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Falls Chance Ranch
Are you worried about your executive?
Is he burned out?
Frazzled?
Less than stellar?
Is he an excellent employee that you don’t want to lose?
If the answer to those questions is an unqualified yes!,
then you need to think about sending him to
Falls Chance Ranch.
In a matter of weeks or months, we’ll turn around your executive and return him to you fit and ready to pick up the reins again.
Falls Chance is a working sheep ranch deep in the heartland of Wyoming. Your executives will be put to work on the ranch
while we retrain bad habits into good ones.
Executives will remain on the ranch
until we’re assured that they’re safe to return to their jobs.
The average stay is eight weeks
but can run shorter or longer depending upon the person.
Our program is completely confidential
and has a highly proven track record.
Our graduates are in many of the top companies around the globe.
Word Count: approx. 205,459
Is he burned out?
Frazzled?
Less than stellar?
Is he an excellent employee that you don’t want to lose?
If the answer to those questions is an unqualified yes!,
then you need to think about sending him to
Falls Chance Ranch.
In a matter of weeks or months, we’ll turn around your executive and return him to you fit and ready to pick up the reins again.
Falls Chance is a working sheep ranch deep in the heartland of Wyoming. Your executives will be put to work on the ranch
while we retrain bad habits into good ones.
Executives will remain on the ranch
until we’re assured that they’re safe to return to their jobs.
The average stay is eight weeks
but can run shorter or longer depending upon the person.
Our program is completely confidential
and has a highly proven track record.
Our graduates are in many of the top companies around the globe.
Word Count: approx. 205,459
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October 30, 2013
A man has a nervous breakdown. He is forced, by the firm he works for, to attend a camp in which layman shrinks infantilise and physically, sexually and psychologically abuse people like him until they comply with their standards. This story reads, quite unfortunately, exactly like those religious "we god-love the gay out of you"-camps in which gay youths and men get abused. It reads like the detailed horrors of zealot brainwashing within a sect.
I am shocked at the amount of people who clearly don't grasp what is described here. I can understand fetishists (of rape, non-con and psychological torture) loving these books, because this caters directly to their Id.
But so many people read this and don't even mention in a passing word that what we witness being done to Dale is actually gravest abuse, that it leaves me breathless. I have a hard time believing that everyone who gave it 5* actually is into the abovementioned fetishes. I am myself into BDSM, so I do have an inkling just what the percentages and spreads are. Thus this amount of blithe acceptance leaves me shocked. I keep wondering why this is so. Really, really shocked.
I am shocked at the amount of people who clearly don't grasp what is described here. I can understand fetishists (of rape, non-con and psychological torture) loving these books, because this caters directly to their Id.
But so many people read this and don't even mention in a passing word that what we witness being done to Dale is actually gravest abuse, that it leaves me breathless. I have a hard time believing that everyone who gave it 5* actually is into the abovementioned fetishes. I am myself into BDSM, so I do have an inkling just what the percentages and spreads are. Thus this amount of blithe acceptance leaves me shocked. I keep wondering why this is so. Really, really shocked.
May 19, 2013
Second Read - 5/15/13 - 5/18/13
I love it just as much as the first time. Even though I told myself I'd just read a bit here and there, because on Wednesday when I started this I really needed a comfort read, I couldn't help but putting everything else aside and reading this first book straight through. I have another full week of reviews coming up that I still need to finish some of them and finalize and format the rest of them, but I don't think I'll be able to stop myself from opening now and reading it as well! Hopefully I can take it slower though :) Maybe...
First Read - 7/12/12 - 7/13/12
Review posted at The Armchair Reader.
First of all, I really want to thank Jen for pointing this online serial out to me (don't worry, this book is complete), and by proxy Orannia. It is a pretty long book, especially when you realize that the rest of the series is just about as long, but it really is worth reading.
The basis of the story is a working ranch in Wyoming that runs an exclusive program designed to help overworked and overstressed executives and CEOs rejuvenate. It may seem like rehab, and it is -- without the negative white-washed wall and formica tabletop and stale coffee associations. It is a place where people can come and help work the ranch (one at a time) and get some perspective and help with their problems.
Dale is sent to Falls Chance Ranch by his company after he has a breakdown at the office. A lifetime of bad habits and obsessive behavior have gotten him the reputation as somewhat of a whiz kid in financial circles, but at the failing of his health. Not eating and not sleeping and working around the clock simply will not work for him anymore. He's not given much of a choice, something he really despises, but the ranch and the people who live there quickly get under his skin. He starts to feel a part of something he never even knew could exist and starts to understand himself for the first time in his life.
I swear at least one of the authors of this MUST be a psychologist. I just don't know if I could believe that such a character intensive story could be written, especially in the setting of mental heath issues, without that knowledge and background. Because it doesn't just sound like Dale has an internet diagnosis and the plot flows from a breakdown of Wikipedia neurotic disorders, but the story is deeply ingrained in how people see the world and react to one another, both from a social perspective, and from a deeply internalized one. The slow pace and long length allow the authors to really dig deep in the characters, take their time, and let the plot unfold.
I think that a very strong case could be made for shortening some of this. And if this were published and professionally edited (it is remarkably free of mistakes and errors, to me anyway :D), it would no doubt lose quite a lot of length. But a lot of the charm and reason that the characters sunk so deep in my bones and I could feel them like best friends, was because of the time spent with them. Enough time that the pace is much more akin to real life, more than most written works.
Perhaps what is strongest here though, besides how wonderful the characters are and the relationships between them, is the place of Falls Chance Ranch. The whole premise of the rehabilitation of clients, even though it is never called that, is the return to idyllic nature. The meaning of working land and passing it on. Of a place as character, seen through the constant stories of David and Phillip, now long since died in the story, but present characters because of interchangeability of them and the land they became. Seen from the perspective of a man who has become battered by everything artificial in the world, the land, the story and characters, and therefore the book become a similar experience for the reader as the situation is for Dale. It seems like so many of the reviews I've seen of this story have mentioned how people felt so connected to Dale, and that's because when his problems are laid bare, really bare, we can each find a way to connect to them.
I'm completely addicted to this story, and it probably isn't for everyone. There's no sex, which definitely upset me sometimes because the connections are so strong I wanted to see that. In her post, Jen talked about seeing a group of 5 guys work together, and that was simply wonderful. I've never seen such a polyamorous family work in fiction this way. It is very long and has a slow pace. So it might be tedious for some to read. But if you really like digging into stories that won't leave you for a long time and will take you a while to enjoy, then this is definitely for you. I simply cannot wait to read the rest of this series, no matter how much further it will destroy my very detailed reading schedule I had laid out. Who cares? I'll read all those books next week! This week, I want to finish Falls Chance Ranch.
**Note: While technically this is BDSM, the lack of sex and therefore BDSM sexual play really breaks down to the core of dominance and submission and the transference of power.Three Traders
I love it just as much as the first time. Even though I told myself I'd just read a bit here and there, because on Wednesday when I started this I really needed a comfort read, I couldn't help but putting everything else aside and reading this first book straight through. I have another full week of reviews coming up that I still need to finish some of them and finalize and format the rest of them, but I don't think I'll be able to stop myself from opening now and reading it as well! Hopefully I can take it slower though :) Maybe...
First Read - 7/12/12 - 7/13/12
Review posted at The Armchair Reader.
First of all, I really want to thank Jen for pointing this online serial out to me (don't worry, this book is complete), and by proxy Orannia. It is a pretty long book, especially when you realize that the rest of the series is just about as long, but it really is worth reading.
The basis of the story is a working ranch in Wyoming that runs an exclusive program designed to help overworked and overstressed executives and CEOs rejuvenate. It may seem like rehab, and it is -- without the negative white-washed wall and formica tabletop and stale coffee associations. It is a place where people can come and help work the ranch (one at a time) and get some perspective and help with their problems.
Dale is sent to Falls Chance Ranch by his company after he has a breakdown at the office. A lifetime of bad habits and obsessive behavior have gotten him the reputation as somewhat of a whiz kid in financial circles, but at the failing of his health. Not eating and not sleeping and working around the clock simply will not work for him anymore. He's not given much of a choice, something he really despises, but the ranch and the people who live there quickly get under his skin. He starts to feel a part of something he never even knew could exist and starts to understand himself for the first time in his life.
I swear at least one of the authors of this MUST be a psychologist. I just don't know if I could believe that such a character intensive story could be written, especially in the setting of mental heath issues, without that knowledge and background. Because it doesn't just sound like Dale has an internet diagnosis and the plot flows from a breakdown of Wikipedia neurotic disorders, but the story is deeply ingrained in how people see the world and react to one another, both from a social perspective, and from a deeply internalized one. The slow pace and long length allow the authors to really dig deep in the characters, take their time, and let the plot unfold.
I think that a very strong case could be made for shortening some of this. And if this were published and professionally edited (it is remarkably free of mistakes and errors, to me anyway :D), it would no doubt lose quite a lot of length. But a lot of the charm and reason that the characters sunk so deep in my bones and I could feel them like best friends, was because of the time spent with them. Enough time that the pace is much more akin to real life, more than most written works.
