The constant references to a person’s “alpha” or “omega” or “wolf” as a separate entity from the self was really grating in this book. Generally in omegaverse, one’s designation is as much a part of them as their gender. Sometimes authors play on the separation between those parts of the self, just like you might see a line in a book such as (this is just a random sentence off the top of my head) “The human in me wants to leave her alone, since she’s been through a lot. But the man wants to kiss her senseless.” And that kinda makes sense in that context, but if the book kept doing the human/man dichotomy thing over and over again, you might start to think, “uh, are you not a man? Cause you bring up the differences between your own thoughts and your ‘man thoughts’ kind of a lot…” and in this book, it’s basically being done twice over, with the inner omega and the inner wolf not being treated as one and the same. It’s just too distracting.
What would’ve been interesting is if the author had put the dual POV to better use; emphasizing the psychological separation between wolf vs woman vs omega for the FMC’s sections, and then showing that the feral alpha’s wolf and man are one and the same. But nope. The MMC seems to have even less control over his wolf than is typical of shifter PNRs; before a shift, he spends time “convincing” his wolf not to misbehave, and then as soon as he shifts, the wolf just does whatever it wants anyway. Super unusual.
A full 20% of this book is dedicated entirely to one single, ultra-gushy, (honesty kinda horrifying) sex scene. It just goes on and on, and the dirty talk was… *shudder* I was not titillated; I wanted it to end.
The ending is super-predictable and super -rushed, and the FMC who was stuck babysitting and never free to live alone ends up mated and pregnant within the year. Yay.