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Captain of the Guard
To protect the kingdom, he must prove his worth . . .
Oren Trevaine has never shaken the feeling that he’s not good enough, but he’s determined to avoid the same fate for his men. Oren’s first task as Captain of the Guard is to transform his unruly, undisciplined soldiers into a formidable army—if only they would cooperate.
But Oren will need to act fast because the snow is melting with the budding of spring. Soon, the enemy will be able to traverse the main pass through the imposing Sansford Range and his men must be ready to patrol the mountain.
When Oren rescues Lady Joan and her traveling party from a band of Mirdoni raiders, his worst fears are realized. The enemy has utilized less accessible routes to infiltrate their territory, and an attack is imminent.
Now Oren must not only think like the enemy, but he will need to be one step ahead. With the kingdom relying on him and Lady Joan promising her favor if he returns alive, Oren will need to prove to her and his men that he truly is good enough. Or at the very least, die trying . . .
Oren Trevaine has never shaken the feeling that he’s not good enough, but he’s determined to avoid the same fate for his men. Oren’s first task as Captain of the Guard is to transform his unruly, undisciplined soldiers into a formidable army—if only they would cooperate.
But Oren will need to act fast because the snow is melting with the budding of spring. Soon, the enemy will be able to traverse the main pass through the imposing Sansford Range and his men must be ready to patrol the mountain.
When Oren rescues Lady Joan and her traveling party from a band of Mirdoni raiders, his worst fears are realized. The enemy has utilized less accessible routes to infiltrate their territory, and an attack is imminent.
Now Oren must not only think like the enemy, but he will need to be one step ahead. With the kingdom relying on him and Lady Joan promising her favor if he returns alive, Oren will need to prove to her and his men that he truly is good enough. Or at the very least, die trying . . .
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Published May 1, 2023
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Ron C. Nieto
37 books504 followersRon C. Nieto is a fantasy and romance author who has been writing in her secluded fortress for the longest time. Recently, she had a talk with her cat and decided that she should share her creations, because it was selfish to hoard them all for herself.
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September 4, 2023
A great study of leadership
I didn't know what to expect from this book, but I'm glad I found it. Not only are there ripping battle scenes, but it is also nuanced look at leadership, both the obvious and more subtle. Looking forward to the next installment.
I didn't know what to expect from this book, but I'm glad I found it. Not only are there ripping battle scenes, but it is also nuanced look at leadership, both the obvious and more subtle. Looking forward to the next installment.
August 29, 2022
A light fantasy with a hint of romance, this was excellently done. I hope a sequel is in the works. This deserves all the stars!!!
July 3, 2024
Engrossing. Sure-footed. Ingenious.
Like nothing I have read before, Captain of the Guard brings the reader to the heart of each conflict, zeroes in on strategy and its adaptability, and drags you right within the thick of battle alongside its characters (and lord, that battle was blood-poundingly terrifying!)
“ There was always a choice. Between acting or not, between doing the right thing or the easy thing. ”
Alright, that description might’ve sounded a lot like what every other story does, but this one feels different. It’s as if you are standing in the middle of the fight and cannot escape its crowd, instead of seeing it from a bird’s eye and being able to take a step back and be glad to know you’re not actually part of the fight. . . . If that makes any sense 😅 If you read this book, you’ll know what I mean : Instead of simply showing the reader what is happening in the story, the author takes us inside the mind of a strategist, following every possible move that he could make. And that is what makes reading Captain of the Guard feel quite intimate.
Steady and slow-paced, the writing is magnetic; I found it difficult to put the book down. The odds never seemed to be in the main character’s favor, and yet Oren persisted through every single obstacle thrown his way.
Oren is such an admirable character : clever, determined, with a very obstinate view of discipline that doesn’t taint him as tiresome whatsoever. And despite his fears of never amounting to enough as Lord Captain, leadership is a cloak that suits him perfectly. And there’s also this :
“ The fools. They wanted to make a point? Fine. A point would be made. ”
^ THIS is how Oren’s mind functioned, and it is maddeningly brilliant, and quite hilarious as the story is told 😂
Enter Lady Joan, who is not your average lost-in-the-woods, lovestruck little lady; she is a leader in her own right. A kind and compassionate heart that doesn’t shy away from the burdens of duty nor the aftermath of a bloody battle.