Perhaps what is strongest here though, besides how wonderful the characters are and the relationships between them, is the place of Falls Chance Ranch. The whole premise of the rehabilitation of clients, even though it is never called that, is the return to idyllic nature. The meaning of working land and passing it on. Of a place as character, seen through the constant stories of David and Phillip, now long since died in the story, but present characters because of interchangeability of them and the land they became. Seen from the perspective of a man who has become battered by everything artificial in the world, the land, the story and characters, and therefore the book become a similar experience for the reader as the situation is for Dale. It seems like so many of the reviews I've seen of this story have mentioned how people felt so connected to Dale, and that's because when his problems are laid bare, really bare, we can each find a way to connect to them.
I'm completely addicted to this story, and it probably isn't for everyone. There's no sex, which definitely upset me sometimes because the connections are so strong I wanted to see that. In her post, Jen talked about seeing a group of 5 guys work together, and that was simply wonderful. I've never seen such a polyamorous family work in fiction this way. It is very long and has a slow pace. So it might be tedious for some to read. But if you really like digging into stories that won't leave you for a long time and will take you a while to enjoy, then this is definitely for you. I simply cannot wait to read the rest of this series, no matter how much further it will destroy my very detailed reading schedule I had laid out. Who cares? I'll read all those books next week! This week, I want to finish Falls Chance Ranch.
**Note: While technically this is BDSM, the lack of sex and therefore BDSM sexual play really breaks down to the core of dominance and submission and the transference of power.Three Traders
February 20, 2023
First read: From February 1 - 4, 2012
How did I get so lucky - another wonderful read! Yes, it's a looong story. Yes, there is no sex. Yes, there was all this spanking and cuddling. But I have to say: I love this story. Dale's journey from the beginning of the book til the end was very well written and totally believable, especially his struggles in the end as he is not miraculously fixxed. In parts it was rather heartbreaking to watch his attempts at getting a grip on himself and to stop falling back into the behavior that brought him to the ranch in the first place.
I also liked the other men very much, how different they were and how they complemented each other - especially Riley was fun! So, I'm glad that there are 3 more books in this series and now I start with #2.
ETA: Started a re-read today, 04/13, finished 04/16
Still as wonderful as the first time I read it. Nothing else to add :)
How did I get so lucky - another wonderful read! Yes, it's a looong story. Yes, there is no sex. Yes, there was all this spanking and cuddling. But I have to say: I love this story. Dale's journey from the beginning of the book til the end was very well written and totally believable, especially his struggles in the end as he is not miraculously fixxed. In parts it was rather heartbreaking to watch his attempts at getting a grip on himself and to stop falling back into the behavior that brought him to the ranch in the first place.
I also liked the other men very much, how different they were and how they complemented each other - especially Riley was fun! So, I'm glad that there are 3 more books in this series and now I start with #2.
ETA: Started a re-read today, 04/13, finished 04/16
Still as wonderful as the first time I read it. Nothing else to add :)
September 16, 2012
I read this book due to the enthousiastic reviews it got. And I agree that is is well written, for the fact that it is a freebee. That's why I gave it two stars (otherwise it would be zero).
However, I have a huge problem with the subject: a CEO who had a major breakdown is sent for healing to a ranch in Wyoming. The idea is ok, but what he finds there really disgusted me.
Careful: rest are spoilers
This vulnerable person fell in the hands of some makeshift psychologists. Instead of helping him to rebuild his personality, they systematically broke him down, took away everything that made him an adult beeing and treated him to the level of a 5 year old: spanking, standing in a corner, sent to bed very early, restriction of freedom, taking away all pleasure.. Everything disguised as a necesssary healing measure. This is bullshit pyschology. What it burns down is prison and degredation, subtly to make swallow the pill easily.
At the end, the CEO is happy to stay as a toy for the 3 doms: Stockholm syndrom is its beauty... They call it "brat", but what is boils down to is slavery, as Dale's characterer is not "bratty" as all.
As mentioned by the others, there are no sex scenes. That's maybe why I have such problem with the approach, because if this would be sexual consensus, that would make it hot and acceptable.
Here, it is just 3 cruel jailors, frightening in their seemingly compasionate approach, systematically taking advantage of a vulnerable person that came for help but became abused in the worst sense.
I could not finish the book and I will not read the rest of the series.
However, I have a huge problem with the subject: a CEO who had a major breakdown is sent for healing to a ranch in Wyoming. The idea is ok, but what he finds there really disgusted me.
Careful: rest are spoilers
This vulnerable person fell in the hands of some makeshift psychologists. Instead of helping him to rebuild his personality, they systematically broke him down, took away everything that made him an adult beeing and treated him to the level of a 5 year old: spanking, standing in a corner, sent to bed very early, restriction of freedom, taking away all pleasure.. Everything disguised as a necesssary healing measure. This is bullshit pyschology. What it burns down is prison and degredation, subtly to make swallow the pill easily.
At the end, the CEO is happy to stay as a toy for the 3 doms: Stockholm syndrom is its beauty... They call it "brat", but what is boils down to is slavery, as Dale's characterer is not "bratty" as all.
As mentioned by the others, there are no sex scenes. That's maybe why I have such problem with the approach, because if this would be sexual consensus, that would make it hot and acceptable.
Here, it is just 3 cruel jailors, frightening in their seemingly compasionate approach, systematically taking advantage of a vulnerable person that came for help but became abused in the worst sense.
I could not finish the book and I will not read the rest of the series.
August 3, 2014
Reread August 2014 - I don't know why I had the urge to go back to the ranch, but I did. There are dozens of things wrong/odd/silly with this book, the characters and the whole setup of the ranch. Still, there is something about it that draws me in.
4 ½ stars for these cowboys. This book has left me gobsmacked. It was nothing that I expected, yet I really liked it.
Falls Chance Ranch is a working ranch in Wyoming that is also a retreat for burnt out corporate CEOs. Since this book shows up on lists such as Best Gay Polyamorous Romance I figured that the secret sauce to the executive rejuvenation program must be some good old fashioned man loving, right? Well, not exactly. As it turns out, there is no on-screen sex, none, nada. But there is spanking in a domestic discipline context and grown men holding hands, kissing foreheads and sitting on laps. It’s sweet.
The story mostly meanders, but is nominally the journey of Dale Aden, a corporate wonder-boy CEO who has broken down and gets sent to Falls Chance Ranch for rehabilitation. Dale arrives knowing nothing about FCR and just wants to get through the program and get out. Of course, his mentor Flynn is having none of that and is all about putting on the brakes, slowing things down and completely resetting Dale.
Slow is a theme throughout FCR. It’s a slow moving story about slowing things down and try as I might, there was no speed reading this thing. This book is also a slow reveal in terms of characters and their relationship to one another. I think that is part of the charm, it doesn’t hit you with a ton of bricks, it just slowly creeps up on you and gives you a big hug.
4 ½ stars for these cowboys. This book has left me gobsmacked. It was nothing that I expected, yet I really liked it.
Falls Chance Ranch is a working ranch in Wyoming that is also a retreat for burnt out corporate CEOs. Since this book shows up on lists such as Best Gay Polyamorous Romance I figured that the secret sauce to the executive rejuvenation program must be some good old fashioned man loving, right? Well, not exactly. As it turns out, there is no on-screen sex, none, nada. But there is spanking in a domestic discipline context and grown men holding hands, kissing foreheads and sitting on laps. It’s sweet.
The story mostly meanders, but is nominally the journey of Dale Aden, a corporate wonder-boy CEO who has broken down and gets sent to Falls Chance Ranch for rehabilitation. Dale arrives knowing nothing about FCR and just wants to get through the program and get out. Of course, his mentor Flynn is having none of that and is all about putting on the brakes, slowing things down and completely resetting Dale.
Slow is a theme throughout FCR. It’s a slow moving story about slowing things down and try as I might, there was no speed reading this thing. This book is also a slow reveal in terms of characters and their relationship to one another. I think that is part of the charm, it doesn’t hit you with a ton of bricks, it just slowly creeps up on you and gives you a big hug.
September 26, 2012
I was a horse-mad girl, helped by the fact that when I was five we moved to a new suburb right on the edge of rural life. From the top of the road there was nothing but horses, orchards, and farms. One kid rode his pony to school. I've always been a voracious reader, and I devoured every horse-related book I could find, from classics like Flicka and Thunderhead, to unknowns such as A Horse for XYZ, Show Jumping Secret, and Summer Pony.
Therefore I found this story about Bandit, a wild stallion with a harem of mares, an unexpectedly enjoyable and relaxing treat. The Wyoming ranch where Bandit lives is described in loving detail, as are the saddle horses, Snickers, Hammer, Gucci, et al, plus the day-to-day tasks which are needed to keep a ranch going: sweeping, fence repair, etc. These are carried out by Bandit's humans: four hunky cowboys and one burnt-out CEO who has come to decompress and recover from a breakdown.
