A malevolent creature mysteriously begins lurking in the tranquil waters of a creek that travels through a public park. Soon after, the park's ranger discovers the creature is more intelligent, resilient, and dangerous than expected.
The story is very good, one worthy of a SyFi Channel movie. However, it is easy to tell this is the author’s first attempt at a tale. No worries. Writing is like a muscle that gets stronger the more you use it and the author has his plotting and dialog down. Now comes sentence structure and story structure and that comes with time and experience. I expect to see more from the author in the future.