Poorly written, fine line between abuse and fun in the bedroom
I had a hard to reading this. The speaking portions are just part of the paragraph and sometime have quotation marks but only maybe half the time. Some paragraphs filled a page and a half, or more, when they could have been broken up. The author also put the wrong name for the people in the book in several spots and had trouble remembering details that had already been laid out previously about a character.
However, this book may be triggering to some readers. When one character starts to fall in love, he doesn't know how to handle it and ends up torturing two other characters, one of whom could barely walk after.
Overall, not a good book. Kind of a waste of time. Book ends abrupt, like the author ran out of ideas. Very disappointing.
This one proved to be better than I expected and the twist at the end was not what I expected. If rest of series are as good then I look forward to reading them