I used to read a lot more sci-fi than I do, so maybe this is just me being out of touch--but I had to spend a lot more time than I was prepared to spend in decoding this book. It's cool that it employs alien languages, but I think there was too much jarringly different syntax for me to parse in such a short span (the book is less than 200 pages). I liked the concept of the story itself, but I found the odd formatting and colon usage distracting. I guess it was just more work than I was prepared for, for too little reward. For what it's worth, the action scenes were edge-of-the-seat intense, and I did get a real "Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy" vibe from it in places, which was fun. There were parts I thoroughly enjoyed. I just wish I there'd been more of those to offset the others.
My enjoyment of this story was hampered by a couple of other more mundane factors, the first being the apparent lack of copy-editing. I found about 10 typos and punctuation errors (besides the above-mentioned colon use), and in a book this short, that bugged me. Also (and this is likely outside the author's control), I thought the price was set surprisingly high for a book that, as it turns out, is only the first third of a bigger work...and paying over $15 for a paperback less than 200 pages long bugged me too. I think if I'd known what I was getting into, I would've waited for the three pieces to come out all at once, hopefully bound into an omnibus, and hopefully edited a little better. Sorry if this comes off sounding nit-picky, but in the last few years it seems like editing has really taken a back seat in the publishing world, and it's a peeve I can't overlook. Mass-market publishing content copy is supposed to be flawless. I can excuse maybe one or two typos in a 400+ page book, but not 10 in half that length.
Anyway, overall...not entirely my cup of tea; however it was a very creative endeavor which sported vivid writing and some pretty memorable, well-developed characters, and it did have some good powerful moments.