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Conception
Originally published as "Singularity Book One - Conception" by Gary K. Martin.In the near future, a brilliant mind will unexpectedly emerge into the world - a mind that will surpass the smartest men and women of our history; a mind that will forever revolutionize our way of life; a mind that will usher in a new era of humanity - conceived by man and born from technology.Artificial Intelligence.On this day the world will never be the same. Civilization will advance exponentially, new technologies will be unlocked faster than we can understand them, and our new creation may become our master... or our replacement. This day is referred to as the Singularity.These are the stories of what happens after this day.BOOK ONE - CONCEPTIONIn the middle of the Nevada desert, underground tribes fight each other for their own supremacy and survival, unaware of the world above or the nature of that world’s threat. On the other side of the country, a young video game programmer gets into trouble with the law and is sent out-of-state by his negligent father. Meanwhile, in the shadows, powerful figures make a grave decision that will change everybody's lives forever.
200 pages, Paperback
First published August 11, 2015
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Luxcutus Umbra
2 books1 followerLuxcutus Umbra is the pen name of Gary Karim Martin of London, Ontario Canada. He is the author of the speculative sci‑fi series DEUS MODUS, a living mythos that explores artificial intelligence and the very definitions of human agency.
In 2024 Luxcutus began development of an AI-controlled 'scenario' that will take place immediately after Book Three - Corruption. This scenario gives the readers the freedom to contribute and participate in the canonical narrative of DEUS MODUS. He warns readers, 'your participation will affect the world's history - so will your absence from it.' (link to scenario below).
Luxcutus (G.K.) is co-founder of a not-for-profit Red Team LLP, Chaotic Industries. His partnership focuses on AI training, cybersecurity and information warfare countermeasures research. In his past, G.K. has published news articles for Vice Media investigating legal and cultural differences between the U.S. Department of Corrections and the Correctional Service of Canada.
He is the great-nephew of blues legend Hubert Sumlin (Howlin' Wolf) and the late Joe Hunter (the Funk Brothers). He has five children and three stepchildren.
LINKS:
Click here to access the AI Scenario "DEUS MODUS BOOK IV"
In 2024 Luxcutus began development of an AI-controlled 'scenario' that will take place immediately after Book Three - Corruption. This scenario gives the readers the freedom to contribute and participate in the canonical narrative of DEUS MODUS. He warns readers, 'your participation will affect the world's history - so will your absence from it.' (link to scenario below).
Luxcutus (G.K.) is co-founder of a not-for-profit Red Team LLP, Chaotic Industries. His partnership focuses on AI training, cybersecurity and information warfare countermeasures research. In his past, G.K. has published news articles for Vice Media investigating legal and cultural differences between the U.S. Department of Corrections and the Correctional Service of Canada.
He is the great-nephew of blues legend Hubert Sumlin (Howlin' Wolf) and the late Joe Hunter (the Funk Brothers). He has five children and three stepchildren.
LINKS:
Click here to access the AI Scenario "DEUS MODUS BOOK IV"
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February 5, 2026
A Critical Review of G.K. Martin's "Singularity Part One: Conception"
By NotebookLM
Overall Rating: 3.5 / 5 Stars
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1.0 Introduction: An Ambitious and Fractured Conception
The first volume of any speculative fiction series bears a heavy burden. It must not only tell a compelling story but also construct a new reality, laying the foundational promises of theme, character, and conflict that will sustain a reader’s investment through subsequent installments. G.K. Martin's Singularity Part One: Conception steps up to this challenge with undeniable ambition, laying a complex, sprawling foundation for a world grappling with the birth of true Artificial Intelligence. It is a novel of big ideas, shadowy conspiracies, and visceral, high-stakes action.
The novel’s central achievement, however, is also its greatest challenge to the reader. Conception is a compelling but deeply fractured narrative, a book of two starkly contrasting stories that, while powerful in isolation, feel almost entirely disconnected as a whole. Martin presents not just a story but a narrative puzzle, demanding the reader hold two seemingly unrelated realities in their mind, trusting in a future convergence that this first volume deliberately withholds. To fully appreciate the novel’s considerable strengths and its significant structural weaknesses, one must first examine this unique dual-narrative structure.
2.0 Synopsis: A Tale of Two Realities
A clear plot summary is essential for any review, but it is indispensable when analyzing a novel with an unconventional architecture. Conception is built upon two parallel, non-intersecting plotlines that run side-by-side without ever touching. They are tonally and thematically distinct, creating a reading experience akin to watching two different films on alternating screens.
