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Brokenhearted Girl 3: When Your Heart Hurts
They say that what's done in the dark will eventually come to light. The secret about Reese being Camryn's biological father had gone on for too long, and now it had finally been revealed. How will something like that end? Sticks has been raising Camryn as his own for the past four years, so can he so easily just give her up? To his best friend at that.Then there's Treasure. We are three books in to the Brokenhearted Girl series, and baby girl still cannot catch a break. What's will be the outcome with William and Treasure? Will William finally fess up to his wrongdoings? Will Treasure's mom, Terry, finally believe her child after all of these years?In part three of the Brokenhearted Girl series, there are definitely going to be some broken hearts, and Treasure took the biggest loss of everyone.
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Published February 14, 2017
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February 17, 2017
Wowwwwwwww
Come on now Treasure you have to think better then that. I understand you been through some things but to think Malakai would try something like that when you know how he feels about his kids. As far as her SORRY excuse for a mother all of a sudden want to call the police on William because he hurt her feelings chile pleaseeeeeeeee, in my opinion that's what she get and I wish William rot in hell for everything he did to Treasure. I'll be glad when Malakai find Reese because I know it's going to be hell to pay and poor lil Monique just caught in the middle of something she knows nothing about. Now she only made matters worse because once Malakai finds out she was the caller she going to be dead. I'm happy for Sway and proud of Trell because he's showing her that he can be the man that she needs. Magnificent read Diamond Johnson so ready for part 4 each story gets greater and greater. Loved it!!!
Come on now Treasure you have to think better then that. I understand you been through some things but to think Malakai would try something like that when you know how he feels about his kids. As far as her SORRY excuse for a mother all of a sudden want to call the police on William because he hurt her feelings chile pleaseeeeeeeee, in my opinion that's what she get and I wish William rot in hell for everything he did to Treasure. I'll be glad when Malakai find Reese because I know it's going to be hell to pay and poor lil Monique just caught in the middle of something she knows nothing about. Now she only made matters worse because once Malakai finds out she was the caller she going to be dead. I'm happy for Sway and proud of Trell because he's showing her that he can be the man that she needs. Magnificent read Diamond Johnson so ready for part 4 each story gets greater and greater. Loved it!!!
April 7, 2017
Another dragged out book
This book dragged out it could have been summed up in the 1st book but they shorten the books and call the series smh
This book dragged out it could have been summed up in the 1st book but they shorten the books and call the series smh
May 26, 2021
You know what, this book, this series was damn good until the last chapter of this book. I absolutely hate it when we see these people’s love story, we’re all rooting for them, and they’re making it work but then somebody always does something so fucking STUPID!!! that it makes the whole story just UNBELIEVABLE. That is exactly what happened at the end of this book. How in the hell does Treasure (someone who has been molested by her father) look at Malakai with disgust when she’s told that the ppl is outside because there were allegations that he was molesting his daughters??? HASNT SHE SEEN HIM WITH HIS DAUGHTERS FOR THE PAST COUPLE BOOKS⁉️⁉️⁉️. Like come on, he loves those girls more than anything AND TREASURE KNOWS THAT‼️‼️‼️. I mean, I know we need the drama for the purposes of a climax and all that but this shit here just doesn’t serve that purpose. Not to me anyway and it almost makes me want to DNF🙄
however I have some characters on my hit-list, that I’ve just got to see the outcome. So, I really hope I don’t regret going on into book 4. Like I loved these ppl story up until that last page or so. Please be better in book 4 and let’s go ahead and nip this stupid shit she did in the beginning so we can get back to the bullshit at hand because really they’ve got more than enough drama to fucking deal with. They’ve got dumb bitch Janay who for some reason believes that Malakai was her man and stolen from her. We’ve got dumb bitch Terry who takes her man side over her daughter’s and don’t believe he molested her when he did! We’ve got dumb bitch Monique whose wants a man who’s not even thinking about her fatass ( and no I don’t have anything against fat ppl hell I’m fat),but she thinks just because she worked out and shed a few pounds and got a tiny waist that he’s supposed to want her? Give up his family for her? For what? Then we got fuckboy Reese who yeah I understood wanting to be a father to your daughter once you found out that she was yours, but you should have taken your grandmother’s advice and eased into the shit with both her and Malakai to make for a smooth transition and probably would have kept the friendship BUT IT WAS NEVER ABOUT BEING A FATHER TO YOUR CHILD IN THE FIRST DAMN PLACE‼️‼️‼️. It was about jealousy and you being so jealous of Malakai, that it was probably the reason you fucked Autumn in the first fucking place.