There is a fervent loneliness within Oren’s and Lady Joan’s characters that I felt deeply. Theirs is a bond built on mutual respect, a leader’s courage in the face of duty, and a great understanding of the other’s soul. I’m glad they have found each other (and I very much want to see their relationship grow further 👀)
“ The darkness was starting to lift, soon to become the gray that announced the dawn. They would move out soon, and this moment would end. And he wanted an after, a chance when this was over. He didn't want to extract a hurried promise, uttered in the face of death. ”
I want an after too, pretty please 🥺💖
I feel this book has given us only a tiny glimpse into this new world.
Oren, for one, had lived through so much before he was ever Captain of the Mountain Guard, and a great deal of that past life was alluded to, scattered throughout the read. I’d most definitely love to meet Terry someday.
I would also like to find out why Lady Joan and her traveling party found themselves randomly in the middle of the forest, so far away from their home and neither mentioning a point of destination.
I want to see Mulriver Creek rebuild, and Berviel Keep reinforced.
I want to witness the Mountain Guardsmen as they show Oren the respect he so deserves.
I want to learn what becomes of Elmer and Girard and Marshall and even Cecile.
I want to know everything.
I truly enjoyed this book. Even with the ever-present frustration of not knowing any further after a book closes though, Captain of the Guard has left me with a sense of tranquil happy, and I very much appreciate that 🥰
I received a free ARC via StoryOrigin in exchange for an honest review.
January 2, 2025
Wow, what a great book and an amazing way to start the year! I've never read anything by this author before, but now I won’t stop until I finish every single book in this series.
I loved the captain of the Guard—Oren is resilient, bold, and a brilliant strategist. He shows real leadership, first by winning the trust and loyalty of his men, and then by outsmarting the Mirdoni army. His creativity and fearless attitude on the battlefield made this book an absolute gem to read.
And of course, Lady Joan—kind, empathetic, and courageous—almost made me fall in love with her myself.
I absolutely loved this book!
I loved the captain of the Guard—Oren is resilient, bold, and a brilliant strategist. He shows real leadership, first by winning the trust and loyalty of his men, and then by outsmarting the Mirdoni army. His creativity and fearless attitude on the battlefield made this book an absolute gem to read.
And of course, Lady Joan—kind, empathetic, and courageous—almost made me fall in love with her myself.
I absolutely loved this book!
May 24, 2022
Oren has been newly assigned as Lord Captain of the Mountain Guard, but to many of his guardsmen, he’s a new outsider who hasn’t done anything to earn their respect. To compound the issue, the Mountain guardsmen don’t have the regimen and discipline that Oren expects from the soldiers. Raid season is approaching, and Oren needs to train his troops and earn their respect, or they’ll fail to protect the local villagers from foreign invaders looking for an easy profit. Will Oren be up for the challenge and at what cost?
I enjoyed this book! I will admit that this isn’t my usual genre, my tastes trend towards paranormal as opposed to historical, but I really did like this story and found myself wanting to know what happened next. The characters were well written, and I was quickly rooting for the success of Oren and his troops. Despite his reservations, Oren is a natural leader and was able to quickly identify his troops’ strengths and use them to their advantage. I liked Lady Joan and liked that both she and Oren showed a great deal of strength despite their dire circumstances. I am definitely looking forward to the next story!
I enjoyed this book! I will admit that this isn’t my usual genre, my tastes trend towards paranormal as opposed to historical, but I really did like this story and found myself wanting to know what happened next. The characters were well written, and I was quickly rooting for the success of Oren and his troops. Despite his reservations, Oren is a natural leader and was able to quickly identify his troops’ strengths and use them to their advantage. I liked Lady Joan and liked that both she and Oren showed a great deal of strength despite their dire circumstances. I am definitely looking forward to the next story!
