Lady Maela Llewelyn loves her family and her land. Every year she sees her people growing weaker and sicker as the kingdom demands more and more resources from them. All the while, she hides inside her a magical power in fear she will be taken away by the High Holy Council.
After saving a young girl working in one of the orchards, she is seen using her power by her uncle, who sits on the High Holy Councile and other priests with him. Her uncle convinces her to go to the palace to participate in an event meant to find the crown prince’s bride and the next queen of the kingdom. Mae has no desire to wed the prince, but she sees a chance to speak to the king about her land’s problems and train with her mystical powers.
She travels with her uncle to the palace, where many look down on her because of where she comes from. She befriends the young highest lord of the city and finds herself often in the company of the prince. As she tries to focus on helping her people, she begins to see she is in the middle of more intrigue than she could have imagined.
Thank you to NetGalley for letting me read this book for free in return for an honest review!
Our main character, Mae, is a strong-willed, Merida-esque character that wants to choose her own fate, is solid in her ways, and isn't afraid to speak her mind. I really liked that about her. But that's about all I liked about her. Her personality was fun to read most of the time, but my gosh it was giving me whiplash with how she changed from QUEEN energy to "oh no I'm so humble" to "oh feel sorry for me" to "yeah I'm the hero" in almost every chapter.
There was also a clear cycle of people she would interact with in every chapter, which was grating after a while. This poor girl couldn't walk 4 feet without 8 characters wanting to talk to her in a row, even I was groaning and exhausted just reading it. There were hardly any breaks between the dialogue which was pretty flat and the same conversation most of the time. It felt like it was very recycled with the same characters having the same dialogue, as if they had never had that conversation before or didn't have anything else to talk about. The dialogue also felt very tense and wayyyy too proper and robotic (saying "do not" instead of "don't" etc.) and made it seem even longer to read since it didn't flowl.
The prince had the most backstory out of everyone, which makes some sense I guess, but I felt more for him than I did any of the other characters. Kind of crazy how the people we originally were supposed to not really like I ended up liking the most because they had the most story around them, even more so than our MC. I enjoyed every time he showed up in a scene and he's what kept me reading, honestly. Lord Aimon was also written very well, I didn't expect some of the turns with him AT ALL and I really liked his character.
The story was interesting, in how it's set up and how it all comes about. Think of The Selection series (the bachelor kind of thing) but with magic and a lot more characters and political connections to keep track of. I'm not usually a fan of "the bachelor" type stories but this one I didn't mind reading, I think it was fairly well done.
Overall, the ending honestly had me hooked and wanting to read more about what happens next, it's probably the better-written part of the book, but I'm not sure if this is turning into a series. If it's not I won't be heartbroken, but it did seem to set up for a second book. We'll have to see.
*Source* Kindle Unlimited *Genre* YA, Fantasy *Rating* 3-3.5
*Thoughts*
The Curse of the Blessed, by author C. Tarkington, is apparently the first installment in the authors The Curse of the Blessed series. The story is told in the third person narrative featuring Lady Maela Llewelyn. Mae comes from a place called Adaria where the country of Gelardia gets all it's produce and lumber from as well as livestock. Maela doesn't think much of the magic that flows in her veins. In fact, she calls it the curse and tries hard not to use it so that others don't take her away from her mother and younger brother.
This is not going to be a positive review. The main plot was interesting, but I found myself remembering that these were two seventeen year olds going through a bachelor-esk situation… and that felt icky.
The beginning world building felt like learning about things through two gossips. I would have preferred it to have been inner monologue or showing it rather than telling through very stiff dialogue that continued throughout the entire book. Every conversation the FMC had with one person, she had with 3 others, and we were a party to every single moment. It was horribly repetitive and felt like everything took a million years to play out.
I ran into no less than 20 large editing mistakes, between punctuation or incorrect spelling, even so far as the word subconscious being used instead of self-conscious.
When it comes to the characters themselves, I found the prince to be flat, one note with nearly a character arc. The FMC was annoyingly lacking any self-assurance, no matter how many time she said she knew who she was and what she wanted… which felt like every other paragraph. Repeatedly she was self-deprecating and protested anyone giving her a compliment without backhandedly turning it away from herself.
