef friends about this, they agree.
To me it seemed a tad creepy that a fully grown woman was still calling her Dad, Daddy...
Nobody 'smiled'. It was always 'mouths lifting on one side' which gave me a mental picture of a bunch of people with lopsided faces like Sylvester Stallone...
If you are really crazy about your long distance relationship, and they offer to come and see you, you don't make excuses and put them off for no apparent reason. You tell them to get their fine ass on the plane...
2. 5 stars
This was Ok. Maybe I'm just getting too old for romances...
Mel gets a big promotion, the downside is it means moving back to her hometown, and all the baggage she left there. Family, a mean ex - all the usual stuff. Shortly before she loves, a good friend, Raine admits to having feelings for her. Eventually, they decide to give the long distance thing a shot.
I disliked Mel, found her quite annoying, she seemed to enjoy creating drama for the sake of it, had some utterly stupid motivations for her actions and overall, comes across as judgmental and a bit of hypocrite ...Raine seemed like a nice enough guy, probably a bit too good for the high-maintenance Mel.
Things that occurred to me.... (because I was a little bit bored)
There are non-drowsy anti histamines on the market...
What kind of people eat spinach for breakfast? Gross.
Spelling Jaxson with an 'X' really, really ticked me off. It ticks of my spell checker also.
I do not believe any restaurant would actually have a dish of sea bass, mashed cauliflower and Brussels sprouts...I asked some of my chef friends about this, they agree.
To me it seemed a tad creepy that a fully grown woman was still calling her Dad, Daddy...
Nobody 'smiled'. It was always 'mouths lifting on one side' which gave me a mental picture of a bunch of people with lopsided faces like Sylvester Stallone...
If you are really crazy about your long distance relationship, and they offer to come and see you, you don't make excuses and put them off for no apparent reason. You tell them to get their fine ass on the plane...
November 1, 2013
This book tells the story of Melanie who have been promoted to establish the branch in her hometown. Having leaved the place after heartbreak that she hasn’t recover, she is rather skeptical about her adaptability back home. She worked hard for the past five years to arrive where she is now. But in course of achieving where she is now, she loses out the opportunity to get to know more people and establish any kind of friendship. Having said that, she have a friend with benefit relationship with Raine Mason whom both will accompany each other for functions etc where require a plus one. When Raine get to know that Melanie is leaving, he make known his feeling for her but Melanie is not able to commit. Raine is willing to wait and accept whatever that she can offer. Being back in town, Melanie is back to her family’s arm and it is something she really has to adapt. At the same time, her sister is now working with her ex boyfriend and having a long distance relationship with Raine have made her confused as to her true feeling. Besides that, Raine seems to keep a secret from her, something that would change who he really is to her.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book with its story plot. I like Raine and Melanie and reading their story make me really wish for a happy ending (I know that it will be but no harm wishing a really good one) for them. The main characters are realistic and well developed by the author. As a reader, you really felt their agony when they have to confront their own demon and conflicts. Am looking forward for the next book by the author ;)
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book with its story plot. I like Raine and Melanie and reading their story make me really wish for a happy ending (I know that it will be but no harm wishing a really good one) for them. The main characters are realistic and well developed by the author. As a reader, you really felt their agony when they have to confront their own demon and conflicts. Am looking forward for the next book by the author ;)
November 1, 2013
Reese Ryan's debut novel has burst onto the literary scene with a powerful punch. I enjoyed reading "Making the First Move." This story is well written with great characterization. I enjoyed how each character’s flaws were strategically unveiled throughout the story, creating enough depth and intrigue to hold my attention.
The relationship between the main character, Melanie Gordon, and her love interest, Raine Mason, is very well developed. They have a nice blend of friendship, romance, and sexual chemistry between them. I especially enjoyed the unexpected twist of Raine's identity secret, which gave the story a refreshing spin instead of your typical run-of-the-mill story twists.
The pace of the story moved fairly well, except for the parts where too much attention/emphasis is given to Melanie's job. I could’ve used a little less job focus once Melanie's career goals and aspirations had been established. I also would’ve enjoyed more dramatic scenes between Melanie and her nemesis, Priscilla. I loved the well-written tension between Melanie and Priscilla and wanted to see more behind the scenes development for how Priscilla pre-meditated her backstabbing endeavors.
Overall, I think the author's writing voice and eye for storytelling makes this novel a pleasure to read. I completely recommend it to other readers.
The relationship between the main character, Melanie Gordon, and her love interest, Raine Mason, is very well developed. They have a nice blend of friendship, romance, and sexual chemistry between them. I especially enjoyed the unexpected twist of Raine's identity secret, which gave the story a refreshing spin instead of your typical run-of-the-mill story twists.