July 21, 2022
The titular Captain is a young aristocrat who is tasked with guarding one of the Border forts during winter. He has to win the loyalty of his men (who are not particularly impressed by his aristocratic connections) and whip the Guard to a credible fighting force. The pace is slow till the Captain comes to the help of a stranded Noble Woman and her Retinue in the Mountains. Once the threat of the Invading Army is uncovered the Captain and the Mountain Guard both have to adapt themselves and adopt new tactics. This is a nice coming of age story though the Captain is no teenager. The Captain's aristocratic connections are kept a mystery for the sequel though we can guess from the Series' title-even from the lady he's in love with. The author has done a good job detailing fighting in the Mountain passes, the tactics employed, the fate of the Villagers on the Run and the general Politics in the Kingdom. Sometimes the writing seems simplistic such as when the Captain reminisces over the fun he'd had with his Foster brother at the Lord's Household where he'd been trained. The love story seems rushed. But you can see why the Captain does not want to waste any time.
June 12, 2022
Oren has recently become Captain of the Guard of a border fort at the end of winter and has been having issues due to the post being empty until he filled it. Lax training has led to the usual problems and Oren is trying his best to fix the problem as the spring thaw is just beginning and so too will the raids. And this is how the story begins as he has a new plan to further his objectives. But of course things go wrong and thus begins an amazing story full of impossible odds to overcome while trying to connect to his men and be the Captain he knows he should be. Add in a Lady, a war band, battles and got a great story. Easy to read and so hard to put down. Some secrets are discovered, and a few hinted at I was hooked from the beginning to end.
May 25, 2024
This tale carries a small seed inside each of us of whom people have labelled not good enough. It’s a tale of extraordinary courage in the face of unimaginably difficult odds. But even more than that, it’s the story of the solitary, oft remote position any leader is forced into where they have to make seemingly unattainable and risky decisions—not always good, but for the best.
This is the story of Oren, Captain of the Mountain Guardsmen, who is forced to make such a decision while attempting to reshape a group of headstrong, unwieldy men into loyal soldiers who will follow him to whatever end. A tough call. It’s one Oren has to make, or be seen as weak and ineffectual.
With truly exceptional skill, Ron C. Nieto executes the storyline of this masterpiece with the precision of a finely-honed blade, while she manoeuvres believable characters and events like a true war commander. Her language is fast-paced yet introspective at the right moments throughout the novel. Readers see the heart and soul of the man, the warrior, the leader. They glimpse his fears, his yearnings, barrack for his wins and feel his losses—but I’m glad I didn’t feel his wounds, though I did flinch. I also loved the enticing romance that unfolded at ever so teasingly pivotal moments.
This story is more for an older readership who can stomach those final battle scenes, which unfold competently and skilfully, showing much research of medieval battles on the part of the author. This is a real page-turner right to the very end, beautifully told with some truly magical descriptions of people and scenes. Looking forward to reading more of this medieval military fantasy in book 2.
This is the story of Oren, Captain of the Mountain Guardsmen, who is forced to make such a decision while attempting to reshape a group of headstrong, unwieldy men into loyal soldiers who will follow him to whatever end. A tough call. It’s one Oren has to make, or be seen as weak and ineffectual.
With truly exceptional skill, Ron C. Nieto executes the storyline of this masterpiece with the precision of a finely-honed blade, while she manoeuvres believable characters and events like a true war commander. Her language is fast-paced yet introspective at the right moments throughout the novel. Readers see the heart and soul of the man, the warrior, the leader. They glimpse his fears, his yearnings, barrack for his wins and feel his losses—but I’m glad I didn’t feel his wounds, though I did flinch. I also loved the enticing romance that unfolded at ever so teasingly pivotal moments.
This story is more for an older readership who can stomach those final battle scenes, which unfold competently and skilfully, showing much research of medieval battles on the part of the author. This is a real page-turner right to the very end, beautifully told with some truly magical descriptions of people and scenes. Looking forward to reading more of this medieval military fantasy in book 2.
September 15, 2023
This was a decent read! I was very happy because the kindle edition cost next to nothing. Sometimes the free and inexpensive books are subpar, but this was well-written written and engaging.
Oren is the titular character. He's just arrived on scene at a keep that guards the mountain pass leading to an enemy kingdom. He's not popular with the men since they were accustomed to the previous captain's lax standards. That fella didn't exactly run a tight ship. Oren strives to instill discipline and begins training the guardsmen. They were perfectly happy wallowing in their slovenly existence so some backlash is to be expected.