Every supporting male character is written in a way that is adoring or loving toward the FMC… Which made things confusing until process of elimination brought us to knowing that the prince was the love interest at more than 55% through the book.
The ending was fast, I enjoyed the pace and the plot planned out… but the ending made me question if it was supposed to be a cliffhanger or just a unsatisfying ending, if it was a true ending at all. The stakes weren’t high enough. There was no pull to needing resolution. I find that I can fill in some blanks on my own and be pretty satisfied without having to put myself through a second book.
I’m sorry that this was so negative. The basics, like punctuation and spelling make it very hard for me to finish a book, no matter how much I’m enjoying myself.
Thank you to NetGalley and C Tarkington for the advanced reader copy of The Curse of the Blessed in exchange for my honest and unbiased review.
Title: The Curse of the Blessed Author: C Tarkington Genre: Fantasy, Romance?
Kind of remind's me of Goose Girl by Shannon Hale [Highly Recommended] ***A beautifully written book about a princess hiding from her treasonous servant who takes up her identity while traveling to a neighboring kingdom. She hides away in the palace farms and tends to geese, learning to speak with them as well as the wind. She must take back her identity before her servant marries the prince and claims war on their home so that she may take it for herself. The princess although engaged to a man she has only seen from afar while in disguise, can't help but fall in love with a handsome knight she meets after somewhat stealing his horse. 1st in a 4 part series called Books of Bayern.
WARNINGS: Sexual Assault _____________________________________________________________ Overview: My general thoughts about this book is honestly one of indecision. I both liked and disliked this book. The flow of events were well timed and the character themselves had the potential for greatness. However, there were many things that left me confused more than anything. I am glad I read this book, and would want to read the sequel if one were to be released. However, if anyone was expecting a great fantasy with action, adventure, romance, and magical qualities . . . there are many that would be disappointed to know that most of those qualities, although present, seemed slightly washed over.
Favorite Things: I loved that the strong female character, Mae, was actually a strong female character. She had the power, intelligence, and drive that many female leads say that they possess, but actually don't. In a book like Crave for example, the author annoyingly wrote about how strong a female character Grace was, over and over and over . . . and over again, without giving ANYTHING to prove it. The author of this book however, did a great job of showing and not telling when it came to Mae's strengths. She was brave, selfless, and honest to a fault. She didn't care too often about what other's said about her because she knew that their opinions did not matter at all.
Least Favorite Things: The female character constantly complains about how not many man would want to choose her over a pretty little petite woman like some of the other characters and yet had several men pining for her throughout the entire book. The romance was nothing more than forced connections and slight intrigue taken too far. The only romantic couple that made sense was Livi and Annie. They were two female noblewoman who'd grown up together and fell in love; only to be forced to keep (somewhat) hidden. SA was used by the father of one to "fix" her and failed. Yet they still somehow managed to be together often and not kept apart while traveling and staying in the castle? Surely the father would have wanted to send his daughter with someone that would keep them apart. If Mae could take her attendant, why didn't either of them? Forced or otherwise.
Opinions: The overall story was extremely predictable from the first few pages, and there were many aspects of the story that felt more like a copout, rather than finding a way to make things work out naturally. An example of this was setting up the idea that magic was thought of as evil and that many people have been taken away from their families never to be seen again. Only for the reverse to be found as true and that her magic which she thought of as a curse, many saw as a blessing. So much so in fact that the kingdom officials went looking for anyone with such abilities to possibly bring that magic back into the official bloodline of the king. Another situation I found this to affect is her relationship with the prince. The author used a "common loss" trope to tie the characters together, mixed with a bit of trauma, and a dash of sexual tension. It felt forced and almost cringe. Especially when having Prince Cade being so indecisive and extremely selfish in how he presented his feelings for her. Once moment he's kissing her and the next he's shoving her away and talking about another woman he'd rather marry. That he'd absolutely hate to marry her because he loved her too much. And although that made sense from his trauma, saying it only once or twice and moving forwards would have made his character more likable. Instead, all the way until the end he is trying to convince her through kisses to stay away from him and let him be forced into an awful loveless marriage with someone he's be okay to see destroyed and forced to have heirs with. Like . . . really?
