Flawed to the Core: Building Memorable Characters and Writing

by Kyle Belote

"You may not be able to build a world like Pandora in Avatar or have the vision of George Lucas to create the next Star Wars, but you can craft the next Ellen Ripley or Samwise Gamgee."

Known for his gritty characters, masterful plot twists, and moral dilemma storytelling, fantasy and sci-fi writer Kyle Belote brings his fresh and innovative approach to others of the craft. Covered within are the traditional means of building characters and his own unique methodology. Characters, like people, are more than the shell they inhabit. Written for creative writers including pantsers, you'll cover more than just crafting characters but worldbuilding, self-editing, dialogue, writing action and sex, and much, much more. Flawed to the Core is a great book for beginners and a handy tool for anyone of the trade.

158 pages, Kindle Edition

Published December 5, 2021

About the author

Twenty-year vet writer of novellas and tomes; the grittier, the darker, the more the characters must go through, the better. In the bleakest of worlds, characters shine all the more! I strive to make readers weep, not only because I just slaughtered their favorite character, but because the ending was sudden, unexpected, and impactful!

My genres are grimdark epic fantasy, military sci-fi fantasy, horror/thriller, and currently working on a western fantasy about monster-slaying bounty hunters working for the gods of their holy house.

I'm a wandering Texan who served Uncle Sam for four years, moved about—'here and there and back again,' and been to the far reaches around the world. Always looking for another great adventure, some new idea to write and explore, and a couple of other things along the way to make my life complete.

If you want to know more, check out my blog: https://outpostdire.com

Reviews

[Boyko Ovcharov · Rating 5 out of 5]

It is a brief, but informative book on writing.

It sounds up-to-date, honest, challenging, open, even featuring a fresh sense of humour and self-irony.
The author employs really creative approaches and methods, if not 'holistic' ones.

For instance, employing the astrological/star signs in character development might seem really innovative, but quite reasonable at the same time.

This work contains some original ideas and is well structured, as well as personal.
Maybe it is not so academic, but that is the point - it offers something new on top of the well-known stuff, apparently.

It would be especially useful for new and aspiring writers, presumably - while offering sound advice, self-discipline and a number of reality checklists.
Moreover, it appears to be incredibly realistic and specific at times.

The title itself is also kind of provocative.

Highly recommended.

[Augustine · Rating 3 out of 5]

The book delves into the nuances of editing and critiquing written work, emphasizing the importance of constructing a compelling argument grounded in logic and objective information, rather than resorting to shaming or personal attacks. It offers practical advice on editing, highlighting the significance of concise writing and the delicate balance between detail and precision.

One notable strength of the book lies in its insistence on the necessity of presenting a well-founded argument based on logic and objectivity. This aspect is particularly crucial in fostering effective communication, especially amidst today's polarized climate, and the author's guidance on steering clear of personal attacks is especially pertinent.

Additionally, the book's practical editing advice, stressing the importance of concise writing and precise detail, is invaluable for those seeking to enhance their writing skills. The author's emphasis on the continual refinement of one's craft over time is especially noteworthy.

However, the book's focus on technical editing aspects such as grammar and syntax, while important, occasionally overshadows more substantial issues such as structural coherence and thematic depth.

Overall, the book offers valuable insights into the art of editing and critiquing written work. Its emphasis on constructing a compelling argument grounded in logic and objectivity, along with its practical editing advice, makes it an indispensable resource for anyone aiming to refine their writing skills.

[Savera · Rating 5 out of 5]

"Learning is continuous."

In eight chapters, Kyle Belote covers a wide variety of tools, tips, and insider knowledge on how to write and edit a book, and also navigate some of the social aspects of being a writer.

Although the examples in the book (for plot and character) are mainly sci-fi and fantasy, I think the concepts can be applied to many genres of fiction.

Written in a conversational tone, almost like a TED talk, the various options for plotting a story and fleshing out a character are presented to the reader without bias. Belote does explain his own method, which is unique and worth a try for writers with a visual sense of creativity i.e. those who "see" their story like watching a movie or writing a screenplay.