Oren's an interesting character. He has an enigmatic past and we, as readers, are only given brief snapshots or hints into his history as the story unfolds. He is an honorable man, and I am, and always have been, a sucker for stories with honorable characters. He also seems to have a lot to prove not just to his men but to himself.
The romance was a little on the melodramatic and awkward side, but the rest of the story was just fine. I liked this book and I intend to continue with the series.
Oren is the titular character. He's just arrived on scene at a keep that guards the mountain pass leading to an enemy kingdom. He's not popular with the men since they were accustomed to the previous captain's lax standards. That fella didn't exactly run a tight ship. Oren strives to instill discipline and begins training the guardsmen. They were perfectly happy wallowing in their slovenly existence so some backlash is to be expected.
Oren's an interesting character. He has an enigmatic past and we, as readers, are only given brief snapshots or hints into his history as the story unfolds. He is an honorable man, and I am, and always have been, a sucker for stories with honorable characters. He also seems to have a lot to prove not just to his men but to himself.
The romance was a little on the melodramatic and awkward side, but the rest of the story was just fine. I liked this book and I intend to continue with the series.
December 22, 2022
Gritty
Oren Trevaine has been appointed Captain of the Mountain Guard but hasn’t had much success in controlling the men in it. He’s had the training and tried to instil some discipline into the troops without success. They have always worked a certain way and don’t take kindly to his attempts to change things. It id obvious that he is more than just some noble’s son and they don’t believe that he is capable of doing the job. The author describes his humiliation and determination perfectly. His knowledge of battle and warfare are put to the test when he and his patrol of fifty men discover a 500 strong incursion of their greatest enemy.
I felt his pain and his exhaustion, his fight against those in the troop who are determined to undermine him. Their disbelief only reinforces his decision to stand against the enemy.
A very gritty story but beautifully written
Oren Trevaine has been appointed Captain of the Mountain Guard but hasn’t had much success in controlling the men in it. He’s had the training and tried to instil some discipline into the troops without success. They have always worked a certain way and don’t take kindly to his attempts to change things. It id obvious that he is more than just some noble’s son and they don’t believe that he is capable of doing the job. The author describes his humiliation and determination perfectly. His knowledge of battle and warfare are put to the test when he and his patrol of fifty men discover a 500 strong incursion of their greatest enemy.
I felt his pain and his exhaustion, his fight against those in the troop who are determined to undermine him. Their disbelief only reinforces his decision to stand against the enemy.
A very gritty story but beautifully written
May 6, 2023
Holy logistics, Batman
Okay, so, this is a book about logistics. The logistics of training lazy guardsmen, the logistics of battling on horseback on a forested mountainside, the logistics of saving a village from invaders, the logistics of defeating a far greater enemy force with a handful of men. Oren isn't super great at logistics, so he plans and thinks and reasons. Around the planning is conflict with his subordinates, growing attraction for the beautiful lady he rescued, and above all, the need to save lives .. even while being forced to spend them. I especially liked how whenever they lost someone, the guards would calculate if that dead man had 'made quota', that is, how many of the enemy they had taken with them. This book is amazing and needs more attention.
Okay, so, this is a book about logistics. The logistics of training lazy guardsmen, the logistics of battling on horseback on a forested mountainside, the logistics of saving a village from invaders, the logistics of defeating a far greater enemy force with a handful of men. Oren isn't super great at logistics, so he plans and thinks and reasons. Around the planning is conflict with his subordinates, growing attraction for the beautiful lady he rescued, and above all, the need to save lives .. even while being forced to spend them. I especially liked how whenever they lost someone, the guards would calculate if that dead man had 'made quota', that is, how many of the enemy they had taken with them. This book is amazing and needs more attention.
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August 2, 2023This book sounded so good and I was excited to read it. I even got about halfway through before I couldn't go any further.
Nothing against the book. I'm sure there are great readers out there for this kind of fiction, but I like my psychic distance super close and I need to be invested in the characters and their emotions/motivations right away or I just can't read it. I liked Oren, but I wanted so much more emotion from him. He's very stiff and unrelatable for me.
If you like a good story and don't mind psychic distance, this is probably a good fit.
I DNFd this book, despite my best efforts to get through it. It might be good for others, but not for me.
