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My Vampire System #14
My Vampire System: Book14
The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
166 pages, Kindle Edition
Published December 14, 2022
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August 6, 2025
An active episode of this series for sure
But the Main Character is still a naive and stupid idiot most of the time. And I’m sure this author did this on purpose so he has something more to write about. However, it would have been more interesting to actually make your MC more intelligent instead of the stupid idiot that annoys the fuck out of all your readers. Case in point, instead of Quinn having a conversation with the only person who could train him to be a powerful Shadow user, he decides to reveal information that runs off said trainer. It’s moments like this that you wish you could have a serious conversation with the author in person. How stupid do you have to make your characters to give them room for growth. How about not making them stupid AT ALL!!! CAN YOU TRY THAT FOR ONCE!
But the Main Character is still a naive and stupid idiot most of the time. And I’m sure this author did this on purpose so he has something more to write about. However, it would have been more interesting to actually make your MC more intelligent instead of the stupid idiot that annoys the fuck out of all your readers. Case in point, instead of Quinn having a conversation with the only person who could train him to be a powerful Shadow user, he decides to reveal information that runs off said trainer. It’s moments like this that you wish you could have a serious conversation with the author in person. How stupid do you have to make your characters to give them room for growth. How about not making them stupid AT ALL!!! CAN YOU TRY THAT FOR ONCE!
February 17, 2026
Please edit these books, you did it with the 1st but it has to be comprehensive and professional!
These stories have everything and the kitchen sink in them and yet it still works the vampire craze science fiction portal spaceships special weapons special armor weird creatures it's got a lot of stuff this particular book addressed a significant portion of interesting things like how the Dalki were created! Powers of all the people that have now been changed turned and how powerful they are in reality!
These stories have everything and the kitchen sink in them and yet it still works the vampire craze science fiction portal spaceships special weapons special armor weird creatures it's got a lot of stuff this particular book addressed a significant portion of interesting things like how the Dalki were created! Powers of all the people that have now been changed turned and how powerful they are in reality!
August 25, 2025
Still good
It took some time for things to reorganize around the Vampire settlement as a setting, but its solid- for now. I hope we can learn more about Quinn and see his newly gained memories as actual parts of his life now.
It took some time for things to reorganize around the Vampire settlement as a setting, but its solid- for now. I hope we can learn more about Quinn and see his newly gained memories as actual parts of his life now.
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