The pace of the story moved fairly well, except for the parts where too much attention/emphasis is given to Melanie's job. I could’ve used a little less job focus once Melanie's career goals and aspirations had been established. I also would’ve enjoyed more dramatic scenes between Melanie and her nemesis, Priscilla. I loved the well-written tension between Melanie and Priscilla and wanted to see more behind the scenes development for how Priscilla pre-meditated her backstabbing endeavors.
Overall, I think the author's writing voice and eye for storytelling makes this novel a pleasure to read. I completely recommend it to other readers.
March 17, 2014
I truly enjoyed "Making the First Move"...the plot development, character development, and HEA were all masterfully handled. That being said, I did not care for Melanie at all. She just seemed too intelligent and too old to me to carry so much emotional baggage. We ALL have issues, and they make us who we are - but we'd all be knee deep in Xanax if we didn't put them aside. I might have given her some slack if she had been 18 or 19...Maybe. *LOL*
Loved, loved, loved Raine...but doesn't everyone? He made a serious mistake when he was young, but I give him much credit for trying to move past it and use his life to help others. Still not too sure why he was attracted to Mel, and honestly, I believe he was too good for her. She and Jaxson deserved each other. Okay, maybe that's a bit too over the top! LOL!
Jasper? Meh. Priscilla? OMG! Mel should have shot her down long, long, long ago....especially after her allergic reaction. She knew. SHE KNEW!
Mel had a great support network in her family, but they all could have spent more time talking about their issues instead of avoiding them.
I'm acting as though these people are real, aren't I? LOL! The story was just that good!
Kudos to Reese Ryan!
Loved, loved, loved Raine...but doesn't everyone? He made a serious mistake when he was young, but I give him much credit for trying to move past it and use his life to help others. Still not too sure why he was attracted to Mel, and honestly, I believe he was too good for her. She and Jaxson deserved each other. Okay, maybe that's a bit too over the top! LOL!
Jasper? Meh. Priscilla? OMG! Mel should have shot her down long, long, long ago....especially after her allergic reaction. She knew. SHE KNEW!
Mel had a great support network in her family, but they all could have spent more time talking about their issues instead of avoiding them.
I'm acting as though these people are real, aren't I? LOL! The story was just that good!
Kudos to Reese Ryan!
July 11, 2013
After the first few chapters, I almost stopped reading the book. I just couldn’t get into it. I didn’t really like the heroine too much. She seemed a little self-absorbed, but I decided to stick it out and hope she grew up in the book. I’m glad I did. She did grow and a lot of why she was the way she was got explained.
Making the First Move had an awesome last third of the book. It made up for the beginning and even made it worth it. Melanie matured a lot throughout the book and realized quite a few of her misgivings and the reason behind them. Her mom might have pointed her in the right direction, but she did finally get it. Raine did a lot of horrible things in his youth. He’s living his current life trying making up for a huge mistake he made and making sure he doesn’t resort to the ways of his childhood.
These two came together and grew with each other. She realized that the guy she thought was the love of her life was nothing more than the slime that he was. I was so worried she wouldn’t. Mel also realized that sometimes love isn’t pretty and no man is perfect, not even the father that she compared every guy to.
Making the First Move had an awesome last third of the book. It made up for the beginning and even made it worth it. Melanie matured a lot throughout the book and realized quite a few of her misgivings and the reason behind them. Her mom might have pointed her in the right direction, but she did finally get it. Raine did a lot of horrible things in his youth. He’s living his current life trying making up for a huge mistake he made and making sure he doesn’t resort to the ways of his childhood.
These two came together and grew with each other. She realized that the guy she thought was the love of her life was nothing more than the slime that he was. I was so worried she wouldn’t. Mel also realized that sometimes love isn’t pretty and no man is perfect, not even the father that she compared every guy to.
July 24, 2016
Love Is in the Air
Raine Mason and Melanie Gordon are strongly attracted to one another and have been for some time. A promotion and a move forces Melanie to move to another state. Do they finally acknowledge their feelings? Will they discover they are just right for each other or will secrets and distance get in the way? Only time will tell.
Reese Ryan’s “Making the First Move" was a very good novel. I really got into it and couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. The author held my attention throughout the entire novel. I really liked the surprises along the way. Although it took a little time to introduce all that was going on in the novel, once all the characters were introduced, the storyline really came together.
I look forward to other novels in the future from Reese Ryan’s as I too am a hopeless romantic. This novel was well executed. I give this novel a strong 4.5 stars and I think it’s one readers will enjoy. Keep up the good work Ms. Ryan!