I did lose the author a little when the detailed Star Wars example was used, but that's a personal view - fans who know more about the Star Wars universe will probably enjoy those bits.

The book is a resource I'll be referring to on my own writing journey.
As it's written from the point of view of a writer and a reader, Kyle Belote has created a handbook I think both novices and established writers should check out.

Many thanks to the author and Booktasters for a free copy of the book in exchange for an honest review.

[Pooja · Rating 4 out of 5]

An excellent handbook to writing that is not heavy on the jargon nor fancy metaphors and theories for writing.

The writing style is accessible and the points are laid out concisely and clearly enough for any writer at any stage to pick up. What I liked most about it was the handy summary towards the end that summarise all points neatly so it can be used a quick reference when anyone is need of motivation or rethinking during their writing process.

The book does an excellent job of laying down the argument, giving an explanation in an accessible and understandable manner and does not give in to the temptation of elaborating beyond need. Each of the chapters in this book can be a chapter in itself but the author sticks to the core of the topic and maintains your attention. A notable point to emphasise is that each section can be read independently. A writer does not have to "begin at the beginning" and can go directly to the section they need to reference.

The writer also does not shy away from addressing the messier aspects of the process - from the frustration one feels while writing, finding a trustworthy editor and critic to tackling sensitive topics like sex and violence (with a good focus on how much is too much or too little for your plot).

Each topic is backed up by examples that make the reader think. Hundred percent recommended for writers who are in need to refresh their perspective while deep in their creative processes.

[H.L. Charlesworth · Rating 5 out of 5]

When I was younger, I wanted to be an author. A dream I'm sure a lot of kids have but for me it was a true passion.

I fell in love with writing and it became a part of me. I used to carry this green folder around with me in school and you could see me in class ignoring work, the teachers, whatever to write my little stories. I had so many little snippets in that folder.

I even got a computer for Christmas one year to transfer all my stories I had written onto there. (I still have those files today and big ooof 😂)

That being said, I'm much more realistic about my goals now. However, a goal of mine is to finish a book I write. Just one book, front to back. I don't even know if I'd ever publish it! I like that think that maybe someday I will, since indie publishing makes it so much more accessible now. But who knows.

Regardless, this book has caught a special place in my heart for me. It had excellent advice, and I definitely will go back to read this again for that advice. And for encouragement, and ideas, and help.

[Brenda Loeb · Rating 4 out of 5]

Writing a book about how to write is definitely not a simple task, however Kyle Belote has approached, in a creative and orderly way that is almost systematic but without losing the magic of spontaneity, how to delve into the exercise of writing in continuity, because as well highlights “learning is continuous” and although it is not a quick and easy path and there are no exact formulas, everything depends on the security with which things are written and the approach to the reader through a range of possibilities, which yes, It is the author's responsibility to offer the reader.

I recommend it almost as a book on how to write for dummies, of course it should be used as support, since in itself, it is not a step-by-step guide, but it does encourage those interested in this task to ask themselves and answer themselves and through this act develop and transfer to paper what is in your head.

[Diana Winslow MSW ACSW · Rating 3 out of 5]

It's my impression the author, Kyle Belote has a pretty specific following.
I am not sure what to say, except that I found myself surprised regarding the content of this book.
I have read a number of books on writing books, and his take is definitely creative and calls on specific genre's that have quite a bit of public appeal.
As I read, I found myself getting lost in these examples, perhaps because they were so exact and so vivid......... and I was not all that familiar with these ideas culled for use in that fashion.
Now is the right time to work on writing a book. The world is changing and tastes and markets are quite varied. I enjoy that fact as a truth and I suspect there are many a reader who will delight in this method option.
I wondered as I read if I would enjoy this writer giving a live talk on his subject matter over a couple of days, building structure and reconstructing it under the hints and rules he shares.
I was glad to have a chance to read and review this book.