One big thing I didn't like, and this was the cowboys shooting one cougar and discussing how they already shot a previous one. Cougars are protected everywhere in the US but Texas, where they are classified as a 'varmint' (I am not making this up: way to debunk that stereotype, Texans). In Wyoming you can hunt cougar in season, with a licence, and you can kill one if you are in immediate life-threatening danger. You may not see a cougar and spend the next week stalking it because it's a danger to your livestock.
One MC was a New Zealander, which is always a welcome suprise. However the author has clearly done little research, as pretty much every detail about NZ rings false. The biggie was that Flynn says he is from "South Island". Now on any map of NZ you can clearly see that it is comprised of three main islands - North Island, South Island, and Stewart Island - but, as Admiral Ackbar would tell you, it's a stumbling point for the uninitiated: one does not live on South Island, one lives on the South island. It's not a name, it's an adjective. (In fact, Kiwis are so laid back *coughlazycough* that our two main islands actually have no official names! However it's only been 200 years of European occupation, so give us a chance and we will get around to it eventually.)
Also, and this cracked me up, while one can go over things with a fine-tooth comb, one does not go over things with a toothcomb. There is no such implement of personal hygiene as a toothcomb.
But these flaws were overruled by the pleasure of the simple rythym of life on a working ranch. Very enjoyable.
Oh, and some of the cowboys like to spank the others in a loving polyamorous relationship of domestic discipline. And hug each other a whole lot. But no sex.
Therefore I found this story about Bandit, a wild stallion with a harem of mares, an unexpectedly enjoyable and relaxing treat. The Wyoming ranch where Bandit lives is described in loving detail, as are the saddle horses, Snickers, Hammer, Gucci, et al, plus the day-to-day tasks which are needed to keep a ranch going: sweeping, fence repair, etc. These are carried out by Bandit's humans: four hunky cowboys and one burnt-out CEO who has come to decompress and recover from a breakdown.
One big thing I didn't like, and this was the cowboys shooting one cougar and discussing how they already shot a previous one. Cougars are protected everywhere in the US but Texas, where they are classified as a 'varmint' (I am not making this up: way to debunk that stereotype, Texans). In Wyoming you can hunt cougar in season, with a licence, and you can kill one if you are in immediate life-threatening danger. You may not see a cougar and spend the next week stalking it because it's a danger to your livestock.
One MC was a New Zealander, which is always a welcome suprise. However the author has clearly done little research, as pretty much every detail about NZ rings false. The biggie was that Flynn says he is from "South Island". Now on any map of NZ you can clearly see that it is comprised of three main islands - North Island, South Island, and Stewart Island - but, as Admiral Ackbar would tell you, it's a stumbling point for the uninitiated: one does not live on South Island, one lives on the South island. It's not a name, it's an adjective. (In fact, Kiwis are so laid back *coughlazycough* that our two main islands actually have no official names! However it's only been 200 years of European occupation, so give us a chance and we will get around to it eventually.)
Also, and this cracked me up, while one can go over things with a fine-tooth comb, one does not go over things with a toothcomb. There is no such implement of personal hygiene as a toothcomb.
But these flaws were overruled by the pleasure of the simple rythym of life on a working ranch. Very enjoyable.
Oh, and some of the cowboys like to spank the others in a loving polyamorous relationship of domestic discipline. And hug each other a whole lot. But no sex.
September 16, 2012
I've figured out why I dislike these books ( I have read this one as well as Three Trader's. I cannot go further) so much. First of all I think the methods used on the ranch are manipulative and coercive. Losing your job unless you adhere to the 'rules' of the ranch which focus on corporal punishment? How is that therapeutic? I just can't wrap my mind around that idea.
The first rule of psychology (which my background is in) is "Do No Harm". Flynn who is described as also having this background has definitely crossed this ethical boundary (IMO). While some may find this type of punishment freeing (as in Dale) others may be more damaged than before entering the ranch. What if one of the client's have a background of physical abuse where paddling was one of the methods used by the abuser? It may be easy to think that this person would reveal this to the staff, but that is in no way assured. If someone is so emotionally damaged and feel they are at risk of being fired if they don't submit. It is easy to understand how the method of corporal punishment becomes a form of abuse in itself.
Abused children learn quickly that the number one rule in the relationship with the abuser is 'don't tell'. In fact trauma from abuse lingers into adulthood and 'abuse as punishment' becomes part of the psyche that cannot easily be erased. Aren't these clients sent to this ranch because they have become self-punishing as adults? As in Dale's case the neglect he suffered from his mother is the driving force of his problem. While his abuse took the form of neglect is it really healthy to bond to people who use corporal punishment as a means of showing affection? I think he is so hungry for love and acceptance that he has bonded to a group that have manipulated him into becoming someone he "should" be according to their expectations and not his own. It is possible (in fact desirable) to discover your own path and expectations for your future this is actually the main goal of therapy.
Therapy is supposed to guide this process not bend the psyche to another's will. Even though the 'language' used sounds therapeutic that doesn't mean that it is. What do the 'tops' get from the relationships they establish with the 'brats' as they are labeled? I believe that thinking there is no ulterior motive other than 'helping' is both naive and potentially dangerous. After all doesn't the term 'top' describe the more dominant person in a relationship? Part of this equation (IMO) usually describes attributes such as dominating and physically stronger than the 'bottom' (or in this case the brat) among others. It is hard for me to imagine that there is no ego or sense of power involved. How does this add up to an equal relationship? Someone who fits the description of a 'bottom' usually craves this type of relationship, but really are the client's (Dale in this case) able to determine this freely without the 'aid' of physical motivation? He did not seek these types of relationships in his former life so isn't it possible to be so needing of affection to take what is offered in the name of so-called 'love'?
I know that many reviewers find it refreshing that there is no sex in the book, but I find this unrealistic as well. Not so much the actual sex, but the lack of desire between the main characters especially due to the fact that they are men (I know a huge stereotype, but please follow me here). I haven't read one m/m book that does not have sexual desire as part of the equation in the relationships. I can't believe that Dale just discovers his attraction to Flynn towards the end of the book. Okay there is some attraction but in my mind it is tepid at best. If Dale discovers that the spankings are his thing isn't probable that his sexuality would also be involved in this process? At least to the point of being turned on and maybe not willing to admit it? And as for Flynn and Paul and Jasper I can't believe that there is not a physical turn on to the act of paddling someone (at least someone who they have an admitted attraction to?). After all isn't the main definition to the word 'top' sexual? The act just seems so matter of fact as presented in this book. That just doesn't ring true to me.
In counseling (as the ranches real purpose seems to me) transference is almost always a part. Therapy is defined by the Free Dictionary as "The unconscious tendency to assign to others in one's present environment feelings and attitudes associated with significance in one's early life, especially the patient's transfer to the therapist of feelings and attitudes associated with a parent" How is it different in this case? It is also the therapist's duty to be responsible for the client's well-being by not taking advantage of him/her. The number one rule not to break? NEVER, NEVER, EVER sleep with a client (current or former)!
By establishing a relationship with a client (In this case the tops and the brat's) you are damaging their psyche in irreparable ways. These books present it as not the case. That is just not possible or realistic. Some may say "it's just a book" but I am angry that my profession is presented in such a way. Flynn IS a therapist (he is using psychological concepts and jargon). Why is this fact that he has a psychological background in the book if he is not. Also the fact that he has 'trained' others (Paul and Jasper) in this travesty is beyond comprehension to me. They have no education or formal training in the field, but yet they are assigned client's and are using corporal punishment! It makes my blood boil just thinking about it!
I actually started this review in an okay mood but found that the more in depth my review has become the more I am outraged! I know many other's may disagree with me, and that's what this forum is about. I do not expect anyone to change their mind about loving these books but I just had to express my feelings toward them.
The first rule of psychology (which my background is in) is "Do No Harm". Flynn who is described as also having this background has definitely crossed this ethical boundary (IMO). While some may find this type of punishment freeing (as in Dale) others may be more damaged than before entering the ranch. What if one of the client's have a background of physical abuse where paddling was one of the methods used by the abuser? It may be easy to think that this person would reveal this to the staff, but that is in no way assured. If someone is so emotionally damaged and feel they are at risk of being fired if they don't submit. It is easy to understand how the method of corporal punishment becomes a form of abuse in itself.
Abused children learn quickly that the number one rule in the relationship with the abuser is 'don't tell'. In fact trauma from abuse lingers into adulthood and 'abuse as punishment' becomes part of the psyche that cannot easily be erased. Aren't these clients sent to this ranch because they have become self-punishing as adults? As in Dale's case the neglect he suffered from his mother is the driving force of his problem. While his abuse took the form of neglect is it really healthy to bond to people who use corporal punishment as a means of showing affection? I think he is so hungry for love and acceptance that he has bonded to a group that have manipulated him into becoming someone he "should" be according to their expectations and not his own. It is possible (in fact desirable) to discover your own path and expectations for your future this is actually the main goal of therapy.
