First star is for Jill's descriptive, creative writing. For a 'Love, Inspired' author, I was seriously impressed. She can actually write - jump back! It was pretty astounding, and I'm looking forward to more from her, after this. I'm not a huge fan of MANY of the LI authors. Clean books, yes. But good writing? Mostly no. Jill is an exception, thank goodness. More, she's not afraid to get romantic. LI authors seem to think any smidgeon of passion in their stories will nudge them into Hell. Jill isn't that way, thankfully.
Second star is for the characters/story. These are likeable but not perfect and often a little crazy people. Ellery's "hulk impressions" were cute, Fletcher was a good kid, the sisters were awesome, as was the bestie... it was good stuff.
But there were problems. A LOT of problems with this book. First, is his 'injury'. Okay, so you want him to have a TBI (Traumatic Brain Injury). Okay. But don't tell me that he has headaches, blurred vision, light sensitivity, noise sensitivity, and balance issues and not ever SHOW ME any of that. It's BS. There was *ONE* token 'episode' in which Behr hits a doorframe with his head when he stumbles and needs twelve stitches. It felt contrived and forced, a lone 'example' for the story's sake and NOT because it's his reality.
YES, he trips while carrying food once,
but heck, *I* do that.
And there are NO OTHER symptoms that ever manifest in the weeks and months they're together? He doesn't need sunglasses when he goes out, the thirteen nieces and nephews' chaos never overwhelm him and cause him to retreat, he never gets a single headache or has difficulty driving or seeing or staying upright before Margo? SERIOUSLY?!
And who needs twelve stitches hitting a doorframe?
A goose-egg, yes, a black eye or a bruise but...
what's there to rip yourself on?!
Ellery has a dog. She's a dog lover, so this makes sense. What *DOESN'T* make sense is that we see this dog *ONE TIME* the entire book, because it's "anti-social". It doesn't work for me, having a dog trainer without a dog in her space AT LEAST 50% of the time, and this dog shows up *ONCE* the entire story (although there are mentions of Fletcher taking it out to play with another dog, which... what about its anti-social issue...?) I just didn't buy it. At all. Yes, Behr is scared of dogs. But never having Ellery's dog be an issue for him, when it's 'wolf-like' and aloof and tense...? NO. Just no.
I *DESPISE* when vets play the 'war hero' card, and Behr has no compunction about it. ((Typical.))
I also despise when people fawn over the 'war hero'. But these are my own issues, and that I picked up a veteran book at all is unusual, because I'm not down with it, having grown up military.
And I have ENDLESS issues with chrischun authors who tell me so-n-so is 'in Heaven'. Do they not read their Bibles? Heaven is NOT open for business - the *ONLY* one who ascended there is Christ, the Firstfruits. Read 1 Corinthians 15 for details, and STOP WITH THE FALSE TEACHINGS.
Also their 'faith' in this story is basically vague, shallow, random references to God's hand in things, and some allusions to having 'prayed' about this or that. It was weak sauce, but then it's 'Love, Inspired'. Lax on the 'Inspired', as per the usual... because faith ain't really the point, apparently.
So YES, I enjoyed the book, but YES, I had problems with it.
And I didn't know it was #3 of TWELVE in a series, so... WoW. Okay.