The love triangle created started off pretty pleasant. With the princes friend, Lord Aimon, being charming and flirtations with the main character. However, it soon seemed a bit too strained. There was no choice between the two as there could have been. She began by choosing neither, yet flirting back with Aimon who she later tells she saw only as a friend. I was almost rooting for her and Aimon to start some kind of secret romance with Prince Cades approval. But then she suddenly fell for the prince out of nowhere. It just didn't feel right, but had the set up to be great. Mae's indifference from page one however made the attraction dull and sudden.
Just my mind wondering, but I wish there had been more depth in the triangle as well. For example, I almost kind of hoped that Aimon would have come out as bisexual. If he had once been in love with Cade, but decided to move on because of his role, and then began his attraction towards Mae, it would have brought that depth. Especially if Prince Cade had won her over in a more believable way, taking Aimon's second love from him. Yet he would have been happy for both of them having been in love with both in the past. With how Aimon's loyalty to Cade is written in this story, it wouldn't have been such a large stretch if the imagination for him to have possibly loved and held back his feelings for his best friend.
Felix is an un-needed side character that brings in absolutely nothing to the overall story whatsoever and is only there as a former love interest to mess with Cade and Aimon for all of two seconds before vanishing and reappearing whenever inconvenient. He leaves the woman he is supposed to be in love with in the possible care of would be suitors she is not so subtly using to possibly make him jealous while he has made it clear he only wants her. You can take his character completely out of the book and there would be absolutely no change at all to anything that happened. I am so confused as to why he was put in place.
There's a lot to unpack with this book and I'm kinda going to go through all my thoughts while following the plot of the book, so no major spoilers, but this is a in-depth review of everything going on. Also, thank you to Netgalley for giving me an e-ARC of this book. Ok, so first issue is that this book says it's not part of a series, but it has a second book after that, so very confusing when I went in thinking it was a standalone and it wasn't. After finding that out, after finishing it, the pacing of the book makes a lot more sense. I was so ready to DNF the first 50% of the book. Nothing was happening, everything was so slow, and the writing was lacking. The second 50% of the book really picked up, almost to the point where it felt rushed and flew by. And I mean, I hit that 50% mark and like the book took off. The first half of the book lacked a lot- the characters felt flat and I HATE Felix. The relationship between him and Mae is so forced and the 'I love you like a sibling' is just pushed so freaking hard to where I was trying to figure out if it was like a secret love thing. Felix is unnecessary and forced, and all around, could do without him. The premise of the story is a solid idea, with Mae wanting to save her lands and growing as a person. Except for the fact I also kinda hate her as a character. She has this whole "I'm not like other girls, and I say what I'm thinking, which can be really rude, then just apologise for being mean, and people say it's ok." It's just so tact-less of her saying some iffy things and just the immediate "I can't control what I say" and everyone around her praising her for her honesty. Secondly, when she's going to the kingdom, the idea of her hating to marry the prince is also just forced. I feel like the book has a lot of "telling the reader what's happening" vs showing the reader what's happening. The telling happens way too much and over and over again to were I'm sick of the same repetitive information. Like we get it, move on, do something else. Adding on to that, we are told so much about the characters when we meet them in a very 'this is how he looks' kinda way where we get info-dumped all the attributes verses being able to see them of them being described as the story progresses. No one wants to read ' he had blue eyes and brown hair and was very tall.' It's boring and that info can be presented in a better light. Also, again, big Felix hater- all he does is ignore what Mae says or does the complete opposite of it and aggravates her. The first half of the book could have been condensed down a lot to make way for the better half of the book. Getting into the second half was really fun, the writing felt smoother, the plot actually was plotting, but since it's only half of the book, it was very rushed with a lot of info being dumped on us at random time. It would flop between tons of important info to nothing, to tons of important info. Just very confusing to read and the religious plot felt forced with the odd placement of it. It felt like the story was often rushed to get the characters somewhere so people could say or do things. The romantic plot was also better in the second half, but still very annoying. The romance wasn't there and then just, bam, lot of romance and the characters are so in love and just, again, felt rushed/fake/not believable. Also, the reasoning for the unsettlement at the end of the book with the romance is weak and makes little sense to where I want Mae to move on. Overall, I think the two books in this duology/series could be condensed into a standalone. I'll probably still read the second one because the plot is interesting and the I'm hoping the writing will be similar to the second half of the book.