See 👀, all this drama. We did not need the added drama of Treasure looking at Malakai with disgust. She knows he wasn’t molesting those girls 🙄. Now we got to sit here and most likely go through a dumbass break up where he probably will end up fucking Janay or Monique or hell probably his other baby mama Jewel. Then of course Treasure probably going to realize that she made a mistake but at this point he’s going to be putting her through it, making her pay because he’s hurt.
I honestly don’t want to read this if it’s going to be like that. But this author has shown tremendous growth from one book to the next, her stories have been so unique, and I feel like she’s not going to do that to us so forgive my rant. Book 4 I’m hoping you top books 1-3 and end this story in the best way possible!
GONNA GO AHEAD AND GIVE 💯 ⭐️ .
Total Book Experience 10/10
Plot/Storyline (structure)10/10
Writing (Errors) 10/10
Characters 10/10
Again-able 10/10
Emotion 10/10
Book Cover 10/10
Visual/ Illustratable 10/10
Addictiveness 10/10
Threshold quality 10/10
Unique 10/10
💯 ⭐️ 📖
however I have some characters on my hit-list, that I’ve just got to see the outcome. So, I really hope I don’t regret going on into book 4. Like I loved these ppl story up until that last page or so. Please be better in book 4 and let’s go ahead and nip this stupid shit she did in the beginning so we can get back to the bullshit at hand because really they’ve got more than enough drama to fucking deal with. They’ve got dumb bitch Janay who for some reason believes that Malakai was her man and stolen from her. We’ve got dumb bitch Terry who takes her man side over her daughter’s and don’t believe he molested her when he did! We’ve got dumb bitch Monique whose wants a man who’s not even thinking about her fatass ( and no I don’t have anything against fat ppl hell I’m fat),but she thinks just because she worked out and shed a few pounds and got a tiny waist that he’s supposed to want her? Give up his family for her? For what? Then we got fuckboy Reese who yeah I understood wanting to be a father to your daughter once you found out that she was yours, but you should have taken your grandmother’s advice and eased into the shit with both her and Malakai to make for a smooth transition and probably would have kept the friendship BUT IT WAS NEVER ABOUT BEING A FATHER TO YOUR CHILD IN THE FIRST DAMN PLACE‼️‼️‼️. It was about jealousy and you being so jealous of Malakai, that it was probably the reason you fucked Autumn in the first fucking place.
See 👀, all this drama. We did not need the added drama of Treasure looking at Malakai with disgust. She knows he wasn’t molesting those girls 🙄. Now we got to sit here and most likely go through a dumbass break up where he probably will end up fucking Janay or Monique or hell probably his other baby mama Jewel. Then of course Treasure probably going to realize that she made a mistake but at this point he’s going to be putting her through it, making her pay because he’s hurt.
I honestly don’t want to read this if it’s going to be like that. But this author has shown tremendous growth from one book to the next, her stories have been so unique, and I feel like she’s not going to do that to us so forgive my rant. Book 4 I’m hoping you top books 1-3 and end this story in the best way possible!
GONNA GO AHEAD AND GIVE 💯 ⭐️ .