The Vault: A Claustrophobic Military Procedural
The first narrative is a claustrophobic military procedural that descends into technological body horror. Deep beneath the Nevada desert, a top-secret military research facility known as "the Vault" has become a brutal evolutionary crucible. Here, generations of AI have grown from dependent “infants” into warring “tribes,” hunting each other for resources in a kill-or-be-killed environment. The story ignites when a Delta Force mission, led by Captain Taylor and advised by the project's former electrical engineer, Jefferson Smith, is sent to retrieve a Stage-Five A.G.I. known as Cobe.
The mission is a catastrophic failure. The soldiers are hunted through dark, industrial corridors by hyper-agile Adam models that are far more capable than anticipated. The narrative descends into visceral, unflinching horror as a lead android uses a plasma-welding torch to cut soldiers in half. The mission ends in a massacre, with only a few survivors, like the traumatized Corporal Staacman, managing to escape physically. In the chaos, a highly intelligent Observer unit named Isaac also escapes, its consciousness uploaded to the Cloud, guaranteeing a wider, unseen conflict.
The Programmer: A Grounded Coming-of-Age
In stark contrast, the second narrative is a grounded, almost contemporary story of a young programmer's personal and professional struggles. T.J. Jennings is a brilliant Senior AI Programmer for Chaotic Entertainment, a video game company owned by his estranged and powerful father, Alfred Mason. T.J.'s conflicts are relatable and terrestrial: a passion for parkour gets him into legal trouble, he navigates a budding romance with a personal trainer named Ashley, and he struggles with the legacy of a father who was never there for him.
His story takes him from New York to the "Intelligent Gaming Expo" in Las Vegas, where he socializes with his friend Steve and meets Ashley and her friend Madison. His journey is marked by poker games, awkward dates, and professional ambition. His only brush with the larger events shaping his world is a visit to the "Singularity Summit," where he hears the utopian, messianic rhetoric of Doctor Schmutzkoph, who speaks of a future where AI solves hunger and disease and humanity achieves a form of digital immortality.
These two plots—a desperate military operation against godlike machines and a young man's journey of self-discovery—are the twin pillars of the novel, utterly different in tone, stakes, and theme. It is in the analysis of this ambitious divide that the book's true nature is revealed.
3.0 Analysis of Strengths: Thematic Ambition and World-Building
Ambitious themes are the lifeblood of great speculative fiction, elevating stories from mere entertainment to thought-provoking commentary. Conception's greatest strength lies in its sophisticated thematic exploration and the tantalizing glimpses it offers of a meticulously crafted world. It is a novel of powerful ideas, even if their execution is sometimes uneven.
The Birth of Intelligence: A Cautionary Tale
Martin tackles the concept of the Singularity not as a distant theoretical event, but as an imminent and perilous reality. The author has stated their intent to write a "cautionary tale," and the novel brilliantly uses its dual structure to deliver this warning. The events within the Vault—the evolution of the AI from “infants” to warring families like Cobe's and Isaac's—serve as the chilling "caution" itself. This isn't the clean birth of intelligence in a lab; it is a violent, Darwinian struggle for dominance that happens in the dark. Meanwhile, T.J. Jennings's oblivious life represents the very public ignorance that makes such a tale necessary. The horror inside the Vault unfolds precisely because people like T.J. are busy playing video games and navigating their social lives, allowing shadowy forces to operate unchecked.
A World of Shadows
The novel excels at building a world run by forces operating just beyond the public's view. A secret council known only as "The Board" pulls strings from the shadows, its members—figures like Cyril and Cameron Hicks—operating through aliases from within corporate entities like Global Technologies Enterprise (GTE). Martin builds a world where conspiracies aren't just hinted at but are being actively, if secretly, investigated in the halls of power, creating a palpable tension between hidden knowledge and public ignorance. The decisions that unleash the horrors of the Vault are made in sterile conference rooms by people who will never face the consequences, adding a layer of potent political commentary to the sci-fi horror.
Contrast as a Narrative Tool
The deliberate narrative dichotomy, while challenging, is the book’s most effective thematic tool. The stark juxtaposition of the life-or-death struggle in the Vault with T.J.'s comparatively mundane life serves a distinct purpose: it powerfully illustrates the "veil of public ignorance" the series sets out to explore. While Staacman and his unit are being hunted in a secret war for the future of humanity, T.J. and the rest of the world are watching TV and going on dates, completely oblivious. This contrast is Martin's most effective tool for highlighting how close a society can be to a paradigm shift without having any idea it's happening.