Over a good easy read. It did remind me of the selection by Kiara Cass and the bachelor mixed with magic. It was definitely interesting but it did take me quite some time to get into it. The first half was a bit slow and dragged for me. It was a bit repetitive at time as well. The main character Mae is determined to help her people even if that means being put up again several over ladies for the princess hand and to be the future queen. Even though in the end all she wanted is to help her people. The last thing she expected was to come to care for several of the ladies and the prince. I did personally find her kind of whinny and poor me at some points in the book. There was not nearly as much action, magic or romance as I expected. But the small amount that there was it was done well. I wish there was more depth when it came to the romance and the magic. I have been left with so many questions. It felt unfinished. I was not a huge fan of the ending.
Thank you to NetGalley and author, C Tarkington for providing an arc in exchange for an honest review. The Curse of the Blessed is a magical world mixed with The Bachelor. I enjoyed the main character Lady Mae's spunkiness and intelligence. I also liked the side character, Leanna, and her character arc. Sadly, the romance fell a bit short and the worldbuilding was too reminiscent of other recent fantasies. If you like The Selection series- pick up this book!
Thank you Netgalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.
The premise of the book had me hooked! I looked forward to the palace and the rules of the court. Mae, our main character, is strong willed and loves people around her so much. I especially love her relationship with her young brother.
I also enjoyed the way the author described how magic felt for Mae. It felt whimsical, so personal and new. Most books don’t go into the way their magic feels with so much intent, and it was a nice element because Mae had to hide her magic.
Unfortunately, the dialogue was distracting and her interactions and growth did not feel authentic to me. She felt indecisive yet decided, it was so strange. She had a huge secret hidden from her for years that impacted her negatively, but as soon as she finds out the truth she just accepts it and moves on in this monotone-like manner. Where were the feelings and reactions of this character? She felt incomplete.
As for the court and her journey, it did get more interesting because the prince was a character with depth! But again, the dialogue was worded strangely and I honestly didn’t feel much chemistry between our MC and any character.
The ending leaves us wanting more and hints at a sequel. I’m still curious to see where this goes but I hope next time the characters feel more complete!
The cover is beautiful and I was immediately intrigued by the blurb.
While I felt like this story is written for the younger side of YA, I really enjoyed this book. There are two instances that are inappropriate for younger readers so be wary, but overall the story, characters, and writing lean towards a younger audience that enjoy other royalty series, such as The Selection or even Red Queen.
Mae is our MC and though this is told in a 3rd POV, she is the central figure and we see pretty much all of the story from her side. As she struggles with her power, politics, and even her own heart, Mae finds that she is stronger than she, or anyone else, ever imagined. I loved how passionate Mae is about her people, her land, and how much she wants to fix things. When presented to the king, she immediately raises her voice to express her concerns. The same with the Prince. As the book continues, and Mae (and the readers) learn more about this world, she feels like she should expand her kindness and fortitude to help everyone, and not just her own people. There are ~Chosen One~ vibes, as well as a love triangle (though it is rectified within this novel instead of being dragged out over multiple books, which was refreshing). This is a slow start, but picks up nicely and has a decent pace.
One thing I was not a fan of was this book was mostly made up of dialogue. Almost all the world-building came through Mae speaking with others. And was repeated over and over again. I think because of all the information that was trying to come through, a lot of the dialogue felt stiff and awkward. It was tiring to read. There was one point at the end of the book where Mae herself questions why everyone needed to talk to her all the time. GIRL, SAME! I feel like perhaps some of the world-building, and even some of important plot points, could have been discovered or revealed in other ways, such as a book, or exchanged in a note. It is stated several times that the MC and the prince love to read, they even visit a library, but are too caught up speaking to each other to ever pick up a book! Okay, well that's not fair. Mae does look at a few books, but they do nothing to drive the plot forward.
Other than the constant dialogue, I enjoyed the characters, and the plot. A lot of the secondary characters were rounded out really well, with their own stories, hardships, and triumphs. There is a larger piece to this novel being teased out, so I expect this to be a series. Don't expect a lot of answers in this first book, as there will definitely be more questions than anything.
What I'm hoping to find out as the series continues:
Mae's powers are beyond what anyone has seen for a long time. Why? Where do her powers come from? How exactly do they work? Is there anything Mae can't do?
