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Loved By Three #5
Drei Männer für Hazel (SMS mit Happy End-Serie)
Ich hatte das College abgeschlossen, aber keinen Job und keinerlei Aussichten. Wir mussten wieder in Quarantäne gehen. Mit der neuen Mutation stiegen die Fälle wieder an und die Impfstoffe halfen überhaupt nicht. Konnte es noch schlimmer kommen? Oh ja. Zwei superheiße, sexy SEALs standen auf einmal vor meiner Tür. Mit zwei Seals hatte ich in den letzten Monaten geschrieben, und der dritte …sagen wir mal, er wollte sich den Spaß nicht entgehen lassen. Welchen Spaß? Mich. Adonis liebt es, mich feucht zu machen. David zieht mich aus und versohlt mir den Hintern, bis ich mich ihm unterwerfe. Chaz bringt mein Innerstes zum Lodern, wenn er nur sein schmutziges Mundwerk loslässt. Das war zu viel auf einmal. Ich hatte nicht erwartet, Adonis oder Chaz zu begegnen, und jetzt standen plötzlich drei Männer vor meiner Tür und forderten mich auf, mich zu entscheiden. Aber warum sollte ich mich für einen entscheiden … wenn ich doch alle drei haben konnte? Anmerkung der Drei Männer für Hazel enthält sehr heftige eindeutige Szenen und manchmal wird einem Mädchen der Hintern versohlt. Wenn Ihnen so etwas gefällt, dann ist dieses Buch das Richtige für Sie!
162 pages, Paperback
Published August 3, 2021
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June 8, 2021
Storyline does not flow.
Storyline does not flow smoothly and is poorly written. Storyline is also not realistic. The characters interactions with each other so not seem like reasonable interactions that would normally happen and therefore are not believable.
Storyline does not flow smoothly and is poorly written. Storyline is also not realistic. The characters interactions with each other so not seem like reasonable interactions that would normally happen and therefore are not believable.
June 8, 2021
Confusing, rushed, bad editing
I really wanted to like this book. I love 'SEALs' and RH. I finished the book despite stopping reading a few times. I thought " it had to get better." It doesn't. The storyline is all over the place. At first it's more about MFC, hating her body, never being popular, her vibrator, and her friend/roommate being her opposite who pushes her into going out more.Her roommate is dating 3 men which intrigues her. Somehow, MFC signs up to write a service member but picks 3 guys, and is then too anxious because she picked 3.
MFC is a virgin college student who gets drunk so she can write pen pal emails to three enlisted men. She needed to be drunk? Maybe its just me, but that is so very offensive. Then she writes anything but a supportive email. Much, much later in the book, she eventually connects with two of her SEALs and one of the best friends who is a Dominant. (The D/s rules of play were well done). It is from then on that the story is very rushed, confusing and frustrating. One paragraph, the Dominant refuses to let her finish, next paragraph she describes how she finished multiple times. Eh, what? When? How? In another section, she is facing the wall with a guy behind, two lines later her chest rubbed against his, and still later it was one guy but then a different name she was with. Her hands were tied in front, but she was laying on her back with them under her. Add in a few minor typos, and this book was just a mess. Editing would have helped a lot. Sorry, I do NOT recommend this book.
I really wanted to like this book. I love 'SEALs' and RH. I finished the book despite stopping reading a few times. I thought " it had to get better." It doesn't. The storyline is all over the place. At first it's more about MFC, hating her body, never being popular, her vibrator, and her friend/roommate being her opposite who pushes her into going out more.Her roommate is dating 3 men which intrigues her. Somehow, MFC signs up to write a service member but picks 3 guys, and is then too anxious because she picked 3.