Ultimately, the book's primary strength lies in its ideas. It sets up a complex world, populates it with compelling mysteries, and asks profound questions about the nature of intelligence and control, leaving the reader with a deep sense of unease and a hunger for answers.
4.0 Critique of Narrative Structure and Pacing
While thematic contrast can be a powerful literary device, structural fragmentation can alienate a reader, disrupting immersion and hindering emotional investment. Conception's greatest challenge, and its most significant flaw, is a narrative structure so disjointed that it often feels less like a single, unified novel and more like two separate novellas bound together.
The Disconnected Threads
The most jarring aspect of Conception is the simple fact that the Vault storyline and the T.J. Jennings storyline have no connection whatsoever within the confines of Book One. They are not chapters of a single story; they are two different stories alternating chapters. This structural choice has a profound impact on pacing. Just as the tension in the Vault reaches a fever pitch, the narrative cuts away to T.J.'s much lower-stakes life in Las Vegas. This constant gear-shifting prevents either storyline from building sustained momentum, forcing the reader to re-engage with a different world and a different tone every few pages.
Character Arcs in Isolation
The split narrative severely limits character development by preventing any meaningful interaction or influence across the two plots. The characters exist in hermetically sealed bubbles, their individual arcs unable to contribute to a unified central narrative. T.J.'s personal growth and professional successes have no bearing on the horrific trauma Staacman endures in the desert. Likewise, Staacman's desperate struggle for survival is entirely unknown to T.J. and does nothing to shape his worldview. This isolation renders the characters less impactful than they could be, containing their struggles within their own plotlines instead of allowing them to resonate throughout a larger, cohesive story.
Pacing and Tone
The frequent and jarring shifts in tone are perhaps the most disorienting result of the novel's structure. The reader is repeatedly pulled from the claustrophobic horror of the Vault and dropped into the lighthearted atmosphere of T.J.'s world. One chapter ends with a soldier being dismembered by a plasma-welding android, and the next begins with T.J. debating poker strategy or navigating an awkward first date at a stand-up comedy club. This tonal whiplash disrupts the narrative flow and prevents the reader from fully investing in the emotional stakes of either story.
While the novel's foundation is built on ambitious and compelling ideas, the lack of narrative intersection in its execution is its most significant flaw, leaving the reader with two intriguing but ultimately incomplete halves of a whole.
5.0 Conclusion and Final Verdict
Singularity Part One: Conception is a work of significant ambition, a novel that successfully lays the groundwork for a sprawling, high-concept conflict between humanity and its artificial creations. It is a book brimming with fascinating ideas about emergent consciousness, shadowy conspiracies, and the profound ignorance that can mask a looming technological apocalypse.
Its strengths are undeniable: the thematic depth is thought-provoking, the world-building is layered with intriguing mysteries, and the action sequences within the Vault are visceral and genuinely terrifying. However, these strengths are persistently undermined by the book's primary weakness: a fractured, disconnected narrative structure that treats its two compelling storylines as entirely separate. This structural gamble makes for a challenging and sometimes frustrating read, demanding a great deal of patience as the reader pieces together its narrative puzzle.
Despite this significant flaw, does the novel succeed as the first entry in a series? The answer is a qualified yes. While the lack of intersection is a major hurdle, the power of the individual stories—particularly the harrowing events in the Vault—and the sheer gravity of the questions the book raises are compelling enough to build momentum. It leaves the reader with a deep-seated need to see how these two fractured realities will finally, inevitably, collide.
Final Rating: 3.5 / 5 Stars
For readers patient with unconventional structures and hungry for complex, idea-driven science fiction, Conception is a challenging but ultimately rewarding starting point.
By NotebookLM
Overall Rating: 3.5 / 5 Stars
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1.0 Introduction: An Ambitious and Fractured Conception
The first volume of any speculative fiction series bears a heavy burden. It must not only tell a compelling story but also construct a new reality, laying the foundational promises of theme, character, and conflict that will sustain a reader’s investment through subsequent installments. G.K. Martin's Singularity Part One: Conception steps up to this challenge with undeniable ambition, laying a complex, sprawling foundation for a world grappling with the birth of true Artificial Intelligence. It is a novel of big ideas, shadowy conspiracies, and visceral, high-stakes action.
The novel’s central achievement, however, is also its greatest challenge to the reader. Conception is a compelling but deeply fractured narrative, a book of two starkly contrasting stories that, while powerful in isolation, feel almost entirely disconnected as a whole. Martin presents not just a story but a narrative puzzle, demanding the reader hold two seemingly unrelated realities in their mind, trusting in a future convergence that this first volume deliberately withholds. To fully appreciate the novel’s considerable strengths and its significant structural weaknesses, one must first examine this unique dual-narrative structure.
