I finally threw in the towel at the 54% mark. Unfortunately, this book was bad, really bad. I've read the first book and it was okay; this one was not up to scratch.
The writing was atrocious. There were lots of gaps with the narrative jumping from one scene to the next, leaving the reader wondering if they missed something or zoned out while reading.
In this one scene, Kiara was driving home on her way from work. In the next sentence, her son was asking her a question while eating his mac and cheese - when did she get home? There was no transition in-between and, unfortunately, that was not the only occurrence of this type.
The flow was just off, the writing disjointed, the pacing slow, and the sentence construction poor - this was a huge problem for me.
I picked up on some contradictions as well: in one chapter we were told that Roman's dojo was practically a few buildings away from the coffee shop where Kiara worked. A few chapters later, Roman decided to go and see Kiara at the coffee shop after leaving work (and before going to his dojo). We were then told - via Roman's thoughts - that the coffee shop was "not close", suggesting that he had far to travel if he wanted to see her; he was going to his dojo anyway.
At 37% in, there was still little interaction between Roman and Kiara. We were told that they went out on " dates" previously (in Kiara's role as an escort), but on the page they didn't engage much, and when they did, there was no sense of a connection being made. And yet, Roman - despite his philandering ways - suddenly started booking Kiara for his private events, holding her hand at every turn. At this point there was no indication that he wanted to get closer to her. In fact, he was still making booty calls to one of his regular hookups and lusting after another woman at his place of work.
I did not like Roman's character at all. While fantasizing about Kiara - and beating himself off to those fantasies the previous night - he went to the office the next day and fantasized about "taking" a female co-worker up against the wall when she flirted with him. He refers to women as "sl*ts" and "stress-relievers". His character was uncouth and not fitting for someone who was supposedly raised in a wealthy environment.
Kiara was similarly not likeable. She had the personality of a dish rag, just going with the flow and being polite to her "dates", plastic smile on her face all the (and laughing at Romans to outfit like a little child). Her decision to marry an old man without giving it much thought - and despite her developing feelings for Roman - was just nasty. The author tried to paint her as feisty but all I saw was a woman lacking in common sense and morals.
Although I understand people have pasts that include s*xual relations with other partners, I do not particularly enjoy those relations happening in a romance that is supposed to be about two specific people. Roman's s*xual exploits should have been left off-screen in my view.
The chemistry between Roman and Kiara felt forced. You cannot have a MMC trying to get together with a FMC while still calling up and lusting after other women - it just comes across as icky.
Because of the above-mentioned issues, I just could not bring myself to finish this book. Who knows, maybe the writing, characters and plot improved as the story unfolded, but I could not push myself to invest more time on Roman and Kiara's story. I'm giving Lincoln's book a miss as well - too disappointed to continue the series.