Therapy is supposed to guide this process not bend the psyche to another's will. Even though the 'language' used sounds therapeutic that doesn't mean that it is. What do the 'tops' get from the relationships they establish with the 'brats' as they are labeled? I believe that thinking there is no ulterior motive other than 'helping' is both naive and potentially dangerous. After all doesn't the term 'top' describe the more dominant person in a relationship? Part of this equation (IMO) usually describes attributes such as dominating and physically stronger than the 'bottom' (or in this case the brat) among others. It is hard for me to imagine that there is no ego or sense of power involved. How does this add up to an equal relationship? Someone who fits the description of a 'bottom' usually craves this type of relationship, but really are the client's (Dale in this case) able to determine this freely without the 'aid' of physical motivation? He did not seek these types of relationships in his former life so isn't it possible to be so needing of affection to take what is offered in the name of so-called 'love'?
I know that many reviewers find it refreshing that there is no sex in the book, but I find this unrealistic as well. Not so much the actual sex, but the lack of desire between the main characters especially due to the fact that they are men (I know a huge stereotype, but please follow me here). I haven't read one m/m book that does not have sexual desire as part of the equation in the relationships. I can't believe that Dale just discovers his attraction to Flynn towards the end of the book. Okay there is some attraction but in my mind it is tepid at best. If Dale discovers that the spankings are his thing isn't probable that his sexuality would also be involved in this process? At least to the point of being turned on and maybe not willing to admit it? And as for Flynn and Paul and Jasper I can't believe that there is not a physical turn on to the act of paddling someone (at least someone who they have an admitted attraction to?). After all isn't the main definition to the word 'top' sexual? The act just seems so matter of fact as presented in this book. That just doesn't ring true to me.
In counseling (as the ranches real purpose seems to me) transference is almost always a part. Therapy is defined by the Free Dictionary as "The unconscious tendency to assign to others in one's present environment feelings and attitudes associated with significance in one's early life, especially the patient's transfer to the therapist of feelings and attitudes associated with a parent" How is it different in this case? It is also the therapist's duty to be responsible for the client's well-being by not taking advantage of him/her. The number one rule not to break? NEVER, NEVER, EVER sleep with a client (current or former)!
By establishing a relationship with a client (In this case the tops and the brat's) you are damaging their psyche in irreparable ways. These books present it as not the case. That is just not possible or realistic. Some may say "it's just a book" but I am angry that my profession is presented in such a way. Flynn IS a therapist (he is using psychological concepts and jargon). Why is this fact that he has a psychological background in the book if he is not. Also the fact that he has 'trained' others (Paul and Jasper) in this travesty is beyond comprehension to me. They have no education or formal training in the field, but yet they are assigned client's and are using corporal punishment! It makes my blood boil just thinking about it!
I actually started this review in an okay mood but found that the more in depth my review has become the more I am outraged! I know many other's may disagree with me, and that's what this forum is about. I do not expect anyone to change their mind about loving these books but I just had to express my feelings toward them.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 28, 2012
Therapy and recovery from mental breakdown have never been so alluring!
So if you are curious now and like cowboys and intelligent plot and dominant hunks and ranching and spankings and polyamorous relationships and a lack of sex scenes and a strong sense of place and family and great storytelling or simply something unusual, a gem, that you do not find every day in this growing m/m genre then run and get this – it’s free for pete’s sake!
I love this story. It’s amazing, awesome, unusual, inspiring, cozy, beautiful and just spectacular in its uniqueness. (Yeah, I might get a bit carried away here but I don’t care.) It cracked me up more than once, made me think seriously about the psychological concepts presented here – some even hit uncomfortably close to home -, and I started to envy these guys for their amazing love and devotion for each other and the dynamics within their close-knit little family.
Dale is a sweetheart and totally amazing, I could cuddle him into unconsciousness. Flynn is a force of nature. These guys made me want to jump up and down in excitement (please remember the total lack of sex in this story). Jasper is so tempting and reassuring in his quiet presence, Paul is just such a beautiful person and Riley? Ha!
Some of you might be put off by the total lack of sex or anything sexual in this story and I confess, I was a little grumpy sometimes because I wanted to know. But you will get over it. This story is about healing, love and support, family, domestic discipline and dynamics within a group of people who love each other as well as within a person. It’s a fascinating and engaging story that gives you much to think about and leaves you with a happy smile on your face afterwards.
July 31, 2012
I Can't Believe This Was Free!
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE this book for sooooooooo many reasons. Dale Aden is a CEO and a corporate prodigy. He's been owning the business world since he was in his teens. When the story starts Dale's being forced to go on leave because the pressure's finally gotten to him and he's so messed up that he had a hallucinatory episode.
So, where is the company sending Dale? To Falls Chance ranch. It's a working ranch run by four men that rehabilitates stressed out business people. They only take one client at a time and their methods are unique to say the least.
Reason #1 why I pledge my love: The men of Falls Chance
The four men who run Falls Chance rance are four very distinctive and intriguing characters who burrowed their way into my heart.
Flynn. Flynn is the gruff cowboy who says what he means and is as stable and constant as a mountain. The way he handles people is kind but he takes no crap. He shoulders burdens and loves people with his whole heart and soul. Flynn is the one who's in charge of Dale and it was pretty awesome to see their relationship dynamic develop.
Riley. Riley has to be the most endearing and lovelable character I have read about in a long time. He's a rascal. He's funny, open, fun and caring. He takes an immediate liking to Dale and is the first one to know that Dale will come to mean everything to the four men who run the ranch.
Paul. Paul is the mother hen. He make sure the men are well fed and well loved. Paul shows his love with food, clean sheets, ironed clothes and lots of affection. I adored Paul because he is the kind of person whose life is dedicated to making sure the people in his life know that they are loved unconditionally.
Jasper. Jasper is the character that we know the least about but he's also the most intriguing. He quite, steady and a mystery wrapped in an enigma.
Reason #2 why I pledge my love: The character development
The characters in this story, Dale especially, have so many nooks and crannies to them that it's a little amazing. Dale goes through such a transformation and even at the end of the book it's not entirely done. There were no quick fixes. These men were not stereotypical at all and a lot of this book is about peeling back layers.
Reason #3 why I pledge my love: The length
It's been said that if this book was to be published that a lot of it would be cut. I would be very sad if that was to happen. Part of the beauty of this book is the long journey the reader goes on with Dale. It's a day-by-day process and I think the length does the process justice. I wouldn't want to see anything cut.
Reason #4 why I pledge my love: The lack of sex
No sex, not even fade-to-black. This book is totally and completely about Dale's recovery and how he bacomes a part of Falls Chance ranch. Sex, in my opinion, would have ruined it. I applaud the fact that the authors stayed true to the overall theme of the book.
I could probably give a million more reasons why this book stole my heart but then we would be here all day. So, I'll just say this; if you love sweet stories that are character driven and you don't mind domestic discipline, then give this book a try. I loved it and moved right on to the second book. If you try it then I hope you love it too.
I ABSOLUTELY ADORE this book for sooooooooo many reasons. Dale Aden is a CEO and a corporate prodigy. He's been owning the business world since he was in his teens. When the story starts Dale's being forced to go on leave because the pressure's finally gotten to him and he's so messed up that he had a hallucinatory episode.
So, where is the company sending Dale? To Falls Chance ranch. It's a working ranch run by four men that rehabilitates stressed out business people. They only take one client at a time and their methods are unique to say the least.
Reason #1 why I pledge my love: The men of Falls Chance
The four men who run Falls Chance rance are four very distinctive and intriguing characters who burrowed their way into my heart.
Flynn. Flynn is the gruff cowboy who says what he means and is as stable and constant as a mountain. The way he handles people is kind but he takes no crap. He shoulders burdens and loves people with his whole heart and soul. Flynn is the one who's in charge of Dale and it was pretty awesome to see their relationship dynamic develop.
Riley. Riley has to be the most endearing and lovelable character I have read about in a long time. He's a rascal. He's funny, open, fun and caring. He takes an immediate liking to Dale and is the first one to know that Dale will come to mean everything to the four men who run the ranch.
Paul. Paul is the mother hen. He make sure the men are well fed and well loved. Paul shows his love with food, clean sheets, ironed clothes and lots of affection. I adored Paul because he is the kind of person whose life is dedicated to making sure the people in his life know that they are loved unconditionally.
Jasper. Jasper is the character that we know the least about but he's also the most intriguing. He quite, steady and a mystery wrapped in an enigma.
Reason #2 why I pledge my love: The character development
The characters in this story, Dale especially, have so many nooks and crannies to them that it's a little amazing. Dale goes through such a transformation and even at the end of the book it's not entirely done. There were no quick fixes. These men were not stereotypical at all and a lot of this book is about peeling back layers.