There is a power struggle within the realm of Gelardia. Who is really pulling the strings? What exactly are they trying to accomplish, besides gaining power? How does Mae fit into all of it?
How will Mae adjust to playing a bigger role in politics, and the welfare of not just her own people, but an entire nation?
Will the Prince ever get over his own trauma so he can just be happy?????
Thank you to NetGalley and publisher for granting me this book for free in return for an honest review! All opinions are my own.
[Blurb @goodreads] Lady Maela Llewelyn loves her family and her land. Every year she sees her people growing weaker and sicker as the kingdom demands more and more resources from them. All the while, she hides inside her a magical power in fear she will be taken away by the High Holy Council.
After saving a young girl working in one of the orchards, she is seen using her power by her uncle, who sits on the High Holy Councile and other priests with him. Her uncle convinces her to go to the palace to participate in an event meant to find the crown prince’s bride and the next queen of the kingdom. Mae has no desire to wed the prince, but she sees a chance to speak to the king about her land’s problems and train with her mystical powers.
📍Thoughts The blurn is as underwhelming as the ending. The FMC was actually described as someone kind, witty, brazen, high born yet humble and ultimately powerful. She is quite likeable. She is the type of a fantasy character that depicts a bad ass queen in the making and has a whole lot potential to be more. I actually pity her that in every chapter at least 4 or more characters needs to talk to her about something. She felt tired dealing with people and honestly, I am right there with her.
Plotline. Think of Selection x Bachelor mixed with magic. There were some really great moments and intricacies that was woven in their somewhere, however, I think the author did not have a clear direction how to wrap up the book.
I can count at least 4 times FMC over heard conversations about rebellion and misuse of power but the identity of the supposed villains were not even explored or uncovered on the book. The selection finale in itself was a big wonk wonk that I had to ask myself, that was the big ending?
Chapters 1 to 15 talked about the FMC's background and travel to the palace. 16 to 27th talked about the budding romance betwen FMC and the prince (with some side High Lord in the mix) so I was really looking forward to the last 3 chapters where everything is revealed. Like why is FMC the most powerful one, what made her magic stood out, what made those on Holy Council want her so bad, etc. And all I got was a downward spiral of an ending. Sure, FMC got the Prince at the end but even then, I have no idea how her and the Prince fared given that the author ended the book with the sad version of a wedding.
Thank you to Netgalley for allowing me to read this novel in exchange for an honest review!
This book was balanced in its plot structure, well written, and engaging. The main character Mae is intelligent, kind, and often lets her mouth run away with her. I found her to be much like the character Danielle in the film Ever After. It is nice to see when the ‘Not like other girls’ trope is done well. I absolutely loved the secondary character of Leanna, who starts off guarded and judgmental of the higher born people of the kingdom. Watching her come to terms with her own prejudices and self-correct without anyone forcing her to examine herself was refreshing. I think she may be one of the strongest characters in the novel.
The romance element of the story was an important part of the plot, but not the direct focus. I enjoyed the prince’s reluctance to like Mae at the beginning. I’m pretty sure that her lack of filter even when faced with royalty, was what got through his distaste for the competition to become his bride.
The plot itself was both familiar and refreshing all at once, but the magic system was a little underwhelming. There was really no development or explanation of how it worked besides one statement telling the characters learning magic to ‘use their imagination’ during training. I would have liked a little bit more development there, as both the main character and the reader are learning about how it’s supposed to work.
The conflict of the different villages being bled dry by those who should be protecting them was really the backbone to the whole story, but this book did not resolve the issue. When I picked it up, I wasn’t aware it was supposed to be the first part of a series, even though there are no outside indications that it is. I feel like it may frustrate the reader when they get to the end of the book and find there is so much story still left to be told.
I really enjoyed this story and I do plan on continuing to read more from this author, especially if they come out with a sequel. I want to know what happens next!
Novel tropes include but are not limited to: Not Like Other Girls, Refreshing Honesty, Commitment Issues, Chosen-One, Forbidden Romance, and Gone Horribly Right. 3.5 stars.
A charming YA coming of age story set in a fantasy world with elements of magic, mystery, and a little bit of romance.