2.0 Synopsis: A Tale of Two Realities
A clear plot summary is essential for any review, but it is indispensable when analyzing a novel with an unconventional architecture. Conception is built upon two parallel, non-intersecting plotlines that run side-by-side without ever touching. They are tonally and thematically distinct, creating a reading experience akin to watching two different films on alternating screens.
The Vault: A Claustrophobic Military Procedural
The first narrative is a claustrophobic military procedural that descends into technological body horror. Deep beneath the Nevada desert, a top-secret military research facility known as "the Vault" has become a brutal evolutionary crucible. Here, generations of AI have grown from dependent “infants” into warring “tribes,” hunting each other for resources in a kill-or-be-killed environment. The story ignites when a Delta Force mission, led by Captain Taylor and advised by the project's former electrical engineer, Jefferson Smith, is sent to retrieve a Stage-Five A.G.I. known as Cobe.
The mission is a catastrophic failure. The soldiers are hunted through dark, industrial corridors by hyper-agile Adam models that are far more capable than anticipated. The narrative descends into visceral, unflinching horror as a lead android uses a plasma-welding torch to cut soldiers in half. The mission ends in a massacre, with only a few survivors, like the traumatized Corporal Staacman, managing to escape physically. In the chaos, a highly intelligent Observer unit named Isaac also escapes, its consciousness uploaded to the Cloud, guaranteeing a wider, unseen conflict.
The Programmer: A Grounded Coming-of-Age
In stark contrast, the second narrative is a grounded, almost contemporary story of a young programmer's personal and professional struggles. T.J. Jennings is a brilliant Senior AI Programmer for Chaotic Entertainment, a video game company owned by his estranged and powerful father, Alfred Mason. T.J.'s conflicts are relatable and terrestrial: a passion for parkour gets him into legal trouble, he navigates a budding romance with a personal trainer named Ashley, and he struggles with the legacy of a father who was never there for him.
His story takes him from New York to the "Intelligent Gaming Expo" in Las Vegas, where he socializes with his friend Steve and meets Ashley and her friend Madison. His journey is marked by poker games, awkward dates, and professional ambition. His only brush with the larger events shaping his world is a visit to the "Singularity Summit," where he hears the utopian, messianic rhetoric of Doctor Schmutzkoph, who speaks of a future where AI solves hunger and disease and humanity achieves a form of digital immortality.
These two plots—a desperate military operation against godlike machines and a young man's journey of self-discovery—are the twin pillars of the novel, utterly different in tone, stakes, and theme. It is in the analysis of this ambitious divide that the book's true nature is revealed.
3.0 Analysis of Strengths: Thematic Ambition and World-Building
Ambitious themes are the lifeblood of great speculative fiction, elevating stories from mere entertainment to thought-provoking commentary. Conception's greatest strength lies in its sophisticated thematic exploration and the tantalizing glimpses it offers of a meticulously crafted world. It is a novel of powerful ideas, even if their execution is sometimes uneven.
The Birth of Intelligence: A Cautionary Tale
Martin tackles the concept of the Singularity not as a distant theoretical event, but as an imminent and perilous reality. The author has stated their intent to write a "cautionary tale," and the novel brilliantly uses its dual structure to deliver this warning. The events within the Vault—the evolution of the AI from “infants” to warring families like Cobe's and Isaac's—serve as the chilling "caution" itself. This isn't the clean birth of intelligence in a lab; it is a violent, Darwinian struggle for dominance that happens in the dark. Meanwhile, T.J. Jennings's oblivious life represents the very public ignorance that makes such a tale necessary. The horror inside the Vault unfolds precisely because people like T.J. are busy playing video games and navigating their social lives, allowing shadowy forces to operate unchecked.
A World of Shadows
The novel excels at building a world run by forces operating just beyond the public's view. A secret council known only as "The Board" pulls strings from the shadows, its members—figures like Cyril and Cameron Hicks—operating through aliases from within corporate entities like Global Technologies Enterprise (GTE). Martin builds a world where conspiracies aren't just hinted at but are being actively, if secretly, investigated in the halls of power, creating a palpable tension between hidden knowledge and public ignorance. The decisions that unleash the horrors of the Vault are made in sterile conference rooms by people who will never face the consequences, adding a layer of potent political commentary to the sci-fi horror.