MFC is a virgin college student who gets drunk so she can write pen pal emails to three enlisted men. She needed to be drunk? Maybe its just me, but that is so very offensive. Then she writes anything but a supportive email. Much, much later in the book, she eventually connects with two of her SEALs and one of the best friends who is a Dominant. (The D/s rules of play were well done). It is from then on that the story is very rushed, confusing and frustrating. One paragraph, the Dominant refuses to let her finish, next paragraph she describes how she finished multiple times. Eh, what? When? How? In another section, she is facing the wall with a guy behind, two lines later her chest rubbed against his, and still later it was one guy but then a different name she was with. Her hands were tied in front, but she was laying on her back with them under her. Add in a few minor typos, and this book was just a mess. Editing would have helped a lot. Sorry, I do NOT recommend this book.
June 12, 2022
Read on Radish. I’ve read other books by this author and assumed I’d enjoy this one too. I felt like we just got the notes of a storyline. It didn’t work together and jumped around. The timeline was confusing and was not an intriguing read. Could have something, but major editing needed.
August 11, 2021
Teen girl story
I think if I was a teenager I might have liked this ok. BUT AT halfway through the entire story, it had more about three girl's friendship than it had about three seals... In fact only one has had much chatting/emailing at all. I gave up... didn't read the ending. It was just entirely too childish, girl's fighting, getting drunk, just not mature at all. I hopefully don't mistakenly add any more of her stories based on good ideas as it was not anything like what I prefer as an adult to read. I gave it two stars because I do think maybe teenagers might like it OK... and aside from a bit of masterbating and sexting it was pretty PG rated too. I didn't read anymore though after the guys supposedly turned up and she ran away... just couldn't get into the story even then.
I think if I was a teenager I might have liked this ok. BUT AT halfway through the entire story, it had more about three girl's friendship than it had about three seals... In fact only one has had much chatting/emailing at all. I gave up... didn't read the ending. It was just entirely too childish, girl's fighting, getting drunk, just not mature at all. I hopefully don't mistakenly add any more of her stories based on good ideas as it was not anything like what I prefer as an adult to read. I gave it two stars because I do think maybe teenagers might like it OK... and aside from a bit of masterbating and sexting it was pretty PG rated too. I didn't read anymore though after the guys supposedly turned up and she ran away... just couldn't get into the story even then.
January 12, 2022
I really wanted to like this book but the story didn't do it for me. The story was a bit disjointed for me as it didn't really flow from one moment to the next, and was a bit confusing about how Adonis and Chaz knew each other and decided to come visit. Without giving anything away, I think much of the story confused me a bit in terms of mean girl vs not mean girl and David.
I received a free advanced review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my fair and honest opinion.
I received a free advanced review copy of this book and am voluntarily leaving my fair and honest opinion.
July 6, 2022
I'M FUCKING CONFUSED WITH WHAT YOU WRITE IN THE STORY
It's too much for teen romance though. I wish there are more editing in terms of grammar and enrich the vocabulary in the story.
It's too much for teen romance though. I wish there are more editing in terms of grammar and enrich the vocabulary in the story.
October 9, 2021
Kiara is in her final year of college she’s down to the last semester and she has spent her whole college life studying hard, not going out to parties or anywhere in particular unless she was with her roommate. Her father was a Navy seal and passed away five years ago and when an opportunity comes up for her to correspond with other Navy seals who are serving their country away from home, Kiara selects three Navy seals to correspond to. She sent the same email to all three men accidentally and only two of them respond to her, Adonis and Chaz. What happens next is hot and steamy and they enjoy chatting with each other.
Kiara goes home after college is over, but because of the pandemic there is no graduation ceremony, she has three days to get home before everything is shut down. Her to Adonis and Chaz show up at her home along with a friend, David. They start a relationship and it continues on, they eventually have their happily ever after.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
Kiara goes home after college is over, but because of the pandemic there is no graduation ceremony, she has three days to get home before everything is shut down. Her to Adonis and Chaz show up at her home along with a friend, David. They start a relationship and it continues on, they eventually have their happily ever after.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
June 8, 2021
I really enjoyed this book, that I read it in 2 hours. We meet Kiara when she is in the last year at college. When she decides to email three seals. When things go a little crazy, with the replies to her drunk emails.
