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Sissifying Her Rival (Part One: Captured)
Amy and Brandon are up for the same promotion, though Brandon has the inside track because the firm prefers to hire men. Amy has a plan to fix this however, by eliminating the competition. All she has to do is turn Brandon into a woman. Is such a thing possible? Brandon is about to find out. Can he escape this feminine fate or will he spend the rest of his life as her feminized servant?
“Sissifying Her Rival” is a cautionary tale of a man who finds himself turned into a woman and at the mercy of his rival. In this first part, Brandon finds himself turning into a woman and he discovers who is behind this, and why. This 12,000 word story includes female domination, gender transformation, forced feminization, breast growth, pegging, oral sex, erotic humiliation and more!
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“Sissifying Her Rival” is a cautionary tale of a man who finds himself turned into a woman and at the mercy of his rival. In this first part, Brandon finds himself turning into a woman and he discovers who is behind this, and why. This 12,000 word story includes female domination, gender transformation, forced feminization, breast growth, pegging, oral sex, erotic humiliation and more!
For Mature Audiences Only
46 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 13, 2013
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Crystal Summers
54 books102 followersHi Everyone! I'm a long-time writer of CD/TV/TG fiction and I wanted to share my stories.
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July 2, 2021
A good story overall, but could have better characterization and buildup. Also, splitting it into two parts was unnecessary, as even one part wasn't too long.
December 28, 2013
This story is about Brandon Ryan, who is in the unfortunate position of vying with Amy Simms for a promotion. Amy is very competitive, and sometimes she goes a little to far in order to win. Like in this case.
She buys Brandon a coffee with a little something extra in it. Soon Brandon is not in control of his own body. He leaves work shortly before an important meeting, drives to his girlfriend Jill's apartment, and lays out some of her clothes to wear. His girlfriend isn't there, but her lesbian roommate Erica is, and she doesn't particularly care for him.
I liked the scene with Erica and Brandon, where Erica is convinced that Brandon is trying to play a joke on her, and she encourages him to crossdress just to see how far he'll take it. When he doesn't seem to want to back down, she happily humiliates him, and snaps some photos of him dressed up (and sucking her strap on dildo) for souvenirs. She outs him to his girlfriend over the phone, while her dildo is buried deeply in his ass.
Brandon dozes off, and his body changes, shrinking and become more feminine (and unrecognizable as his own). He gets into a car, and is driven to an estate belonging to Amy, who reveals that she's used a magic potion to transform and control him.
He would live at the estate as Brandi, her personal maid, and he would return to work as her new secretary. She promises to change him back into a man after she has been given the promotion, and if he behaves.
I liked the story, even though I'm not fond of magic as a catalyst for feminization. The component of the magic that forced him to obey is removed later in the story, which is good, since he would now have to willingly submit to Amy's demands.
I enjoyed the part with the lesbian roommate more than the scenes with Amy, but I'm looking forward to reading the second part of the story once it's released.
She buys Brandon a coffee with a little something extra in it. Soon Brandon is not in control of his own body. He leaves work shortly before an important meeting, drives to his girlfriend Jill's apartment, and lays out some of her clothes to wear. His girlfriend isn't there, but her lesbian roommate Erica is, and she doesn't particularly care for him.
I liked the scene with Erica and Brandon, where Erica is convinced that Brandon is trying to play a joke on her, and she encourages him to crossdress just to see how far he'll take it. When he doesn't seem to want to back down, she happily humiliates him, and snaps some photos of him dressed up (and sucking her strap on dildo) for souvenirs. She outs him to his girlfriend over the phone, while her dildo is buried deeply in his ass.
Brandon dozes off, and his body changes, shrinking and become more feminine (and unrecognizable as his own). He gets into a car, and is driven to an estate belonging to Amy, who reveals that she's used a magic potion to transform and control him.
He would live at the estate as Brandi, her personal maid, and he would return to work as her new secretary. She promises to change him back into a man after she has been given the promotion, and if he behaves.
I liked the story, even though I'm not fond of magic as a catalyst for feminization. The component of the magic that forced him to obey is removed later in the story, which is good, since he would now have to willingly submit to Amy's demands.
I enjoyed the part with the lesbian roommate more than the scenes with Amy, but I'm looking forward to reading the second part of the story once it's released.
April 19, 2015
Very well written, with believable characters who had understandable motivations. I recommend this book. Especially to those who enjoy elements of magic in their forced feminization, and their femization complete. The humiliation was very profound, and the arrogant victim was pushed to the limit by his scheming rival. Will she get away with turning him into a total bimbo slut? You have to read part two to find out!
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