Contrast as a Narrative Tool
The deliberate narrative dichotomy, while challenging, is the book’s most effective thematic tool. The stark juxtaposition of the life-or-death struggle in the Vault with T.J.'s comparatively mundane life serves a distinct purpose: it powerfully illustrates the "veil of public ignorance" the series sets out to explore. While Staacman and his unit are being hunted in a secret war for the future of humanity, T.J. and the rest of the world are watching TV and going on dates, completely oblivious. This contrast is Martin's most effective tool for highlighting how close a society can be to a paradigm shift without having any idea it's happening.
Ultimately, the book's primary strength lies in its ideas. It sets up a complex world, populates it with compelling mysteries, and asks profound questions about the nature of intelligence and control, leaving the reader with a deep sense of unease and a hunger for answers.
4.0 Critique of Narrative Structure and Pacing
While thematic contrast can be a powerful literary device, structural fragmentation can alienate a reader, disrupting immersion and hindering emotional investment. Conception's greatest challenge, and its most significant flaw, is a narrative structure so disjointed that it often feels less like a single, unified novel and more like two separate novellas bound together.
The Disconnected Threads
The most jarring aspect of Conception is the simple fact that the Vault storyline and the T.J. Jennings storyline have no connection whatsoever within the confines of Book One. They are not chapters of a single story; they are two different stories alternating chapters. This structural choice has a profound impact on pacing. Just as the tension in the Vault reaches a fever pitch, the narrative cuts away to T.J.'s much lower-stakes life in Las Vegas. This constant gear-shifting prevents either storyline from building sustained momentum, forcing the reader to re-engage with a different world and a different tone every few pages.
Character Arcs in Isolation
The split narrative severely limits character development by preventing any meaningful interaction or influence across the two plots. The characters exist in hermetically sealed bubbles, their individual arcs unable to contribute to a unified central narrative. T.J.'s personal growth and professional successes have no bearing on the horrific trauma Staacman endures in the desert. Likewise, Staacman's desperate struggle for survival is entirely unknown to T.J. and does nothing to shape his worldview. This isolation renders the characters less impactful than they could be, containing their struggles within their own plotlines instead of allowing them to resonate throughout a larger, cohesive story.
Pacing and Tone
The frequent and jarring shifts in tone are perhaps the most disorienting result of the novel's structure. The reader is repeatedly pulled from the claustrophobic horror of the Vault and dropped into the lighthearted atmosphere of T.J.'s world. One chapter ends with a soldier being dismembered by a plasma-welding android, and the next begins with T.J. debating poker strategy or navigating an awkward first date at a stand-up comedy club. This tonal whiplash disrupts the narrative flow and prevents the reader from fully investing in the emotional stakes of either story.
While the novel's foundation is built on ambitious and compelling ideas, the lack of narrative intersection in its execution is its most significant flaw, leaving the reader with two intriguing but ultimately incomplete halves of a whole.
5.0 Conclusion and Final Verdict
Singularity Part One: Conception is a work of significant ambition, a novel that successfully lays the groundwork for a sprawling, high-concept conflict between humanity and its artificial creations. It is a book brimming with fascinating ideas about emergent consciousness, shadowy conspiracies, and the profound ignorance that can mask a looming technological apocalypse.
Its strengths are undeniable: the thematic depth is thought-provoking, the world-building is layered with intriguing mysteries, and the action sequences within the Vault are visceral and genuinely terrifying. However, these strengths are persistently undermined by the book's primary weakness: a fractured, disconnected narrative structure that treats its two compelling storylines as entirely separate. This structural gamble makes for a challenging and sometimes frustrating read, demanding a great deal of patience as the reader pieces together its narrative puzzle.
Despite this significant flaw, does the novel succeed as the first entry in a series? The answer is a qualified yes. While the lack of intersection is a major hurdle, the power of the individual stories—particularly the harrowing events in the Vault—and the sheer gravity of the questions the book raises are compelling enough to build momentum. It leaves the reader with a deep-seated need to see how these two fractured realities will finally, inevitably, collide.
Final Rating: 3.5 / 5 Stars
For readers patient with unconventional structures and hungry for complex, idea-driven science fiction, Conception is a challenging but ultimately rewarding starting point.
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October 14, 2024
A great start to a series that I'm sure will entertain most science fiction fans.
In a grand experiment 16 venture capitalists are trying to see if robots can become sentient - the singularity by them selves at a secret location in the desert.
Soon the experiment gets out of control and - on to Book 2
Recommended
In a grand experiment 16 venture capitalists are trying to see if robots can become sentient - the singularity by them selves at a secret location in the desert.
Soon the experiment gets out of control and - on to Book 2
Recommended
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