Reason #3 why I pledge my love: The length
It's been said that if this book was to be published that a lot of it would be cut. I would be very sad if that was to happen. Part of the beauty of this book is the long journey the reader goes on with Dale. It's a day-by-day process and I think the length does the process justice. I wouldn't want to see anything cut.
Reason #4 why I pledge my love: The lack of sex
No sex, not even fade-to-black. This book is totally and completely about Dale's recovery and how he bacomes a part of Falls Chance ranch. Sex, in my opinion, would have ruined it. I applaud the fact that the authors stayed true to the overall theme of the book.
I could probably give a million more reasons why this book stole my heart but then we would be here all day. So, I'll just say this; if you love sweet stories that are character driven and you don't mind domestic discipline, then give this book a try. I loved it and moved right on to the second book. If you try it then I hope you love it too.
June 27, 2013
Look at Orianna's review. This is a very detailed and excellent review.
October 31, 2012
I, simply put, LOVED this book!
And, as with all things that move me personally, I'm playing it close to the chest.
All I'll say is that it's extremely beautiful and was a lovely relief from simple erotica. It was more literary and just the kind of read I presently need.There are some editing revisions for tense etc that could be undertaken but they are not terrible...just the grammar nazi in me. There are also just a few moments where I wished for more explicit detail for comprehension sake but this writer plays it close to the vest too.
Notwithstanding, all that is minor and this was a fully engaging read for me! :-D
And, as with all things that move me personally, I'm playing it close to the chest.
All I'll say is that it's extremely beautiful and was a lovely relief from simple erotica. It was more literary and just the kind of read I presently need.There are some editing revisions for tense etc that could be undertaken but they are not terrible...just the grammar nazi in me. There are also just a few moments where I wished for more explicit detail for comprehension sake but this writer plays it close to the vest too.
Notwithstanding, all that is minor and this was a fully engaging read for me! :-D
January 15, 2014
Changed my mind: 1 star.
***
1.5
I am clearly on the other end of the spectrum for this. Oh lookie! Currently (19/10/12) I am one of six people to give this book 2 stars. I wouldn't have bothered at all with this book except that it was free and had a very high rating. Still, it was very different to what I'd imagined and it didn't exactly work well with me.
Personally, I got pretty much zilch from this story. I was bored a few chapters in from the protagonist's arrival and then forced myself to go on because I don't like the idea of not finishing a book. I think I can see where the appeal lies. It's written well and will probably be quite... transforming for some (not for me, obviously). And the plot and length? Just... no. It's waaaay too long for what the plot covers. I was hoping for it to end pretty much the entire time I was reading it.
And I would hardly count this as Menage or Erotica. There's a few slapping on the ass scenes and I think one whipping one but that's it. None of it's for pleasure and there's no sex (unless I missed it all in my desire to just finish!). I see the Dom/Sub relationship, but not in the sexual aspects. Just the punishment part (real punishment, not punishment mixed with pleasure). So yeah, a meh-ish read for me.
And as a sidenote: how does this treatment work? Honestly! I'm gonna have to say that if some stranger decided part of my recovery treatment involved spanking, I would be either kicking his ass or getting the hell outta there screaming "Attempted Assault!" Especially if it was because I didn't let said random guy know my every thought.
***
1.5
I am clearly on the other end of the spectrum for this. Oh lookie! Currently (19/10/12) I am one of six people to give this book 2 stars. I wouldn't have bothered at all with this book except that it was free and had a very high rating. Still, it was very different to what I'd imagined and it didn't exactly work well with me.
Personally, I got pretty much zilch from this story. I was bored a few chapters in from the protagonist's arrival and then forced myself to go on because I don't like the idea of not finishing a book. I think I can see where the appeal lies. It's written well and will probably be quite... transforming for some (not for me, obviously). And the plot and length? Just... no. It's waaaay too long for what the plot covers. I was hoping for it to end pretty much the entire time I was reading it.
And I would hardly count this as Menage or Erotica. There's a few slapping on the ass scenes and I think one whipping one but that's it. None of it's for pleasure and there's no sex (unless I missed it all in my desire to just finish!). I see the Dom/Sub relationship, but not in the sexual aspects. Just the punishment part (real punishment, not punishment mixed with pleasure). So yeah, a meh-ish read for me.
And as a sidenote: how does this treatment work? Honestly! I'm gonna have to say that if some stranger decided part of my recovery treatment involved spanking, I would be either kicking his ass or getting the hell outta there screaming "Attempted Assault!" Especially if it was because I didn't let said random guy know my every thought.
December 5, 2012
Ugh. Treats the physical abuse and infantilization of 30 year old men as though it's supposed to be a GOOD thing, and pretends that it's "therapy". No thanks! DNF.
ETA -- the more I think about this book, the madder I get. I don't normally rate books I DNF, but the whole setup of this one cries out for a 1 star rating. It just represents sooo many of the things that are wrong with books that pretend to be BDSM. There's no real consent here, no respect for the sub, no clear delineation of the rules BEFORE punishment, no consideration of less demeaning methods of "therapy". It's all the worst of the "I know what's best for you" trope. I could go on.
There are two good reviews you can peruse for more info, here:
http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...
http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...
ETA -- the more I think about this book, the madder I get. I don't normally rate books I DNF, but the whole setup of this one cries out for a 1 star rating. It just represents sooo many of the things that are wrong with books that pretend to be BDSM. There's no real consent here, no respect for the sub, no clear delineation of the rules BEFORE punishment, no consideration of less demeaning methods of "therapy". It's all the worst of the "I know what's best for you" trope. I could go on.
There are two good reviews you can peruse for more info, here:
http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...
http://www.goodreads.com/review/show/...
January 1, 2015
I've read this for the first time almost exactly one year ago. I liked it then, I love it now. Changed rating from 4 to 5 stars. :)
April 2, 2014
Wow! What a special and very long story.
It is difficult to categorise this novel as whilst the five main characters are all gay, the story doesn't really fit into the m/m romance genre. There is no sex. Be warned. Personally I found this to be one of the most refreshing aspects of the book, but I realise many readers of the m/m genre expect and want to read the physicality's of the relationships.
The writing is excellent, it creates the setting and characters beautifully, the ranch, the men, the horses and most importantly, the analytical psychology behind the characters of Dale, the burnt-out CEO and his mentor Flynn.
Certain aspects are confusing. I really couldn't get my head round, or understand the reasons for the spankings. Spankings not in the BDSM sense, not for the reader's titillation, spankings in the sense that a small child would be spanked for being naughty, although the small child/children in this case are 30 year old men, and one a high powered executive.
There are many references to "Top's" and "Brat's" (never come across that reference before, but then again I tend to stay away from any novels with even the slightest hint of BDSM and perhaps this is just an aspect of this type of story)?
I'm not sure whether the plot loses direction in places, or the authors' intention was to ape the psychology of "round and round in circles" as poor Dale frequently experiences during his treatment. I felt much of this could have been edited down.
And so, towards the end of the book we discover the true relationship of the four men at Falls Chance Ranch....at last it's explained...
It is difficult to categorise this novel as whilst the five main characters are all gay, the story doesn't really fit into the m/m romance genre. There is no sex. Be warned. Personally I found this to be one of the most refreshing aspects of the book, but I realise many readers of the m/m genre expect and want to read the physicality's of the relationships.
The writing is excellent, it creates the setting and characters beautifully, the ranch, the men, the horses and most importantly, the analytical psychology behind the characters of Dale, the burnt-out CEO and his mentor Flynn.
Certain aspects are confusing. I really couldn't get my head round, or understand the reasons for the spankings. Spankings not in the BDSM sense, not for the reader's titillation, spankings in the sense that a small child would be spanked for being naughty, although the small child/children in this case are 30 year old men, and one a high powered executive.
There are many references to "Top's" and "Brat's" (never come across that reference before, but then again I tend to stay away from any novels with even the slightest hint of BDSM and perhaps this is just an aspect of this type of story)?
I'm not sure whether the plot loses direction in places, or the authors' intention was to ape the psychology of "round and round in circles" as poor Dale frequently experiences during his treatment. I felt much of this could have been edited down.
And so, towards the end of the book we discover the true relationship of the four men at Falls Chance Ranch....at last it's explained...
January 4, 2012
Well, I am hooked. If you have not read this series because it is 'free', you are missing out! CEO's and cowboys, and corporeal punishment? My goodness, I can not believe how insightful, and emotional and attached I became to the characters, especially Dale.
The intelligence and depth of emotion as well as the drawing of the scenery, feeling of family, and environment have me hooked. I never knew or heard of 'brats/tops', and it almost seemed like a d/s relationship, but not quite.
It is polyamorous, but it is not in any way erotica, in fact, sex is not 'core' to their relationships. I think it is alluded to once in the first book, and once in the second, but that s all, and it seems to fit the timing very well.
These stories actually make me crave for an unconditional, loving relationship as these guys all show/feel for each other. I can see where they each have a different 'gift' or 'notch' to fill for each person within the group.
