its a nice twist using a psycho but he seems to be a ditherer, dont get me wrong the stories are short enough that its not a great problem however he's also clearly a giant noob and what he really needs is a helper...
the concept is great and i get that your writing for yourself and hope others enjoy the story, but if your after a wider audience appeal then its my view the protagoinist needs some tweaking
even if you dont i will probably read any more books your write in this series but then i just blasted through the first two in under 4 hours, the first one was a good opener and so far this didnt seem to grow it in any fantastic way...
Definately has a different take on the dungeon for the MC. Really got into the first book because the well thought out way he planned everything and used what he had at the time to grow his dungeon. The second book got dark pretty quick. Dungeons kill people, thats their thing, but this last part seems like it was the original ending, just published later. I would like to see a 3rd book though, the world here is one that can easily go on and support different characters.
I hoped the first book was just a learning curve...
Extremely poorly written. Uses the familiar dungeon core concept but definitely seems like a short story written by a teen with anger issues. Could have been good if it was less "stream of hate". Nothing relatable or likeable about the main character. Only positive element was initial use of ants as first minions
I thought it was very interesting It kept me on the edge of my seat and I want more Dungeon cores are not new but this book puts a whole new spin on the subject