Brianna & Lorenzo
So this is a boiler plate, “MMC has mommy/daddy issues and so “refuses” to “love” a significant other, and so spends the majority of the book keeping the FMC at arms length” story.
The FMC wasn’t much more inspiring. Lady was abandoned by Lorenzo without warning. Decided not to inform him she was pregnant, and then years later, goes to a public event in his home town, risking running into him, as if the only place in the world she could further her career was that place.
Lorenzo blows hot and cold. No one can match Brianna, but they can’t be together. Brianna has no spine. Lorenzo does nothing but treat her shabbily and offer her crumbs, and she keeps coming back for more. Oh, sure, she tells him they have to stop fooling around, or that she’s returning to the US, or that she’s not going to have a marriage of convenience with him….but rather than follow through, she keeps returning for another round of “how can Lorenzo disappoint me this time?”
Particular low points were the one time the couple has sex, which was quasi-anonymous, lacking in intimacy even for our douchey male protagonist, and which ends with the FMC in tears. How romantic. IMO, if the FMC is going to have bad sex, the author has to remedy that with a positive scene later. But that never happened.
Oh, and that scene was preceded by the MMC telling the FMC he was going to marry, but that it couldn’t be her, and showing up to her event with a hot date.
I don’t mind OW plot lines. But the MMC deliberately and repeatedly acting without regard for the FMC’s feelings, all the while supposedly “loving” her…that just doesn’t work. “When someone show you who they are, believe them.”
The FMC should have given up on him, found someone else to be happy with, and if he really loved her, let him live out his life pining in regret, having to navigate his co-parenting relationship watching “the one who got away” be happy with someone else. It’s kind of sad when that kind of an ending seems preferable to the HEA we got.