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Sparkle & String
The fifth 8.5k erotic short story in a serial of six, "Sparkle and String" follows Bryan to the Amalfi Coast, explores a fantasy with Dane and a beach day requires more than sunscreen to take the edge off the heat.
This book is for 18+ readers and contains adult content, gay-for-pay, lacey knickers, airport fantasies, office jerk-off sessions, dark-haired, dark-eyed Italian twinks, and a long time friend who's happy to experiment as long as what happens on the Amalfi coast stays there.
This book is for 18+ readers and contains adult content, gay-for-pay, lacey knickers, airport fantasies, office jerk-off sessions, dark-haired, dark-eyed Italian twinks, and a long time friend who's happy to experiment as long as what happens on the Amalfi coast stays there.
42 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 1, 2022
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December 4, 2022
The excitement for Bryan continues with his holiday in Italy, where he meets a local hottie, Giacomo. With Bry’s hesitancy of his sexuality completely gone, he embraces his “play time”, while Daddy Dane watches.
“𝗬𝗼𝘂 𝘀𝗮𝗶𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗚𝗶𝗮𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗼.”
Dane unexpectedly shows up where Bryan is, his normal pushy and confident manner. His intolerance and impatience towards Bry’s mates continues, but he’s there to please his boyfriend.
Cannot wait to see what Dane has in store next in Naked and covered in Honey!! Nadia has me intrigued and engulfed in Bry’s newfound passion for toys and lingerie, while Dane adheres to his needs for humiliation.
“𝗬𝗼𝘂 𝘀𝗮𝗶𝗱 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝘄𝗮𝗻𝘁𝗲𝗱 𝗺𝗲 𝘁𝗼 𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗲 𝗽𝗹𝗮𝘆 𝘄𝗶𝘁𝗵 𝘆𝗼𝘂 𝗮𝗻𝗱 𝗚𝗶𝗮𝗰𝗼𝗺𝗼.”
Dane unexpectedly shows up where Bryan is, his normal pushy and confident manner. His intolerance and impatience towards Bry’s mates continues, but he’s there to please his boyfriend.
Cannot wait to see what Dane has in store next in Naked and covered in Honey!! Nadia has me intrigued and engulfed in Bry’s newfound passion for toys and lingerie, while Dane adheres to his needs for humiliation.
December 4, 2022
Ah I enjoyed this little short with Bryan on holiday and getting to play with new people 🙃
January 2, 2024
Ok
This one was ok story wise but still pretty good for a quick, erotic read. There's only one more after this one as of right now but I wish there was more.
This one was ok story wise but still pretty good for a quick, erotic read. There's only one more after this one as of right now but I wish there was more.
December 9, 2022
It's my own fault.
Back in part 1 of this series, I misread the "Want More" bit at the end of that installment. I thought that it said the author had 5 more parts to this series planned so I decided to buy into the series because it seemed to have potential even if the parts were pricey for how short they are. After the last part, where I felt the story was starting to veer of course, I went back to read that bit. It said that the author had ALREADY WRITTEN 5 more parts and planned to release them 1 a month over the months followingthat first release. Realizing that angered me in 2 big ways. It means that 6 whole parts of this could have been woven together more neatly and released in a single volume for a reasonable price, but the author chose to push out little bites of the increasingly disjointed story at $2.99 usd a pop. And all these parts were written at the same time so the fact that they're veering off course can't be excused as the author losing the plot over a passage of time and reading feedback. This seems to be the direction they intended from the start.
So, much like I've previously said that the characters Bryan and Dane need to better define their relationship, this author needs to better describe this series. Because I thought I was getting into a cam boy eventually meeting and falling in love with a wealthy watcher, but we're more just getting hot scenes of Bryan exploring his sexuality with a growing cast of participants. So I was buying into the idea of a romance when instead it's just smut. I love and enjoy a smutty read, but I can and do find better online for free. While I thought I was in to read this series to the end, I've read and paid more now than I should have. There's no indication that the next part will be the last part. In fact, the growing cast implies this could drag out much further and I hate that I contributed to the likelihood of that happening by buying and positively reviewing previous chapters.
Is there hotness in these parts? Definitely. But don't encourage cash grabs like this. Wait for a collected volume of the series or just ignore this in favor of something more cohesively written and reasonably priced.
