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अधूरी ख्वाहिशें

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Adhuri Khwahishe is a collection of poems that talk about unfulfilled desires, heart break, bridges burnt, self love, childhood, and so much more. Every poem in this collection will touch your heart. Some will make you sad, some will give you joy, but most importantly they will all give you hope.

44 pages, Kindle Edition

Published August 15, 2020

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Bhakti Motta

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September 11, 2020
I picked this book because I love the genre. Poems are written beautifully with simple language. Language is simple as the extent that a normal person with a writing and understanding knowledge of Hindi can understand the emotions poured into it. Poems are based on the emotional like day to day experience. Example; love, childhood, care and Self Love. My favourite poems among them are "Beparwah" & "Kabhi-Kabhi". Let's talk about it's other side. It could be better with effective language and good Hindi vocabulary. It could be better if it better if it had a good rhyme scheme. Yes, I felt scarcity of good rhyme scheme. It has grasping quality because of feelings & emotions embellishment but I like it at a limited extent as most of the poems are based on broken heart.

So, keeping all factors of review in mind, I'm giving it 3.6 🌟
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September 23, 2020
Beautiful poetry

Do read these beautiful nostalgic poems. Some living in the past. Some in the present and some in the future. They'll make you smile sometimes or bring you pain. But they'll also give you hope to keep going.
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