I bought this from an online store under the marketplace with Barnes and Noble. I am almost certain I had an advance or proofreader edition. The opening flap said - written in marker by Nadler - "To Gina - my friend, my mentor, my family by choice. Thank you!" And Nadler signed it. I'm guessing this was either the dedication or a note to someone who previously owned the book.
The layout/format was very plain and condensed - didn't seem organized. The chapters were headers that I missed because they blended into the text; it read almost as one large transcript. Minor spelling or grammar errors here and there too.
This novel was a bit too sappy for my taste. I love when a good triller and romance novel merge together, but this was just too much - almost unbelievable. Instead of adults in love they sounded and acted like teenagers.
About a quarter of the way in, I wanted to know how the novel was going to continue. It felt like the same stuff was unfolding over and over again, which I couldn't handle over the next 400 pages. I just didn't know what else could unfold; everything that had unfolded felt disconnected like it was in spurts.
I was confused over what Jack knew of Stephanie's story with her past and the Fire versus what we knew as we read. I like when an author doesn't leave things to question and the fact Stephanie didn't reveal anything could be frustrating if we didn't know the details. I would have held off in revealing the details and had us - the readers - learn the details when Jack learned them.
The use of the name Jack for the hero and Josh for the villain threw me off sometimes. Otherwise, the book was moving.
I didn't like how Stephanie said she needed to go back to the crime scene then the next chapter she said to Jack that she was happy that he was with her, yet they were at the courthouse for another hearing. My mind set was ready to revisit the crime scene and it didn't happen.
There was all this worry for Tommy but we never learned if he made a fully recovery. It seemed like it but it was never shared.
I didn't like how the flashback scenes were organized. It was regular text so I wasn't sure that we went on a flashback until read past it. Some of the flashbacks were italic, but a lot of them towards the end were not; the italic worked for me. Again, I did have what I assume is a pre-final edition so a lot might have changed before the final.
Overall I didn't like how it was broken up a lot and seemed like a lot of filler text. It was almost like we needed to follow every detail as it was planned and unfolded. The novel could have been shorter. I found myself reading to just finish the book.
1.5 out of 5 stars.