Nothing against the book. I'm sure there are great readers out there for this kind of fiction, but I like my psychic distance super close and I need to be invested in the characters and their emotions/motivations right away or I just can't read it. I liked Oren, but I wanted so much more emotion from him. He's very stiff and unrelatable for me.
If you like a good story and don't mind psychic distance, this is probably a good fit.
I DNFd this book, despite my best efforts to get through it. It might be good for others, but not for me.
April 24, 2023
Powerful, Captivating, Masterfully Written
Ron C. Nieto proves himself as a master of medieval fiction in his CAPTAIN OF THE GUARD, book 1 of The Second Son series. Marvelous storytelling, deep world building, engaging characters locked in a life-or-death struggle with an invading army of horsemen and foot soldiers. Gripping action, competently written and packed with insider information about how men and women fought for dominance before the age of gunpowder. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED. One of the best books I've read in years.
Ron C. Nieto proves himself as a master of medieval fiction in his CAPTAIN OF THE GUARD, book 1 of The Second Son series. Marvelous storytelling, deep world building, engaging characters locked in a life-or-death struggle with an invading army of horsemen and foot soldiers. Gripping action, competently written and packed with insider information about how men and women fought for dominance before the age of gunpowder. HIGHLY RECOMMENDED. One of the best books I've read in years.
January 6, 2023
Honor Requires Discipline!
Oren fights the distrust of his men, who see him as an untested, outsider trying to bring new ideas to the Mountain. Oren’s appointment is no reward for a privileged son, but a well-earned authority, but a unit’s allegiance must be earned. Will Oren have time before they are sorely tested? Nieto clearly understands the pressure of command, the questioning over any loss, the mental toughness required to persevere. You’ll enjoy getting to know Oren!
Oren fights the distrust of his men, who see him as an untested, outsider trying to bring new ideas to the Mountain. Oren’s appointment is no reward for a privileged son, but a well-earned authority, but a unit’s allegiance must be earned. Will Oren have time before they are sorely tested? Nieto clearly understands the pressure of command, the questioning over any loss, the mental toughness required to persevere. You’ll enjoy getting to know Oren!
June 29, 2023
The Second Son - a Compelling Saga
I don't know how Ron C. Nieto escaped my attention in the past, but I can tell you he has it in full now. This first part of what promises to be a wonderful epic has everything you could want in a great novel: great characters, suspense, blood and guts action, and yes, a wee bit of romance thrown in there for good measure.
Once I started this, there was no putting it down! Can't wait to read #2!
I don't know how Ron C. Nieto escaped my attention in the past, but I can tell you he has it in full now. This first part of what promises to be a wonderful epic has everything you could want in a great novel: great characters, suspense, blood and guts action, and yes, a wee bit of romance thrown in there for good measure.
Once I started this, there was no putting it down! Can't wait to read #2!
September 29, 2023
Entertaining Read
Oren is a newly appointed Captain of the Guard. He is inexperienced but well trained. His challenge is to whip his soldiers into a disciplined fighting unit from an undisciplined mob that they are now. He downplays his noble heritage wanting to be seen on his own merits, even when he meets Lady Joan. I like the action, strategy, and romance. I look forward to the next book.
Oren is a newly appointed Captain of the Guard. He is inexperienced but well trained. His challenge is to whip his soldiers into a disciplined fighting unit from an undisciplined mob that they are now. He downplays his noble heritage wanting to be seen on his own merits, even when he meets Lady Joan. I like the action, strategy, and romance. I look forward to the next book.
January 16, 2024
I loved this
I wasn’t looking for this book or even a book like this. But I’m so happy I found it! It’s a classic tale really, but not one I get the chance to read often among modern fantasy books.
The chapters in the book are solid. You know who are the good guys and who are the bad. It’s clear who we are rooting for who we want to hate.
The action is well done and the romance is sweet. Thanks for a great start to a series I’m about to devour!
I wasn’t looking for this book or even a book like this. But I’m so happy I found it! It’s a classic tale really, but not one I get the chance to read often among modern fantasy books.
The chapters in the book are solid. You know who are the good guys and who are the bad. It’s clear who we are rooting for who we want to hate.
The action is well done and the romance is sweet. Thanks for a great start to a series I’m about to devour!