[Maria Rivas-mc · Rating 4 out of 5]

Somewhere in his book, the author makes a point that always bears repeating - learning is continuous. From that perspective alone, ‘Flawed Core’ is important. Yes, there will be things you already know (or think you do). There will always be information that you had not known and wished you’d learnt earlier. Kyle Belote is sharing his own path in the hope that will either save you a bit of pain or encourage you to keep on keeping on. It helps that the naming of the chapters allows you to zero in on topics of particular interest.

He points out that writing does not offer “a quick and easy path, a formula to calculate, or a definitive time frame. It’s all on you.” Rest assured that, however you approach the book, you’ll find something to add to your “tool belt”.

[Terrytracy Watts · Rating 5 out of 5]

I have to admire this writer for writing this book. I must admit I always wanted to write, but never did. The tips are very helpful. The suggestion are on point. I must admit the only book I’ve read that is on par with this book is the Stephen King book on writing. I found this book very helpful. So, if you are interested in learning to write, please check it out. I believe you will be pleasantly surprised. Therefore I give it a five star review. Thank you for letting me read it. I learned a lot.

[Brenda Hermes · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is go-to guide for any writer or aspiring writers that wants to polish and craft realistic characters for their novels, the author's narrative makes you feel like you're actually talking to a person face to face and I really liked that, there are many guides to write out there but I like how flexible this is, and is short to read in just one sitting I was able to finish it in one hour or less it gave me a lot of input to apply to my characters so definitely recommend it if you want a quick advice 😉

[Priscilla King · Rating 4 out of 5]

Other books on the art of writing study classic epic poems, dramas, and novels as examples. This one studies science fiction and fantasy movies. Kewl. I smiled--often.

Even for writers of literary fiction, this book offers some suggestions for character building and plot twists that might inspire anyone. Belote identifies as a "pantser" (one who doesn't outline, but makes up stories as he goes along) so he knows the kind of thing that helps writers unstick plots that get stuck; his tips are worth reading if you get stuck while outlining, too.

[L.yn · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is not my first time reading a book on teaching people how to write books, but I would say I enjoyed this more than the others ones I have read. The advice and suggestions are pretty straightforward, in my opinion, and the author delivers everything with a great sense of humour, which makes things engaging for the reader. A great writing style for a book of this genre. Overall, this was an enjoyable read packed with information that I would say is useful for aspiring new writers.

[alinhii · Rating 5 out of 5]

The book surprised me with its practicality. I learned a lot as an amateur writer and wrote down many quotes to remember. Writing a guide on how to write a book must have been an interesting and demanding challenge. In my opinion, the author handled it very well. The book had every element I could think of and even some I hadn't thought of. The used language was easy and understandable, I had no problem reading this book even tho english is not my first language. I definitely recommend it to everyone who is interested in writing

[Juli Eujanian · Rating 4 out of 5]

It's always good to learn from the journey of those who have been on the path we want to take for a long time. If, like me, you are looking to hone your writing skills and start taking seriously what was until now a hobby, this book can be a great help in the process.
In 8 chapters, the author teaches us in a practical way about topics that concern every writer, adding new concepts, or deepening and clearing doubts in those we already knew.

[Sophie Mickelsen · Rating 5 out of 5]

I've read a lot of other "how to write a novel" type books, but this is my go-to bible when it comes to writing. It offers comprehensive tips from creation to completion of a story. It's got a great segment on how to build memorable characters, talks about the different elements of writing, how to self-edit, world-build, etc. When I get stuck in my writing, this is the book I turn to for help.

Absolutely worth buying! You won't regret it.

[Swati · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book has unique insights into writing. The author lays an excellent foundation for building character...
. From that perspective alone, ‘Flawed Core’ is important. Yes, there will be things you already know (or think you do
if your new to writing what is presented will helps guide you through the process....

[Sage Abena Jade · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was quite educational, and easy to read and understand. It also had some practical advice.
The author's sense of humour was evident throughout and I found myself chuckling many times. I would recommend this to all aspiring writers who want to build better, endearing or well-loved characters that readers will never forget.