Total Book Experience 10/10
Plot/Storyline (structure)10/10
Writing (Errors) 10/10
Characters 10/10
Again-able 10/10
Emotion 10/10
Book Cover 10/10
Visual/ Illustratable 10/10
Addictiveness 10/10
Threshold quality 10/10
Unique 10/10
💯 ⭐️ 📖
March 20, 2022
Whose the dumbest
Listen between Monique, the ex jump and Treasure’s mom I don’t know whose the dumbest. Monique should have told Malakai the truth when she had the chance, she really should told him as soon as Reese approached her. I know her Reese are the ones making those stupid calls. Treasure was dead wrong for giving him the side for thinking he would do something like that.
I’m so tired of her mom, I’m glad that it finally told her the truth.
I can’t wait to read part 4.
Listen between Monique, the ex jump and Treasure’s mom I don’t know whose the dumbest. Monique should have told Malakai the truth when she had the chance, she really should told him as soon as Reese approached her. I know her Reese are the ones making those stupid calls. Treasure was dead wrong for giving him the side for thinking he would do something like that.
I’m so tired of her mom, I’m glad that it finally told her the truth.
I can’t wait to read part 4.
December 15, 2022
Wow
It's crazy that people will go to such lengths to get even with someone even if it was to lie about things that's ain't even taken place. I bet Reese has something to do with this bs that just happened at the end of the book. The way he said Treasure looked at him with a disgusting like makes me want to slap her because she with him in the house and she know whe would never harm his daughters at all. Treasure better get it together or she gonna be left behind. It's sad how it took for William to really tell Treasure mother how he felt for her to do what she should have been done a long time ago. She was dumb anyways and she deserve what she gets or got. Monica got something coming for her and I can't wait to see what it will be.
It's crazy that people will go to such lengths to get even with someone even if it was to lie about things that's ain't even taken place. I bet Reese has something to do with this bs that just happened at the end of the book. The way he said Treasure looked at him with a disgusting like makes me want to slap her because she with him in the house and she know whe would never harm his daughters at all. Treasure better get it together or she gonna be left behind. It's sad how it took for William to really tell Treasure mother how he felt for her to do what she should have been done a long time ago. She was dumb anyways and she deserve what she gets or got. Monica got something coming for her and I can't wait to see what it will be.
July 26, 2024
In this third installment of the series, Camryn is determined to get his daughter Reese, by any means necessary. Unfortunately, his attempt comes at the expense of Treasure and Sticks. That poor girl cannot catch a break, but once again…her support system has stepped in for her and Miracle.
As for her trifling mother, reality is beginning to set in. She finds out that her feelings for William are not reciprocated, and decides to do something about it…FINALLY.
Three books in and I'm still excited about this series by @_diiamondddd_ . If you haven't read this one, please go check it out.
As for her trifling mother, reality is beginning to set in. She finds out that her feelings for William are not reciprocated, and decides to do something about it…FINALLY.
Three books in and I'm still excited about this series by @_diiamondddd_ . If you haven't read this one, please go check it out.
July 4, 2018
This one was a bit boring, I thought it would be way more going on especially with Reese acting a fool. Monique’s role in this really made no sense and even for her to believe that was all that was going to happen was dumb. The ending was good but Treasure even thinking that was enough for him to leave her alone. I get what she went through, but she should’ve been able to see some type of sign if that was the case.
May 5, 2025
part 4 me please
I don’t understand why people hurt each other Reese knows he was wrong for sleeping with Camy mom and Sticks wrong for keeping Camy and Reese from each other I don’t care how long you been taking care of a child once they find out the truth they will have some resentment towards the parent who was there from the beginning hopefully Reese and Sticks can come to some kind of agreement for the sake of Camy
I don’t understand why people hurt each other Reese knows he was wrong for sleeping with Camy mom and Sticks wrong for keeping Camy and Reese from each other I don’t care how long you been taking care of a child once they find out the truth they will have some resentment towards the parent who was there from the beginning hopefully Reese and Sticks can come to some kind of agreement for the sake of Camy
July 30, 2025
oh treasure
OK, I officially don’t like treasure three books in. She keeps trying to have a relationship with her mother and in real life people move on.. I don’t think I could ever forgive my mother for something like that no matter what even in her mother’s thoughts where she said even if it did happen, she just needs to get over it. I could never forgive, and if I were Malakai, I would leave her.