Mae has lived her whole life hiding powers she believed to be a curse and watching her land and people grow weaker every year. After an event where members of the High Holy Council witness the strength of her magic, she is convinced to go to the palace and vie for the princes' hand in marriage against other women with similar gifts. Mae does not wish to be queen but sees this as an opportunity to train her magic and help solve her land's problems. Once she arrives, she realizes there are many more challenges she has to face and gets involved with more problems than she may be able to handle.
This was a coming of age story with an interesting plot and sub plots that really peaked my intetest. I enjoyed the world building that the author created for the story by giving the background of the kingdom and incorporating the social struggles between the different cities of the kingdom.
The characters were loveable and made me root for them to win throughout the book. Mae goes through not only external problems she has to face but also internal struggles with her magic, who she is meant to be, and figuring out her destiny. Some struggles of the other characters are also very interesting and make for excellent side plots to the main story.
The book is medium paced and covers a lot of different twists and turns throughout the plot and sub plots. I also particularly enjoyed the other elements of this story including the side mystery and romance aspects that added really well to the main plot. The ending was a little disappointing but only because this seems to be leading up to a follow up book or even a multi-book series as the ending is left fairly open for some of the plot points.
The Curse of the Blessed is a wonderful YA fantasy read with a lot of story elements and world building. I would recommend it for an easy read that transports you into another world and provides a little bit of something for everyone.
Rating: 3.75/5 stars!
Themes: coming of age, identity, destiny, fantasy, magic
Story Elements: mystery, romance, 3rd person POV
Thank you NetGalley and C Tarkington for this ARC in exchange for an honest review!
Je tiens à préciser que mon avis reste objectif, comme toujours. Il s'agit certes d'un envoi, mais j'ai pour principe de reste objective et impartiale, par respect pour moi-même et pour l'éditeur. Un grand merci tout particulier à Netgalley pour cet envoi. Maintenant que tout cela est précisé, passons à la critique :) Comment passer devant une couverture aussi magnifique, elle m'a tout de suite attiré, elle est tellement belle.
Il faut dire que l'histoire était très intéressante, elle m'a beaucoup fait à la série la Selection, mais avec de la magie en plus. Notre personnage principal, Mae, est un personnage à la volonté forte, elle veut être maître de son destin. Le genre de personnage que j'apprécie. L'histoire est intéressante, mais hélas, parfois, on savait d'avance qu'il allait se passer ou se dire durant les échanges, ce qui est fort dommage à mon goût.
La plume de l'auteur est très fluide et le roman est équilibré, l'intrigue est bien construite. Le tout mélangé avec un personnage tel que Mae qui n'a pas toujours sa langue dans sa poche, un peu rebelle sur les bords, ce qui donne du piment au roman. Les personnages secondaires eux aussi sont intéressants et certains donne même envie qu'on se penche plus sur eux comme Leanna. Ce personnage m'a totalement convaincue et je l'ai énormément apprécié.
J'ai beaucoup aimé que malgré la romance qui était une partie importante de l'histoire, celle-ci ne prenne pas le pas sur l'intrigue. Les différences de catégories, la concurrence tout cela placé sous le régime de la royauté était très intéressant.
Concernant la magie, je n'ai pas trop comprit l'intérêt, on n'apprend pas grand-chose dessus, un peu à la Reed Queen ou Au Joyau , hélas contrairement à ces ouvrages l'apprentissage de la magie et son usage n'est pas du tout développé, ce qui est fort dommage.
Dans l’ensemble, l'ouvrage est très agréable à lire et fort appréciable. La fin honnêtement m’a accroché et m'a donné envie de lire la suite. En espérant que certains aspects de l'ouvrage soient beaucoup plus développés.
I voluntarily read and reviewed an advanced copy of this book. All thoughts and opinions are my own. The novel explores the themes of power, friendship, and political intrigue in a medieval fantasy setting. While the plot has potential, the execution falls short in some areas. The writing is heavy on dialogue, which may not be to everyone's taste. The author relies on conversations between characters to move the plot forward, and this can make the story feel slow at times.
On a positive note, the secondary characters in the novel are well-developed and add depth to the story. Lady Maela's interactions with the highest lord of the city and the crown prince are interesting, and the reader is left wondering where these relationships will lead. However, the ending of the novel is underwhelming, and it feels as if the author did not have a clear direction on how to wrap up the book.