Adonis, Chaz and then David come into her life and things heat up to create a hot little read with such a sweet and happy ending.
Adonis, Chaz and then David come into her life and things heat up to create a hot little read with such a sweet and happy ending.
July 1, 2021
Only Ok
A decent enough read but I didn't really like Kiara and some of the scenes were a little confusing as they started with one of the men and seemed to switch to another part way through. Sorry but not for me.
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A decent enough read but I didn't really like Kiara and some of the scenes were a little confusing as they started with one of the men and seemed to switch to another part way through. Sorry but not for me.
I received a free copy of this book via Booksprout and am voluntarily leaving a review.
March 23, 2022
Life
This story really hit home for me she changes so much from the person she started out as. She came out of her shell. Kinda happened that way for me. No I don't have 3 men 1 is enough for me but this 1 changed my life for the better he makes me the best person I can be. I think that's what she found also.
This story really hit home for me she changes so much from the person she started out as. She came out of her shell. Kinda happened that way for me. No I don't have 3 men 1 is enough for me but this 1 changed my life for the better he makes me the best person I can be. I think that's what she found also.
June 8, 2021
The story line was good, but confusing for me in some places. I had a hard time getting into this story. I have read other stories from this author and I enjoyed those. It was a good read but out of shorts for me a bit.
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I am voluntarily leaving a review.
November 15, 2021
Quarantine with 2SEALs + 1
Enjoy as 2 SEALs and their friend decide to quarantine with their email pen pal. I would have liked a little less before quarantine and more after the 3 guys made their desire for a future known.
Enjoy as 2 SEALs and their friend decide to quarantine with their email pen pal. I would have liked a little less before quarantine and more after the 3 guys made their desire for a future known.
March 14, 2022
Review
From the beginning I was hooked on the story and where it would go. There is so much tension and suspense and drama and love. I had fun reading and hope for more happiness than I expected
From the beginning I was hooked on the story and where it would go. There is so much tension and suspense and drama and love. I had fun reading and hope for more happiness than I expected
July 20, 2021
Okay ...
To much prolong and not enough 3 Sexy seals. Could be really good if seals played a bigger part instead of side notes.
To much prolong and not enough 3 Sexy seals. Could be really good if seals played a bigger part instead of side notes.
August 13, 2021
The concept was interesting.
August 14, 2021
Das Buch "Drei Männer für Hazel (SMS mit Happy End-Serie 6) wurde von Sarwah Creed verfasst und erschien 2021.
Die Autorin erzählt uns hier eine Geschichte, die uns langsam zur möglichen Polyamorie hinführt. Wir erfahren, wie es ablaufen kann und wie furchtbar Mitmenschen auf nicht gewöhnte Abläufe im Liebesleben reagieren können.
Die Wortwahl und der Sprachstil waren gut, allerdings ist die Geschichte zu schnell erzählt. Vieles kommt ruckhaft und unvollständig beim Leser an. Die Storyline an sich ist interessant und sehr gut gewählt, doch wünscht man sich als Leser mehr erzählt zu bekommen.
Jeder, der Kurzgeschichten mit ein paar Lücken gerne liest, wird das Buch auch gerne lesen.
Die Autorin erzählt uns hier eine Geschichte, die uns langsam zur möglichen Polyamorie hinführt. Wir erfahren, wie es ablaufen kann und wie furchtbar Mitmenschen auf nicht gewöhnte Abläufe im Liebesleben reagieren können.
Die Wortwahl und der Sprachstil waren gut, allerdings ist die Geschichte zu schnell erzählt. Vieles kommt ruckhaft und unvollständig beim Leser an. Die Storyline an sich ist interessant und sehr gut gewählt, doch wünscht man sich als Leser mehr erzählt zu bekommen.
Jeder, der Kurzgeschichten mit ein paar Lücken gerne liest, wird das Buch auch gerne lesen.
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