Back in part 1 of this series, I misread the "Want More" bit at the end of that installment. I thought that it said the author had 5 more parts to this series planned so I decided to buy into the series because it seemed to have potential even if the parts were pricey for how short they are. After the last part, where I felt the story was starting to veer of course, I went back to read that bit. It said that the author had ALREADY WRITTEN 5 more parts and planned to release them 1 a month over the months followingthat first release. Realizing that angered me in 2 big ways. It means that 6 whole parts of this could have been woven together more neatly and released in a single volume for a reasonable price, but the author chose to push out little bites of the increasingly disjointed story at $2.99 usd a pop. And all these parts were written at the same time so the fact that they're veering off course can't be excused as the author losing the plot over a passage of time and reading feedback. This seems to be the direction they intended from the start.
So, much like I've previously said that the characters Bryan and Dane need to better define their relationship, this author needs to better describe this series. Because I thought I was getting into a cam boy eventually meeting and falling in love with a wealthy watcher, but we're more just getting hot scenes of Bryan exploring his sexuality with a growing cast of participants. So I was buying into the idea of a romance when instead it's just smut. I love and enjoy a smutty read, but I can and do find better online for free. While I thought I was in to read this series to the end, I've read and paid more now than I should have. There's no indication that the next part will be the last part. In fact, the growing cast implies this could drag out much further and I hate that I contributed to the likelihood of that happening by buying and positively reviewing previous chapters.
Is there hotness in these parts? Definitely. But don't encourage cash grabs like this. Wait for a collected volume of the series or just ignore this in favor of something more cohesively written and reasonably priced.
December 3, 2022
In book 5 of these fabulous shorts about Bryan, the formerly clueless gay-for-pay cam boy, he finally gets on the Italian holiday with his best mate Gavin, saved for with his online earnings and together with a sackful of lace and frills courtesy of Dane.
What I love so much about this series is the sly observation and in this episode, Bryan's growing self-awareness and emotional journey are deliciously described, culminating in a sizzling beach encounter with Giacomo, a very cute local.
I really enjoy how the relationship between Bryan and his older lover Dane is developing. Dane remains pushy, brash and impatient with everyone but Bryan and the growing trust between these two is sweet and very romantic. I can't wait to see what N E Mack has in store for the conclusion of this delicious series!
What I love so much about this series is the sly observation and in this episode, Bryan's growing self-awareness and emotional journey are deliciously described, culminating in a sizzling beach encounter with Giacomo, a very cute local.
I really enjoy how the relationship between Bryan and his older lover Dane is developing. Dane remains pushy, brash and impatient with everyone but Bryan and the growing trust between these two is sweet and very romantic. I can't wait to see what N E Mack has in store for the conclusion of this delicious series!
December 23, 2022
Exotic and Erotic Ciao Sweet Bunny
BryBaby is vacationing in Italy with his friends, while missing his Daddy, in N E Mack’s Sparkle and String.
As this short, sweet, and steamy erotic tale brings us further into understanding Dane and Bryan’s relationship dynamic, we meet some new characters who become part of the fun.
Each short in Mack’s delectable MM Billionaire and Lace series teases us, leaving us wanting more and more and more!
Merged review:
Ciao Sweet Bunny
BryBaby is vacationing in Italy with his friends, while missing his Daddy, in N E Mack’s Sparkle & String.
As this short, sweet, and steamy erotic tale brings us further into understanding Dane and Bryan’s relationship dynamic, we meet some new characters who become part of the fun.
Each short in Mack’s delectable MM Billionaire and Lace series teases us, leaving us wanting more and more and more!
BryBaby is vacationing in Italy with his friends, while missing his Daddy, in N E Mack’s Sparkle and String.
As this short, sweet, and steamy erotic tale brings us further into understanding Dane and Bryan’s relationship dynamic, we meet some new characters who become part of the fun.
Each short in Mack’s delectable MM Billionaire and Lace series teases us, leaving us wanting more and more and more!
Merged review:
Ciao Sweet Bunny
BryBaby is vacationing in Italy with his friends, while missing his Daddy, in N E Mack’s Sparkle & String.
As this short, sweet, and steamy erotic tale brings us further into understanding Dane and Bryan’s relationship dynamic, we meet some new characters who become part of the fun.
Each short in Mack’s delectable MM Billionaire and Lace series teases us, leaving us wanting more and more and more!
December 2, 2022
Another hot installment of this story. Bryan really enjoys his Italian vacation!
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