One of the weaknesses of The Curse of the Blessed is the over-reliance on the main character. Every character seems to want to speak to Lady Maela at every moment, and this can feel forced and unnatural. Additionally, the book leans towards a younger audience, and older readers may find the story simplistic and predictable.
Overall, The Curse of the Blessed is an enjoyable read with some flaws. While it may not appeal to everyone, fans of young adult fantasy may find it entertaining. The book has potential, and with some additional development, it could have been a stronger novel. However, for readers looking for a light fantasy read with interesting characters and a political intrigue, The Curse of the Blessed may be worth checking out.
Thank you to C Tarkington and NetGalley for a copy of this e-ARC in exchange for an honest review!
I was expecting a lot from this self published fantasy by C Tarkington and was left a little disappointed.
The story follows Mae, a magic possessed Lady of her impoverished area, Adaria, and her attempts at gaining equality and aid from the crown family.
When the Prince is announced to be in need of a magic wife through way of a competition, Mae’s life is turned upside down as she grapples with controlling and loving her magic instead of the fear that had been ingrained at a young age.
Mae agrees to leave for the competition with the ulterior motive to make alliances and deals for the sake of Adaria and her family. All is not as it seems, as the friends she makes along the way are holding more secrets than she can count.
Mix that with a minor enemies to lovers and The Cursed of the Blessed was born to be a successful fantasy romance, however that was not the case for me.
The world building at the start as well as some juvenile dialogue threw me from the book and ruined what was supposed to be the book’s introduction. I struggled to believe and relate to Mae’s goals as she came across as very “not like other girls”. Her struggles with high society were very real but many of her worries felt a little juvenile and easily fixed. The story did pick up towards the end with the mysterious new magic and I’m excited to see where the next book may take Mae and the Prince, however it seems written for a younger audience than myself.
That being said, I have rated this novel 2.5 out of 5 stars (rounded up to 3)!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
Initial thoughts: After reading the synopsis and skimming the reviews (I didn’t want to spoil anything) I thought I would really like this book. I also thought that it would be similar to the Red Queen series as it mentioned a competition for the prince and magical powers.
Rating: 3.75 Stars
I am so glad that I read this book. The main character, Maela (I love this name), seems very strong willed and sometimes hot-headed, but I enjoyed seeing her character change and mature throughout the book. The world-building was pretty good in my eyes. There was some lgbtq+ representation which was nice, too. I also really enjoyed the story line and the romance, even if I might not have enjoyed the prince’s character that much. There were a fair amount of things that happened throughout this book that I didn't see coming, but I also was not shocked by a lot of the twists. There were also quite a bit of things that I would read, and then be thinking, “why did this even need to happen.” The competition mentioned was interesting to me and I was never quite sure what was going to happen with it specifically. However, the biggest reason that this was not a 4 star read for me, was the editing issues. There were several punctuation issues, especially with quotation marks and commas, but I don’t think it was that difficult to figure out the meaning and conversation flow while reading. I agree with most that this was a good lead up to a sequel and am very excited for when that comes out, I will be watching for that release date.
The Curse of the Blessed offers an intriguing premise set in a world of Regency romance with a touch of the supernatural, but it falls short in its execution. The story promises an enemies-to-lovers slow burn between Mae and Cade, which is one of the more enjoyable aspects of the book, especially as their relationship finally unfolds. However, the overall narrative struggles with pacing issues and some unnecessary tangents that detract from the main plot.
While there are moments of genuine connection, particularly in Mae's care for Annie and Livi, the characters often feel underdeveloped, making it difficult to fully invest in their journey. The plot, though interesting in concept, lacks the cohesion needed to truly captivate the reader.
For those who enjoy Regency romance with a mix of drama and slow-burning relationships, there are elements here that may appeal. However, the story's potential is marred by its uneven pacing and lack of character depth, making it a challenging read. If you’re drawn to the idea of a heroine navigating the intricacies of becoming royalty, this book might still be worth exploring, but it may leave you wanting more in terms of character development and plot clarity.