I found myself pulled into the story, despite myself, and had to read all 4 books through out my 3 day weekend. Do yourself a favor, and just give it a try..
The intelligence and depth of emotion as well as the drawing of the scenery, feeling of family, and environment have me hooked. I never knew or heard of 'brats/tops', and it almost seemed like a d/s relationship, but not quite.
It is polyamorous, but it is not in any way erotica, in fact, sex is not 'core' to their relationships. I think it is alluded to once in the first book, and once in the second, but that s all, and it seems to fit the timing very well.
These stories actually make me crave for an unconditional, loving relationship as these guys all show/feel for each other. I can see where they each have a different 'gift' or 'notch' to fill for each person within the group.
I found myself pulled into the story, despite myself, and had to read all 4 books through out my 3 day weekend. Do yourself a favor, and just give it a try..
September 30, 2012
A rich, in-depth exploration of breaking down and rebuilding.
Take one exceptionally capable person with a perfect facade as the interior crumbles who gets a chance to fall--fail and find a way back. It could be formulaic, but it isn't as Dale finally lets go and is blessed with a team that guides him back. This is not an easily accessible story for many as it features domestic discipline and polyamory, but for those with open minds it is a preciously-paced story that is well worth reading. Yes, the pace tells you something--breathe.
Loved it. Pacing myself before starting Book #2.
Take one exceptionally capable person with a perfect facade as the interior crumbles who gets a chance to fall--fail and find a way back. It could be formulaic, but it isn't as Dale finally lets go and is blessed with a team that guides him back. This is not an easily accessible story for many as it features domestic discipline and polyamory, but for those with open minds it is a preciously-paced story that is well worth reading. Yes, the pace tells you something--breathe.
Loved it. Pacing myself before starting Book #2.
March 22, 2013
This was recommended to me by a few Goodreads friends whose opinion I have grown to trust and value, so I guessed I was in for a treat. It was the best 5 star read for me so far this year. One I shall definitely reread, and at 616 pages in length something to really get into and absorb; thank you writers Rolf, and Ranger, and for the fact you are sharing it with readers for free, is much appreciated. It is a lovely story.
The setting of the Falls Chance Ranch set in Wyoming and the depth of description by the writer brings the place to life and in me a yearning to be there. The characters are extremely well developed and I felt as if I would recognise and know much of each if I were to meet them in real life, they seemed so real. The main characters, Paul, Flynn, Jasper, are the Tops, and Riley and Dale the brats. It is a story of relationships, emotions and psychology of people. Dale hails from Shropshire, a place I've lived in for some years and know well. He presents at Falls Chance Ranch as a burnt out, workaholic perfectionist while still a young man, and his story resonated with me with an ouch!
The men, within the setting of the peace and natural world of the ranch, aim to help Dale recover using unconventional methods based on psychology and common sense, where domestic discipline is a part of this life and treatment. An adult man being spanked and paddled on the face of it seems wrong, but worked. This is non sexual discipline, not intended as erotic spanking in any form.
It has given me much to think about. One major thing is how men behave toward each other, the differences of culture and sexual persuasion. The culture where in the UK and some western countries, the reserve of men to men that has become the norm, yet not healthy with virtually non contact seen as the acceptable way to behave, bar a simple pat on the back even at times of restrained and repressed emotions. Yet other cultures for example, Greek, Turks, Italians and further afield, the men are comfortable, hugging, stroking a cheek, kissing both cheek and mouth with each other. We are all social and emotional creatures and this includes all men too who need the comfort and solace of hugs, kisses and touch, so perhaps stories such as these and the gay community who are often more openly happy with contact and emotion will bring it back to being a more normal contact and person to person support as needed and away from Victorian/ Edwardian repressed society.
I can't recommend this enough and am pleased there are more stories like this to be read.
The setting of the Falls Chance Ranch set in Wyoming and the depth of description by the writer brings the place to life and in me a yearning to be there. The characters are extremely well developed and I felt as if I would recognise and know much of each if I were to meet them in real life, they seemed so real. The main characters, Paul, Flynn, Jasper, are the Tops, and Riley and Dale the brats. It is a story of relationships, emotions and psychology of people. Dale hails from Shropshire, a place I've lived in for some years and know well. He presents at Falls Chance Ranch as a burnt out, workaholic perfectionist while still a young man, and his story resonated with me with an ouch!
The men, within the setting of the peace and natural world of the ranch, aim to help Dale recover using unconventional methods based on psychology and common sense, where domestic discipline is a part of this life and treatment. An adult man being spanked and paddled on the face of it seems wrong, but worked. This is non sexual discipline, not intended as erotic spanking in any form.
It has given me much to think about. One major thing is how men behave toward each other, the differences of culture and sexual persuasion. The culture where in the UK and some western countries, the reserve of men to men that has become the norm, yet not healthy with virtually non contact seen as the acceptable way to behave, bar a simple pat on the back even at times of restrained and repressed emotions. Yet other cultures for example, Greek, Turks, Italians and further afield, the men are comfortable, hugging, stroking a cheek, kissing both cheek and mouth with each other. We are all social and emotional creatures and this includes all men too who need the comfort and solace of hugs, kisses and touch, so perhaps stories such as these and the gay community who are often more openly happy with contact and emotion will bring it back to being a more normal contact and person to person support as needed and away from Victorian/ Edwardian repressed society.
I can't recommend this enough and am pleased there are more stories like this to be read.
July 11, 2012
I am pretty versatile regarding books that I read. Most, do not get a five star though. I only give that rating to something that I will reread. This is a story that I have no doubt about.
I found Dale's problems to be very believable. If I were to make a guess, I would say that at least one of the author's is either a counselor or suffers from the same thing. I know I could very much relate to Dale and what he is going through. Not to his extent, but in some ways the same. It really put a personal spin to the story for me.
The details in this story about ranch life are another part that are worth mentioning. Through the descriptions you are given, you can sit back and visualize what it is like working with the horses and doing the daily chores. I could feel myself visualizing the rides across the fields and watching Bandit and his herd of mares. I could feel the respect the authors showed towards taking care of the land and how important history is to them.
The discipline part of the story seems to fit. Dale's way of learning and relaxing involves spanking. He needs it to overcome and to me it did not get redundant. Some problems are not so easy to fix and need to be faced over and over. I am just glad that Flynn, Paul, and Jasper are able to give him what he needs and Riley is there to offer his support.
Now, I am off to read book two of the series. I have no doubt that I will love it in the same way I love this one.
I found Dale's problems to be very believable. If I were to make a guess, I would say that at least one of the author's is either a counselor or suffers from the same thing. I know I could very much relate to Dale and what he is going through. Not to his extent, but in some ways the same. It really put a personal spin to the story for me.
The details in this story about ranch life are another part that are worth mentioning. Through the descriptions you are given, you can sit back and visualize what it is like working with the horses and doing the daily chores. I could feel myself visualizing the rides across the fields and watching Bandit and his herd of mares. I could feel the respect the authors showed towards taking care of the land and how important history is to them.
The discipline part of the story seems to fit. Dale's way of learning and relaxing involves spanking. He needs it to overcome and to me it did not get redundant. Some problems are not so easy to fix and need to be faced over and over. I am just glad that Flynn, Paul, and Jasper are able to give him what he needs and Riley is there to offer his support.
Now, I am off to read book two of the series. I have no doubt that I will love it in the same way I love this one.
August 26, 2012
I'm not sure what I think of these books. I'm enjoying the characters and the Wyoming setting quite a bit. Content-wise I'll honestly say I'm not too sure about it, there's a lot of fascinating stuff here but maybe a bit too much repetition going on. I'm not a huge fan of the PNR angle but it does work in the stories very well. I am working through the third book now, I'm just not sure how I want to rate them, I do want to see what's happening to the characters though.
ETA: Okay, I'm on my second re-read of this series. It's ALL about characters here for me. I LOVE these guys. I so want Dale to succeed and be okay. Riley is freaking adorable. Paul and Jasper flesh out better in later works but I really enjoy them here. Flynn is all that is fantastic.
The ranch setting is really beautiful and I love the dynamics of the guys on it. There are a lot of secondary characters here but they're all very distinct personalities.
There is quite a bit story here. There's also a lot of repetition of certain aspects of it but the more that I read it the more that doesn't matter to me.
ETA Again: I can't tell you guys how many times I've re-read this story and the series as a whole. It's set the bar very high for any kind of domestic discipline story that I've read. It's a deep, rich look into a lifestyle and while that is fascinating I continue to go back again and again just to reacquaint myself with the characters and the ranch. Gorgeous.
ETA: Okay, I'm on my second re-read of this series. It's ALL about characters here for me. I LOVE these guys. I so want Dale to succeed and be okay. Riley is freaking adorable. Paul and Jasper flesh out better in later works but I really enjoy them here. Flynn is all that is fantastic.
The ranch setting is really beautiful and I love the dynamics of the guys on it. There are a lot of secondary characters here but they're all very distinct personalities.