OK, I officially don’t like treasure three books in. She keeps trying to have a relationship with her mother and in real life people move on.. I don’t think I could ever forgive my mother for something like that no matter what even in her mother’s thoughts where she said even if it did happen, she just needs to get over it. I could never forgive, and if I were Malakai, I would leave her.
February 17, 2017
Omg
Omg what the F is going on this motherflower Reese and that Bitch Monique need to be dealt with like the hell is going I so love Sticks and Treasure like they just need some peace in their lives.....I can't believe the bs that is going on about sticks abusing his girls he lives and will do anything for them.....
Omg what the F is going on this motherflower Reese and that Bitch Monique need to be dealt with like the hell is going I so love Sticks and Treasure like they just need some peace in their lives.....I can't believe the bs that is going on about sticks abusing his girls he lives and will do anything for them.....
February 18, 2017
Sticks about to put in work
Alright Nah Diamond with the jaw dropping cliffhanger lol.. Monique and Reese better s sleep with both eyes open because ish isn't looking to good for them. Treasure is pregnant I can tell and I have no idea what that look was about humph she knows better so she better had get it together
Alright Nah Diamond with the jaw dropping cliffhanger lol.. Monique and Reese better s sleep with both eyes open because ish isn't looking to good for them. Treasure is pregnant I can tell and I have no idea what that look was about humph she knows better so she better had get it together
August 23, 2019
Hummmm..... Treasure, what was that?
So Treasure, what was that? Why looking at him like that? I hope you check yourself quick because this is where and how it all begins...And finally Terry, you are doing something right for once. Monique, girl, if I were you, I would run, now and leave the 305 area, just like Reese did. Hum, Janay, give it up baby girl, give it up
So Treasure, what was that? Why looking at him like that? I hope you check yourself quick because this is where and how it all begins...And finally Terry, you are doing something right for once. Monique, girl, if I were you, I would run, now and leave the 305 area, just like Reese did. Hum, Janay, give it up baby girl, give it up
February 17, 2017
GREAT READ
I can't wait to see what's next.....that SLEAZY negro done called the people on those kids this book STORYLINE is terrorist I can't wait wait wait Ressie NEEDS a bullet in the eyes jealousy is a mother....OUT FREAKING STANDING
I can't wait to see what's next.....that SLEAZY negro done called the people on those kids this book STORYLINE is terrorist I can't wait wait wait Ressie NEEDS a bullet in the eyes jealousy is a mother....OUT FREAKING STANDING
February 28, 2017
Just cant get a break
Jealousy is such an ugly trait. And its crazy how you can know someone your whole life and suppose to be your friend but turn their back on you so fast aka reese i hope they all get what they deserve..William,Reese,and Monique
Jealousy is such an ugly trait. And its crazy how you can know someone your whole life and suppose to be your friend but turn their back on you so fast aka reese i hope they all get what they deserve..William,Reese,and Monique
March 3, 2017
Wow
They can't catch a break in this series. I swear Reese is a sociopath for real. Treasure keeps getting the short end of the stick each and every time. Sticks is seriously going to kill every body in the next book.
They can't catch a break in this series. I swear Reese is a sociopath for real. Treasure keeps getting the short end of the stick each and every time. Sticks is seriously going to kill every body in the next book.
March 16, 2017
Ok so I loved all 3 books Treasure and Sticks relationship is great, outside of all the other drama I need them to make it. The ending though I seen coming, please don't make me wait to long for book 4!
July 3, 2017
Wha.........???
