Jay hates shopping for clothes; he has no idea about style or fashion. When an unexpected item shows up in the changing room he has to decide whether to try it on for size.
Also found at Author website. __________ M/M Erotica, explicit scenes
Casey K Cox is an avid reader and author of m/m erotic fiction. Hailing from the West of England she tends to set her stories in the UK although some of her characters have been known to travel in time and space.
The popular 'Rise of Alec Caldwell' series is now available in print. Check out the list of titles available and follow her work at http://caseykcox.blogspot.com
Heads up everyone, this is a very short story with some smut. If those two things bother you then don't read it. I however don't mind a short story once in awhile, specially when it's free. I like smut when it's done good. This was good, this was throw panties across the room good. I would also like to say that I LOVE the amount of details that I found in this short story. I had almost thought I was dreaming about having read books that accurately describe characters and places. However, I found all those details in this story. It's a good hot chocolate read.
As a hot little sex scene in a department store this is probably 4 stars really, but as a short it falls a little for me. I want there to be some meet to a story even if it is this short. Two guys meeting and getting it on while trying on clothes may be hot, but comes across as just horny not really leaving me hoping they find a real connection together.
That being said I really did enjoy the authors tone. It's well written and I really liked the character's voice. I just wanted more or some sort of twist that would have given more depth to the encounter. :)
This was good for a quick, hot romp. It would be fun if the author would make this a serial. The writing was well done and the story felt complete. I liked it.
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This was good for a quick, hot romp. It would be fun if the author would maybe make this a serial. The writing was well done and the story felt complete. I liked both guys and felt like I read a whole story. That should be hard to achieve for being so short. Kudos to the author.