There is quite a bit story here. There's also a lot of repetition of certain aspects of it but the more that I read it the more that doesn't matter to me.
ETA Again: I can't tell you guys how many times I've re-read this story and the series as a whole. It's set the bar very high for any kind of domestic discipline story that I've read. It's a deep, rich look into a lifestyle and while that is fascinating I continue to go back again and again just to reacquaint myself with the characters and the ranch. Gorgeous.
June 4, 2016
This is an intriguing serious m/m cowboy on-line read featuring psychology and domestic discipline i.e. spanking. Sorry guys but there is NO SEX at all!
Dale is a renowned burnt-out executive who comes to Falls Chance Ranch to recover from his nervous breakdown. The ranch is run by Tops Paul, Flynn and Jasper and brat Riley who live together in a group marriage. Parallels are drawn between the wild stallion Bandit and his harem of mares and the guys living on the ranch.
"He's a brat for goodness sakes, we know it and he knows it. There is no WAY he can go back to doing what he did before! How is that ever going to happen? It's like saying ok, we know you're a giraffe but go back and keep on trying to be a dolphin, and do your best not to drown!"
Dale is a renowned burnt-out executive who comes to Falls Chance Ranch to recover from his nervous breakdown. The ranch is run by Tops Paul, Flynn and Jasper and brat Riley who live together in a group marriage. Parallels are drawn between the wild stallion Bandit and his harem of mares and the guys living on the ranch.
"He's a brat for goodness sakes, we know it and he knows it. There is no WAY he can go back to doing what he did before! How is that ever going to happen? It's like saying ok, we know you're a giraffe but go back and keep on trying to be a dolphin, and do your best not to drown!"
August 10, 2012
Oh, my, goodness! Now I know what all the fuss is about with this free-online book. Falls Chance Ranch is the first of four books in a series that falls under the broad heading of BDSM. But you won't find any club scenes, Doms or subs, or even sex of any kind in this first installment. No, this is different, dealing with a form of Domestic Discipline and polyamory relationships, in this case all male. Four men run the ranch, and Dale gets to know them all very well.
What is a polyamory relationship? Simply put, it's being in a loving or sexual relationship with multiple partners at the same time, and this story is so filled with love that it will make your heart swell. Dale is our narrator, a hugely successful CEO and he's just landed at Falls Chance Ranch after a mental breakdown that included hallucinations. His company has sent him there (without consulting with him) for rest and recuperation. He has no idea what he's just gotten himself into and we learn along with Dale what this Wyoming ranch is really all about, which takes more than 450 pages to fully understand. I loved how this story unfolded slowly rather than explaining everything up front. Each layer built on the one before it, building to a crescendo at the end.
And how does this story end? With two words, that in many books would have been "The End." Instead, those two words were "The Beginning." YES!!! I cannot wait to read more about Dale, Flynn, Paul, Jasper and Riley.
Amazing characters, amazing read, highly recommend.
What is a polyamory relationship? Simply put, it's being in a loving or sexual relationship with multiple partners at the same time, and this story is so filled with love that it will make your heart swell. Dale is our narrator, a hugely successful CEO and he's just landed at Falls Chance Ranch after a mental breakdown that included hallucinations. His company has sent him there (without consulting with him) for rest and recuperation. He has no idea what he's just gotten himself into and we learn along with Dale what this Wyoming ranch is really all about, which takes more than 450 pages to fully understand. I loved how this story unfolded slowly rather than explaining everything up front. Each layer built on the one before it, building to a crescendo at the end.
And how does this story end? With two words, that in many books would have been "The End." Instead, those two words were "The Beginning." YES!!! I cannot wait to read more about Dale, Flynn, Paul, Jasper and Riley.
Amazing characters, amazing read, highly recommend.
November 18, 2020
DNF at 12%. The problem here is not that there's abuse in the plot. The problem is that the abuse is presented as an integral part of legitimate therapy. The comparison between FCR and conversion camps is spot on. If someone gets off noncon/abuse/humiliation fantasy for some reason, that's one thing. It's clearly defined, presented and labelled as a fantasy. Presenting abuse and humiliation as part of a legitimate, "realistic", "helpful", "successful" therapy is another thing entirely and far more ignorant and disturbing. You can't "Spank the stress away".
By the way, the tag BDSM is greatly misleading IMO. The plot here is no more BDSM than a story about corporal punishments in the army or a school. Not every punishment scene is automatically BDSM. There's a required erotic/sexual context which is completely absent here (since the punishments are part of a therapy/education and not relationship/seduction).
I wish I hadn't forsaken my usual habit of reading the negative reviews before starting a book. There's no way in hell I'd start this book otherwise. I find that negative reviews are always more indicative than positive reviews, even in the case I completely disagree with them. Disagreeing with the complaints in a negative review being serious issues is more indicative of enjoying a book than impressive compliments in a positive review, which are often far-fetched and/or greatly exaggerated.
By the way, the tag BDSM is greatly misleading IMO. The plot here is no more BDSM than a story about corporal punishments in the army or a school. Not every punishment scene is automatically BDSM. There's a required erotic/sexual context which is completely absent here (since the punishments are part of a therapy/education and not relationship/seduction).
I wish I hadn't forsaken my usual habit of reading the negative reviews before starting a book. There's no way in hell I'd start this book otherwise. I find that negative reviews are always more indicative than positive reviews, even in the case I completely disagree with them. Disagreeing with the complaints in a negative review being serious issues is more indicative of enjoying a book than impressive compliments in a positive review, which are often far-fetched and/or greatly exaggerated.
July 16, 2013
I could not finish this book at all. I am not, frankly, a huge fan of BDSM in the first place, but I can appreciate it as a form of self-sexual expression and I can appreciate that it works for some people. To me this book didn't even creep towards that. All I saw while reading it was using humiliation and humiliation via physical punishment to train the desired behavior out of the character. Honestly it seemed no different to me than the types of "reprogramming" camps that try to turn gay people straight. The motivation behind the camp makes sense "help people develop a healthy sense of work-life balance" but the methodology used with cruel, unnecessary, and egomaniacal, all under one man's idea of what "proper" behavior should be.
I do not recommend this book at all. In fact, I am flabbergasted at the positive reviews it has received.
I do not recommend this book at all. In fact, I am flabbergasted at the positive reviews it has received.
April 25, 2020
I spent the last 12 days devouring this online series, and it was GLORIOUS. There are so many different layers here, and I enjoyed every bit of it -- the characters, the physiological knowledge, the psychology, the ranch, the horses, the romance, the spiritual journeys, the found family, the history. I'm going to have the book hangover from hell, but it was absolutely worth it. I'd happily spend another 12 days buried in this world.
We are introduced to Falls Chance Ranch through the POV of financial wunderkind Dale Aden in the immediate aftermath of a breakdown at work that leads his international mega-corporation to send him to the ranch for what is essentially a physical recovery and behavioral rehabilitation program.
It is a large working ranch built in the 1930's/40's by partners Philip and David who created a found family over their long years together. Philip and David are both long gone by the time Dale comes along, but their legacy remains, and while most of the family have moved off the ranch by now, they all come and go as it is essentially their family home. The only remaining full-time residents are the foursome of Jasper, Flynn, Paul and Riley, who are in a closed polyamorous romantic partnership. (In the many sequels and novellas where we get to know a lot of the extended family members and their respective partners, the curiosity the rest of them view this foursome-come-fivesome with is highly amusing. When we get little blips from their POVs, most of the others see these four/five as "elusive" and mysterious since they are very private about their relationship, but it all feels very natural and easy through the insider lens we're privy to.)
One of the things that ties this large found family together is a domestic discipline approach to relationships. I think this is only the second book I've read where spanking was not a sexual act, so that's a key thing to keep in mind if you're coming in through the BDSM tag.
And one of the remaining facets of Philip's legacy is the occasional work they do with corporate executives who have found themselves in crisis, which is how Dale comes into the lives of the foursome. While there are some minor, basic discipline tactics that sometimes get used with their corporate clients, they start to realize that Dale responds more in line with the "brats" of the family and start to walk a fine line between corporate client and domestic discipline.
There is zero sex in this book because the relationship with Dale does not become romantic until the very end, and the sex in the sequels is fade to black (and pretty infrequent). Do not start these if that's going to be a problem for you. There are bits and pieces throughout that are very satisfying, but they are few and far between. I found the whole story completely absorbing, so I barely missed it.
Notes on reading order:
The GR series page does a good job guiding you through the right order to read through Book 4, but after that I'd recommend going to the writers' online forum for the official chronology.
I read all of the Dale + J/P/R/F stories in chronological order, then read the pre-Dale prequels for the other four, then read the Jake and Tom prequel to lead into Book 5 and the still in progress Book 6 (The MEC).
Book 5 is mostly Jake and Tom, but ends back at the ranch and Book 6 includes POVs from Jake and Tom plus the fivesome. (Jake and Tom are their own couple, but Jake grew up on the ranch and is an integral part of the extended family for Jasper, Flynn, Paul and Riley, and Tom and Dale become good friends through their similar histories.)
