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80 pages, Paperback
First published June 26, 2012
There’s a common misperception about poetry; namely, that it’s not grounded in reality. Poetry’s detractors complain about abstraction, and indeed, if you don’t have the literary wherewithal to process phonemes and lines of lyrics into meaningful sensation, it will never be for you. But even poetry’s most ardent backers will often agree that it’s an art not always grounded in decipherable reality. James Pollock’s Sailing to Babylon defies such definition. The slender volume, containing 17 shorter poems and one long form poem, is his first collection of poetry and, in it, one of his primary concerns seems to have been to provide his readers with the skeletal structure necessary in order to make sense of his poems. In addition to the book’s end notes which credit sources and inspirations, a number of the poems themselves contain titular annotations which give the interested reader a map in which to set out from Pollock’s own work.
Those annotations, along with a nicely written and thoughtful forward by the Canadian poet Jeffery Donaldson, make this book an easy point of departure for someone new to the art of poetry. Like any book of poetry, some of the poems in this collection work better than others. My favorite, Prow, is an imaginative adventure across an ocean of time: “gripping an oar of air, this oaken prow/once craned its latticed neck and thrust its whorled/and hook beaked orb-head like a bird of prey.” Though a mere 14 lines, by the time you’re done reading this sloshing poem aloud, you’re thankful to once again savor the placid waters of contemplative silence. Its rich vocabulary of imagery and open-mouthed sounds, which, if one is not careful, almost topple down the back of the throat, give it a tone of high seas drama, crashing waves, and impossible conditions; pure textual intensity.
Surely, then, this prow imagined as Pollock observes it is majestic in scale and form, able to lead ancient mariners across frigid expanses of gray nothingness, both talisman and testament to brute will? But pull up a Google image with the term “British Museum Prow” per the poem’s annotation and you’ll see the rather small brown wooden artifact in question. While fierce in design, its orb-like head culminating in two ghastly stingers straight from a mighty thorax, it’s hardly the object you’ve envisioned, suspended in some great room of a great museum. But reflect a little more on that small prow and you’ll come to realize its splendor lies not in its form, but in the tales it can tell; a centenarian recounting a lost time to a credulous child.
The beauty of Pollock’s best poems is indeed that you the reader become that enthralled child listening to a series of remarkable adventures. And, as any wise storyteller is wont to do, Pollock looks to his poetic forbearers for inspiration. Calling to mind Constantine Cavafy, the Egyptian born and raised Greek poet, whose Ithaka
Keep Ithaka always in your mind.
Arriving there is what you are destined for.
But do not hurry the journey at all.
Better if it lasts for years,
so you are old by the time you reach the island,
wealthy with all you have gained on the way,
not expecting Ithaka to make you rich.
Ithaka gave you the marvelous journey.
Without her you would not have set out.
She has nothing left to give you now.
And if you find her poor, Ithaka won’t have fooled you.
Wise as you will have become, so full of experience,
you will have understood by then what these Ithakas mean.
may you stumble at last upon some band of Inuit
hauling their catch of seal across the ice,
and see how foolish you have been:
forcing your way by will across a land
that can’t be forced, but must be understood,
toward a passage just now breaking up within.
Yet, disappointingly, there’s a host of other poems that don’t come together nearly so well. The novelty in the idea underlying his poem The Museum of Death is fine, but the execution, in passages such as: “Everything is archaeological:/prayer, toilets, table manners, cash.” is clumsy. In other cases, such clumsiness gives way to the banal, such as in Map of the Interior, a poem which pays homage to the explorer David Thompson. Here the metaphors are never convincingly realized, such as the reference to two Canadian rivers which: “pour their heart’s blood out into the sea/like three titanic arteries of a body.” Finally, I would take issue with the on-again, off-again rhyme scheme in Quarry Park, the long form poem that closes out the book. The poem is pleasantly discursive when read without voice, a meandering of thought that nicely mimics the rambling nature of the poet’s walk with his son, but read in meter, is a drunk man's chore.
Thankfully, though, the good outnumber the not-as-good ones and in the end, the effect is to leave the reader desirous of more. To take stock of any poet requires a collection larger than this, but there’s enough here, in my laymans opinion, to reveal glimpses of great potential. As Donaldson eloquently notes in the forward, the book is graciously endowed with “a symbolic inventory” fitting of any mythical land. The book, with its numerous references to Canadian themes, was even a finalist for the Griffin Poetry Award, one of Canada’s most prestigious. That seems appropriate, though there are plenty of poems in this collection which speak about things much bigger than Canada. And given the fact that Canada is pretty big, it’s saying a lot for this small first volume of poetry.
© Jeffrey L. Otto