This review is for 'The Ghosts We Were' by Laynie Bynum.
I hate leaving negative reviews but this short story tipped me over the edge into Ragetown, thanks to the MASSIVE cliffhanger.
It is also miscategorized as a HEA - there's no happily ever after in this story as presented - there may be down the road in the next book, but I don't have the next book, nor am I likely to, after this.
I note the author posted this story on Amazon Vella, which, as a non US-based reader, I cannot access. So, this may explain the "serial" feeling to this story of a Small Town Girl who left for the Big City, never forgetting the Boy She Left Behind who, it turns out, told her he didn't love her so she would leave because he wanted her to Live Out Her Dreams. He, of course, loves her So Much he's been having meaningless weekly sex with her best friend ever since. Honestly that's such a ticking bomb that I wanted to "see you write your way out of this one, Joan Wilder," but the story just ends at the Big Reveal and I. Hate. It.
To steal a phrase from Reddit's AITA - Everyone Sucks Here.
Also, I'm not opposed to alcohol as a plot device, but booze is feeding a lot of bad decisions here and it's a little tired after a while.
Just writing out all my thoughts about what is really a short little story has made me angry all over again.
Authors, please know I respect your creative work, but if you ding me with a concealed cliffhanger, understand that I am out. Forever.
I received a free copy of this story only through Book Sirens, and the opinions expressed are mine.