Thank you Booktasters, for the copy in exchange for this review.

[Reed Hansen · Rating 5 out of 5]

Really enjoyed this book. It had a number of useful frameworks and tools for putting a novel together, very practical. I've read a lot of books about writing and still I felt like I learned a lot. I loved the section on self-editing with the exercises, it would be great to have more of those scattered throughout the book.

[Lukanyo Mbanga · Rating 4 out of 5]

What’s fantastic about this novel is that in less than one hundred pages he illustrates an all-encompassing guide to being a proficient writer. Literally— everything you need to know.

This is a clear and well-structured book on how to be writer. It describes the components of good story telling, from plot structuring, world-building, character creating, self-editing— down to the mood you need to create before you pick up the pen. I love how the book acknowledges that writers will all have different approaches to how they structure their story. The book begins with stressing four types of approaches with pros and cons for each. Immediately it engages the reader by probing them to ask themselves which category they fall under. And right then—the writing journey begins. It’s so invigorating that you want to pick up your pen right there and then.

As the book title suggests, Belote stresses the importance of character building:

“They say as long as long as your characters are fantastic, your reader will forgive you for not having a remarkable story”

Belote elaborates in more detail about ways to form a character from personality tests, utilizing star signs to basing your characters off their motivations. To flesh out your character is to service the engine of your stories and all the tips and tools to do this are given in this book.

The light and conversational tone makes for a lovely read devoid of humdrum and monotone. This is a writer who, with no air of arrogance, loves what he’s doing and simply wants to share his knowledge with other writers or those wanting to be. The guide is riddled with personality, from his unmissable love of Star Wars to his passion for music. In conjunction with this, he uses relatable references to drive or illustrate his points and examples making the learning process both fun and memorable. Plus— I have killer new additions to my playlist!

I think some references could be more varied. The sustained examples of Christopher Nolan’s Star Wars became a bit overworked. This was relatively saved by some Tolkein references but as a LOTR fan— call me biased!

In almost every page there’s a pearl of wisdom and what’s more is that their all encapsulated in bullet points right at the end. As an aspiring writer, I can’t think of a better and more efficient field guide to mastering or embarking on this beautiful but labor-intensive craft.

[Ioleta · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book has unique insights into writing. The author lays an excellent foundation for building characters. He offers sound advice on plots, world building, dialogue, and writing style. Regardless of where you are along the continuum of writing beginner, novice, advanced, or somewhere in between there is good information to glean from. Further, if your new to writing what is presented will helps guide you through the process.

[Het · Rating 3 out of 5]

A creative writing book that focuses on Sci-Fi writing and definitely has its strengths and weaknesses. The writing is light making it easy to read.
It describes the components of good story telling, from plot structuring, world-building, character creating, self-editing. It acknowledges that writers will all have different approaches to how they structure their story. Although apart from the Sci-Fi specific pointers, most of the content is very general and overlapping with other creative writing material.
In summary it has things you might need and things you already know.

[Obaditan Oluwakorede · Rating 4 out of 5]

When can one call themselves a writer? When can one deem themselves knowledgeable on the subject?

These are the questions that David Williamson, who penned the foreword of this 90-page book, posed to the reader.
(Yes, I'm the kind that reads books from cover to cover; I gobble all the information from the foreword to the last page )
He answered by identifying the self-doubt that accompanies most aspiring writers.
He stated that, sadly, most never call themselves writers because they struggle with what he called internal editors and demons.

While this served as a foundation on which he introduced his relationship with the author and also detailed his journey from aspiring to established writer,

for me, it was an invitation, a call to go further, a summon to discover how to build memorable characters and craft impressionable writing.

Come with me.

Chapter one, which is also the introduction, begins with a cliché of some sort:
There's no wrong or right way to write." The author states. It's an audacious claim drawn from an anecdotal point in his life.
But before the reader heads along giddy with excitement about writing freedom, a freedom to write, they are reined in with the words.
"Not all writing will be successful. Oops.

