This book was recommended to me as a study in repetition, so let’s start there. It works several ways here. First, a great number of the poems (and all of those in Sea Lyrics) are sort of one sentence blasts which are composed of long paratactic strings of phrases: I am_____, I am_____, I am_______. Within these paratactic strings are repetitions of key images or phrases—“I am the waterfront and I cover the waterfront.” And often crucial images or phrases are repeated not only within one poem, but from poem to poem. These images often find themselves in increasingly strange or amusing contexts. The effect is one which often frustrates traditional sense making, as the sentences can simply just fold back up on themselves, return from where they came. And while this would seem to invite the reader to linger on the images longer than they would if they were a part of same larger, easily recognizable unit of sense, the lines are often enjambed, forcing the reader forward. The result is, at best, a rapid succession of happy transformations or departures and returns from certain phrases. At worst, the poems just seem sloppy, overfull, moving too fast, having meaning only through their own insistent motion. Though because there is a sort of improvisational element to writing in a listing method, one is willing to give lesser poems the benefit of the doubt. And poems such as “I am holding the guns in the attics…” & “O Razorback Clams” are definitely successful.
“Sea Lyrics” is especially challenging in that there are no variations in the form, just one dense block of stuff after another. In the end, because Jarnot only demonstrates hints at formal versatility and her chosen form in this book being so rigid (many of the poems in other sections being written via the “Sea Lyrics” method), this book feels around 4-6 poems too long. It risks alienating the reader without a tremendous amount of patience.