There's also a post-MEC novella that's also still in progress called Boundary to Boundary that I finished up with. It hasn't been added to the official chronology yet but it's on the same forum where you'll find the MEC (Book 6). At the time I read them (yesterday, 4/25/2020) both of these in progress works were far enough along to feel very satisfying, as was the Jasper/Flynn/Paul in-progress prequel.
Basically, as long as Rolf and Ranger are writing ranch stories, I'm gonna be reading them.
We are introduced to Falls Chance Ranch through the POV of financial wunderkind Dale Aden in the immediate aftermath of a breakdown at work that leads his international mega-corporation to send him to the ranch for what is essentially a physical recovery and behavioral rehabilitation program.
It is a large working ranch built in the 1930's/40's by partners Philip and David who created a found family over their long years together. Philip and David are both long gone by the time Dale comes along, but their legacy remains, and while most of the family have moved off the ranch by now, they all come and go as it is essentially their family home. The only remaining full-time residents are the foursome of Jasper, Flynn, Paul and Riley, who are in a closed polyamorous romantic partnership. (In the many sequels and novellas where we get to know a lot of the extended family members and their respective partners, the curiosity the rest of them view this foursome-come-fivesome with is highly amusing. When we get little blips from their POVs, most of the others see these four/five as "elusive" and mysterious since they are very private about their relationship, but it all feels very natural and easy through the insider lens we're privy to.)
One of the things that ties this large found family together is a domestic discipline approach to relationships. I think this is only the second book I've read where spanking was not a sexual act, so that's a key thing to keep in mind if you're coming in through the BDSM tag.
And one of the remaining facets of Philip's legacy is the occasional work they do with corporate executives who have found themselves in crisis, which is how Dale comes into the lives of the foursome. While there are some minor, basic discipline tactics that sometimes get used with their corporate clients, they start to realize that Dale responds more in line with the "brats" of the family and start to walk a fine line between corporate client and domestic discipline.
There is zero sex in this book because the relationship with Dale does not become romantic until the very end, and the sex in the sequels is fade to black (and pretty infrequent). Do not start these if that's going to be a problem for you. There are bits and pieces throughout that are very satisfying, but they are few and far between. I found the whole story completely absorbing, so I barely missed it.
Notes on reading order:
The GR series page does a good job guiding you through the right order to read through Book 4, but after that I'd recommend going to the writers' online forum for the official chronology.
I read all of the Dale + J/P/R/F stories in chronological order, then read the pre-Dale prequels for the other four, then read the Jake and Tom prequel to lead into Book 5 and the still in progress Book 6 (The MEC).
Book 5 is mostly Jake and Tom, but ends back at the ranch and Book 6 includes POVs from Jake and Tom plus the fivesome. (Jake and Tom are their own couple, but Jake grew up on the ranch and is an integral part of the extended family for Jasper, Flynn, Paul and Riley, and Tom and Dale become good friends through their similar histories.)
There's also a post-MEC novella that's also still in progress called Boundary to Boundary that I finished up with. It hasn't been added to the official chronology yet but it's on the same forum where you'll find the MEC (Book 6). At the time I read them (yesterday, 4/25/2020) both of these in progress works were far enough along to feel very satisfying, as was the Jasper/Flynn/Paul in-progress prequel.
Basically, as long as Rolf and Ranger are writing ranch stories, I'm gonna be reading them.
April 29, 2013
This on-going series has become one of my all time favorite reads. The central characters are several generations of very solidly male gay men, who have collectively created and run a ranch in Wyoming. As one reads it's very easy to forget that gay is any kind of issue. It's much more about the creation of a world and a dynamic where these men accept others in various states of emotional need and, with love and support, help them learn to manage the emotional damage a hard world has saddled them with. It's romance of the best kind, it's human behavior and emotion of the most compelling kind. It's appealing characters of the most delightful kind. These books explore power dynamics between gay men, which can be a new concept to some, but is a very real if quietly kept truth in the real world and they do it with great grace, style, humor and much love. This series is all about the many kinds of love which sustain us and has absolutely become one of my most favorite all time comfort reads. I couldn't recommend it more.
~ChrisD
Falls Chance Ranch
Three Traders
Mustang Hill
Silver Bullet
Falls Chance Ranch Stand Alone Stories, Volume 1
Falls Chance Ranch Stand Alone Stories, Volume 2
Authors: Rolf & Ranger
~ChrisD
Falls Chance Ranch
Three Traders
Mustang Hill
Silver Bullet
Falls Chance Ranch Stand Alone Stories, Volume 1
Falls Chance Ranch Stand Alone Stories, Volume 2
Authors: Rolf & Ranger
October 8, 2012
My two main issues with this story:
*It doesn't have enough substance to fill up 454 pages. It's terribly repetitive. Dale gets upset. Dale hides behind one of his negative habits. Dale gets caught acting self destructive. Dale gets a spanking for not talking about his feelings/worries with the others. Rinse and repeat.
*Not only is the character development lacking, relationship development is lacking as well. Although Dale can be handful, I never got the impression that he needed multiple people to fulfill his needs. It seemed like Dale only agreed to their polyamory proposal because he couldn't have the man he really wanted (if you've read the story, you know exactly which character I'm talking about) all to himself. For a polyamory relationship to be believable, each partnership and emotional connection needs to established. What does Dale get from one character that he doesn't get from another? I don't think this story did a good job of explaining...or showing what Dale got from each man.
Overall, Fall Chance Ranch gets 2/5 stars from me. It didn't blow me away nor did it completely suck either. The characters were likable. The story was relaxing to read and easy to follow. It just didn't make a huge impression.
*It doesn't have enough substance to fill up 454 pages. It's terribly repetitive. Dale gets upset. Dale hides behind one of his negative habits. Dale gets caught acting self destructive. Dale gets a spanking for not talking about his feelings/worries with the others. Rinse and repeat.
*Not only is the character development lacking, relationship development is lacking as well. Although Dale can be handful, I never got the impression that he needed multiple people to fulfill his needs. It seemed like Dale only agreed to their polyamory proposal because he couldn't have the man he really wanted (if you've read the story, you know exactly which character I'm talking about) all to himself. For a polyamory relationship to be believable, each partnership and emotional connection needs to established. What does Dale get from one character that he doesn't get from another? I don't think this story did a good job of explaining...or showing what Dale got from each man.
Overall, Fall Chance Ranch gets 2/5 stars from me. It didn't blow me away nor did it completely suck either. The characters were likable. The story was relaxing to read and easy to follow. It just didn't make a huge impression.
February 19, 2020
OMG, omg, omg, where do I start? 5 stars just isn't enough !
I couldn't put this down. I had to keep reading, had to know what was going to happen next. How all these guys would work together. Would Dale be accepted?
This might be "online serial fiction" but the writing was brilliant. Maybe not completely perfect, but enough so to never make it an issue. Actually editing wise, there were about the same amount of issues you see in a professionally published book. The story telling, building of the characters, their interactions and the scenery it was set in is fantastic.
It's a slightly unusual story in that there aren't just 2 MC's. No there are 5 all up, with a few additional characters thrown in along the way. And it's all about Domestic Discipline, not BDSM in what has become the more standard definition. And there is absolutely no sex, not even fading to black or behind closed doors. Yet the relationship that these guys build between them is beautiful.
This is now so firmly ensconced on my favourites shelf, you'll need a crowbar to pry it off!
I couldn't put this down. I had to keep reading, had to know what was going to happen next. How all these guys would work together. Would Dale be accepted?
This might be "online serial fiction" but the writing was brilliant. Maybe not completely perfect, but enough so to never make it an issue. Actually editing wise, there were about the same amount of issues you see in a professionally published book. The story telling, building of the characters, their interactions and the scenery it was set in is fantastic.
It's a slightly unusual story in that there aren't just 2 MC's. No there are 5 all up, with a few additional characters thrown in along the way. And it's all about Domestic Discipline, not BDSM in what has become the more standard definition. And there is absolutely no sex, not even fading to black or behind closed doors. Yet the relationship that these guys build between them is beautiful.
This is now so firmly ensconced on my favourites shelf, you'll need a crowbar to pry it off!
August 7, 2012
Falls Chance Ranch is quite different from what I usually find out there and I really, really liked it!
Dale is awesome, just like the other four men and it was beautiful to see how he became a part of this loving family. Add to this the ranch itself, the animals (Bandit!) and Philip & David and you get a fantastic story about finding home, peace, freedom, family and of course love.
Dale is awesome, just like the other four men and it was beautiful to see how he became a part of this loving family. Add to this the ranch itself, the animals (Bandit!) and Philip & David and you get a fantastic story about finding home, peace, freedom, family and of course love.
September 14, 2013
I think what made this dnf for me is exactly what appeals to the five/four star raters, so it's really a matter of what you like as a reader. I couldn't get over the ethical issues involved with this plot.
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