Steter Fanfic The one where Talia takes it upon herself to register her notorious bachelor little brother with the National Omega Search Engine. Things go downhill from there. Then uphill.
This story started out strong, and I liked how the author set up the relationship between Stiles and Peter. I liked the idea of the platonic relationship, and the fact that Peter respected Stile's intelligence and his needs. I liked that their mating didn't change Peter's sexual habits, and didn't mean that the two were instantly in truw lurve, but what might have been a strong four star read jumped the shark when the sex came into play. The sex talk was so silly bad that I couldn't take it. It didn't fit anything that had come before, and I didn't like the way Peter talked to Stiles at all. Sorry, but sloppy ass pussies and asshole winking just don't do it for me.
So Alpha Peter takes omega Stiles as his platonic mate, treats him with respect, signs him up for classes, etc, etc. So how come he uses such derogatory language when they make love? Therefore only 3 stars.