Reese is grimy and Monique Desperate as well to bcc believe the lies... Sticks boy when I say, he real about his it is truee...no one is safe and Treasure with her silly self thinking this mess.. ok let me stop I have to get to the next book.
Reese is grimy and Monique Desperate as well to bcc believe the lies... Sticks boy when I say, he real about his it is truee...no one is safe and Treasure with her silly self thinking this mess.. ok let me stop I have to get to the next book.
November 11, 2017
MUST READ!!!!
These books just gets better and better. This is definitely a must read series. I don't know why I hadn't already read it. I recommend everyone read this series. I can't wait to read part 4. You did it again Diamond...
These books just gets better and better. This is definitely a must read series. I don't know why I hadn't already read it. I recommend everyone read this series. I can't wait to read part 4. You did it again Diamond...
November 27, 2017
I feel like the author is just spreading out the story now to make it a series when this should've probably been the finale. It was a really short read and though some things got resolved, they're dragging out the whole thing with Reese and Treasure's father
September 25, 2018
4.5
Monique was a bold one to listen or do anything Reese suggested...She will learn the hard way. I felt bad for Camryn while she was with her mom. I'm sure things will look up now. Good continuation of series as I prepare to read the final part.
Monique was a bold one to listen or do anything Reese suggested...She will learn the hard way. I felt bad for Camryn while she was with her mom. I'm sure things will look up now. Good continuation of series as I prepare to read the final part.
November 20, 2020
Daaayyyyuuuuummmmmm
That was explosive idk what to say. There's so much going on you ha e to just start reading
. You won't be disappointed trust this author is on her ish.
Happy reading
That was explosive idk what to say. There's so much going on you ha e to just start reading
. You won't be disappointed trust this author is on her ish.
Happy reading
July 16, 2022
oh wow
The way diamond b ending these books have my mouth dropping to the floor. It seems like Reese been jealous of Sticks. And Terry is so pathetic, she getting what she deserves. I’m happy for Sway and Trell.
The way diamond b ending these books have my mouth dropping to the floor. It seems like Reese been jealous of Sticks. And Terry is so pathetic, she getting what she deserves. I’m happy for Sway and Trell.
February 16, 2017
5tar
This book is messy lol. Please don't have us waiting too for book four. This book was everything and BABY those sex scenes.... lordt it gave me life Lmao! Great job
This book is messy lol. Please don't have us waiting too for book four. This book was everything and BABY those sex scenes.... lordt it gave me life Lmao! Great job
May 19, 2017
Awesome
I could not put these books down took me one day to read! Really liked this series and hope to find more.
I could not put these books down took me one day to read! Really liked this series and hope to find more.
June 17, 2017
Good
Great book. Literally one of the best I've ever read. Very realistic. I'm sure a lot of us can relate unfortunately.
Great book. Literally one of the best I've ever read. Very realistic. I'm sure a lot of us can relate unfortunately.
August 16, 2017
Great Read
Wow that's crazy. Malachi and Treasure can't catch a break. Jealousy is a bad drug. Can't wait to see what happens in book 4.
Wow that's crazy. Malachi and Treasure can't catch a break. Jealousy is a bad drug. Can't wait to see what happens in book 4.
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March 21, 2018Sandra review
That what her mother's for being so darn dumb, I am glad trell and sway, and hopefully they Kai and killed tease ass
That what her mother's for being so darn dumb, I am glad trell and sway, and hopefully they Kai and killed tease ass
April 26, 2018
Another hit.
This is so good. I read it in hours. I can't wait for William to crumble and I can't stand Treasures mom. On to the next.
This is so good. I read it in hours. I can't wait for William to crumble and I can't stand Treasures mom. On to the next.
December 30, 2018
This is a late added. I promise to keep updated in 2019.
May 23, 2019
Good
This series gets better each book I on edge to see how everthing turns out. Hope william gets what he deserves
This series gets better each book I on edge to see how everthing turns out. Hope william gets what he deserves
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