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My Vampire System #11
My Vampire System: Book11
The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
164 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 29, 2022
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April 25, 2025
Edit please God edit
As a continuation of this brilliant series this is another Joy To Read but the editing good God it's very unprofessional to put people through this where they're constantly being thrown out of their suspension of disbelief because he editing is atrocious the author needs to stop dealing around in Hong Kong and he can hire somebody or he can do it himself I don't care get the editing completed otherwise I love it
As a continuation of this brilliant series this is another Joy To Read but the editing good God it's very unprofessional to put people through this where they're constantly being thrown out of their suspension of disbelief because he editing is atrocious the author needs to stop dealing around in Hong Kong and he can hire somebody or he can do it himself I don't care get the editing completed otherwise I love it
June 13, 2025
Still very good
The plot here just doesnt match up with the intensity of previous installments. Its still really good, but its just where the plot is as there isnt as much of a payoff in the action. It happens in large stories, and isnt meant as a knock against it.
The plot here just doesnt match up with the intensity of previous installments. Its still really good, but its just where the plot is as there isnt as much of a payoff in the action. It happens in large stories, and isnt meant as a knock against it.
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