May 19, 2023
Okay so I read this after it was recommended by a friend and HOLY CROW IT DID NOT DISAPPOINT! Logistics, the wonderful WONDERFUL camaraderie between men as they learn to trust and respect their commander, and seeing Oren constantly struggle to find the best solution to save everyone was just *chef’s kiss*. Read it.
July 13, 2023
well done!
Intriguing novel about a man named Oren. He has been sent to bring an army unit up to standard. Derided as an outsider, Oren’s job is made more tricky by the discovery of an enemy patrol far behind the border. Oren faces many internal and external challenges as he tries to do what is right.
Intriguing novel about a man named Oren. He has been sent to bring an army unit up to standard. Derided as an outsider, Oren’s job is made more tricky by the discovery of an enemy patrol far behind the border. Oren faces many internal and external challenges as he tries to do what is right.
December 15, 2023
Such a well written book, I sped through books 1 and 2 staying up way too late. The emotions Oren is tackling, his feelings about honor and duty, his attempts to lead all draw the reader in and really make you root for him, despite the unfairness of his situation. That said, the supporting cast really takes you for a ride as well. Trust few and brace yourself for book 3.
December 23, 2024
Good initial setup book, ridiculous love story
I liked the action and how the captain had to overcome and put so much effort into protecting his people. The tactics were interesting. The love story with such intense it was ridiculous. Just a few looks, touches and conversations don’t create love so it’s way too intense.
I liked the action and how the captain had to overcome and put so much effort into protecting his people. The tactics were interesting. The love story with such intense it was ridiculous. Just a few looks, touches and conversations don’t create love so it’s way too intense.
April 19, 2025
Unique and human
The only thing I would change is to make it twice as long - but the author packs so much into each scene. The characteristics are some of the greatest I've ever read, showing so much with a single thought, observation or sentence
And it is also named perfectly with plot and emotional beats
The only thing I would change is to make it twice as long - but the author packs so much into each scene. The characteristics are some of the greatest I've ever read, showing so much with a single thought, observation or sentence
And it is also named perfectly with plot and emotional beats
January 18, 2023
fun and well developed
I mean no offense here, and as I read, I kept feeling that this book held a woman’s touch. The action, plot and such are strong, and the introspection is as well.
I mean no offense here, and as I read, I kept feeling that this book held a woman’s touch. The action, plot and such are strong, and the introspection is as well.
April 1, 2023
good story, a little heavy on the introspection
Good, coming-of-age story. Character is sympathetic. romance is nuanced and fun to see where it goes. Worth picking up the next volume.
Good, coming-of-age story. Character is sympathetic. romance is nuanced and fun to see where it goes. Worth picking up the next volume.
July 22, 2023
Unexpected treat
Blowing through teams and reams of kindle choices I found this jewel ready for my selection. At o-dark-thirty I mounted up and long past sunrise I held the line and was at the end and much to my delight found the saga continues. Can't wait to start book 2.
Blowing through teams and reams of kindle choices I found this jewel ready for my selection. At o-dark-thirty I mounted up and long past sunrise I held the line and was at the end and much to my delight found the saga continues. Can't wait to start book 2.
August 19, 2023
Wonderful!
Action, Adventure, Romance! All of this in this short novel. The main character, Oren, lead a company of mountain guard who have had to little or no effectual leadership. He gains their respect and wins the day in this great book.
Action, Adventure, Romance! All of this in this short novel. The main character, Oren, lead a company of mountain guard who have had to little or no effectual leadership. He gains their respect and wins the day in this great book.
March 23, 2025
Realistic
A good story well told. What works for me is that this story is simple and realistic; the main character is not superhuman nor does extreme actions, he’s a regular guy performing quite well. Nicely done.
A good story well told. What works for me is that this story is simple and realistic; the main character is not superhuman nor does extreme actions, he’s a regular guy performing quite well. Nicely done.
October 22, 2025
4 stars. Pretty good story of a young noble who assumes duties as the head of a military unit charged with protecting a mountainous border. The unit is poorly trained and disciplined and the basic plot is about how the MC raises their competence while also learning lessons himself.
August 9, 2022
Very well written. It was easy to get into the story telling. Finished it in a day. It was that good.
November 20, 2022
This book is okay. Everything about this book is okay.
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