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Virtual Deviation #1
Virtual Deviation
After a bad break up with his ex-girlfriend, a vacation on a quiet Island is supposed to help Neil recover and relax.
But without warning he finds his whole life reset. It's either an apocalypse across the whole of planet earth, or some kind of new, evil system. And to complicate matters, now he's surrounded by hot, leggy girls.
So to survive in this new virtual world, Neil will have to fight to level up. Make progression fast or die.
All that, and keep a party of beautiful women happy. Not to mention keep them alive.
Has Neil got what it takes to build a new life and ultimately even his own harem kingdom?
This c.21k word Gamelit Scifi Novella includes adult activities and unconventional relationships.
But without warning he finds his whole life reset. It's either an apocalypse across the whole of planet earth, or some kind of new, evil system. And to complicate matters, now he's surrounded by hot, leggy girls.
So to survive in this new virtual world, Neil will have to fight to level up. Make progression fast or die.
All that, and keep a party of beautiful women happy. Not to mention keep them alive.
Has Neil got what it takes to build a new life and ultimately even his own harem kingdom?
This c.21k word Gamelit Scifi Novella includes adult activities and unconventional relationships.
97 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 2, 2021
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August 26, 2022
This is a hard book to read because all narrative takes place in the guys mind. And his thoughts are muddled, incomplete and just odd. Nothing comes through but what he thinks, says, or hears. Lots of small sentences that are just quick thoughts, like "Smells bad," or how about "Fast." That's it nothing else. It's written how someone would speed read.
"Foul smell. Ram the torch at it. In it. Jam it between jaws. Hot, dirty slobber on my arm. Stamp my foot onto slithering, sinewy muscle. It roars and spits. Stinks. But the torch is wedged in its gaping mouth. Tail thrashes."
"Foul smell. Ram the torch at it. In it. Jam it between jaws. Hot, dirty slobber on my arm. Stamp my foot onto slithering, sinewy muscle. It roars and spits. Stinks. But the torch is wedged in its gaping mouth. Tail thrashes."
July 9, 2022
World ended, Now Game Survival?
Ok, we go on a vacation. Ex girlfriend and current boyfriend show up, uncomfortable. The next day people are missing and a digital screen is in our visions. We look for food, get attacked, have sex with another vacationer, and the book ends.
Ya that was the story.
Read in 1 day
Ok, we go on a vacation. Ex girlfriend and current boyfriend show up, uncomfortable. The next day people are missing and a digital screen is in our visions. We look for food, get attacked, have sex with another vacationer, and the book ends.
Ya that was the story.
Read in 1 day
October 14, 2022
Puzzling Start.
It is my hope that the following books in this series clears up some of the questions that I have thought about so far.
For the most part the characters are realistic as is the settings.
It is my hope that the following books in this series clears up some of the questions that I have thought about so far.
For the most part the characters are realistic as is the settings.
April 11, 2024
New author to me, enjoyed the series
Looking for something quick to read and chanced across this series. The stories are not very long and I just finished all nine of them. The ninth book is a finale of sorts. A few editing errors here and there but not bad.
Looking for something quick to read and chanced across this series. The stories are not very long and I just finished all nine of them. The ninth book is a finale of sorts. A few editing errors here and there but not bad.
June 4, 2022
Mc is kinda of a little bitch.
After a few paragraphs of the guy whining like a 16 year old, with zero control I got bored lol.
After a few paragraphs of the guy whining like a 16 year old, with zero control I got bored lol.
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