First, declaration of interest. I was not sent this book together with some delicious hand-made chocolates to review it (unlike some of the five star reviews). I bought it myself in a shop.
Chapter one almost stopped me in my tracks. It introduces a one-dimensional wannabe author who is given so many dislikeable personal qualities that they occupy most of the chapter. However, the story then got going and pulled me in. A lost manuscript in Hebrew from the Nazi era, a man whose obsession with documenting the destruction causes him to remain in Frankfurt during the collapse of the reich.
But little by little, and then in a bewildering welter, the plot requires coincidences that are individually so implausible that collectively they had me wondering "now what?".
And it is sad to say but it's apparently impossible to write a novel today without some heroic person from a Nazi death camp, and, sure enough, the person appears on cue. And along with them appear the Good Soldier, the Passer-by Caught Up In It … the people already familiar to us from "The girl who kicked the dragon tattoo violin-maker of Auschwitz".
The ending requires an astonishing plethora of coincidences (a far away farmer whose drains for no good reason run under the property, a welded lead box filled with decomposing vegetation, a dropped cigarette)– I almost stopped reading again.
But I continued. The Catastrophic End is followed by the Happy Ending, made possible by introducing the writings of Nietzsche and explaining their relevance to the ethical dilemma. And a New Life for the suffering protagonists, of course.
The book isn't helped by the poor editing of the press. Line spacing changes for no reason, and there are significant errors that spellcheck misses because they are real words (rough rather than rouge for example), and punctuation. These do the author no favours, and should have been proofread before pressing go.
Yes, there is considerable potential in this book, but the author will have to stop relying on coincidence and stereotype to do their work.