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Monster Girl Town #2
Succubus Supreme
Train your succubi, quest for your businesses, make a damn good pizza!
When Harrison came with his best friend Jerry to the mysterious land of Delom, he never would have guessed he would bring pizza to the world where everything works like a video game. Now the proud owner of Delom's first pizzeria, there's only one thing that Harrison needed to make his business complete: succubi delivery girls! And from there, Harrison has big plans to level up and expand his business all across Delom.
It all changes when a mysterious string of accidents plagues the pizzeria on the eve of Harrison's big moment, it's clear that someone wants to give him a game over. But if Harrison can figure out the rules of Delom's game fast enough, he might just save not only his business, but the heart of the town in the process!
When Harrison came with his best friend Jerry to the mysterious land of Delom, he never would have guessed he would bring pizza to the world where everything works like a video game. Now the proud owner of Delom's first pizzeria, there's only one thing that Harrison needed to make his business complete: succubi delivery girls! And from there, Harrison has big plans to level up and expand his business all across Delom.
It all changes when a mysterious string of accidents plagues the pizzeria on the eve of Harrison's big moment, it's clear that someone wants to give him a game over. But if Harrison can figure out the rules of Delom's game fast enough, he might just save not only his business, but the heart of the town in the process!
212 pages, Kindle Edition
Published November 15, 2020
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Simon Archer
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November 22, 2020
Another story from the magical world(?) of Delom
Pizza and hot babes, what's not to like! Harrison has stayed in Delom to make his own way. Opening a pizza parlor was a good idea, staffing it with fun bouncy busty Sussubi was genius! But there's a fly in the sauce as an evil works against the newcomer to Delom. Join Jim Harrison as he delves deeper into the background of the magic town. If you like monster girls and harems, this series is for you! Give it a try!
Pizza and hot babes, what's not to like! Harrison has stayed in Delom to make his own way. Opening a pizza parlor was a good idea, staffing it with fun bouncy busty Sussubi was genius! But there's a fly in the sauce as an evil works against the newcomer to Delom. Join Jim Harrison as he delves deeper into the background of the magic town. If you like monster girls and harems, this series is for you! Give it a try!
May 25, 2026
Great Story!
I really enjoyed this book as much as the first! The only negative comment I have is it some of the words. This book lacked somewhat in the proofreading department. Some words used out of place that didn’t make sense causing me to go back and read sentences two and three times. After that I inserted the word I thought it should be and moved on. Another couple of times they used the wrong character name. Still a great story for all the speed bumps that are in it.
Highly recommended, a most enjoyable story. Hope book 3 reads a little smoother.
I really enjoyed this book as much as the first! The only negative comment I have is it some of the words. This book lacked somewhat in the proofreading department. Some words used out of place that didn’t make sense causing me to go back and read sentences two and three times. After that I inserted the word I thought it should be and moved on. Another couple of times they used the wrong character name. Still a great story for all the speed bumps that are in it.
Highly recommended, a most enjoyable story. Hope book 3 reads a little smoother.
December 14, 2020
Pizza Time!
I like the continued adventures of Harrison and Jerry in this adventure story. I like that it feels like you living in a RPG and get paid for it. The novelty of monster girls is a definite hook for me and I can't wait for the next adventure!
I like the continued adventures of Harrison and Jerry in this adventure story. I like that it feels like you living in a RPG and get paid for it. The novelty of monster girls is a definite hook for me and I can't wait for the next adventure!
February 15, 2021
Fun and suspenseful
A good addition to the saga. At first I was surprised that that the main protagonist changed in this book. I am anxious to find who it will be in the next installment.
A good addition to the saga. At first I was surprised that that the main protagonist changed in this book. I am anxious to find who it will be in the next installment.
March 17, 2021
Interesting read, in a good way
This was not what I expected, intrigue with a little sex. The same could be said for the previous book, just with more science. Good read and interesting characters.
This was not what I expected, intrigue with a little sex. The same could be said for the previous book, just with more science. Good read and interesting characters.
May 30, 2022
An Incredible Read!
This series is so original and compelling, I love the mystery with just a small amount of predictability. The story and world building keep me reading.
This series is so original and compelling, I love the mystery with just a small amount of predictability. The story and world building keep me reading.
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