The rest of the chapter brims with information about writing tools, software for writing and self-editing.
Spoiler alert.
Don't proceed further if youre interested in reading the book.

In this chapter, the author introduced readers to the types of writers: Pantser, Outliner, Snowflake Method, and Edit-as-you-Go.

I learned about cancelling all distractions and setting one's mood by writing with music.

Also, learn how to know one's target audience and how to prepare for a story using the 5Ws of Story Structure.
If I forget everything about this chapter, I won't forget this:

"They say as long as your characters are fantastic, your reader will forgive you for not having a remarkable story. But nothing on Earth can save you if your tale is stellar and you have flat characters."

Chapter two is all about self-preparation, and it's littered with pros and cons. The third chapter is where the reader will see the concepts introduced in the first chapter, concepts like the 5Ws, Three Acts, and The LOCK Structure. In chapter four, the reader will learn how to build the world their character will inhabit.

Chapter five will teach the reader how to make a memorable character.
Readers will learn about setting the story tone, sculpting and chiselling their work, and grounding the character until it becomes relatable in elements of writing, chapter six.

Wrong capitalizations, repetitions, pronoun usage and many more are the things readers will discover in the Seventh Chapter titled Self Editing.

Finally, I must confess that this book is rich, especially with personal stories from the author and stories from established names such as Stephen King, George RR- Martin and the like. For what else would a book about writing be without stories? Perhaps a user's manual.

The book concludes its eighth chapter with a summary of valuable quotes scattered throughout. It also includes a section about zodiac signs to help writers develop their characters and also a part about character motivations.

The final paragraph is my second favourite part of the book, as it bids the reader a worthy farewell, whether aspiring or established.

"You may not be able to build a world like Pandora in Avatar or have George Lucas's vision to create the next Star Wars, but you can craft the next Ellen Ripley or Samwise Gamgee."

After reading this book, I think so, too.

[Pascal ASHUZA · Rating 4 out of 5]

In the realm of writing, crafting characters that resonate with readers is a crucial aspect of captivating storytelling. Kyle Belote's book, "Flawed to the Core: Building Memorable Characters and Writing," delves into this essential element, providing a comprehensive guide for aspiring writers and seasoned authors alike.

Kyle's approach is refreshingly straightforward and practical, eschewing theoretical jargon and instead focusing on actionable advice. She emphasizes the importance of tapping into the core of a character's flaws, the very imperfections that make them authentic and relatable. This notion is further elaborated upon with thorough discussions on character arcs, motivations, and the art of weaving compelling backstories.

The book's strength lies in its ability to translate theoretical concepts into practical exercises. Ahern provides numerous prompts and exercises, encouraging readers to apply the insights gained to their own writing. These exercises are not mere mechanical tasks; they serve as thought-provoking prompts that stimulate creativity and foster a deeper understanding of character development.

Apart from character creation, Kyle also explores the broader aspects of storytelling, providing valuable guidance on crafting engaging plots, developing effective dialogue, and creating immersive settings. She stresses the importance of understanding the genre's conventions while simultaneously infusing originality and voice into the narrative.

"Flawed to the Core" is not just a book about character development; it's a comprehensive writing guide that empowers individuals to transform their raw ideas into compelling stories. Ahern's insights and exercises serve as a roadmap for crafting characters that resonate with readers, pushing the boundaries of storytelling and igniting the imagination.

[Alikwe Ortega · Rating 5 out of 5]

If you haven't had the chance to watch Bob Ross teach painting, I highly recommend watching one of his videos. And just like Bob Ross, Kyle's book on fiction writing offers valuable insights in a conversational tone. It particularly resonates with me as an INTJ according to the Myers Briggs personality test, who is relatively new to the structure of fiction writing. I found the section on world building to be particularly captivating. As someone who tends to overthink and enjoys mapping out ideas, I discovered a newfound interest in world building through Kyle's book. It is a must-read for any author seeking to enhance the structure of their storytelling, as it is both skillfully crafted and engaging.

