terribly written, needs a proofreader
This book is a jumble of sentence fragments, misused words, and terrible grammar. The author switches constantly between tenses. Pronouns are frequently switched, making for confusing stories. Years and dates are never given. Place names are butchered. (township, Ohio? That’s not a place. Which township in Ohio?)
Worst of all, the names of several victims are wrong. The most blatant was that Tionda Bradley was referred to as Tiana the entire chapter. Getting a victim’s name right is of utmost importance, and just shows a lack of attention to detail.
I think AI could write better than this. Total slop.