I enjoyed reading The Curse of the Blessed. At times, I felt that things were drawn out or sections didn't really need to be in there to further the story. I did enjoy the overall storyline. I want to see what happens with Cade and Mae's relationship, so I will be reading the final book. Mae and Cade's relationship is one of my favorite parts of this book. They sort of have an enemies-to-lovers slow burn going on. It's enjoyable to read when they finally give in to their feelings. I love how much Mae cares for Annie and Livi once their secret is revealed. I hoped for a different outcome for them, but what happened in the book wasn't bad. But I feel that Mae could have saved them differently. I don't want to have any spoilers in this review, so that's all I'll say about that storyline. If you enjoy regency romance, this book takes place with the Lords and Ladies of the country. There is a chance for the heroine to become royalty. I would say if you enjoy that this book is right for you. Due to some unneeded sections/storyline tangents and some slow pacing in this book, I give it 3.5 stars, rounding up to a 4 for the star system.
This book was... lighter than I think it would be looking at the cover. In a good way. More of that below. I know we shouldn't judge a book by it's cover, but I couldn't help but thinking "dark fantasy" when I saw this book. Turns out it was not. TCotB was more cozy fantasy, perfect for fairytale fans who wants a casual read. The romance is there and it's relatively clean (only kissing) so I think it's good for younger readers. Plot could be tightened up a bit around the middle because I think some parts were dragged a little too long, but overall it was cute casual read! Wish Cade would overcome his fear and be happy with Mae! Looking forward next book :)
3.5-4 Thank you Netgalley for letting me read this for free in exchange for an honest review.
I enjoyed the premise, and the plot moved along at a steady pace. My biggest issue was the repetitiveness of Mae being self depreciating. Her constant insistence that 'the other ladies were far more desirable' felt a bit overdone. I understand she spent most of her life thinking she was Cursed, yet she always was almost offended when anyone told her she was gifted and/beautiful. Anytime anyone pointed out good qualities about her, she seemed to take offense.
I thoroughly enjoyed her relationships with Livi, Annie, and Enid. And when she let herself just be I really enjoyed Mae.
Overall I had a good time reading this. I am looking forward to seeing where the author will take this story.
C. Tarkington has written a great book! But I honestly can't help but wish it were the beginning of a series.
Mae has hidden her powers her entire life. Suddenly she is thrown into a situation that could benefit her people. She travels to the capitol to enter a "contest" to become queen.
The book is heavy with scene after scene of conversation. Although this is a turn off for some readers it did not bother me much. The book is less than 300 pages, the story is engaging. The main character, Mae is likeable. Lady Henrietta is detestable, the Prince is complicated, the Highest Lord of the Land is interesting and charming and the Council of Holy Ones and the High Holy One reek of power and a sort of evil. I sincerely hope the book is the beginning of the series
For the digital copy of this book in exchange for an unbiased review, I am grateful to NetGalley. The book's premise was intriguing and kept me reading. I felt bored while reading and had to force myself to complete the book. Although the main heroine, Maela, was brave, sympathetic, and endearing, after a few pages her self-deprecating attitude grew tiresome. If Annie and Livi had been the primary protagonists, I would have liked the novel because they are two of my favourite characters. I read most of the chapters while pacing, although the final few were quite engaging. If the plot had a solid backstory, it might be a little more fascinating. I had high hopes for this book, but I was let down.
The world is well described, pulling you in to the atmosphere of the main characters home. Initially i found Mae’s international with her environment and people around her very easy and organic, though that unfortunately seems not to be the case with some of the others further into the book. There were also a few punctuation errors early on. Overall the story was very good, but half way through didn’t seem as fleshed or or maybe a little rushed. All in all i would still recommend for someone that enjoys a little bit of magic, intrigue and a sassy lady.
The story was interesting but felt like your average YA fantasy novel which is exactly what I expected. The plot felt very slow and picked up towards the end. The characters were alright I like Mae and points other times she was a little too annoying. The prince was good until the end I didn’t like his character as much.
I like the concept of this book, but the characters are so frustrating! How is it that Mae is supposed to be this like back-woods girl but is the wisest of all of them and always knows what to do and is beautiful and perfect and powerful. Ugh. Don't even get me started with the savior complex of the prince.
The Curse of the Blessed sounded like a really great idea from the description, and I was eager to give it a chance! C Tarkington has a lovely prose and way of building her world, however I was left wanting when it came to the dialogue and the chemistry of the characters.
I love how it was written. It flowed nicely. I like how she represented the characters and enjoyed it. There is still more to the story so I hope it continues