Allow me to share two quotes from the book that I truly adore and would like to share with readers:

1. "Character triumphs over plot every time. You may have a brilliantly crafted storyline, but if your characters are lackluster, your work will fall flat. Readers can be merciless when it comes to analyzing your work, so let's avoid giving them a reason to search for flaws—unless, of course, they are delving deep into why your flawed characters hold such significance for them and how relatable they are."

2. "Think of your story as a piece of history that has already unfolded, and you have the privilege of revealing it to the world. These characters have lived, breathed, and left their mark on the world, and we, as storytellers, have the opportunity to portray only a fraction of who they truly were. Reflecting on historical figures who left a lasting impact, they were extraordinary individuals, and so too must our characters be."

[Prosper Kayode · Rating 4 out of 5]

"Flawed to the Core: Building Memorable Characters and Writing" is a valuable resource for writers looking to enhance their character development skills. The book provides insightful guidance on creating compelling and realistic characters that resonate with readers. The author's approach to exploring flaws and imperfections in characters adds depth and authenticity to storytelling.

This book offers practical tips and techniques that can be easily applied to one's writing process. Whether you're a beginner or a seasoned writer, the concepts presented in this book are both enlightening and inspirational. By focusing on building flawed yet relatable characters, writers can craft more engaging and memorable stories.

Overall, "Flawed to the Core" is a must-read for any writer striving to improve their craft. It not only educates on character development but also inspires creativity and growth in storytelling. I highly recommend this book to anyone looking to elevate their writing skills and create more nuanced and captivating characters.

[Lino Matteo · Rating 5 out of 5]

Flawed to the Core: Thoughts

Let’s start with the bad: I don’t like the title of the book. I don’t like it so much that I keep losing it on my Desktop. That is the bad. The good news? That is the only bad news.
The rest of the book is good. Parts are very good. It is helpful, insightful, interesting, quick, and useful. Very useful. The author, Kyle Belote, is not an author that I know. That may have to be rectified in the near future. What he says about writing makes good sense. He gives good advice and insights into “Building Memorable Characters and Writing” which happens to be the subtitle of the book.
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[Kelly · Rating 5 out of 5]

This appeared to be a book written by a writer, about writing, and I found it very interesting indeed. There was a time when I myself would write regularly, but I have never felt confident enough to send any of my writing to any publishers. So I was curious about what advice this book might have to offer. As a reader, I hold writers in high regard, because they create the work that I love.

I was very interested to learn about the thought processes and techniques that an author may apply when writing. I also really enjoyed the conversational tone and funny anecdotes, and reading this made me feel motivated to try and write something, even though I haven't done so in a long time.

[Tooba haque (free 🍉) · Rating 4 out of 5]

I truly admire the author for creating this book. The guidance offered in this book is immensely valuable, and the suggestions are right on the mark. And has proven to be an invaluable resource for me, and I genuinely found it to be full of practical insights.

For anyone who aspires to learn the art of writing, I wholeheartedly recommend giving this book a read. I believe you'll be pleasantly surprised by the wealth of knowledge it imparts. I'm truly grateful for the opportunity to read it, as it has expanded my understanding of the craft significantly.

[Sisca Tanoto · Rating 5 out of 5]

I like the way Kyle explained things. Fast, yet detailed enough for me to understand what he meant to share about building characters and writing. He even used line-to-line examples taken from other writers' books when it came to share about editing. Funny thing is, he made me want to know more on the books and movies he used in his examples.

And I believe him about him cut, cut, cut ruthlessly to make something good out of his writing. Kyle knew what he did, and he talked about it in precise length: no more, no less.

Bonus to me: this book makes me want to really write!

[Seaweed · Rating 4 out of 5]

I liked how concise the author was. Cutting off the fluff and getting straight to the point worked for me, and just today, I self-edited using his techniques, and I can't emphasize how impactful they were in letting me see my writing in a new light.

The "Storytime" segues were amazing, and I always looked forward to him giving us real-life (well, fantasy) examples of what he was talking about.

Overall, I have learned more about characterization in 150 pages than in 150 books. Thank you, Kyle!