Reviewed by: Lisa M.
4.5 stars
Raine Mason and Melanie Gordon are strongly attracted to one another and have been for some time. A promotion and a move forces Melanie to move to another state. Do they finally acknowledge their feelings? Will they discover they are just right for each other or will secrets and distance get in the way? Only time will tell.
Reese Ryan’s “Making the First Move" was a very good novel. I really got into it and couldn't wait to see what was going to happen next. The author held my attention throughout the entire novel. I really liked the surprises along the way. Although it took a little time to introduce all that was going on in the novel, once all the characters were introduced, the storyline really came together.
I look forward to other novels in the future from Reese Ryan’s as I too am a hopeless romantic. This novel was well executed. I give this novel a strong 4.5 stars and I think it’s one readers will enjoy. Keep up the good work Ms. Ryan!
Reviewed by: Lisa M.
4.5 stars
August 21, 2014
Forecast: Warm, funny and filled with Raine!
Making the First Move was a touching romance that captured me right from the start. In this story of family, friendship and finding love, Reese flexes her writing chops with the use of humor, emotion and an element of intrigue. I adored the very real family dynamics and the development of the relationship between the two main characters. Melanie, an independent career woman knows exactly what she wants, or so she thinks. She even has her “list” of the perfect man. In walks Raine, a strong, sexy, sensitive man with a heart of gold. He fits the bill of perfection, right down to being “well endowed and knowing how to use it.” But is he too good to be true?
I enjoyed finding out, and can’t recommend this book enough. Reese is a talented author and one I will look forward to reading more of in the future.
Making the First Move was a touching romance that captured me right from the start. In this story of family, friendship and finding love, Reese flexes her writing chops with the use of humor, emotion and an element of intrigue. I adored the very real family dynamics and the development of the relationship between the two main characters. Melanie, an independent career woman knows exactly what she wants, or so she thinks. She even has her “list” of the perfect man. In walks Raine, a strong, sexy, sensitive man with a heart of gold. He fits the bill of perfection, right down to being “well endowed and knowing how to use it.” But is he too good to be true?
I enjoyed finding out, and can’t recommend this book enough. Reese is a talented author and one I will look forward to reading more of in the future.
didn-t-finish
July 10, 2013Sadly, this is a DNF for me. I really wanted to give this a chance, what with brown people being on the cover and all, but it was a sloooow starter. The scenes are all quite long and overly detailed, and there's just not enough conflict/tension going on here, which is surprising given the premise. It's always a bit of a harder sell when the hero & heroine know each other before the start of the book, and are apparently attracted to one another but neither one made a move before for some nebulous reason.
I'd love to try more of Ms. Ryan's books, but this one just didn't connect with me.
I'd love to try more of Ms. Ryan's books, but this one just didn't connect with me.
August 11, 2013
Making the First Move by Reese Ryan
3 Stars
Making the First Move is a fast paced, contemporary romance. This long distance, friends turn lovers idea has been worked and reworked so many ways I thought I had read them all. Then I picked up this book and was pleasantly surprised.
The one thing that I wasn’t too fond of was Melanie’s characters. She was self centered, immature and quite frankly needed to grow up. Other than that character the book was pretty good.
This review is also posted on my blog. BS Book Reviewers
3 Stars
Making the First Move is a fast paced, contemporary romance. This long distance, friends turn lovers idea has been worked and reworked so many ways I thought I had read them all. Then I picked up this book and was pleasantly surprised.
The one thing that I wasn’t too fond of was Melanie’s characters. She was self centered, immature and quite frankly needed to grow up. Other than that character the book was pretty good.
This review is also posted on my blog. BS Book Reviewers
July 19, 2014
Have you ever liked a set of characters so much you couldn't bear to have them experience heartache? That was the case in this book. I got to the roughly 1/4 mark and couldn't bear for anything bad to happen to Mel and Raine, so I skipped to the last chapter and epilogue to get to the happy parts
While I didn't technically read the whole book, I still teared up in the epilogue. I liked the book, loved the characters, just couldn't handle any bad stuff happening to them
While I didn't technically read the whole book, I still teared up in the epilogue. I liked the book, loved the characters, just couldn't handle any bad stuff happening to them
July 27, 2014
I always appreciate a sexy male lead character and, Raine, Melanie's love interest, was no exception. I enjoyed watching their "plus-one" relationship grow into a full-blown steam-fest albeit long distance.
Between Melanie's ex, her ambitious career goals and Raine's secret past, this made for a great read.
Between Melanie's ex, her ambitious career goals and Raine's secret past, this made for a great read.
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